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Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#51: May 31st 2013 at 10:59:15 AM

Chapter 2, Page 17

Chapter 2, Page 18

edited 31st May '13 11:00:00 AM by Tidal_Wave_17

DeMarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#52: May 31st 2013 at 11:34:30 AM

Hm, starting to get a little mystical...

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#53: Jun 7th 2013 at 12:02:42 PM

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edited 7th Jun '13 12:02:50 PM by Tidal_Wave_17

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#55: Jun 28th 2013 at 9:10:29 PM

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Oooh, I think Mona's in trouble.

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#56: Jul 13th 2013 at 2:59:53 PM

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Hmmm, I think Ashley thinks she is looking out for Mona, in her own judgemental kind of way.

DeMarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#57: Jul 13th 2013 at 6:54:28 PM

She is feeling threatened by Mona's recent personal development.

Hey- what does it mean if a "notion" develops or changes character? Do those of us in this world suddenly have different types of thoughts?

edited 13th Jul '13 6:55:31 PM by DeMarquis

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#58: Jul 21st 2013 at 6:54:29 PM

@De Marquis: I'm not sure, but that is a good question. :o

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ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#59: Jul 22nd 2013 at 9:53:51 AM

[up][up] At a guess, I suppose that a notion developing might reflect — or be the underlying cause of — an idea developing and changing. The person in "our world" doesn't suddenly start having new thoughts, but a given thought — "wouldn't it be cool if there was a new game in the vein of Heretic", for example — might begin to grow and change in one's mind — "-and it could be made even cooler if we add in this weapon, or that new gameplay mechanic", for example — potentially becoming much more than it had previously been.

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DeMarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#60: Jul 22nd 2013 at 11:25:52 AM

Cool. I suppose that "notions" are not the specific thoughts occurring in the heads of individual people at one point in time, but are rather general types of thoughts that lots of people could then draw upon. It would be like "memetic evolution" happening across a whole group of people over time. So that as character development occurs in-story, somewhere else cultural evolution is happening.

ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#61: Jul 22nd 2013 at 12:49:44 PM

Hmm... That's possible — I'll confess that I've been operating under the assumption that they were indeed thoughts in the head of a specific individual. That they're elements of a sort of cultural collective "mind" is an interesting idea.

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demarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#62: Jul 22nd 2013 at 4:02:23 PM

I just sort of assumed that they are cultural archtypes, like Muses. I mean, what kind of person can have all those thoughts?

ArsThaumaturgis Since: Nov, 2011 Relationship Status: I've been dreaming of True Love's Kiss
#63: Jul 22nd 2013 at 7:51:02 PM

How many individual scraps of thought go through one's mind every day? How many fleeting notions, ideas, plans, or snatches of song?

On the other hand, their persistence — that they seem to last as long as they do — perhaps argues for their being cultural elements rather than personal; time compression might be in effect, but I'm not convinced that that agrees well with the amount of time taken for one of them to develop.

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demarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#64: Jul 23rd 2013 at 7:30:34 AM

You're thinking time compression a la Inception? And I find myself wondering what Ascension is.

demarquis Since: Feb, 2010
Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#66: Sep 13th 2013 at 11:05:22 AM

I know it has been awhile, but don't worry, I haven't forgotten about you and hopefully you all haven't forgotten about me! ^w^

After a month long break, the first page of Chapter Three is up!

demarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#69: Sep 20th 2013 at 10:31:02 AM

I hope she gets a good response for her effort.

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#70: Sep 20th 2013 at 10:33:30 PM

So do I. Esteban seems like a stern but fair person.

Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#71: Oct 19th 2013 at 7:03:56 PM

Third page of Chapter Two.

Fourth page

Fifth page

Sorry about my lack of updating. -_-" I started college last month and it has been kind of exhausting.

DeMarquis Since: Feb, 2010
Tidal_Wave_17 Since: Sep, 2009
#73: Nov 29th 2013 at 8:12:09 AM

Once again, I am late with the updates. -___- Yeah.

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demarquis Since: Feb, 2010
#75: Dec 10th 2013 at 11:49:03 AM

I do wish Mona would take a more assertive role in all this... it's her life after all.


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