himitsu keisatsu
Their knowing about her doesn't mean they know her whereabouts or what she looks like. Remember, Asuna was put under heavy protection. Mahora is pretty much the safest place to be for an Ala Rubra. Albireo, Konoemon and Takamichi are stationed there.
In any case, I'll get back to work on writing Louise's reaction to Negi's 'chat' with Kirche. She only caught the tail end.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
"Snookie Mc Sexypants" IS FULL OF WIN!!!
Moe Game Console
@Sinclair Well,I think I know how one person there could react. I hope this is exceptable. By the way, I choose Setsuna. I'll be writing in third person if that's okay.
Setsuna put her hand under her chin and closed eyes in meditation.
The first thing that was important was Konoka's safety. An unknown facility with no maps were not exactly the safest place in the world. Then again, the Magical World wasn't really safe either.
However, blindly rushing in with no fallback to heal and recuperate was spelling disaster.
Besides, she wouldn't just be helping out with setting up with the check point.
Setsuna reached in her back poket and felt her paper charms. She hadn't used Chibi Setsuna in a while and now seemed liked the perfect time to use her. Matter of fact, Setsuna was a little surpriced that she never needed Chibi Setsuna in the magical world.
Either way, having a remote scout to check out the bed room and helping set up their check point seemed like a great idea. There was just one problem. Setsuna opened her eyes and looked at Haruna.
"Haruna, can I borrow a pen?"
Hopefully that was all in character. Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
@IANCE: Need I remind you that it somehow took them four years to learn of Negi's existence, judging by the timing of the demon attack? He wasn't living that much far from the Gateport in England, even!
Also, IIRC there was no mention at all that Nagi and Arika were harassed by Mesembrian agents even after they've made permanent residence on Earth; all I remember is that they were pretty much unable to set foot on Mundus Magicus again due to Mesembrian government persecution.
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.
himitsu keisatsu
I maintain the possibility that Godel was doing his best to stop them from finding Negi until he had the brilliant idea to use him as a missile against the Senate.
I never mentioned Arika being harassed by the Senate. I mentioned the fact that they would have taken all the steps to keep her shrouded in secrecy just in case if need be.
Also, dangit, I need to get back to writing.
edited 1st Apr '12 4:51:02 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Snow Queen and Proctologist
guys, remember that fear that the thread will die?
In 24 hours, we advanced 6 pages...
Not happening
You know you want to add love
himitsu keisatsu
For you, it was the most important day of your life. To me, this was a slow sunday - Iridia-tan.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Snow Queen and Proctologist
I went to an epic con today, got hugged by every girl in the place, and got tons of Pony-swag
You know you want to add love
himitsu keisatsu
... That explains the hugs then. Bronies are apparently attractive to girls.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Snow Queen and Proctologist
I didn't go as a brony
I went as a guy with a sign that said:
"Hug Me at terminal velocity"
You know you want to add love
himitsu keisatsu
You know that you made your shirt a liar if there's no blood splattered on it.
The only reason he hadn't broken down under the pressure was because she hadn't opted for something extremely skimpy.
“What. Was. That.” Not a question. An order. EXPLAIN.
“Um... Miss Zerbst wanted to talk to me, so she sent her familiar to find me.” He replied. “And then we talked.”
“Talked.” Louise repeated. “Talked?” She asked, and he swore he saw her eyes narrowing.
“Yes.” Negi continued, noticing his master's decreasing ire and latching on to it.
Then it returned full force. “But you didn't stop her advances! You just stopped because you knew I was coming! You promised to do it some other time! I WON'T ALLOW IT! NOT WITH HER!”
Negi pouted. “Master.” He began, steeling himself. “Calm down, please.” He continued, taking a deep breath. “I admit that I could have handled myself better bu-”
“BUT NOTHING!” She continued to yell, the angriest he'd ever seen her. “It's because of her breasts, isn't it!?” She pretty much confirmed his suspicions.
He sighed. “Not at all, Master.” He resolutely replied, though Louise didn't seem to believe him too much.
“Damn familiar...” She seemed conflicted at the moment, she didn't want to believe him, but couldn't find a fault in him.
Brilliant ideas come every once in a while. He hadn't met her in a while, but a specific person came to his mind. He did let it go unvoiced, though, he was a gentleman and as such would never allow himself to say something so crass. Still... “Master, I have... had many lovers. Several of whom shared your...” Memories of what Kirche had told him arose. An explosion would ensue if he worded himself incorrectly. “... situation.” he decided on.
This seemed to calm her somewhat, but she seemed to still be angry.
“I don't want you to see her even again. Our families have been rivals for generations! To let them molest my dog is an insult!”
Negi blinked. “... Don't you think it's petty, master? To hate someone for something someone else did in the past?” He knew he was being hypocritical at some degree, he held resentment towards a certain senate even today despite the fact that the original culprits had been already dealt with... but if he'd learned his lesson, then Louise could too. “It shouldn't cloud your judgment, Master.”
“You don't understand anything!” She yelled. “You're just a commoner.”
“Point taken.” Negi said, sitting himself against the wall. She then launched into a lengthy tirade about how the Zerbst were the worst thing to happen to decency since the mini skirt was invented. Well, they didn't call it that, but the uniform's skirt was minuscule anyway.
––
“How did her familiar kidnap you?” At least now she was calm. A big improvement. “Aren't you a mage knight?”
“Well, yes.” Negi admitted. Right on the spot on the first try, at least technically, since it was the style he'd chosen so long ago “But it caught me by surprise... I admit that it's been a long time since I've really been in a fight.”
“What about your fight with Guiche?” Louise asked, taking a sip of the tea that Negi had served her. “You were so fast and strong...”
“Yes, but I was fighting constructs without sentience. It's harder to fight a living being that hasn't done anything to me and I don't want to harm.” Negi explained. “And I don't know if I could have subdued it with my bare hands...” Mostly because he didn't know how to properly fight a lizard with Kenpo.
“Right...” She didn't seem to believe him that evening. “What kind of weapons do you use?”
“... Long Swords and pole arms.” Negi replied, without thinking. “But what does that have to do with this?”
“Nothing.” Yet, anyway. Louise was left wondering. Her familiar was a mage knight. She had ended up summoning someone who was a better magician than she was. And he wasn't even a noble to top it off. She felt her rage bubbling again. How dare a no name dog be her superior!?
Still, when she pulled the covers over herself, the last thing she saw before she drifted off was a kind smile from him, and she felt herself smile back. She felt safe.
Oddly enough, she dreamed of Cattleya...
––
Kirche was insistent. However, Negi had the day booked already, and had to politely decline her request. Being who she was, Kirche quickly found herself another fling.
The day had been booked by Siesta, since he needed the lessons on how to become a better housekeeper. He had newfound respect for Chachamaru. Even more than he'd already had. Taking care of a tiny master was hard.
As he was being instructed on the finer art of manually washing a delicate pair of panties, he couldn't help but wonder. “Am I being a burden?” he asked, almost unintentionally.
The maid stopped what she was doing, which was guiding her 'student''s hands, and looked at him for a second. Then she laughed. “Negi, you are anything but a burden!” she said, quickly dismissing his stupid worries.
Of course, the moment she went to get him another bar of soap (Louise went through a lot of underwear, apparently), the day started getting worse. It was these days that he was ashamed of being a mage. Well, not really, but he was ashamed of other mages, in either case.
Three men. Two third years, from the purple cloaks, and one second year. Their hair colors were irrelevant. One was trying to go for the dangerous gangsta look and failing miserably. They weren't looking for friends.
They surrounded Siesta rather quickly and easily, running their mouths and showering her with rather lewd comments. Siesta was, surprising him, perfectly still and didn't seem to be afraid or angry.
Annoyed, more like it, like someone who had to deal with that sort of thing every day. And he didn't like it one bit. “Please, sirs, I need to go.” She spoke, her voice level and calm.
The moment a hand tried to place itself in Siesta's butt, he already was holding him by the wrist. “That is not very nice.” He said, narrowing his eyes and glaring at the bearded jackass. Siesta might be used to it, but it was still harassment. He let go of his hand and faced the snarls that they were directing his way.
“Hey, isn't this the Zero's familiar?” one began, smirking proudly. “I'll punch your teeth in!”
Siesta closed her eyes and expected the worst. Three mages was too much, even for him. By the time she was done doing so, she was staring at the noble that had once been in front of her, who was now four feet ahead, clutching his stomach in pain. “I think I overdid it...” Negi said, scratching the back of his neck.
Siesta, of course, took the chance and glomped him, almost tackling him to the ground. “That was amazing!” So fast she couldn't even see it!
“... Not really...” Negi blushed, as the maid let him go. Then an alarm went in on his head. However, it was on a remote part of his brain that he wasn't using at the moment.
He didn't finish cleaning Louise's clothes. Louise didn't notice. She was busy chastising him for getting into trouble with the headmaster.
––
Nothing of much interest happened the next day. Kirche tried to get to him again, but Louise exploded her before she could try. That blue haired girl that had been accompanying Kirche was nice.
––
Negi found the way they referred to their equivalent of Sunday kind of funny.
Next and final scene will be Negi obtaining Derflinger and several references to Chamo's fate.
edited 1st Apr '12 6:07:50 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
I need a shirt like that...
himitsu keisatsu
You'll end up covered in blood and guts from people smashing themselves into you at terminal velocity.
Also, no comment on my inability to write? from either of you? For shame..!
edited 1st Apr '12 6:27:05 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Moe Game Console
I've never watched Familiar Zero so I can not comment on your story IANCE. Sorry (>.<)
edited 1st Apr '12 6:33:22 PM by mega-dark
Hyped for Hyperdimension Neptunia V 2
In 24 hours, we advanced 6 pages...
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All threads die eventually, this one will just take a while to die.
I need a new sig.
himitsu keisatsu
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I still want an opinion...
At which point, I will revive it as a sex-revenant...
edited 1st Apr '12 6:34:58 PM by SCMof2814
In 24 hours, we advanced 6 pages...
You have mostly IANCE and me to thank for that, though. I want a medal!
The thread will most likely die as soon as I finish with URAE.
... This might take a while.
himitsu keisatsu
Isn't that what it is already?
Presumably. Either that, or we'll go into full overdrive mode and make this the most prolific fanfiction thread EVER. Also, YAY, Maestro is back. Quick, I need you to tell me I don't suck!
Besides, do you actually know any necromancy, Magey?
edited 1st Apr '12 6:40:04 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
... You don't suck.
You know, Tabitha's interactions with Negi need Tabitha kinda reminding Negi of several of the girls he used to know (book-loving matching the librarians', general quiet attitude matching Zazie's).
(Cracks knuckles). Okay, I'll start writing that next snippet now...
Isn't it already that?
I need a new sig.
Every single one of my fics is under the influence of Necromancy.
edited 1st Apr '12 6:44:37 PM by SCMof2814
himitsu keisatsu
@Maestro
Thing is, so far, their interactions have been almost zilch. Considering how little Tabitha talks, this is to be expected. They haven't even been formally introduced yet.
Not just yet.
Bullshit! If so, Raise goddamn Overlords And Overkill or Thirty Xanatos, 'cause I want my crossover-filled-crack.
edited 1st Apr '12 6:46:14 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
I'm letting the embaming fluids dry out first. Right now, I'm reviving Uzumaki Harry.
Also, 34000 posts!
edited 1st Apr '12 6:47:13 PM by SCMof2814
Megalomesembria imposed an anti-Old World xenophobic restriction on travel between the two worlds (so there's less chance of any native Meglomesembrians who can travel to the Old World actually seeing Arika than you think), and we have no idea how much of the Magic World and the mage community actually bought into the Megalomesembrian Senate's bullshit about Arika.
Also, if nobody in the mage community recognized young Asuna as the Twilight Imperial Princess long enough for her to settle in Japan and be in middle school 20 years after the Schismatic War ended, I wouldn't be so sure that Arika would've been recognized so easily by Earth-bound mages. The Megalomesembrian Senate knew about Asuna, after all, having specifically sought out her location from the imprisoned Arika.
Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus.