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** Harry notes at one point that the wolves in the Forbidden Forest seem to be highly intelligent, possibly due to the ambient magic. Rowling [[https://www.wizardingworld.com/writing-by-jk-rowling/werewolves stated]] years later that there is, in fact, a pack of highly intelligent wolves in the forest, though these are descendants of two werewolves.
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience in this story, while in canon it is revealed to cause discomfort at best and horrific splinching at worst. (It does, however, feel unpleasant for ''others'' when Harry brings them in through the Hogwarts wards, which was on point.)
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience in this story, while in canon it is revealed to cause discomfort at best and horrific splinching at worst. (It does, however, feel unpleasant for ''others'' when Harry brings them in through the Hogwarts wards, which was on point.is closer to canon side-along apparitions.)
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience. It does, however, feel unpleasant for ''others'' when Harry brings them in through the Hogwarts wards.
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience. It experience in this story, while in canon it is revealed to cause discomfort at best and horrific splinching at worst. (It does, however, feel unpleasant for ''others'' when Harry brings them in through the Hogwarts wards.wards, which was on point.)
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience. It does, however, feel unpleasant for ''others'' when Harry brings them in through the Hogwarts wards.
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** Pettigrew revealing that the main reason for his FaceHeelTurn was being in love with Lily and hating James for having her. Then ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince'' revealed Snape's motivation for his betrayal...
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** Pettigrew revealing that the main reason for his FaceHeelTurn was being in love with Lily and hating James for having her. Then ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince'' the books revealed Snape's motivation for his betrayal...
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** When Percy is revealed to have mental scarring due to the early death of his twin brother, Fred and George are horrified, unable to imagine being separated from each other in such a way. Cut to
** Pettigrew revealing that the main reason for his FaceHeelTurn was being in love with Lily and hating James for having her. Then ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince'' revealed Snape's motivation for his betrayal...
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** Apparition is described as a ''pleasant'' experience.
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** Dumbledore has a younger sister in this fic, although she is named Amalthea.
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** Dumbledore has a younger sister in this fic, although she is named Amalthea.Amalthea.
* HarsherInHindsight: When Percy is revealed to have mental scarring due to the early death of his twin brother, Fred and George are horrified, unable to imagine being separated from each other in such a way. Cut to ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows''...
* HarsherInHindsight: When Percy is revealed to have mental scarring due to the early death of his twin brother, Fred and George are horrified, unable to imagine being separated from each other in such a way. Cut to ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows''...
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** The old family relics Harry is entitled to include a ring and a powerful wand. Also, it turns out Dumbledore's defeat of Grindelwald was largely, if not due to the wand, due to reverse-engineering what made said wand unique.
** Dumbledore has a younger sister in this fic, although she is named Amalthea.
** The old family relics Harry is entitled to include a ring and a powerful wand. Also, it turns out Dumbledore's defeat of Grindelwald was largely, if not due to the wand, due to reverse-engineering what made said wand unique.
** Dumbledore has a younger sister in this fic, although she is named Amalthea.
