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* While Penny\'s return is undeniably a heartwarming moment, it also serves to highlight just how [[SenselessSacrifice pointless]] Pyrrha\'s \
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* While Penny\\\'s return is undeniably a heartwarming moment, it also serves to highlight just how [[SenselessSacrifice pointless]] Pyrrha\\\'s \\\"sacrifice\\\" was. The whole reason she chose to go back to the tower was out of guilt for Penny\\\'s death, and as far as we know, she and Penny were the only casualties of the Fall. Now with Penny back, Pyrrha truly threw her life away for \\\'\\\'nothing\\\'\\\', further highlighting the tragedy of her character and her arc.
Also, this one is just a character reaction. If anyone does feel the Faunus pathos is tear-inducing, please could they rewrite it to explain how the audience is affected instead of the character?
Ace Operatives example:
* When sent on a mission to an abandoned dust mine, the Ace Ops remark how the explosion that shut down the mine blocked their current path. Hearing this, Blake realizes that they\\\'re standing in the mine where Ilia\\\'s parents died in said mining accident. Weiss remembers the accident, more accurately, how furious it made her father. She again apologises to Blake over the SDC\\\'s treatment of the faunus and her own complacency with the system, while Marrow bleakly comments on how said system is stacked against the Faunus with humans either allowing them to be abused or actively participating in it. At the latter, the camera switches to a shot of a crate with the SDC logo emblazoned on it, possibly harkening back to the abuse Adam suffered in the past.
Also, this one is just a character reaction. If anyone does feel the Faunus pathos is tear-inducing, please could they rewrite it to explain how the audience is affected instead of the character?
Ace Operatives example:
* When sent on a mission to an abandoned dust mine, the Ace Ops remark how the explosion that shut down the mine blocked their current path. Hearing this, Blake realizes that they\\\'re standing in the mine where Ilia\\\'s parents died in said mining accident. Weiss remembers the accident, more accurately, how furious it made her father. She again apologises to Blake over the SDC\\\'s treatment of the faunus and her own complacency with the system, while Marrow bleakly comments on how said system is stacked against the Faunus with humans either allowing them to be abused or actively participating in it. At the latter, the camera switches to a shot of a crate with the SDC logo emblazoned on it, possibly harkening back to the abuse Adam suffered in the past.
