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* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memory backup.
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* MomentOfAwesome:
** Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
** Also, Soren saving Sweetie Belle, after the CMC successfully built a medieval TREBUCHET!!!
* FunnyMoments: (Figuring out how to dial a phone.) "Can't use my hooves, maybe I can use my horn to press the buttons. Wait? Horn? That's right! I'm a mother fucking unicorn!"
* HeartwarmingMoments:
** Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
** Also, much of Soren's interaction with Lyra.
** Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
** Also, Soren saving Sweetie Belle, after the CMC successfully built a medieval TREBUCHET!!!
* FunnyMoments: (Figuring out how to dial a phone.) "Can't use my hooves, maybe I can use my horn to press the buttons. Wait? Horn? That's right! I'm a mother fucking unicorn!"
* HeartwarmingMoments:
** Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
** Also, much of Soren's interaction with Lyra.
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** Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
** Also, Soren saving Sweetie Belle, after the CMC successfully built a medieval TREBUCHET!!!
* FunnyMoments: (Figuring out how to dial a phone.) "Can't use my hooves, maybe I can use my horn to press the buttons. Wait? Horn? That's right! I'm a mother fucking unicorn!"
* HeartwarmingMoments:
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%%** Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
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* HilariousInHindSight: The comparisons between Discord and TheDevil, are harder to take seriously, after his HeelFaceTurn.
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* HilariousInHindSight: The comparisons between Discord and TheDevil, are harder to take seriously, after his HeelFaceTurn.HeelFaceTurn and the appearance of an evil more demonic looking villain..
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** Soren being attacked by his own dogs, while in Lyra's body.
** [[spoiler: Pound Cake being turned to stone.]]
** [[spoiler: Pound Cake being turned to stone.]]
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%%* TearJerker: Plenty.
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** [[spoiler: Soren having to say goodbye to his family and old life for good.]]
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* ParanoiaFuel: The thought that, Twilight could be a changling. [[ spoiler: IT's all in Soren's head, but for while, it could have been possible.]]
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* ParanoiaFuel: The thought that, Twilight could be a changling. [[ spoiler: [[spoiler: IT's all in Soren's head, but for while, it could have been possible.]]
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* MomentOfAwesome: Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
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* MomentOfAwesome: MomentOfAwesome:
** Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
** Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying.
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying.
** Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.SanitySlippage.]]
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* HeartwarmingMoments: HeartwarmingMoments:
** Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
** Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
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* {{Squick}}: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsibly drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
* TearJerker: Plenty.
* TearJerker: Plenty.
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** Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] **Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
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** Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] ]]
**Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
**Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
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* NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. **Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] **Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
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* NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. horrifying.
**Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] **Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
**Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] **Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant.
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* NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant. Owe, it's also revealed [[spoiler: any male so much as suspected of a sex crime is castrated. Becomes FridgeHorror when you think about the Male to Female ratio.]]
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* NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. Not **Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] Also, **Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant. Owe, implant.
**Owe, it's also revealed [[spoiler: any male so much as suspected of a sex crime is castrated. Becomes FridgeHorror when you think about the Male to Female ratio.]]
**Owe, it's also revealed [[spoiler: any male so much as suspected of a sex crime is castrated. Becomes FridgeHorror when you think about the Male to Female ratio.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[ spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[ spoiler: [[spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[ spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[ spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage. ]]
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* HilariousInHindSight: The comparisons between Discord and TheDevil, are harder to take seriously, after his HeelFaceTurn.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Awash opens with, Soren waking up to his alarm in the future, where he is now a pony ambassador to Earth. [[ spoiler: It's actually Luna, showing him an alternate world, in an attempt to get him through, his SanitySlipage.
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* HeartwarmingMoments: Every single moment between Soren and his niece.
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* Also, the CMC successfully built a medieval TREBUCHET!!!
* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memory backup.
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* Also, Soren saving Sweetie Belle, after the CMC successfully built a medieval TREBUCHET!!!
FunnyMoments: (Figuring out how to dial a phone.) "Can't use my hooves, maybe I can use my horn to press the buttons. Wait? Horn? That's right! I'm a mother fucking unicorn!"
*IronWoobie: Soren survives both his phone and computer blowing up in his face. Also, he's put into the hospital, by running head first into an (apparently?) solid dream door.
* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memorybackup. backup.
*NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant. Owe, it's also revealed [[spoiler: any male so much as suspected of a sex crime is castrated. Becomes FridgeHorror when you think about the Male to Female ratio.]]
FunnyMoments: (Figuring out how to dial a phone.) "Can't use my hooves, maybe I can use my horn to press the buttons. Wait? Horn? That's right! I'm a mother fucking unicorn!"
*IronWoobie: Soren survives both his phone and computer blowing up in his face. Also, he's put into the hospital, by running head first into an (apparently?) solid dream door.
* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memory
*NightmareFuel: Soren's descent into madness is absolutely horrifying. Not to mention [[spoiler: He almost kills Twilight in there duel.]] Also, the entire conflict with Lyra's memory implant. Owe, it's also revealed [[spoiler: any male so much as suspected of a sex crime is castrated. Becomes FridgeHorror when you think about the Male to Female ratio.]]
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*AngstWhatAngst: Soren's parents seem shockingly calm, about their son being turned into a female green unicorn with no idea how to turn back, at first. The key words being: at first.
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*MomentOfAwesome: Soren's showdown with [[spoiler: Twilight.]] First, he blinds her with a light spell and piece of glass, before attacking her, street fight style. And after she recovers and has him pinned down, he reveals that a little piece of the glass shared from earlier is hovering inches above her head, ready to pierce her brain. [[spoiler:True, this is all because of a tragic misunderstanding combined with Soren going insane, and Celestia immediately steps in after words. But still, he beat Twilight in a fight.]]
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*TearJerker: Plenty.
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* TheScrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole "overriding soren's mind in self defense", after finding out she's somewhat sapient. Meaning she was knowingly trying to destroy his mind because he may have been a threat. (To be fair, it depends if your more sympathetic to her or not.)
* TheScrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole "overriding soren's mind in self defense", after finding out she's somewhat sapient. Meaning she was knowingly trying to destroy his mind because he may have been a threat. (To be fair, it depends if your more sympathetic to her or not.)
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* MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memory backup, see below.backup.
* TheScrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole "overridingsoren's Soren's mind in self defense", after finding out she's somewhat sapient. Meaning she was knowingly trying to destroy his mind because he may have been a threat. (To be fair, it depends if your you're more sympathetic to her or not.)
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* TheWoobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatably this as well. Check Scrappy above.
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* TheWoobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatably this as well. Check Scrappy above.
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* Scrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole over riding soren's mind in self defense, after finding out she's somewhat sapient. Meaning she was knowingly trying to destroy his mind because he may have been a threat.(to be fair, it depends if your more sympathetic to her or not)
* Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
* Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
* Scrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole over riding soren's mind in self defense, after finding out she's somewhat sapient. Meaning she was knowingly trying to destroy his mind because he may have been a threat.(to be fair, it depends if your more sympathetic to her or not)
* Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
* Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
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* Moral event horizon: MoralEventHorizon: Arguably the memory backup, see below.
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*Squick: {{Squick}}: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible irresponsibly drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
*Woobie: TheWoobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably debatably this as well. Check scrappy above.Scrappy above.
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Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
Scrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole over riding soren's mind in self defense, after finding out she's somewhat sapient.
Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
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Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
Scrappy: Lyra's subconscious memory backup, at least for some readers who called BS on the whole over riding soren's mind in self defense, after finding out she's somewhat sapient.
Squick: The whole chapter after F. is irresponsible drinking, depending on how kinky you are.
Woobie: Soren. Words can't describe how sorry for him you'll be by the end. Also, his Parents. Lyra's subconscious memory backup is debatetably this as well. Check scrappy above.
