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* LipstickLesbian: Though short-haired, Greta's sweet and pretty feminine in other ways. She dates Baldwin, a ButchLesbian hitwoman (but she's unaware of her profession at first).
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* LipstickLesbian: Though short-haired, Greta's sweet and pretty while having a feminine in other ways.clothing style and manner. She dates Baldwin, a ButchLesbian hitwoman (but she's unaware of her profession at first).
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Aversions usually aren't notable. This fits it though, with some editing.
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* WaifFu: [[spoiler:{{Averted}}. When she fights a man sent to kill her, she shows some impressive moves, but she's still clearly in trouble unless she can get hold of a weapon. (She does.)]]
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* WaifFu: [[spoiler:{{Averted}}. When WeakButSkilled: She's a slim woman of average female height, without visible muscle buildup. Due to this, it's played realistic that when she fights a man sent to kill her, she shows some impressive moves, but she's still clearly in trouble unless she can get hold of a weapon. (She does.)]]weapon since he outweighs her significantly [[spoiler:(she does, killing him)]]. Usually she doesn't attempt hand to hand combat, but relies on her skill with guns and other weapons while fighting.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: She gets shot on the cheek by Howard Prime, leaving the remains of her scar wound on.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: She gets shot grazed on the cheek from a shot by Howard Prime, leaving the remains of her with a GlasgowGrin scar wound on.after this. However, she's still very beautiful despite this.
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A young woman working at a bar who bonds quickly with Baldwin.
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A young woman working at a bar coffeehouse who bonds quickly with Baldwin.
