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** The whole "Inverted Mickey" thing is hard to take seriously or even see as frightening because the use of "photo negative" imagery is a very cliched trope in web-based horror.
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** The whole "Inverted Mickey" thing is hard to take seriously or even see as frightening because the use of "photo negative" imagery is a very cliched trope in web-based horror.horror, feeling very much like an easy way for child fans of creepypastas to make fanart of him than any sensible in-universe.
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/TheKingdomKeepers'', given [[spoiler:the true nature of Corruptus]].
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/TheKingdomKeepers'', given [[spoiler:the true nature of Corruptus]].
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/KingdomKeepers'' given [[spoiler:the true nature of Corruptus]].
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/KingdomKeepers'' ''Literature/TheKingdomKeepers'', given [[spoiler:the true nature of Corruptus]].
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* CommonKnowledge: Almost every single fanwork related to this pasta (including the Website/KnowYourMeme page) claims that this story takes place at the real-life Treasure Island resort in the Bahamas. Treasure Island is mentioned, but the story itself actually takes place at a fictional abandoned resort called Mowgli's Palace, located in North Carolina. What makes this so glaring is that this fact is mentioned less than half a page into the pasta.
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** The 'thick, chunky yellow blood' line in '"Abandoned by Disney" sounds pretty cheesy and immersion-breaking the first time around. It takes on a whole new meaning once you read "A Few Suggestions" and realise that it's probably vomit.
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*** There's also the question of whether [[spoiler:Inverted Mickey]] was ever really a costume possessing a human, or simply a delusional [[spoiler:Corruptus]] that ''thought'' it was human stuck in their costume and [[TomatoInTheMirror gradually begins to realize that it is not.]]
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: "A Few Suggestions" has some levity, in spite of the anomalous mascot causing problems.
** While what it decides to do in response is decidedly unfunny to everyone but itself, the possessed mascot complains about Frank cheating at solitaire and sudoku, both of which are traditionally ''one''-player games.
** Several suggestions are actually requests to get more suggestion cards. One suggestion shows gratitude for a restock of suggestion cards, only for the ''very next suggestion'' to say they're out of cards again. It's implied the reason they keep running out is because the mascot takes them to write its own suggestions and submits them by stuffing the cards in the money slots of vending machines.
** While what it decides to do in response is decidedly unfunny to everyone but itself, the possessed mascot complains about Frank cheating at solitaire and sudoku, both of which are traditionally ''one''-player games.
** Several suggestions are actually requests to get more suggestion cards. One suggestion shows gratitude for a restock of suggestion cards, only for the ''very next suggestion'' to say they're out of cards again. It's implied the reason they keep running out is because the mascot takes them to write its own suggestions and submits them by stuffing the cards in the money slots of vending machines.
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** After the 3rd story, the [[spoiler: inverted Mickey]] from the first one is sometimes interpreted as merely a manifestation of a [[GreaterScopeVillain greater evil]] which caused the catastrophe in Room Zero.
** The Gascots are shown to mostly appear to people who learn about [[spoiler: Room Zero. Given that they are heavily implied to be the ghosts of the people who died there, it's possible they're hoping to find someone who will bring the truth of what happened to the world.]]
** Disney itself in "Corruptus". [[spoiler: Due to the Corruptus being born of people's thoughts and emotions, Disney's cover-ups become less a case of preserving their image and more utter desperation to ''keep more from being born.'']]
** The Gascots are shown to mostly appear to people who learn about [[spoiler: Room Zero. Given that they are heavily implied to be the ghosts of the people who died there, it's possible they're hoping to find someone who will bring the truth of what happened to the world.]]
** Disney itself in "Corruptus". [[spoiler: Due to the Corruptus being born of people's thoughts and emotions, Disney's cover-ups become less a case of preserving their image and more utter desperation to ''keep more from being born.'']]
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** After the 3rd story, the [[spoiler: inverted [[spoiler:inverted Mickey]] from the first one is sometimes interpreted as merely a manifestation of a [[GreaterScopeVillain greater evil]] which caused the catastrophe in Room Zero.
** The Gascots are shown to mostly appear to people who learn about[[spoiler: Room [[spoiler:Room Zero. Given that they are heavily implied to be the ghosts of the people who died there, it's possible they're hoping to find someone who will bring the truth of what happened to the world.]]
** Disney itself in "Corruptus".[[spoiler: Due [[spoiler:Due to the Corruptus being born of people's thoughts and emotions, Disney's cover-ups become less a case of preserving their image and more utter desperation to ''keep more from being born.'']]
** The Gascots are shown to mostly appear to people who learn about
** Disney itself in "Corruptus".
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/KingdomKeepers'' given [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the true nature of Corruptus]]. Corruptus]].
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** The writer apparently didn't know Disney would never dream of calling their costumed characters mascots. As any Disney nerd worth their salt knows they're [[InsistentTerminology cast members]]. It's a small detail, but one that can break willing suspension of disbelief right before TheReveal. Later addressed in "Corruptus" where he admits this mistake and chalks it up to fear.
** This isn't a problem with the creepypasta itself, but almost every single fanwork related to this pasta (including the Website/KnowYourMeme page) claims that this story takes place at the real-life Treasure Island resort in the Bahamas. Treasure Island is mentioned, but the story itself actually takes place at a fictional abandoned resort called Mowgli's Palace, located in North Carolina. What makes this so glaring is that this fact is mentioned less than half a page into the pasta.
** The writer apparently didn't know Disney would never dream of calling their costumed characters mascots. As any Disney nerd worth their salt knows they're [[InsistentTerminology cast members]]. It's a small detail, but one that can break willing suspension of disbelief right before TheReveal. Later addressed in "Corruptus" where he admits this mistake and chalks it up to fear.
** This isn't a problem with the creepypasta itself, but almost every single fanwork related to this pasta (including the Website/KnowYourMeme page) claims that this story takes place at the real-life Treasure Island resort in the Bahamas. Treasure Island is mentioned, but the story itself actually takes place at a fictional abandoned resort called Mowgli's Palace, located in North Carolina. What makes this so glaring is that this fact is mentioned less than half a page into the pasta.
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** This also seems to be a DarkFic of the ''Literature/KingdomKeepers'' given [[spoiler: the true nature of Corruptus]].
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* FridgeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned if you were a fictional character whose original creator died?
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* FridgeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook1967'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned if you were a fictional character whose original creator died?
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* FridgeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned when you die?
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* FridgeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned when if you die?were a fictional character whose original creator died?
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** Disney itself in "Corruptus". [[spoiler: Due to the Corruptus being born of people's thoughts and emotions, Disney's coverups become less a case of preserving their image and more utter desperation to ''keep more from being born.'']]
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** Disney itself in "Corruptus". [[spoiler: Due to the Corruptus being born of people's thoughts and emotions, Disney's coverups cover-ups become less a case of preserving their image and more utter desperation to ''keep more from being born.'']]
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** The writer apparently didn't know Disney would never dream of calling their costumed characters mascots. As any Disney nerd worth their salt knows they're [[InsistentTerminology cast members]]. It's a small detail, but one that can break willing suspension of disbelief right before TheReveal. Later adressed in "Corruptus" where he admits this mistake and chalks it up to fear.
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** The writer apparently didn't know Disney would never dream of calling their costumed characters mascots. As any Disney nerd worth their salt knows they're [[InsistentTerminology cast members]]. It's a small detail, but one that can break willing suspension of disbelief right before TheReveal. Later adressed addressed in "Corruptus" where he admits this mistake and chalks it up to fear.
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* FrigeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned when you die?
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* FrigeBrilliance FridgeBrilliance The carving "ABANDONED BY GOD" in Mowgli's Palace takes on a whole new meaning if you know that ''Disney/TheJungleBook'' was the last movie Walt Disney worked on. Wouldn't you feel abandoned when you die?
