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DrSunshine Since: Aug, 2012
#1: Aug 1st 2012 at 10:05:12 AM

Hi guys! I just started a webcomic. Not sure if this is best posted here, or in Webcomics, or in Manga/Anime (since it's pretty anime and it satirizes a lot of anime cliches), or in Writer's Block.

Anyway, here it is, and I'd love it if you'd take a look and give me any feedback.

Just FYI, I'm doing this kind of as a challenge to myself, drawing with straight inks and hand-lettering. No digital techniques at all beyond scanning and basic cleaning with Photoshop! My hope is that it will build confidence and strengthen my inking.

"The pink warrior should just shut up!"
MrAHR Ahr river from ಠ_ಠ Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
Ahr river
Wheezy (That Guy You Met Once) from West Philadelphia, but not born or raised. Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
(That Guy You Met Once)
#3: Aug 1st 2012 at 7:18:01 PM

I like your style.

Too bad the first page is the only legible one.

Project progress: The Adroan (102k words), The Pigeon Witch, (40k). Done but in need of reworking: Yume Hime, (50k)
FallenLegend Lucha Libre goddess from Navel Of The Moon. Since: Oct, 2010
Lucha Libre goddess
#4: Aug 1st 2012 at 11:26:47 PM

Great artwork but unfortunately the text is too small to read...

Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.
Tumbril Since: Feb, 2010
#5: Aug 2nd 2012 at 9:12:06 AM

You can get to the bigger version by clicking on the images, and then right clicking on them and choosing "open image in new tab" (might be worded differently in another browser.)

Tumblr here.
DrSunshine Since: Aug, 2012
#6: Aug 2nd 2012 at 12:14:10 PM

Hmm. Legibility issues seems to be a thing. If it makes it easier, I have some imgur albums.

I'll try to use guide-lines and print more slowly if it helps lettering.

(copy paste into your browser)

imgur.com/a/3Ag7J Chapter 1

imgur.com/a/jOMBr Chapter 2

imgur.com/a/sh2gS Chapter 3

edited 2nd Aug '12 12:15:15 PM by DrSunshine

"The pink warrior should just shut up!"
Wheezy (That Guy You Met Once) from West Philadelphia, but not born or raised. Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
(That Guy You Met Once)
#7: Aug 3rd 2012 at 8:15:16 PM

Random note: The eagle crying was a Crowning Moment Of Funny.

edited 4th Aug '12 3:09:41 AM by Wheezy

Project progress: The Adroan (102k words), The Pigeon Witch, (40k). Done but in need of reworking: Yume Hime, (50k)
DrSunshine Since: Aug, 2012
#8: Aug 7th 2012 at 8:21:19 AM

Thank you. New Chapter!

"The pink warrior should just shut up!"
Talby Since: Jun, 2009
#9: Aug 7th 2012 at 9:56:54 AM

Not bad. In fact, I like it!

DrSunshine Since: Aug, 2012
#10: Aug 17th 2012 at 6:11:29 AM

Another chapter!

"The pink warrior should just shut up!"
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