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* MagnificentBastard: The titular [[DastardlyDapperDerby Chapeau el "Esmirriau"]] is a criminal thief who stands out as one of Mortadelo and Filemón's most tenacious enemies thanks to his big bowler hat filled with [[HyperspaceArsenal mechanical gadgets of any kind]]. After stealing from them an ancient egyptian coin by making a hole in their wall and safe, Chapeau evades their capture throughout the story using the large amount of tools in his hat that range from explosives, to mechanical arms, to even living animals, with him being able to [[SuperReflexes activate the one he needs in the exact situation in an instant]]. Even when they managed to take his hat from him, [[CrazyPrepared he just put up another one]]. Many years after his defeat, he would [[VillainTeamUp collaborate with many other previous villains]] in the series to claim revenge on Mortadelo and Filemón, while still using his hat's various devices to end them.
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* MagnificentBastard: The titular [[DastardlyDapperDerby Chapeau el "Esmirriau"]] is a criminal thief who stands out as one of Mortadelo and Filemón's most tenacious enemies thanks to his big bowler hat filled with [[HyperspaceArsenal mechanical gadgets of any kind]]. After stealing from them an ancient egyptian Egyptian coin by making a hole in their wall and safe, Chapeau evades their capture throughout the story using the large amount of tools in his hat that range from explosives, to mechanical arms, to even living animals, with him being able to [[SuperReflexes activate the one he needs in the exact situation in an instant]]. Even when they managed to take his hat from him, [[CrazyPrepared he just put up donned another one]]. Many years after his defeat, he would [[VillainTeamUp collaborate work with many other previous villains]] in the series to claim revenge on Mortadelo and Filemón, while still using his hat's various devices to end them.
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* MagnificentBastard: The titular [[DastardlyDapperDerby Chapeau el "Esmirriau"]] is a criminal thief who stands out as one of Mortadelo and Filemón's most tenacious enemies thanks to his [[DashinglyDapperDerby big bowler hat]] [[HyperspaceArsenal filled with mechanical gadgets of any kind]]. After stealing from them an ancient egyptian coin by making a hole in their wall and safe, Chapeau evades their capture throughout the story using the large amount of tools in his hat that range from explosives, to mechanical arms, to even living animals, with him being [[SuperReflexes able to activate the one he needs in the exact situation in an instant]]. Even when they managed to take his hat from him, [[CrazyPrepared he just put up another one]]. Many years after his defeat, [[VillainTeamUp he would collaborate with many other previous villains in the series]] to claim revenge on Mortadelo and Filemón, while still using his hat's various devices to end them.
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* MagnificentBastard: The titular [[DastardlyDapperDerby Chapeau el "Esmirriau"]] is a criminal thief who stands out as one of Mortadelo and Filemón's most tenacious enemies thanks to his [[DashinglyDapperDerby big bowler hat]] hat filled with [[HyperspaceArsenal filled with mechanical gadgets of any kind]]. After stealing from them an ancient egyptian coin by making a hole in their wall and safe, Chapeau evades their capture throughout the story using the large amount of tools in his hat that range from explosives, to mechanical arms, to even living animals, with him being able to [[SuperReflexes able to activate the one he needs in the exact situation in an instant]]. Even when they managed to take his hat from him, [[CrazyPrepared he just put up another one]]. Many years after his defeat, he would [[VillainTeamUp he would collaborate with many other previous villains villains]] in the series]] series to claim revenge on Mortadelo and Filemón, while still using his hat's various devices to end them.
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* MagnificentBastard: The titular [[DastardlyDapperDerby Chapeau el "Esmirriau"]] is a criminal thief who stands out as one of Mortadelo and Filemón's most tenacious enemies thanks to his [[DashinglyDapperDerby big bowler hat]] [[HyperspaceArsenal filled with mechanical gadgets of any kind]]. After stealing from them an ancient egyptian coin by making a hole in their wall and safe, Chapeau evades their capture throughout the story using the large amount of tools in his hat that range from explosives, to mechanical arms, to even living animals, with him being [[SuperReflexes able to activate the one he needs in the exact situation in an instant]]. Even when they managed to take his hat from him, [[CrazyPrepared he just put up another one]]. Many years after his defeat, [[VillainTeamUp he would collaborate with many other previous villains in the series]] to claim revenge on Mortadelo and Filemón, while still using his hat's various devices to end them.
