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| 5 | ->''"It is a cheap, half-rusted LAWN CHAIR glued on top of a BOMB! WHAT were you THINKING? WERE you thinking??"'' |
| 6 | -->-- '''Cherry Berry''' (evaluating an early Changeling prototype rocket), ''Changeling Space Program'' |
| 7 | |
| 8 | ->''Much becomes clear about my guests. Many of the questions I've been asking about them now have a simple, easy to understand, impossible to refute explanation.\ |
| 9 | Specifically: these ponies are all CRAZY!'' |
| 10 | -->-- '''Mark Watney''' (after learning the history of Equestrian spaceflight), ''The Maretian'' |
| 11 | |
| 12 | Soon after Twilight Sparkle publishes a paper explaining that the magical land of Equestria is not a flat plane covered by a bowl of stars, but actually a planet in a heliocentric star system, Chrysalis, queen of the changelings, decides that the next step in her program of conquest is to harness the power of the moon. |
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| 14 | Of course, first she needs to ''get'' there to claim it. |
| 15 | |
| 16 | ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/changeling-space-program Changeling Space Program]]'' (CSP) and its sequel, ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/the-maretian The Maretian]]'', are ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/111114/Kris+Overstreet/stories Kris Overstreet]], telling the story of the Space Race between Queen Chrysalis's Changeling Space Program and Twilight Sparkle's Equestrian Space Agency and subsequent events. |
| 17 | |
| 18 | The missions depicted in CSP are based on missions played through ''VideoGame/KerbalSpaceProgram''; most of the minor in-game mishaps are translated directly to the story. |
| 19 | |
| 20 | There are five related works. |
| 21 | |
| 22 | * "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/317138/my-flight My Flight]]": Cherry Berry loves two things: Cherries and flying. Even though she has Twilight Sparkle's balloon on permanent loan and her own personal helicopter, she wants something a bit faster. (Prologue. Complete.) |
| 23 | * ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/changeling-space-program Changeling Space Program]]'': The space race is on. Can Queen Chrysalis and her hive of enthusiastic, but not-too-bright changelings beat Twilight Sparkle and her friends to the first moon landing? (Crossover with ''VideoGame/KerbalSpaceProgram''. Complete[[note]]Was on hiatus while ''The Maretian'' was written[[/note]].) |
| 24 | * ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/546559/counting-noses Counting Noses]]'': When Chrysalis decides to take a census of her hive, she discovers one extra name in the records -- belonging to a changeling that no one seems to be able to find. (Set between ''Changeling Space Program'' and ''The Maretian''. Complete.) |
| 25 | * ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/the-maretian The Maretian]]'': The race to the moon is over, and the Changeling Space Program and the Equestrian Space Agency are now working on a joint project to reach Bucephalous, the next planet out from their sun. A mishap during testing of Twilight Sparkle's experimental rapid-teleport interplanetary drive system strands three ponies, a changeling, and a dragon in a different universe on a hostile planet with a wrecked spaceship, very little magic, and a rather surprised human named Mark Watney. (Crossover with ''Literature/TheMartian''. Complete.[[note]]Ran daily from 2018-01-02 to 2018-10-19, then got an epilogue on 2019-04-01.[[/note]]) |
| 26 | * "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/517336/the-end-of-the-beginning The End of the Beginning]]": Newly elevated Princess Regnant Twilight Sparkle and her closest friends take a trip to the moon. (Epilogue. Complete.) |
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| 29 | !! The fanfics provide examples of: |
| 30 | |
| 31 | [[foldercontrol]] |
| 32 | |
| 33 | [[folder:Multiple Stories]] |
| 34 | !!!Tropes common to multiple stories: |
| 35 | * AlternateContinuity: As CSP was begun before the season 6 finale ("[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E25ToWhereAndBackAgainPart1 To Where and Back Again]]") aired, the entire "skittle-bug" plotline is treated as one of Chrysalis' bad dreams, as related in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/14/changeling-space-program/interlude-what-might-not-have-been-or-do-astromares-dream-of-rocket-propelled-penguins Chapter 14 of Changeling Space Program]]. |
| 36 | * BreadEggsBreadedEggs: Multiple stories: |
| 37 | ** ''Changeling Space Program'': From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/15/changeling-space-program/chapter-12-mission-20-keep-her-alive-and-show-her-a-good-time "Mission 20"]]: |
| 38 | --->Conclusions from flight: [[spoiler:The passengers]] said in the survey they weren't [[spoiler:afraid of heights]] or [[spoiler:closed spaces]]. Too bad we didn't ask about [[spoiler:heights]] AND [[spoiler:closed spaces]]. |
| 39 | ** ''The Maretian'': |
| 40 | *** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/29/the-maretian/sol-43 "Sol 43"]]: |
| 41 | ---->My mind is still blown by the fact that Morgan Freeman was once young. And, apparently, a hippie. Or a beatnik. Or a hippie beatnik. Or something. |
| 42 | *** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/245/the-maretian/sols-477-478 "Sols 477-478"]]: |
| 43 | ---->I'm racking my brains trying to think of something we can do to boost power or driving efficiency or both. |
| 44 | * CerebusSyndrome: CSP is primarily a comedic space adventure with plenty of slapstick and ludicrous situations to navigate. ''The Maretian'' is a survival adventure where the humor comes mostly through character interactions and Mark Watney's snarky log entries. |
| 45 | * ContinuityCameo: Despite a point of divergence before the end of season 6, characters from later episodes are referenced. (Changelings presumably retain their "unreformed" forms.) |
| 46 | ** In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/16/changeling-space-program/chapter-13-mission-21-somewhat-worse-than-average-accidents Chapter 16]] of ''Changeling Space Program'', as a reference to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E19ToChangeAChangeling Pharynx]], who appeared in the show... He is mentioned as a potential Hive Viceroy. (More competent than the incumbent, but his paranoia is a significant negative.) |
| 47 | ** [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicSchoolOfFriendship Ocellus and Smolder]] are mentioned as new astromares in training after Cherry and Dragonfly return to Equestria. |
| 48 | * ContinuityNod: Despite the story's AlternateContinuity, events proceed close enough to canon to have varying amounts of impact on the plot -- albeit in slightly altered order. ([[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie2017 The Festival of Friendship]] and parts of season 7 are somewhat scrambled.) |
| 49 | ** During the lead-up to ESA missions 13, 14 and 15... |
| 50 | *** Twilight is encountering setbacks with construction of the [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS8E1SchoolDazePart1 School of Friendship]]. |
| 51 | *** Rainbow Dash has to deal with [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E16CampfireTales flyder bites]] and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E17DaringDone news that Daring Do is retiring]]. |
| 52 | *** An exhausted Twilight is convinced to [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E21OnceUponAZeppelin take a family vacation]]. |
| 53 | ** It may have taken a few years longer than canon, but Twilight eventually replaces Celestia and Luna as ruler of Equestria. |
| 54 | * DangerDeadpan: The pilots in both organizations strive for this. |
| 55 | * DeadlyEuphemism: "Have a Bad Day." "[[Webcomic/{{xkcd}} Not going to space today]]" also appears. |
| 56 | * DoorStopper: |
| 57 | ** ''CSP'': Over 300,000 words. |
| 58 | ** ''The Maretian'': Over 450,000 words. |
| 59 | * EasyLogistics: Sorta. Taking its cue from ''Kerbal Space Program'', the life support transmission crystals can supply effectively unlimited water and air, but due to bugs in the transmission spells, carbon compounds (i.e. food and many fuels) cannot be safely transferred through the system. (Yes, electrolyzing water can yield hydrogen for fuel, but that has its own storage issues.) |
| 60 | * EatDirtCheap: |
| 61 | ** Dragons, including Fireball, eat crystals and gold as part of their diet, which becomes a major problem in the earliest days after ''Amicitas's'' crash-landing on a crystal-poor planet in an (apparently) magic-less universe. Once a supply is found, however, Fireball's biggest problem is the bland, monotonous diet of mostly plain quartz. |
| 62 | ** During the post-mission investigation of the "Stayputnik" fiasco, Pinkie Pie reminisces fondly of snacking on her mother's patented silicon chips: |
| 63 | --->'''Pinkie Pie:''' It's the copper inclusions that really make it! |
| 64 | * ExactWords: |
| 65 | ** ''Changeling Space Program'': After Rainbow Dash's Almost Bad Day, Pinkie withdraws from active work with the Equestrian Space Agency, declaring that she couldn't set hoof at Cape Friendship again and limiting herself to preparing food. However, that doesn't mean she can't show up at Horseton Space Center to help out with robotic control systems. |
| 66 | ** ''Counting Noses'': Chrysalis has never lied once in her life: |
| 67 | ---> "Of course," Cherry echoed. "It was a lot more than once." |
| 68 | * {{Flight}}: Magical: |
| 69 | ** Pegasi |
| 70 | ** Changelings |
| 71 | ** Griffins |
| 72 | * HappyDance: |
| 73 | ** ''[=CSP=]'': |
| 74 | *** Occupant and Marked Knee indulge in one of these[[note]]specifically, the Hustle[[/note]] when they find they have all of the elements[[note]]except authorization from CSP leadership[[/note]] needed to launch the ill-fated CSP Mission R1. |
| 75 | *** To celebrate the successful trans-lunar injection of CSP mission R2, Marked Knee and Pinkie Pie do the Funky Chicken. |
| 76 | ** ''The Maretian'': |
| 77 | *** The successful test of ''Angel 2'' (dimension-hopping probe) results in (an [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E9SweetAndElite especially discoordinated]]) one from Twilight on ''Amicitas'' mission day 110 (Sol 111). |
| 78 | * HeadDesk: |
| 79 | ** ''[=CSP=]'': Following Jet Set and Upper Crust showing up at the Hive with their Space Tourism demand, Chrysalis is reduced to head thumps on a table after exhausting her supply of {{Angrish}}. When informed of the situation, Cherry Berry is tempted to join her. |
| 80 | ** ''The Maretian'': On Sol 33, Starlight indulges in a bout of cranial percussion with a cabinet when she learns about how ''Amicitas'' misjumped. |
| 81 | * InfoDump: All three stories include information about flight, space flight, or other scientific material. In particular, Goddard the Griffon and the minotaurs of ''Changeling Space Program'', and to a lesser extent Mark Watney in ''The Maretian'', are prone to become MrExposition as required. |
| 82 | * InterplanetaryVoyage: Getting to orbit, much less to the moon and beyond are major undertakings. |
| 83 | * InterspeciesFriendship: To be expected in a [=MLP:FiM=] fanfic, but a few of the less conventional ones include: |
| 84 | ** Cherry Berry and several of her changeling co-workers. Of particular note is Cherry and Chrysalis. |
| 85 | ** The martian castaways; spend over 500 days working to survive and you definitely get FireForgedFriends. |
| 86 | * IsThisThingStillOn: |
| 87 | ** ''[=CSP=]'': As [=CSP=]-23 is en route to the moon, Twilight and Chrysalis bicker on a hot mic. Neither co-flight directors Occupant and Applejack, nor [=CAPCOM=] Dragonfly want to be the one who tells them that they're supplying material for the reporters sitting in Horeston's press gallery. |
| 88 | ** ''The Maretian'': On Sol 426 the castaways test voice radio communication with ''Hermes''. While waiting for message turnaround, Mark and Fireball have a long conversation about quitting the astronaut biz. (This while rescue is still over four months away.) Their mikes are hot for all of it. And because of lightspeed lag, they don't find out for ''over nine minutes''. Mark backpedals immediately once he finds out: the two realize and agree that they shouldn't resign until Mark gets his backpay and Fireball gets back his worldly possessions from the Dragon Lord, respectively. |
| 89 | * LetsGetDangerous: Cherry Berry is usually a typical pony, just as prone to panic attacks as any other citizen of Ponyville. But put her in a cockpit and she becomes the proverbial [[NervesOfSteel Steely-Eyed Missile Mare]]. |
| 90 | * MatterReplicator: Changelings can synthesize a variety of useful organic polymers from basic foodstuffs. |
| 91 | * MissionControl |
| 92 | ** Changeling Space Program Mission Control is based on the NASA model. |
| 93 | ** The Equestrian Space Agency had a more informal atmosphere until [=ESA=] mission 5 demonstrated why having several ponies simultaneously trying to supply information/advice is not conducive to crisis management. Subsequent missions adopted CSP procedures. |
| 94 | ** In ''The Maretian'', Houston's Mission Control Center is featured during the ''Sleipnir'' (resupply probes) and ''Phoenix'' launches. |
| 95 | * NoodleIncident: Just what did Kevin[[note]]Common fan name for the changeling seen attending Cranky and Matilda's wedding during [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS5E9SliceOfLife "Slice of Life"]][[/note]] do to earn Chrysalis' eternal wrath? |
| 96 | * RetroRocket: Twilight Sparkle's favorite test-bed vehicle and prototype for her vision of the future of space travel, ''Amicitas''. It's essentially a three-fin cigar rocket with a flattened bottom to turn it into a space shuttle-like vessel that lands on a runway instead of on its tail. |
| 97 | ** In ''Changeling Space Program'' the ship makes two flights, becoming the first crewed vehicle to orbit Equus's (primary) moon. |
| 98 | ** The third flight of ''Amicitas'' and its aftermath is the entire premise of ''The Maretian''. |
| 99 | * ShowWithinAShow: |
| 100 | ** CSP: The ''Look At It!'' documentary covering CSP Mission 9, complete with Changeling-positive commercial spots. |
| 101 | ** The Maretian: ''The Watney and Company Report'' on CNN provides some idea of how things are seen on Earth from outside NASA. |
| 102 | * SubspaceAnsible: The telepresence spell used to monitor Equestrian spaceflight appears to be instantaneous and has the additional benefit of being immune to the re-entry blackout experienced by conventional radio. |
| 103 | * WizardsFromOuterSpace: Magic plays a significant role in Equestrian space flight (FTL communications and clairvoyant monitors, magically transported air and water for life support). It does, however, have limitations and rules it has to obey, so science and technology still have a fundamental role. And, of course in ''The Maretian'', the non-human castaways each have a magic specialty of some kind that helps the group survive. (Specifically, Fireball's strength and durability, Spitfire's weather magic, Cherry Berry's affinity with plants, Starlight Glimmer's encyclopedic knowledge of spells, and Dragonfly's... ability to spit up useful kinds of goo.) |
| 104 | [[/folder]] |
| 105 | |
| 106 | [[folder:"My Flight"]] |
| 107 | !!!Tropes applicable to "My Flight" |
| 108 | * MeaningfulName: Or Meaningful Address -- 13 Doublecross Lane. |
| 109 | * MerchandiseDriven: The first two scenes in the story give a double-barrelled TakeThat to certain Hasbro toy releases. |
| 110 | -->'''Pinkie Pie:''' Sure you can have my ornithopter! I'm not using it anyway, no matter what those toy company executives think! |
| 111 | * ThoseMagnificentFlyingMachines: |
| 112 | ** Cherry cobbled together a glider ("...essentially a wooden plank stuck on a crate at right angles.") to teach herself the rudiments of flight. During a break in training, she and Rainbow Dash, who was serving as her flight instructor, discuss the need for some form of roll stability, leading to Cherry's invention of ailerons. |
| 113 | ** Cherry's biplane is a wood-and-canvass affair powered by a magic engine (salvaged from a wagon contributed by Applejack originally built by the Flim-Flam brothers). |
| 114 | [[/folder]] |
| 115 | |
| 116 | [[folder:''Changeling Space Program'']] |
| 117 | !!!Tropes applicable to ''Changeling Space Program'' |
| 118 | * AbandonShip: Chrysalis considers this as an eventfull[[note]]i.e. heavy G load and barely controllable rocket[[/note]] CSP Mission 3 starts descending by parachute, only to remember that her wings are bound inside her pressure suit, and thus wouldn't be such a good idea. |
| 119 | * TheAllegedCar: |
| 120 | ** Or Alleged Spacecraft -- CSP Mission Zero. It has a parachute. It has a solid rocket booster. It has a flight chair (complete with bucket for in-space, er, accidents). But the actual space capsule leaves something to be desired... i.e. ''everything.'' |
| 121 | --->'''Cherry Berry: IT'S A BUCKING CARDBOARD BOX!''' |
| 122 | ** In ''The Maretian'', a poster of this "craft" is displayed in the Horseton Space Center museum. It is suggested that Cherry Berry was responsible for its caption, ''"This is Why We Do Not Do This."'' |
| 123 | * AlliterativeList: From narration about Chrysalis after CSP Mission 5: |
| 124 | --> [She] resumed her walk, calm, cool, collected. |
| 125 | * {{Angrish}}: Queen Chrysalis rant is half this after finding out that Elytron took the two Canterlot unicorns' bits and tossed them in the existing pile of hive funds without counting them first. Which meant they couldn't be refunded (at that point in the story, the CSP had not worked out a means of accommodating passengers). |
| 126 | * AwesomeButImpractical: Twilight's pursuit of a purely magic-powered single-stage-to-orbit design sufficiently distracts the Equestrian Space Agency to keep the Changeling Space Program neck-and-neck with them in the race to the moon. |
| 127 | * BeleagueredBoss: Cherry Berry, as nominal head of the Changeling Space Program gets to supervise the myriad changelings of varying ability assigned to the space effort, along with the cantankerous Goddard the Griffon and the often overenthusiastic Minotaur scientists. In addition, she has to deal with Chrysalis in both subordinate (as deputy test pilot) and superior (as changeling queen) roles; occasionally simultaneously. |
| 128 | * BerserkButton: Bringing up the renegade changeling Thorax invariably upsets Queen Chrysalis, but that's ''nothing'' compared to her reaction whenever someone mentions [[NoodleIncident Kevin]]: |
| 129 | -->'''Chrysalis: YOU ARE FORBIDDEN FROM SPEAKING THAT NAME AGAIN IN MY REALM!! UNDERSTOOD??''' |
| 130 | * BornLucky: The aptly named Lucky Cricket. |
| 131 | ** Propelled by magic to supersonic speeds during initial flight tests. Lands in a Las Pegasus resort swimming pool and contrives to parlay 50 complementary betting chips into 10% ownership of the resort before being asked to leave and getting placed on the "Not Allowed In Casinos" list. |
| 132 | ** Often one of the recovery team leaders. In situations where no-ling knows where the capsule will land, it's his team that usually ends up the closest. |
| 133 | * BrainDrain: Never a hotbed of intellectual prowess, Chrysalis's hive finds itself with three competing centers for drones (theoretically) capable of unsupervised work: Horseton Space Center, Cherry's Rocket Parts and Odd Jobs in Appleoosa, and the hive itself[[note]]Given Chrysalis's current priorities, the Hive gets the short end of the competition[[/note]]. As changelings are gradually accepted into greater Equestrian society, a small number of freelancers also contribute to the drain. |
| 134 | * CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Non-death example after the failure of R1: Chrysalis cannot demote Occupant because nobody else wants his job. |
| 135 | * CentrifugalFarce: Played more or less straight as part of the training regimen. |
| 136 | * ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: Double Face fades from the narrative around the time the Horseton Space Center becomes operational. |
| 137 | * ConservationOfCompetence: Practically name-checked by Chrysalis, who refers to Occupant at one point as having "used up the competence ration for the hive today". Since the moment of competence lasted for less than ten minutes, and Chrysalis roughly estimates her subjects as numbering thirty thousand or so, [[SurroundedByIdiots this does not speak well of said subjects]]. |
| 138 | * DeathGlare: When sufficiently provoked -- e.g. Presented with a space capsule made from a cardboard box or asked by a well-meaning princess to add just one more small piece of equipment to an already iffy rocket design -- Cherry Berry can produce a glare that even Chrysalis is hesitant to face. |
| 139 | * DiplomaticImpunity: The reason Chrysalis can start a space program at all. Yes, she tried to conquer Equestria and failed, but she is absolute monarch of the changeling nation (such as it is) and thus can conduct her scheme openly under the cover of peace negotiations. |
| 140 | * DoomyDoomsOfDoom: Invoked by Twilight Sparkle in her panic about three astronauts from minor space programs all stranded in orbit simultaneously: |
| 141 | -->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' If we don’t get you in a rocket and into orbit in three days, three astronauts are doomed!\ |
| 142 | '''Cherry Berry:''' Three astronauts?\ |
| 143 | '''Twilight Sparkle:''' Doomed!! |
| 144 | * FantasySequence: |
| 145 | ** After rendezvous and docking with ''Amicitas'' in lunar orbit, Chrysalis indulges in a fairly extensive one exploring what would happen if she disabled Twilight and Rainbow Dash and proceeded to attempt an actual landing. For various reasons, the fantasy does not live up to her expectations. |
| 146 | ** On the verge of setting hoof on the moon, Chrysalis gets a two-fer. One where she proceeds with her original plan to seize the moon's power, and another where she embraces continued cooperation with the other races of Equus with the long-term objective of conquering the stars. |
| 147 | * FailureMontage: Chapter 2 has a series of changeling flight experiments involving large slingshots, teams of drones using magic boosting a volunteer, combinations of the two, and, finally, Pinkie Pie's party cannon. Results are many injured and disappointed drones. |
| 148 | * FireForgedFriends: Chrysalis and Cherry Berry somehow achieve this after sharing the experiences of spaceflight and trying to cope with the changelings under their command. It even gets to the point where Chrysalis merely snarks when informed that Cherry had been serving as temporary Changeling queen. |
| 149 | * FlyingBrick: The real-life aviation sense of the trope gets a name check in Chapter 10: |
| 150 | -->Mission 12 flew like a flaming brick, but that suited Dragonfly fine. She liked flying a brick. Keeping a brick pointed where you wanted it to go was a challenge. |
| 151 | * FootnoteFever: Kris has stated on several occasions that Creator/TerryPratchett is one of his major writing influences. CSP has the footnotes to prove it. |
| 152 | * TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Even though the changelings in general are presented as amiable and foolish, even the particularly dense Elytron has no trouble whatever talking two Canterlot unicorns into walking into an ambush. The guards even take their duties seriously enough to talk back to Chrysalis, up to a point. Their one glaring failure lies with Pinkie Pie's [[spoiler:infiltration of Horseton Space Center's R&D complex]], but [[BeyondTheImpossible the rules do not apply]] [[RuleOfFunny to Pinkie Pie]]. |
| 153 | * HeelRaceTurn: The only one who knows Chrysalis' actual plan to claim the power of the Moon is Chrysalis herself. Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and even Cherry Berry all suspect there's more to the space program than just "an enormously expensive exercise in public relations", but Celestia is betting that [[BefriendingTheEnemy openly integrating changelings into Equestrian society]] in furtherance of the space program will be enough of an overall benefit to stick. The more changelings that do not think of ponies as a food source, the less likely they would blindly follow Chrysalis' orders to start a war, perhaps even rail against it, and Chrysalis ultimately wants to keep her people happy. |
| 154 | * HiddenDepths: Space Tourist Jet Set, as owner of an airship construction firm, has several useful suggestions for improvements to the CSP passenger module. |
| 155 | * InflatingBodyGag: When Cherry Berry wakes up from a changeling-induced dream (about spaceflight and cherries), she notices the guard who had been feeding off her love as she slept, and how he's now "nearly spherical". |
| 156 | * KickTheDog: A footnote mentions that Queen Chrysalis has done this multiple times in the past, just to see the dogs' faces afterwards. |
| 157 | * KlatchianCoffee: During the work up to Luna's space tourism flight, she arranges for her own special blend of beans and the equipment to brew it. After an unfortunate incident when another tourist accidentally drank a cup and subsequently attempted to become the first griffon to perform a sonic rainboom... |
| 158 | -->...labels were added to the coffee pots: REGULAR, DECAF, and WAIVER REQUIRED. |
| 159 | * MadeOfExplodium: In the tradition of ''Kerbal Space Program''... |
| 160 | -->Everyone at the table stiffened as they heard the faint but unmistakable sound of an explosion through the administration building walls.\ |
| 161 | "What was that?" Cherry asked.\ |
| 162 | "A rupture of the liquid fuel storage tanks?" von Brawn guessed, rising from his chair.\ |
| 163 | "An accident in Marked Knee's lab?" George Bull suggested. "He's been working hard on his new electronic calculating engine."\ |
| 164 | "Electronics explode?" Chrysalis asked.\ |
| 165 | "This is a rocket flight center," Goddard grumbled, rising to an arthritic hover over the table. "EVERYTHING explodes." |
| 166 | * NoHistoricalFiguresWereHarmed: Many of the scientific and technical experts Chrysalis recruits are based on pioneers in rocketry, mathematics, and electronics. A few other pioneers and notable space-related celebrities make an appearance as part of competing programs or tourists. |
| 167 | ** Goddard the Griffon: Robert Goddard (rocketry) |
| 168 | ** Warner von Brawn: Wernher von Braun (rocketry) |
| 169 | ** George Bull: George Boole (mathematics, particularly digital logic) |
| 170 | ** Lord George Cowley: Sir George Cayley (aeronautics) |
| 171 | ** Marked Knee: Guglielmo Marconi (radio) |
| 172 | ** Popov the Yak: Alexander Stepanovich Popov (radio) |
| 173 | ** Lord Garriott de Gryphon: Richard Garriott (space tourist) |
| 174 | * NotTheFallThatKillsYou: Discussed as Hobble Jimenez imparts this nugget of wisdom to Jet Set and Upper Crust during their free fall training in the vertical wind tunnel. |
| 175 | * OhNoNotAgain: Cherry Berry's reaction when Flim and Flam show up at Horseton Space Center and start singing about their mobile TV production facility. |
| 176 | * OnlySaneMan: Cherry Berry and Chrysalis both try to rein in overly enthusiastic changelings and boffins with tenuous connections to reality. |
| 177 | * PassThePopcorn: Chrysalis's first thought when seeing half a dozen changelings cowering from Cherry Berry's wrath at the Cardboard Box Space Capsule. |
| 178 | * PatterSong: |
| 179 | ** Flim and Flam repurposed "Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000" to expound on their mobile television production studio ("Super Sailing Studio 6000"). |
| 180 | ** "Appy is Uppy" is a fairly entertaining (and catchy) way of getting across terms used when navigating in space. |
| 181 | * PenPushingPresident: Or Pen-Pushing Semi-enlightened Despot. "Going legit" has saddled Chrysalis with a vastly increased burden of paperwork. Documentation for her subjects (birth certificates, background checks, employment and rental references, etc.), diplomatic and commercial correspondance, etc. |
| 182 | * PostVictoryCollapse: Chrysalis, after successfully piloting a fraught[[note]]Against Cherry Berry's advice and having a rough time of it[[/note]] CSP Mission 5 and keeping up a nonchalant front while being chewed out by Cherry Berry... |
| 183 | -->[She] resumed her walk, calm, cool, collected, opening the admin building door with her magic, stepping into the portable building, and closing it behind her.\ |
| 184 | Only alone among the deserted desks, with the door locked, did she allow herself to slowly flop over onto her side.\ |
| 185 | A few seconds later she curled up into a fetal ball as the shakes began. |
| 186 | * TheRadioDiesFirst: During the second phase of CSP mission 21 (Orbital rendezvous and rescue), the telepresence spell crystal on Dragonfly's ship is damaged as result of a glancing impact with the Griffon capsule, cutting off communication with Horseton. This forces Dragonfly to compute her orbital adjustments on her own. |
| 187 | * RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Both the [=CSP=] and [=ESA=] start like this. |
| 188 | ** The Changelings begin with drones who have essentially no idea what they’re doing. Then an Earth Pony who's been rejected by most of the other space programs shows up, claiming that she knows what needs doing. A foul-tempered Griffon rocket specialist is hired, along with a herd of Minotaur technical experts who have very little ability to stay under budget. |
| 189 | ** The Equestrians start in slightly better shape, with Twilight and Rainbow Dash as the primary driving force, pulling in their friends in a variety of support roles. |
| 190 | * RedOnesGoFaster: An article of faith among changelings, expressed during the initial rocket design meetings. |
| 191 | * ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules: The exact status of the Changeling Hive vis-a-vis Equestrian tax law is under (very slow and tedious) negotiation. To deny Celestia opportunities to interfere with her plans, Chrysalis is keeping scrupulous records of all tax-related matters for the various enterprises associated with the Hive, and is even going out of her way to avoid attempts to reduce the final bill, against the advice of her accountants and lawyers, who feel it their duty to get her the best possible deal. |
| 192 | * StillTheLeader: After her recovery from petrification, Chrysalis is slightly unsettled when she finds that Cherry Berry has done as good a job, if not slightly better, as acting Queen. She spends a non-trivial amount of time looking for something substantive to do. Things eventually return to normal once Cherry starts concentrating on prep for her next mission. |
| 193 | * SurroundedByIdiots: Queen Chrysalis' hive are, on the whole, extremely loyal and enthusiastic about whatever projects she has for them. Unfortunately, the number of changelings that can be trusted to perform tasks without close supervision is rather small. |
| 194 | * SwivelChairAntics: Luna enjoyed her time in the multi-axis trainer chair so much that she ordered one for her personal use. |
| 195 | * TalkingToThemself: Pinkie Pie's internal monologue in Chapter 11 bifurcates into an argument/discussion. |
| 196 | -->''It shouldn't even be a question. We--\ |
| 197 | Wait a minute. This is me talking to myself, right? So shouldn't it be I instead of we?\ |
| 198 | I don't know. Talking to myself is so confusing!'' |
| 199 | * TeethClenchedTeamwork: Chrysalis and Twilight throughout preparation and execution of CSP-23/ESA-13. |
| 200 | * ThatOneSidequest: [[invoked]] One would think that taking a Flea booster to altitude for a test would be a simple straightforward contract, and not something that takes 4 attempts. |
| 201 | * ThoseTwoGuys: On multiple occasions two anonymous changeling guards are given the spotlight while they gossip about [[GreekChorus conditions at that point in the story]]. |
| 202 | * TooGoodToBeTrue: The first half of CSP mission 11 (first planetary orbit) proceeds much too smoothly for Cherry Berry's comfort, due to a particularly grueling set of simulator runs during preparation. |
| 203 | * TrainingMontage: As part of the build-up to CSP missions 13 and 14, we get glimpses of the prospective space tourists' training (both physical and academic) regimen. |
| 204 | * TryNotToDie: |
| 205 | -->'''Chrysalis:''' ''[to Cherry Berry, about to fly CSP-06]'' Remember this, pony. Don't mess this up. You are not allowed to mess this up. Nopony wants a [[DeadlyEuphemism Bad Day]]. |
| 206 | * YouAreInCommandNow: In the wake of the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie2017 Storm King's invasion]], Cherry Berry finds herself acting Queen of the changelings[[note]]Chrysalis had been petrified during an attack on Horseton Space Center.[[/note]] in order to keep things running while she organizes a mission to rescue three astronauts[[note]]from the smaller space programs that all decided to take their own shots at a lunar fly-by while Equestria was busy with the invasion.[[/note]] stranded in Equus orbit. |
| 207 | * YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Chrysalis usually addresses Cherry Berry simply as "pony". On those occasions when she actually uses her real name, it's usually because she's one very short step from revoking breathing privileges. |
| 208 | * YouDidntAsk: Luna's explanation to why she hadn't bothered to correct the "flat disk with celestial dome" model proposed by Clover the Clever: "She never asked us." |
| 209 | [[/folder]] |
| 210 | |
| 211 | [[folder:''Counting Noses'']] |
| 212 | !!!Tropes applicable to ''Counting Noses'' |
| 213 | * AllergicToRoutine: Paussus/Short Pause will enthusiastically tackle any new task he's assigned, but after two or three times, he gets bored and looks for something different to do. |
| 214 | * AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Before disappearing from the hive, Paussus held several different jobs both there and at Horseton Space Center over the course of a few months. Anything new is exciting to him the first time he does it, but unbearably boring if he has to do it again. He ultimately becomes an actor at a low-budget TV studio in Manehattan, where he gets to play a lot of different roles and do other jobs (writing scripts, building sets, etc.) from time to time. It's heaven for him. |
| 215 | * BecomingTheMask: In his natural form, Paussus is an utterly unremarkable-looking drone who doesn't stick in anyone's mind. When he transforms into Short Pause, the unicorn identity he uses for his TV work, everyone recognizes and respects him. Chrysalis even allows him to fill out his census form using "Short Pause" as his real name and "Paussus" as an alias. |
| 216 | * PreferableImpersonator: In ''CSP'', one of the changelings took place of a construction worker who died in an accident by FakingAmnesia. By the time of this story, it's been a year that his 'adopted' wife and daughter know of it... and they both are okay with it, much to Chrysalis' bafflement. |
| 217 | * VerbalTic: Paussus/Short Pause suffers from this, to Chrysalis's annoyance: |
| 218 | -->'''Chrysalis:''' ''[to Paussus, after she gives him a census form]'' And for the record, if you want to put down Short Pause as your real name and Paussus as an alias, I will permit it. On the condition that you, for the love of love, quit saying 'you know' every other sentence. |
| 219 | [[/folder]] |
| 220 | |
| 221 | [[folder:''The Maretian'']] |
| 222 | !!!Tropes applicable to ''The Maretian'' |
| 223 | * AcidRefluxNightmare: After eating Mark's leftover turkey, Fireball gets one based on the television the crew has been watching. |
| 224 | * AlienArtsAreAppreciated: Starlight initially considers Disco to be "excellent breaking-edge music". |
| 225 | * AlliterativeName: On Sol 7, Mark describes Cherry Berry (emphasis added). |
| 226 | -->'''Mark:''' The first of these little horse alien things is pink -- pink like your kid sister's ''Pretty Pansy Princess Playroom'' Set. |
| 227 | * AntiMutiny: After the Hab breach of Sol 88, Cherry Berry, who feels she has failed as leader of the pony crew, attempts to resign as mission commander. The others aren't having it, not even Spitfire, who up to this point has felt awkward about being the lowest-ranking member of the crew after being commander of Equestria's most elite military unit. |
| 228 | -->“Is it a mutiny when the crew is forcing the captain to keep giving orders?” Dragonfly asked.\ |
| 229 | “Yes!!” Cherry Berry snapped. |
| 230 | * BackgroundMagicField: The absence of this on Mars is a critical problem for the ponies. The initial stress of attempting to draw mana from the nonexistent field caused a cascade failure that destroyed all but two of the ponies' mana batteries. Life does generate some mana, which allows a slow recharge of their remaining batteries, but initially, all the life on Mars fits in the Ares III Hab with lots of room to spare. It is later realized that the ''Amicitas''' crew, having evolved in a universal magic field, require said field for their health. While changelings would starve to death in months, dragons would simply take longer by wasting away, and it is postulated that ponies would eventually suffer a permanent loss of their magic abilities. |
| 231 | * BilingualDialogue: Although he can't speak Equestrian, Mark does pick up enough vocabulary and grammar to understand what the ponies are saying in their native language. |
| 232 | * BlindIdiotTranslation: The translation spell Starlight Glimmer cobbles together to speak with Mark Watney tends to do this, especially when confronted with [[MeaningfulName the literal nature of pony-world names]]. For example, the spell at one point renders Spitfire's name as "Slobberflame". Between this problem and the fact that the spell can only be used for about ninety seconds before Starlight collapses from exhaustion, it's no wonder that she pushes hard to get everyone to learn English. |
| 233 | * BoxAndStickTrap: For a test launch of a magic-powered launch system, Mark Watney has improvised a deadfall "switch" that reminds Dragonfly of one of these. Dragonfly hates them because they're stupid... but they still work anyway. Including on [[TooDumbToLive other members of her own species]]. |
| 234 | * BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Both Mark and NASA resort to this. Mark raids the Carl Sagan Memorial Station on Mars to collect most of the ''Pathfinder'' probe (and the ''Sojourner'' rover). NASA pulls its terrestrial duplicate out of the Smithsonian for their engineers to work on. |
| 235 | * ButForMeItWasTuesday: Mark references the trope after the ponies tell him the story of Trixie Lulamoon and the Alicorn Amulet. |
| 236 | -->For you or me, the day a stage magician shows up with real magic power and forces the town to kneel before his/her might would be a turning point in our dreary little lives. For ponies, it's Tuesday. Bear this in mind if you're tempted to make diplomatic threats. |
| 237 | * CallToAgriculture: After returning to Equestria, Cherry Berry purchases a small plot of land on the outskirts of Ponyville for a small cherry orchard as a place for [[spoiler:Groot]] to live. |
| 238 | * CelebrityParadox: In Mark's universe, the ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' franchise does not exist, so the sight of brightly colored ponies instead reminds him of ''Franchise/CareBears''. |
| 239 | * ChildProdigy: The four-year-old Flurry Heart continues to demonstrate her precociousness when she teleports to the ''Concordia'' to visit Cadance (who was filling in as ship's commander while Chrysalis was overseeing repulsor spell launch tests). |
| 240 | * CutTheJuice: A hardware malfunction in the computer used to generate the timing signal for the ''Phoenix''[='s=] Sparkle Drive system causes the drive to engage at maximum frequency (1 billion jumps per second). As the mana batteries drain precipitously and the risk of catastrophic crystal failure rises, Mark averts total disaster by disconnecting the computer (yanking out the cable), stopping any further teleports. |
| 241 | * {{Determinator}}: Pretty much all the castaways. [[spoiler:Except Dragonfly, who gives up after she has her magic-starvation-induced monster breakdown. It takes two months in a cocoon followed by a scolding by Starlight Glimmer to get her back on track.]] |
| 242 | * DinkyDrivers: Mark compares the Whinnybago's jury-rigged fore-and-aft-drivers steering system to two small children attempting to drive a car with one at the wheel and the other on the pedals. |
| 243 | * DisasterDominoes: |
| 244 | ** The chain of events leading to the Equestrians getting stuck on Mars. Bonus points for contributing to the storm that strands Mark as well. |
| 245 | ** Also, [[spoiler:the outcome of the launch of the Ares IV MAV, rechristened ''Phoenix''.]] |
| 246 | * DistantFinale: Some time after Mark is returned to Earth (long enough for him to earn his Botany [=PhD=]), we see how the various Martian castaways have fared. Enters FastForwardToReunion territory, with a slight delay due to a jammed door. |
| 247 | * DopeSlap: On discussing Applejack and the kind of monsters she fought, Dragonfly includes Changelings and gets smacked on the head by Spitfire for "bragging about being evil". Starlight then enumerates other monsters, concluding with "And, um, me," and then covering her horn with both forehooves as Spitfire gets closer. Cherry Berry orders Spitfire to cut it out before another dope slap happens, though. |
| 248 | * DunceCap: Mark is awarded one as part of his induction into The Royal Buck-up Society. |
| 249 | * EldritchAbomination: They stop the efforts to locate the astronauts with extradimensional probes cold. There are a few close calls with attracting the attention of dangerous beings, such as when a Decepticon nearly gets their hands on a probe. But the final line is when they encounter an entity where even the ''saved video'' of it is enough to come to life and being attacking everypony's minds... until they're rescued by the local dimensional eldritch abomination counterpart of Pinkie Pie. Eldritch Pinkie also makes sure to close off its dimension by erasing the original footage so the vulnerable Equestrians can't be attacked again. At that point, the program is immediately shut down and they have to explore other options to find the correct dimensional coordinates. They later sent along a safety message to Earth's dimension, warning them to not make dimension-hopping probes. |
| 250 | * EveryoneKnowsMorse: Well, at least Dragonfly, Twilight, Spike, and Drying Paint (the duty watchmare at Cape Friendship, and former telegraph operator) know the pony equivalent. Mark initially needs a cheat sheet for his Morse messages. |
| 251 | * ExposedExtraterrestrials: Although the natives of Equus do have jump suits and spacesuit undergarments with them, they come from a society where clothing is usually a fashion option rather than a necessity. Early on Mark comments that he is reminded on a daily basis that two-thirds of the Hab population is now female. |
| 252 | * FaceStealer: On Sol 107, in combination with TakeAwayTheirName, as a misinterpretation of merchandise licensing: |
| 253 | -->Mark read it again, frowned, and said, "License is permission to do a thing. In this case, a company wants to buy your name and face."\ |
| 254 | "What??" Cherry Berry's forehooves flew to her face. "You said you have no magic! I still using those!" |
| 255 | * FailsafeFailure: At the beginning, ''Amicitas'' loses all but its two emergency mana batteries to a failure cascade. The systems which would have prevented this all depended on the same [[BackgroundMagicField ambient mana]] that the ship ran on. No mana = no failsafes = no batteries. |
| 256 | * FasterThanLightTravel: Happens unintentionally when a computer keyboard failure results in [[OverDrive overclocking]] the Sparkle Drive. One billion jumps per second, at half a meter per jump, equals 67% faster than the speed of light. |
| 257 | * FirstContact: Yes, but there are more pressing issues immediately confronting the castaways than pondering the significance of the meeting. |
| 258 | * FirstContactMath: One of the first things Starlight does when trying to communicate with Mark is to stomp out numerical sequences. This leads him to conclude: |
| 259 | -->Obviously this can only mean one thing: [[LampshadeHanging she's a sci-fi geek who's read all the classic first-contact stories.]] |
| 260 | * FiveTokenBand: The reason the five crewmembers of ''Amicitas'' were chosen. Two members each of Equus's two leading space programs, plus a veteran of one of the discontinued smaller programs. One each of the three pony tribes, one changeling, and a dragon to represent the other speaking races. Although the crew did have their duties and were given training for the sections they did not excel in, Twilight Sparkle chose the crew to maximize popular support rather than to pick the best-integrated team, because the mission, a manned scouting mission at best, was only expected to run five days, maximum (the space exploration equivalent of a [[Series/GilligansIsland a three-hour tour]]). Fortunately for the crew, the selections worked out much better than planned, partly because the team included Equestria's most experienced space pilot, the most powerful unicorn of her generation, a more-intelligent-than-average changeling, an elite military officer... [[AndZoidberg and Fireball]]. To be fair though, most of Fireball's duties involved extravehicular activity in space, backup pilot, and spacesuit safety checks, one of which is useless on a planet and the other made moot by flight engineer Dragonfly being the only one that could repair their only set of suits. This largely left him as the super-strong guy. |
| 261 | * FlippingTheBird: During the final sol, as the crew sings a parody of David Bowie's ''A Space Oddity'', Fireball sings to everyone to "Tell Mars just what we think of it". Dragonfly, with her empathic abilities, comes back with "It knows!" |
| 262 | * ForeignCussWord: One Equestrian word that Mark has no difficulty pronouncing gets (re)translated as ''buck''. (As used in many MLP fanfics as a substitute for the f-word.) |
| 263 | * ForeignQueasine: The Vehicle Assembly Supervisor at Jiuquan contemplates subjecting Mitch Henderson to this ("...the traditional dishes of our back-country work force..."); Mitch has been expressing his anxiety by trying to boss around the Chinese engineers working to complete the ''Sleipnir 5'' resupply rocket. |
| 264 | * GeniusLoci: ''Maybe.'' Mars certainly gives the impression of being actively hateful and malevolent, and aiming deadly storms or other mishaps at them whenever it gets enough mana from the castaway's experiments to do so. And Dragonfly certainly begins to sense malevolence from it as part of her growing ability to sense the emotions of inanimate objects... that may ''also'' be all in her head. And it's also possible that storms and atmospheric effects and the difficulty of spaceflight are simply a side effect of magic in this universe. Between this and the general effects of Murphy's Law, as well as the fact that NASA ''really'' doesn't want to come out and say "We think Mars is evil and wants our astronauts dead," it stays ambiguous leaning slightly in favor. |
| 265 | * GenreSavvy: Mark is snapped out of his catatonic state when placed in a situation common to many sci-fi/horror movies: |
| 266 | -->'''Mark:''' When you see an egg or a pod or a cocoon or anything like that in a space cave, especially if it's black, you leave it the fuck alone!! |
| 267 | * {{Gesundheit}}: When Starlight is suggesting new books to read, Fireball says "Bless you," after hearing the name Creator/IsaacAsimov. |
| 268 | * GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: |
| 269 | ** After Dragonfly has cocooned herself, the others ask home for help getting her out again. What follows is Chrysalis's [[spoiler:half sarcasm, half test]] prescription to wake her up again to test the others' reaction: |
| 270 | --->Procedure for reviving Dragonfly. Take one stick. Apply vigorously to side of cocoon while shouting the following chant: wake up you lazy drone, [[EmotionEater quit draining people in your sleep]], don't you know [[AppealToWorseProblems larvae are starving in Mareitania?]] Repeat as needed until desired results are achieved. Over. |
| 271 | ** When Dragonfly finally emerges, Starlight Glimmer, afraid that Dragonfly has become a [[TragicMonster ravenous monster]], attempts to apply Chrysalis's procedure. Dragonfly reacts about as you'd expect someone getting whacked on the head right after waking up to react. |
| 272 | ** Afterwards, Spitfire keeps the stick and uses it to admonish Dragonfly for [[IAmAMonster being too angsty.]] Once Cherry Berry figures out Spitfire's mostly [[PercussiveTherapy doing it for her own relief]], and that Dragonfly is going along with the gag, she puts a stop to it. |
| 273 | * GoshDarnItToHeck: Mark catches himself thinking "darn" rather than "damn" and wonders if he's been around the ponies for too long, despite regular exposure to Cherry's SirSwearsALot outbursts and Alien Troll Queen Spitfire. A few minutes later, however, he's back to his usual colorful vocabulary, so it was probably just a brief lapse. |
| 274 | * GreenAroundTheGills: As a consequence of Spitfire's "Crunch, crunch, crunch" prank, Mark goes a slightly palid green. Somewhat more impressively, so does Cherry Berry, [[ThroughAFaceFullOfFur through her bright pink coat]]. |
| 275 | * HigherTechSpecies: Both sides initially believe this of the other, and neither are necessarily wrong. (Earth computers/electronics/rockets are about half a century ahead of Equestria's, and the Equestrians have the benefit of SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic.) |
| 276 | * HumansAreSmelly: Especially after a couple of weeks in close quarters with extremely limited hygiene facilities. |
| 277 | * HurlItIntoTheSun: This is the plan for the repulsor spell launch system Mars test payload. Doesn't quite get there, but the final trajectory is close enough to vaporize the package. |
| 278 | * HurricaneOfPuns: Mark occasionally indulges in his log. e.g. Sol 251 commentary on "rock farms": |
| 279 | -->I must ask to see one of these "rock farms" they keep talking about. I bet they grow some smashing pumpkins along their black-eyed peas and red hot chili peppers. (And I know, somewhere, a music historian is groaning that this entry is a bunch of korn.) |
| 280 | * InSpaceEveryoneCanSeeYourFace: Averted with the first "Group Photo" sent to Earth after radio contact is reestablished. (Everyone had their polarized helmet visors down, and Starlight wasn't going to risk a lapse in concentration while maintaining an air bubble spell.) |
| 281 | * InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: Mark's general reaction to Equestrian space flight after he learns a bit more about their unbelievably rapid space race. |
| 282 | * InterdimensionalTravelDevice: |
| 283 | ** Unintended consequence of failure to limit the Sparkle Drive's collision avoidance system to just three dimensions. Later used purposefully for the search-and-rescue mission. |
| 284 | ** The Mirror Portal to the ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls Equestria Girls]]'' universe also makes a brief appearance. |
| 285 | * IWantMyJetpack: For all Mark's remarks about how the Equestrians are insane, he also states that they're exploring space the way humans ''should'' have, dang it! |
| 286 | -->They're not wasting time with their space program. One day they just decided, "Let's go to space!" And from that day they threw everything they had at it -- magic, science, courage, and political will. For most of my lifetime we had the science and the courage, but not the will. Now we've got it back. Don't give it up again. |
| 287 | * LanguageBarrier: An early obstacle that is initially overcome via temporary TranslatorMicrobes (magic) and more permanently through hard work. |
| 288 | * TheLastManHeardAKnock: As Mark concludes his Sol 6 "So I'm stuck alone on Mars" log entry, a knock on the airlock door gives him cause to reconsider the notion. |
| 289 | * LastSupperSteal: After contact with Earth is reestablished, one piece of fan-art is clearly inspired by this. Naturally, defictionalized with some [[https://derpibooru.org/1963153 actual fan-art]]. |
| 290 | -->The shot panned from left to right, showing first the five Ares III crew members on Hermes in various poses; then, in the center, Mark Watney, looking wryly amused but not particularly holy; then the five alien castaways; and finally, in the position of Judas, a Roman centurion fingering a bloody sword and wearing a most unpleasant smile. |
| 291 | * LawfulStupidChaoticStupid: The characters name-check this trope on Sol 268, discussing the precise stupid alignment of various 1970s/'80s TV characters. Later, after coming out of her cocoon, Dragonfly deliberately crafts a ''D&D'' character that embraces the trope: |
| 292 | -->'''Dragonfly:''' Bash all the things. But in a [[LawfulStupid lawful good]] way. For the glory of Insert Deity Here. |
| 293 | * LearntEnglishFromWatchingTelevision: '70s sitcoms and action shows, with saving grace ''Series/{{The Electric Company|1971}}''. Also Beatles and disco song lyrics. Eventually, more formal English lessons are provided. |
| 294 | * LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: On Sol 234, Starlight doing a test with the magic batteries to create a temporary magic field results in a spontaneous song for the Equestrian castaways, and Mark gets caught into it. After the song ends, the human is rather amazed, but Starlight and Fireball inform him that they don't talk about it -- ever. And that means, stop talking about it. |
| 295 | * Lol69: Sol 69 is when sex-related terms language lessons happen. |
| 296 | * {{Mana}}: A critical limiting factor in how much the ponies can contribute to survival on Mars. Life generates mana, which can be collected and stored in purpose-made batteries. So food production not only supplies needed calories for consumption, but also mana which can then be used to enhance earth pony agricultural abilities (Yay, more food!), cast useful spells, or enchant objects (like more batteries, or a replacement Sparkle Drive crystal). It is also later realized that changelings also feed off of ambient mana, and the other Equestrians require mana for their overall health. |
| 297 | * MeaningfulRename: The formerly nameless Ares IV MAV[[note]]Mars Ascent Vehicle[[/note]] is christened ''Phoenix'' by Cherry Berry, partly after the magical reviving bird, partly from [[Film/TheFlightOfThePhoenix1965 an Earth story related to the ponies much earlier in the story]]. The new name turns out to be [[Film/StarTrekFirstContact much more meaningful than originally intended.]] |
| 298 | * TheMerch: In-universe, the Equestrians ask NASA to manage the legalities and marketing of toys and other merchandise based on the castaways. The Equestrians ultimately choose Hasbro as the winning proposal for the right to make pony toys. |
| 299 | * MultistageTeleport: Because the magic cost of a single teleport scales exponentially with distance jumped, the underlying principle of the Sparkle Drive uses very short, high-frequency jumps -- typically less than 5 meters, performed several thousand times per second. (For reference, 1,000 one-meter jumps per second works out to just over 2,200 miles per hour, or about three times the speed of sound.) |
| 300 | * TheMultiverse: Not just CSP Equestria and Mars. Exploration probes sent to locate the castaways find their way to several other alternate Equestrias (including ''Equestria Girls'') and universes containing Transformers, Gundams... |
| 301 | * MundaneUtility: The Equestrians figure out a way to use the water dispensers in their spacesuits as a telegraph to communicate with their home. |
| 302 | * NightmareFuel: [[invoked]] Following the successful test of the repulsor spell launch technique on Mars... |
| 303 | -->'''Venkat:''' [[TemptingFate It worked perfectly]]. It worked absolutely perfectly.\ |
| 304 | '''Mitch:''' I wish you hadn't said that...\ |
| 305 | '''Venkat:''' Why's that?\ |
| 306 | '''Mitch:''' Usually the first time you try to launch anything, it blows up on the pad. Or there's some other in-flight glitch. But everything went right in the test. So what's going to happen next time, when they do it for real?\ |
| 307 | '''Venkat:''' ''[sighing]'' Thanks a lot, Mitch. [[DiscussedTrope I was just running short of nightmare fuel]]. Thanks very much for topping me off. |
| 308 | * NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Toyed with, if not outright averted, in the case of Dragonfly. After she comes out of her cocoon, Starlight Glimmer points out that it's not about emotions or morals: the others simply won't be able to escape Mars without Dragonfly's unique abilities. (Though to be fair, emotions and morals would lead to the trope being upheld; it's just that there are more fundamental reasons for saving Dragonfly too.) |
| 309 | * OffTheRails: Once Mark and co. start playing ''D&D'', we get a few incidents of this kind. |
| 310 | ** Mark sets up an encounter with a [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eric_and_the_Dread_Gazebo Dread Gazebo]]. Starlight logically argues that her cleric can parley with it, charms it with the successful natural 20 roll she needed, and adds it to the party. |
| 311 | ** Starlight begins her first stint as DM with a heavy-duty epic quest laid out at the party's feet. Fireball immediately suggests going airship pirate instead, with everyone else quickly agreeing. Cue HeadDesk from Starlight. |
| 312 | * OhCrap: Mark Watney's reaction upon seeing Fireball trying to scoop some [[MadeOfIncendium perchlorate]] with a food pack. |
| 313 | -->''Yeah. Open flame around magnesium perchlorate and an organic fuel source.\ |
| 314 | Can you say, oh shit? Sure, I knew you could. And I'll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap.'' |
| 315 | * OOCIsSeriousBusiness: |
| 316 | ** The other Equestrians notice that Dragonfly has stopped her usual "silly changeling" routine and are concerned that it may be concealing a more serious problem. |
| 317 | ** Dr. Shields cites Mark's lack of snark as one symptom of the crew's exhaustion following Dragonfly's indisposition. |
| 318 | * OverlyNarrowSuperlative: |
| 319 | ** To create an instance of WorldsBestCharacter: After the ponies spent a sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet." |
| 320 | ** Part of Dragonfly’s pep-talk to Starlight during the cave fart is a reminder that the unicorn is the mightiest wizard on the planet. The immediacy of the crisis prevents reflection on the fact that she is the ''only'' magic specialist on Mars. |
| 321 | * PartyGame: Of the classic variety, during the Summer Sun Celebration party (Sol 296): "Pin the Antenna in the Watney," using a locker, a spare jump suit, and the antenna fragment that got Mark stranded on Mars in the first place. [[GroinAttack Spitfire wins.]] |
| 322 | * PublicExposure: Spitfire reacts to a troll's crude sexual re-editing of a radio interview and the subsequent NASA request for photos of the ponies being cute by deliberately making lewd, butt-exposing poses in every camera shot. Later in the story, one of the other Ares astronauts, Rick Martinez, reports that some Air Force pilots keep copies of these lewd photos [[NoseArt on their locker doors]]. |
| 323 | -->'''Spitfire:''' We are not children. We will not let you act like we are children... Also tell Earth I show you what none of you will ever have. |
| 324 | * PuppyDogEyes: Late in the story, Mark speculates that the ponies might have used a metaphorical version of this. |
| 325 | -->Did our universe, hostile as it is, feel a little sorry for them? Did they make puppy-dog eyes at reality, and have it work? |
| 326 | * RagingStiffie: Mark has a couple of embarrassing incidents of this sort while sleeping in close quarters with the ponies. The first time resulted in a pair of hoof-shaped indentations in Rover 2's passenger bench. The second resulted in a hoofprint on his chest. |
| 327 | * {{Retconjuration}}: In "Sol 479", a benevolent EldritchAbomination [[RealityWarper Pinkie]] applies this to ''Angel 16'''s film record, ensuring that no unfortunate inter-dimensional leakage can occur, because said film record never existed in the first place. |
| 328 | * RubeGoldbergDevice: The method devised by Mark and company for launching ''Phoenix''; referred to as such by the NASA ground crew. The ''Sojourner'' rover is positioned at the low end of a seesaw and programmed to drive up it. When the high end tips down, it closes a circuit and triggers the ship's magic booster engines. |
| 329 | * RunningGag: The ponies, Starlight Glimmer in particular, repeatedly insisting that various failures of humanity or the universe they live in would be solved if only humans had immortal princesses ruling over them. |
| 330 | -->'''Starlight Glimmer:''' Earth needs more princesses.\ |
| 331 | '''Mark:''' ''[sighing]'' For the eighty-seventh time, it does not. |
| 332 | * ScrapbookStory: Much of the story is told through mission logs (some written by Mark, others by the ponies) and transcripts of communications between Mars, Earth, and Equestria. |
| 333 | * SidetrackedByTheAnalogy: After her recovery, Dragonfly apologizes to Mark with, "... I'm really sorry I sucked you dry and tossed you aside like a juice box." Mark gets hung up on the notion of pony juice boxes. |
| 334 | -->"With the tiny little straw in the wrapper and everything?"\ |
| 335 | "This isn't important," Starlight warned.\ |
| 336 | "Yeah, sure," Dragonfly said. "Pony kids go around with 'em all the time."\ |
| 337 | "But... but..." Mark appeared much more appalled at the thought of ponies with juice boxes than he'd been about being turned into an emotionless zombie. "But how in the hell do you even-"\ |
| 338 | "FOCUS!!!" Starlight shouted. |
| 339 | * SlicesDicesAndMakesJulienneFries: Mark's Sol 207 log entry mentions the line in reference to the utility of unicorn magic. |
| 340 | * SoapPunishment: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/396744/27/the-maretian/sols-40-41 Sols 40-41]]: |
| 341 | -->Can you say, "oh shit?" Sure, I knew you could. And I'll be waiting here until your mommies get done washing your mouths out with soap. |
| 342 | * SpontaneousChoreography: The spontaneous singing[[note]]Including background music from out of nowhere[[/note]] part happens a couple of times, to the bewilderment of human observers and participants alike. |
| 343 | -->''Don't ask us why we sing\ |
| 344 | It's just a pony thing''\ |
| 345 | -- Dragonfly during the adaptation of ''Music/SpaceOddity''. |
| 346 | * SwitchingPOV: Narrative viewpoint rotates between the six castaways in limited third person (or first person in the case of Mark's journal entries) with occasional shifts to the crew of the ''Hermes'', NASA personnel on Earth, or even back to Equestria. Every now and then, there are passages in omniscient third person. True to the source material, these tend to be harbingers of misfortune. |
| 347 | * TakeAwayTheirName: On Sol 107, as a misinterpretation of merchandise licensing: |
| 348 | -->Mark read it again, frowned, and said, "License is permission to do a thing. In this case, a company wants to buy your name and face."\ |
| 349 | "What??" Cherry Berry's forehooves flew to her face. "You said you have no magic! I still using those!" |
| 350 | * TeethFlying: On Sol 90, after the crew stop Cherry Berry from resigning, notably through Fireball restraining her, she tells him to report to the medic for injuries... before giving him an uppercut hard enough to break a tooth. The dragon is less distressed by the pain than by the fact a pony broke his tooth, which he would never hear the end of it in the Dragon Lands. |
| 351 | * TemptingFate: Any time one of the crew suggests that things are looking up, Murphy raises his head to snicker. After a few incidents, [[GenreSavvy they learn to be more judicious about their statements]]. |
| 352 | * TimeOut: Dragonfly earns one after getting caught investigating Mark’s computer. (This was before mutual trust and cooperation had been established.) |
| 353 | * TranslatorMicrobes: Starlight has a spell that allows limited translation between English and Equestrian, but it has problems dealing with metaphors and technical jargon. This and the limited availability of magic makes learning English a priority for the Equestrians. |
| 354 | * TryNotToDie: Ember's message. Though the rest of the crew is a bit appalled, by dragons' standards that's rather mushy (according to Fireball). |
| 355 | -->'''Sol 109:''' \ |
| 356 | ESA: To Fireball. Message begins. Quote. By power of the Bloodstone Scepter you are ordered to not die, nor allow anyone with you to die, until we come to rescue you. You will demonstrate superior dragon strength, courage and wisdom by protecting your crewmates and keeping them safe from harm. This is a command from your lawful Dragonlord, and you shall obey! Got it? End quote. Over. |
| 357 | * TWordEuphemism: Mark attempts to document one of Cherry's SirSwearsalot incidents in his log: |
| 358 | -->I'm sure that in among the angry horse noises was the F-bomb, the S-bomb, one or two Q-bombs and a Silent-J-bomb. |
| 359 | * TheUnpronounceable: Mark describes the Equestrian language as "horse Welsh" and is physically incapable of reproducing several of its vowels. (His attempts to speak it generally result in [[MyHovercraftIsFullOfEels embarrassingly scatological or anatomical phrases]].) |
| 360 | * UnreliableExpositor: [[TheEmpath Dragonfly]] claims to sense first the emotions of certain inanimate things... and then to hear their voices. Considering that throughout the story she suffers from a steadily worsening case of magical malnutrition, this could be entirely in her head, as she is the first to admit. Or... possibly not... |
| 361 | * UnwinnableTrainingSimulation: Although it's mentioned that Cherry Berry failed her fair share of simulator runs learning to fly the MAV, one particular run personally overseen by Major Martinez on ''Hermes'' was designed to be unwinnable... and Cherry (with Spitfire as copilot) won it anyway. The solution involved [[EmergencyCargoDump jettisoning over six hundred kilograms of materiel out the airlock]], misusing maneuvering thrusters to provide constant acceleration until the fuel ran out, then refilling them and doing it again. The ponies were about to ''[[ImprovisedMicrogravityManeuvering get out and push the spaceship]]'' when the simulation program reported a successful result (i.e. eventual rendezvous with a simulated ''Hermes''). And then Cherry shocks the humans on ''Hermes'' by saying she wasn't bothered because [[SeenItAll she's done all these things before in actual flight]]. |
| 362 | * TheWholeWorldIsWatching: As in the source material, much of Earth's population is watching (with 12-minute lightspeed delay) as ''Phoenix'' leaves Mars to attempt rendezvous with ''Hermes''. Over the subsequent hours as events unfold and the fate of the castaways becomes increasingly uncertain, the global audience starts to dwindle, but large numbers are still keeping vigil when ''Concordia'' jumps in from Equus space to make the rescue. |
| 363 | * WorldsBestCharacter: By way of an OverlyNarrowSuperlative. After the ponies spent a sol, on Mars, grooming for photos sent to NASA, Mark proudly claims, "I am, after all, the most popular and exclusive spa host on the whole planet." |
| 364 | * WritingLines: As punishment for being sloppy with ''Amicitas''[='=] power management, Starlight assigns Fireball to typing out "I will not fail to properly power down the ship when not in use." 100 times. Unfortunately, to the confusion and irritation of onlookers, he elects to use the ''Pathfinder'' chat system (rather than a word processing program or whiteboards) for the task. |
| 365 | * YourOtherLeft: A recurring problem upon the first test of the "Whinnybago", since the cockpit of the ex-''Amicitas'' is mounted backward relative to the rover carrying it. Thus, the steering of the landing gear used as wheel must be reversed from whatever direction the rover is taking, leading to a lot of confusion and frustration for the designated pilot (Fireball). This is later solved by putting two half-circles of metal with graduations that are mirror-imaged over the respective steering wheels. |
| 366 | [[/folder]] |
| 367 | |
| 368 | [[folder:"The End of the Beginning"]] |
| 369 | !!!Tropes applicable to "The End of the Beginning" |
| 370 | * AndTheAdventureContinues: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] as Twilight and friends consider what their potentially divergent futures may hold. |
| 371 | -->"Yeah," Twilight nodded. "Exactly. One last adventure together."\ |
| 372 | "Hold on a minute!" Pinkie Pie interjected. "One ''last'' adventure? You really think we're not gonna save the world about a dozen more times together?"\ |
| 373 | "That's right," Fluttershy said. "Maybe we won't go to space again, but that's not the same as not having adventures."\ |
| 374 | "Maybe we won't all be in one place," Applejack said. "But when trouble calls, we'll come runnin'." |
| 375 | [[/folder]] |
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