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''FanFic/TheAwkwardAdventuresOfMeghanWhimblesby''
* CanonDefilement: The story supposes that English and Westron are the same language. They are not. [=FebSong=] never mentions any TranslatorMicrobes, but does make a HandWave in chapter 1, when Meghan learns that the language is now Westron and not English.
* CanonDefilement: The story supposes that English and Westron are the same language. They are not. [=FebSong=] never mentions any TranslatorMicrobes, but does make a HandWave in chapter 1, when Meghan learns that the language is now Westron and not English.
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* MarySue:
** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.
** The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, might happen because of Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
* RelationshipSue: Meghan might be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, someone explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that [Legolas] would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan is perfect as a future spouse for Legolas.
** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.
** The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, might happen because of Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
* RelationshipSue: Meghan might be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, someone explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that [Legolas] would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan is perfect as a future spouse for Legolas.
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** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.
** The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, might happen because of Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
* RelationshipSue: Meghan might be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, someone explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that [Legolas] would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan is perfect as a future spouse for Legolas.
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** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
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** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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** The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
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** The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes exactly this. Only three characters want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan with them because she is a Sue.
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Don\'t say \"downplayed\" here. I know so many exaggerated Sues, I am not sure which are downplayed. Also, it would be weird if all the tropers wrote \"downplayed\" on all the Sue examples.
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** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. She is, at most, a downplayed Sue. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. She is, at most, a downplayed Sue. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English, English in Middle-earth, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes to go without Meghan. Only two characters agree with Aragorn, and four characters want to take Meghan along. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan along because she is a Sue.
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes to go without Meghan. exactly this. Only two three characters agree with Aragorn, and want to leave Meghan in Lothlórien, but four characters want to take Meghan along.with them. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan along with them because she is a Sue.
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* RelationshipSue: Meghan may be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, a relative of Legolas explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that my little brother would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan seems to be the perfect romantic mate for Legolas.
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* RelationshipSue: Meghan may might be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, a relative of Legolas someone explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that my little brother [Legolas] would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan seems to be the is perfect romantic mate as a future spouse for Legolas.
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** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, may result from Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
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** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, may result from might happen because of Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
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''FanFic/TheAwkwardAdventuresOfMeghanWhimblesby''
* CanonDefilement: The story supposes that English and Westron are the same language. They are not. [=FebSong=] never mentions any TranslatorMicrobes, but does make a HandWave in chapter 1, when Meghan learns that the language is now Westron and not English.
* EscapistCharacter: Meghan lives the dream of several readers, to forget school, to become an elf in Middle-earth, and to come under the care of Legolas.
* MarySue:
** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. She is, at most, a downplayed Sue. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes to go without Meghan. Only two characters agree with Aragorn, and four characters want to take Meghan along. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan along because she is a Sue.
** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, may result from Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
* RelationshipSue: Meghan may be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, a relative of Legolas explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that my little brother would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan seems to be the perfect romantic mate for Legolas.
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* CanonDefilement: The story supposes that English and Westron are the same language. They are not. [=FebSong=] never mentions any TranslatorMicrobes, but does make a HandWave in chapter 1, when Meghan learns that the language is now Westron and not English.
* EscapistCharacter: Meghan lives the dream of several readers, to forget school, to become an elf in Middle-earth, and to come under the care of Legolas.
* MarySue:
** Meghan. She enters Middle-earth in the most Sueish way: she is now an elf, wearing a nice dress, the most comfortable boots, and RapunzelHair (but she will cut the hair). She lands next to the main characters. After her entrance, Meghan has almost none of the CommonMarySueTraits. She is, at most, a downplayed Sue. Meghan has two Sue traits: she can use English, and the other characters like her too much.\\
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The company should leave her in Lothlórien, and continue without her. [=FebSong=] gets credit for writing the scene in chapter 13 where Aragorn proposes to go without Meghan. Only two characters agree with Aragorn, and four characters want to take Meghan along. These four like Meghan so much, it supersedes the logic that Meghan should stay in Lothlórien with her friend Lalaith. Therefore, the company takes Meghan along because she is a Sue.
** Lalaith. In a note on chapter 13, [=FebSong=] decides Lalaith as "my Mary-Sue nod". Her backstory (in chapter 9) seems appropriate for a Sue: she lost her family and nearly suffered DeathByDespair, but her friend Haldir rescued her with ThePowerOfLove, then married her. Despite this, Lalaith is perhaps not a Sue. Her story is plausible for the setting: elves do die in battle, they can die of grief, and Haldir might have a wife. The briefness of her story is appropriate for a side character. The fast friendship between Lalaith and Meghan, and all consequences thereof, may result from Meghan's Sue traits rather than Lalaith's.
* RelationshipSue: Meghan may be this to Legolas. In chapter 41, a relative of Legolas explains, "You must understand that our family genuinely doubted that my little brother would ever find a spouse." Yet Meghan seems to be the perfect romantic mate for Legolas.
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