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* AuthorsSavingThrow: With some plot points, both minor and major, that were changed in the fanfic.
** In "The Love Witch", parallel to the episode "The Love God", Lapis tries to help and bring the group together instead of the character she replaces, Wendy.
** Chara and Frisk's issues from each other seem to stern less from teasing, fighting and disagreeing. Instead, it's replaced with HeroicSelfDeprecation over their abilities to be good sisters for each other. Same can be said about Pearl and her sister [[spoiler:Garnet]].
** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing to do or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
** [[spoiler:Garnet]] allows Chara to communicate about the rift to her family, which solves probably the most dramatic [[PoorCommunicationKills communication issue]] Gravity Falls has.
** In "The Love Witch", parallel to the episode "The Love God", Lapis tries to help and bring the group together instead of the character she replaces, Wendy.
** Chara and Frisk's issues from each other seem to stern less from teasing, fighting and disagreeing. Instead, it's replaced with HeroicSelfDeprecation over their abilities to be good sisters for each other. Same can be said about Pearl and her sister [[spoiler:Garnet]].
** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing to do or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
** [[spoiler:Garnet]] allows Chara to communicate about the rift to her family, which solves probably the most dramatic [[PoorCommunicationKills communication issue]] Gravity Falls has.
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** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
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** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing to do or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: With some plot points, both minor and major, that were changed in the fanfic.
** In "The Love Witch", parallel to the episode "The Love God", Lapis tries to help and bring the group together instead of the character she replaces, Wendy.
** Chara and Frisk's issues from each other seem to stern less from teasing, fighting and disagreeing. Instead, it's replaced with HeroicSelfDeprecation over their abilities to be good sisters for each other. Same can be said about Pearl and her sister [[spoiler:Garnet]].
** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
** [[spoiler:Garnet]] allows Chara to communicate about the rift to her family, which solves probably the most dramatic [[PoorCommunicationKills communication issue]] Gravity Falls has.
* CharacterRerailment: Peridot, in the role of Gideon, was basically an AmbiguouslyGay feminine version of GF's Season 1 ArcVillain with the green gem's UnevilLaugh and tendecy to call people "clods". In the second arc of the fanfic, she began to fall into the LaughablyEvil territory she stood in before her official HeelFaceTurn in her canon show.
** In "The Love Witch", parallel to the episode "The Love God", Lapis tries to help and bring the group together instead of the character she replaces, Wendy.
** Chara and Frisk's issues from each other seem to stern less from teasing, fighting and disagreeing. Instead, it's replaced with HeroicSelfDeprecation over their abilities to be good sisters for each other. Same can be said about Pearl and her sister [[spoiler:Garnet]].
** Frisk isn't as selfish as Mabel, and ends up outright refusing or even fixing most of the issues caused by her selfishness. After the chapter parallel to "Sock Opera", she becomes all focused to fix her selfishness flaw. [[spoiler: [[ButThouMust Sadly, it doesn't stop the apocalypse from happening]].]]
** [[spoiler:Garnet]] allows Chara to communicate about the rift to her family, which solves probably the most dramatic [[PoorCommunicationKills communication issue]] Gravity Falls has.
* CharacterRerailment: Peridot, in the role of Gideon, was basically an AmbiguouslyGay feminine version of GF's Season 1 ArcVillain with the green gem's UnevilLaugh and tendecy to call people "clods". In the second arc of the fanfic, she began to fall into the LaughablyEvil territory she stood in before her official HeelFaceTurn in her canon show.
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** Peridot, after "The Woman-Pearlian Candidate", can be considered a JerkassWoobie.
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** Peridot, after "The Woman-Pearlian Candidate", can be considered a JerkassWoobie.JerkassWoobie.
** [[spoiler:Garnet]], the author, falls under StoicWoobie.
** [[spoiler:Garnet]], the author, falls under StoicWoobie.
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* TheWoobie: The whole Crystal Shack gang can end up falling (most of the time) under IronWoobie, due to them still keeping [[{{Determinator}} their will intact]] despite everything that happens to them (Chara being [[NoYay harrased]] by a dream demon, Frisk's friendship life being a disaster, Pearl [[NoRespectGuy lacking respect]], etc.).
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* TheWoobie: The whole Crystal Shack gang can end up falling (most of the time) under IronWoobie, due to them still keeping [[{{Determinator}} their will intact]] despite everything that happens to them (Chara being [[NoYay harrased]] by a dream demon, Frisk's friendship life being a disaster, Pearl [[NoRespectGuy lacking respect]], etc.).).
** Peridot, after "The Woman-Pearlian Candidate", can be considered a JerkassWoobie.
** Peridot, after "The Woman-Pearlian Candidate", can be considered a JerkassWoobie.
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* TheWoobie: The whole Crystal Shack gang can end up falling (most of the time) under IronWoobie, due to them still keeping [[{{Determinator}} their will intact]] despite everything that happens to them (Chara being [[NoYay harrased]] by a dream demon, Frisk's friendship life being a disaster, Pearl [[NoRespectGuylacking respect]], etc.).
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* TheWoobie: The whole Crystal Shack gang can end up falling (most of the time) under IronWoobie, due to them still keeping [[{{Determinator}} their will intact]] despite everything that happens to them (Chara being [[NoYay harrased]] by a dream demon, Frisk's friendship life being a disaster, Pearl [[NoRespectGuylacking [[NoRespectGuy lacking respect]], etc.).
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* TheWoobie: The whole Crystal Shack gang can end up falling (most of the time) under IronWoobie, due to them still keeping [[{{Determinator}} their will intact]] despite everything that happens to them (Chara being [[NoYay harrased]] by a dream demon, Frisk's friendship life being a disaster, Pearl [[NoRespectGuylacking respect]], etc.).
