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** ''Evil Gods II'' has some Artistic License with US Government: when a president dies (and then comes back and quickly thrown in jail for being a liberal), ''the candidate who ran against him in the last election'' becomes president rather than the vice president.
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** Others are far less; in ''Threat of Satanic Communism'', the Rika and Books that are featured are male when they're really female.
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** Others are far less; in ''Threat of Satanic Communism'', Commonism'', the Rika and Books that are featured are male when they're really female.
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** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as a cult of serial killers who get away with everything because they can make Azathoth smite anybody that opposes them.
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** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as a cult of serial killers who "heroes" ruthlessly and remorselessly murder innocent people for daring to not share their narrow, hate-filled views on the world. The only reason they get away with everything is because they can make Azathoth smite anybody that opposes them.
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Did you mean to say it was blatantly incompatible with Complete Monster? Because that example is perfectly compatible with Designated Hero. I\'ll just remove the comments about the author.
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* DesignatedHero: Most Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murderers who made ''Stalin'' look sympathetic in universe. Even moreso, they are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the main characters."villains," and make everyone convert to Christianity, but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were, and the conversions [[FridgeHorror are almost all coerced thanks to our heroes policy of killing those who refuse]].
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First and more important, No Real Life Examples. Second-the first requisite in Complete Monster: \"The character is truly heinous by the standards of the story, which makes no attempt to present the character in any positive way. \" The \" which makes no attempt to present the character in any positive way.\" bit is totally and blatantly incompatible with Designated Hero.
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* CompleteMonster: Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murderers who made ''Stalin'' look sympathetic in universe. Arguably, the author himself qualifies since he seems absolutely convinced that their methods [[MoralMyopia are perfectly acceptable and admirable.]]
** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," but these conversions [[FridgeHorror are pretty much all coerced thanks to our heroes policy of killing those who refuse]].
** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," but these conversions [[FridgeHorror are pretty much all coerced thanks to our heroes policy of killing those who refuse]].
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** Sadly, Thomas is back in the driver's seat for Chapters 5 and 6. The story so far has been abandoned and gone back to being an AuthorFilibuster.
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** Sadly, Thomas is back in the driver's seat for Chapters 5 and 6.through 7. The story so far has been abandoned and gone back to being an AuthorFilibuster.
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** So would a story about Hogwarts being destroyed by a group of heavily-armed Muggles who have found out about the wizarding world and want to BurnTheWitch
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: The villains come across as lovable losers or regular people. In addition, they also give women and gay people homosexuals rights, and allow their followers to have sexual freedom.
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** Sadly, Thomas is back in the driver's seat for Chapter 5, and the story has gone back to being an AuthorFilibuster.
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** Sadly, Thomas is back in the driver's seat for Chapter 5, Chapters 5 and the 6. The story so far has been abandoned and gone back to being an AuthorFilibuster.
** PossessionSue: The converted canon characters, [[WeAreTeamCannonFodder when they're not being cannon fodder]].
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** PossessionSue: The converted canon characters, [[WeAreTeamCannonFodder when they're not being cannon fodder]].
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** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as a cult of serialkillerskillers who get away with everything because they can make Azathoth smite anybody that opposes them.
** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as a cult of serial
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* AssPull: The author having to tell us in parenthesis that God told Jerry about TheMole midscene
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* AssPull: The author having to tell us in parenthesis that God told Jerry about TheMole midscenemidscene in ''The Evil Gods I''.
** The [[{{Retcon}} retconning]] of Michael's death at the end of ''Battle with the Witches''.
** The [[{{Retcon}} retconning]] of Michael's death at the end of ''Battle with the Witches''.
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** Sadly, Thomas is back in the driver's seat for Chapter 5, and the story has gone back to being an AuthorFilibuster.
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** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," even though this conversion was coerced.
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** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," even though this conversion was coerced.but these conversions [[FridgeHorror are pretty much all coerced thanks to our heroes policy of killing those who refuse]].
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* EsotericHappyEnding: Satan is defeated, but the United States is now an oppressive theocracy, Harry Potter has been killed while Voldemort is still on the loose, and a very unpopular Tsar has been restored to the throne, messing up history. Um...yay?
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** DracoInLeatherPants: Ironically, Draco is one of the "secret Christians" in Hogwarts.
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** PossessionSue: The converted canon characters, [[WeAreTeamCannonFodder when they're not being cannon fodder]].
** RelationshipSue: Mary has virtually no personality outside of being Jerry's girlfriend.
** RelationshipSue: Mary has virtually no personality outside of being Jerry's girlfriend.
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* CompleteMonster: Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murderers who almost make ''Hitler'' look sympathetic by comparison. Arguably, the author himself qualifies since he seems absolutely convinced that their methods [[MoralMyopia are perfectly acceptable and admirable.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murderers who almost make ''Hitler'' made ''Stalin'' look sympathetic by comparison.in universe. Arguably, the author himself qualifies since he seems absolutely convinced that their methods [[MoralMyopia are perfectly acceptable and admirable.]]]]
** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," even though this conversion was coerced.
** Even moreso, the Prayer Warriors are never seen doing anything positive, let alone anything heroic. We never see them feeding the poor, healing the sick, or even stopping to PetTheDog. They get rid of the "villains," but the Satanists were actually better people than the Prayer Warriors were. The author probably thinks making everyone convert to Christianity was "heroic," even though this conversion was coerced.
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* EveryoneIsSatanInHell: Possibly the reason this fic exists.
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* SurprisinglyImprovedSequel: ''The Evil Gods II''. While it's still preachy and has a touch of sexism, it's not an AuthorFilibuster like the previous three installments. The characters act more like human beings instead of mouthpieces, the dialogue seems more natural, and the heroes don't [[CurbStompBattle curb stomp]] the first bad guy they see. In other words, it's pretty close to being a regular fanfic.
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* AssPull: The author having to tell us in parenthesis that God told Jerry about TheMole midscene
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* RonTheDeathEater: Almost all of the canon characters from their respective universes are warped into Straw Satanists. And yes, this includes Ron Weasley himself.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Percy Jackson and friends being attacked by members of a ScaryAmoralReligion who want to kill the Greek pantheon in the name of their patron EldritchAbomination could have made a good CosmicHorrorStory. Sadly, it's an AuthorTract.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Good lord! It's like someone mixed the author's Bible with an Al-Queada doctrine!
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* UnfortunateImplications: Good lord! It's like someone mixed the author's Bible with an Al-Queada doctrine!doctrine!
* UnintentionallySympathetic: The villains come across as lovable losers or regular people
** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as serial killers
* UnintentionallySympathetic: The villains come across as lovable losers or regular people
** UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: ...And our heroes come across as serial killers
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*** [[FridgeHorror This might have been a good thing considering the author views women as subhuman entities.]]
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** PuritySue: All of our heroes...[[JerkSue but it's not a "good" purity they have]].
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** PuritySue: All of our heroes...[[JerkSue but it's not a "good" purity they have]].have]].
*UnfortunateImplications: Good lord! It's like someone mixed the author's Bible with an Al-Queada doctrine!
*UnfortunateImplications: Good lord! It's like someone mixed the author's Bible with an Al-Queada doctrine!
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* CompleteMonster: Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murders.mass-murderers who almost make ''Hitler'' look sympathetic by comparison. Arguably, the author himself qualifies since he seems absolutely convinced that their methods [[MoralMyopia are perfectly acceptable and admirable.]]
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* CriticalResearchFailure: Aside from those listed in ArtisticLicenseReligion and ArtisticLicenseHistory, the series has made many, ''many'' errors otherwise.
** Some of the errors are from the author not bothering to read the books; for instance, in ''The Evil Gods Part One'', it's said that Zeus was Percy Jackson's son.
** Others are far less; in ''Threat of Satanic Communism'', the Rika and Books that are featured are male when they're really female.
** Some of the errors are from the author not bothering to read the books; for instance, in ''The Evil Gods Part One'', it's said that Zeus was Percy Jackson's son.
** Others are far less; in ''Threat of Satanic Communism'', the Rika and Books that are featured are male when they're really female.
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** GodModeSue: Jerry, who actually has God at his beck and call.
** PuritySue: All of our heroes...[[JerkSue but it's not a "good" purity they have]].
** GodModeSue: Jerry, who actually has God at his beck and call.
** PuritySue: All of our heroes...[[JerkSue but it's not a "good" purity they have]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: ...'''WHERE DO WE EVEN BEGIN?'''
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...whoops. Sorry, meant to delete the redlinked \"So Bad It\'s Horrible\" example, as it is a Flame Bait trope and should not appear anywhere on the Wiki.
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* CompleteMonster: Our "heroes" are unrepentant, racist, homophobic, misogynistic mass-murders. Arguably, the author himself since he seems absolutely convinced that their methods [[MoralMyopia are perfectly acceptable and admirable.]]
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