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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \'\'that\'\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist [[FateWorseThanDeath does to them]] ([[((Gorn}} described in loving detail, no less]]) to be remotely justified, your story\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist [[FateWorseThanDeath does to them]] ([[{{Gorn}} described in loving detail, no less]]) to be remotely justified, your story\\\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \'\'that\'\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist [[FateWorseThanDeath does to them]] ([[Gorn described in loving detail, no less]]) to be remotely justified, your story\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist [[FateWorseThanDeath does to them]] ([[((Gorn}} described in loving detail, no less]]) to be remotely justified, your story\\\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \'\'that\'\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist does to them to be remotely justified, your story\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist [[FateWorseThanDeath does to them]] ([[Gorn described in loving detail, no less]]) to be remotely justified, your story\\\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \'\'that\'\' over-the-top monstrous in order for your protagonist to be remotely sympathetic, your story\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
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I, meanwhile, am of the opinion that if you require your villains to be \\\'\\\'that\\\'\\\' over-the-top monstrous in order for what your protagonist does to them to be remotely justified, your story\\\'s got [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy a bit of a problem]].
