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Why does this page fall under In-Universe Examples Only? It seems to me like it\'s a bunch of hobbies that exist in real life that are known for being looked down upon.
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Why does this page fall under In-Universe Examples Only? It seems to me like it\\\'s a bunch of hobbies that exist in real life and are known for being looked down upon therein.
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Except that actually, the description of IntercourseWithYou says pretty clearly that it covers \'\'\'songs\'\'\' which describe \'\'\'the act of sex\'\'\', explicitly or a bit metaphorically. This trope is about the (smaller but real and distinct) category of songs which depict or represent an act of seduction — the attempted lead-in to sex (and the attempt doesn’t have to be successful). Equally, if you read the description of CoitusEnsues, it’s nothing to do with music or songs (there are no songs on the examples list), it’s about, quote, “ A gratuitous sex scene that is sudden and sends the narrative into a screeching halt to accommodate the ensuing coitus.” Unquote. Redefining CoitusEnsues to cover any act of sex in any art form makes that uselessly broad.
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Except that actually, the description of IntercourseWithYou says pretty clearly that it covers \\\'\\\'\\\'songs\\\'\\\'\\\' which describe \\\'\\\'\\\'the act of sex\\\'\\\'\\\', explicitly or a bit metaphorically. This trope is about the (smaller but real and distinct) category of songs and poems which depict or represent an act of \\\'\\\'\\\'seduction\\\'\\\'\\\' — the attempted lead-in to sex (and the attempt doesn’t have to be successful).
Equally, if you read the description of CoitusEnsues, it’s nothing to do with music or songs (there are no songs on the examples list), it’s about, quote, “ A gratuitous sex scene that is sudden and sends the narrative into a screeching halt to accommodate the ensuing coitus.” Unquote. Redefining CoitusEnsues to cover any act of sex in any art form makes that uselessly broad.
Equally, if you read the description of CoitusEnsues, it’s nothing to do with music or songs (there are no songs on the examples list), it’s about, quote, “ A gratuitous sex scene that is sudden and sends the narrative into a screeching halt to accommodate the ensuing coitus.” Unquote. Redefining CoitusEnsues to cover any act of sex in any art form makes that uselessly broad.
