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* SoOkayIsAverage: Is a grammatically good story, had interesting characterization, deep exploration of Magical racism and a few moments of Awesome, Funny and Heartwarming. But is also rather flat, one dimensional Villains with idiot balls glued to their backs, Derailment and Filibuster to near toxic levels and use too much angst, sometimes badly managed.
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* SoOkayItsAverage: Is a grammatically good story, had interesting characterization, deep exploration of Magical racism and a few moments of Awesome, Funny and Heartwarming. But is also rather flat, one dimensional Villains with idiot balls glued to their backs, Derailment and Filibuster to near toxic levels and use too much angst, sometimes badly managed.
