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There is no possible way you can know that Cinder wasn't defeated or outright killed by Ruby's power. We don't see what happens, and nothing indicates she's even in the picture anymore. Even if she was defeated but not killed, it would qualify.
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There is no possible way you can know that Cinder wasn\'t defeated or outright killed by Ruby\'s power. We don\'t see what happens, and nothing indicates she\'s even in the picture anymore. Even if she was defeated but not killed, it would qualify. Besides, Ruby\'s actions may not have restored Beacon, but for now they ensured that Vale wasn\'t completely destroyed.
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Deus Ex Machinas don't have to completely 100% fix everything wrong about the situation. Nor can you say that because you think it lose its
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Deus Ex Machinas don\'t have to completely 100% fix everything wrong about the situation. Nor can you say that because you think it lose its \"oomph\" after the revelation of the maidens, that the second point doesn\'t qualify, you outright said it was unexpected and sudden.
