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Crosses The Lines Twice is for when something is so messed up and wrong that it ends up being hilarious. How is any of this funny?
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Let's take a fan-favorite character from an award-winning novel, [[spoiler:have her kidnapped by her own scumbag uncle after she nearly lost her life, and keep her imprisoned in a basement for 5 years]]. That turns out well, [[SarcasmMode doesn't it?]]
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None of these are hindsight
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** The movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
** One of the RunningGag involves Dylan being stuck in the Aarons' household due to his parents being mysteriously absent all the time. Come by the final chapter, TheReveal being [[spoiler: Dylan's parents going through a bitter divorce, and that Dylan is the subject of a heated custody battle...]]
* HilariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."
** The movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
** One of the RunningGag involves Dylan being stuck in the Aarons' household due to his parents being mysteriously absent all the time. Come by the final chapter, TheReveal being [[spoiler: Dylan's parents going through a bitter divorce, and that Dylan is the subject of a heated custody battle...]]
* HilariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."
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* HarsherInHindsight:
** The movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
**HarsherInHindsight: One of the RunningGag involves Dylan being stuck in the Aarons' household due to his parents being mysteriously absent all the time. Come by the final chapter, TheReveal being [[spoiler: Dylan's parents going through a bitter divorce, and that Dylan is the subject of a heated custody battle...]]
* HilariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."]]
** The movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment:HarsherInHindsight:
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* TheWoobie: You'd want to give poor Leslie a hug after finding out what happened to her in the opening 5-year time skip.
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* TheWoobie: You'd want to give poor Leslie a hug after finding out what happened to her in the opening 5-year time skip.skip.
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** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarrassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?
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** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarrassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide coincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?friend?
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** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?
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** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarassingDampSheets [[EmbarrassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?
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* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't crash]]...
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* FridgeHorror: FridgeHorror:
** [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn'tcrash]]...crash]]...
** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?
** [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't
** There's a few mentions of a NoodleIncident where Jess owns a SecurityBlanket which he refused to dispose off at age 13, and how he [[EmbarassingDampSheets wets his bed]] at age 14... which would conincide with the 1st and 2nd Anniversary of Leslie's "death". How long did it take exactly for Jess to finally get over losing his only friend?
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** Thr movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
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** Thr The movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment:
** Thr movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
** One of the RunningGag involves Dylan being stuck in the Aarons' household due to his parents being mysteriously absent all the time. Come by the final chapter, TheReveal being [[spoiler: Dylan's parents going through a bitter divorce, and that Dylan is the subject of a heated custody battle...]]
** Thr movie adaptation had a scene where Maybelle pokes fun at Jess and Leslie with the childish KISSINGInATree song. Come by this story Maybelle ends up exposing Jess and Leslie's relationship to their parents after catching them actually kissing in Jess' bedroom.
** One of the RunningGag involves Dylan being stuck in the Aarons' household due to his parents being mysteriously absent all the time. Come by the final chapter, TheReveal being [[spoiler: Dylan's parents going through a bitter divorce, and that Dylan is the subject of a heated custody battle...]]
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* HillariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
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* HillariousInHindsight: HilariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
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* HillariousInHindsight: Looking upon Maybelle's scenes when re-reading the original novel or watching the movie adaptation seems really awkward after going through this fanfic. Who knew Maybelle would grow up to be a potty-mouthed DeadpanSnarker?
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."
** This piece of dialogue. Imagine cute little Maybelle saying this to Jess in the original story...
--> '''Maybelle''': "Ugh, no, you '''ass'''..."
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* TheWoobie: Don't you just feel like giving poor Leslie a hug and telling her everything's going to be fine?
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* TheWoobie: Don't you just feel like giving You'd want to give poor Leslie a hug and telling after finding out what happened to her everything's going to be fine?in the opening 5-year time skip.
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* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't crash]]...
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* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't crash]]...crash]]...
* TheWoobie: Don't you just feel like giving poor Leslie a hug and telling her everything's going to be fine?
* TheWoobie: Don't you just feel like giving poor Leslie a hug and telling her everything's going to be fine?
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Let's take a fan-favorite character from an award-winning novel, [[spoiler:have her kidnapped by her own scumbag uncle after she nearly lost her life, and keep her imprisoned in a basement for 5 years]]. That turns out well, [[SarcasmMode doesn't it?]]
* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't crash]]...
* FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Leslie barely managed to escape from being sold by Uncle Jason. If Uncle Jason's vehicle didn't crash]]...
