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Dogs are dumb already, but Dudley’s even dumber. Do the math.
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'''Instead:''' He answers that she lives in a statue in the park like all the other squirrels, much to Kitty's chagrin.
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'''Instead:''' He answers that she lives in a statue in the park like with all the other squirrels, much to Kitty's chagrin.
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'''Instead:''' Dudley callously states that Kitty only knows that much about him because she's spying on him from her squirrel-nest.\\
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'''Instead:''' Dudley callously states that Kitty only asks if she knows that much about him because she's by spying on him from her squirrel-nest."squirrel nest".\\
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slight tweaks to make it sound better
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* [[WelcomeEpisode "Purr-fect Partners"]] really did it when Dudley enters Snaptrap's lair to retrieve the chew toy that he's been trying to chase after. In the process, he takes down the bad guys, only leaving Snaptrap, who has grabbed the toy, behind.\\
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* In [[WelcomeEpisode "Purr-fect Partners"]] really did it when Partners"]], Dudley enters Snaptrap's lair to retrieve the chew toy that he's been trying to chase after. In the process, he takes down the bad guys, only leaving Snaptrap, who has grabbed the toy, behind.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Kitty should take a hint that it's the Chameleon in disguise since Dudley is still on the slide down to her litterbox.\\
'''Instead:''' Via PuppyEyes, she lets him in, and what do you know, it's the Chameleon in disguise.\\
'''Instead:''' Via PuppyEyes, she lets him in, and what do you know, it's the Chameleon in disguise.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Kitty should take a hint to realize that it's the Chameleon in disguise since Dudley is still on the slide down to her litterbox.\\
'''Instead:'''Via She lets him in when he uses PuppyEyes, she lets him in, and what do you know, it's the Chameleon in disguise.\\
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* "Mall Rat" has Snaptrap being released from jail and is claiming to be redeemed. Only Kitty remains unconvinced by this.\\
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* "Mall Rat" has Snaptrap being released from jail and is claiming to be redeemed. Only Kitty remains unconvinced by this.\\
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'''As a result:''' [[WhatTheHellHero Everyone in Petropolis starts to hate her for this, even the agents in TUFF]].\\
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'''As a result:''' [[WhatTheHellHero Everyone in Petropolis starts to hate her for this, even including the agents in TUFF]].TUFF agents]].\\
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* "Share-a-Lair" has one when T.U.F.F. and D.O.O.M. are launching missiles on each other's hideout due to a field agent in their organizations stating that one is declaring war on the other when in fact they're weren't.\\
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* "Share-a-Lair" has one when T.U.F.F. and D.O.O.M. are launching missiles on each other's hideout hideouts due to a field agent in their organizations stating that one is declaring war on the other when in fact they're weren't.\\
'''You'd Also Expect:''' For both organizations to have more than one field agent in the first place so there's more verification if the field agent gets compromised, gets misled, or is lying.\\
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'''Even Worse:''' Their idiocy ended up being a plot orchestrated by the Chameleon, wanting revenge on T.U.F.F. for putting him in prison and D.O.O.M. for not inviting him on a social event together.
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'''Even Worse:''' Their idiocy ended ends up being a plot orchestrated by the Chameleon, wanting revenge on T.U.F.F. for putting him in prison and D.O.O.M. for not inviting him on a social event together.
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* "Frisky Business" has Dudley's mother Peg leaving him in charge for 3 days by himself. Dudley soon starts doing things she would normally forbid him from doing.\\
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* "Frisky Business" has Dudley's [[ManChild Dudley's]] mother Peg leaving him in charge for 3 days by himself. Dudley soon starts doing things she would normally forbid him from doing.\\
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'''As a Result:''' Kitty gets pissed off to the point that she says she's going to write down nasty things about him in her e-diary. Ouch.
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'''As a Result:''' Kitty gets pissed off to the point that she says she's going to write down nasty things about him in her e-diary. Ouch.
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* After Quacky turns villainous since his second appearance, he shows up a villain afterwards and asks Dudley and Kitty to be part of his plans.\\
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* After Quacky turns villainous since [[FaceHeelTurn becomes a villain]] after his second appearance, he shows up a villain afterwards appearance. He routinely appears and asks Dudley and Kitty to be part of his plans.\\\\
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'''Instead:''' They fall for it. Every single one of his appearances after his second one.
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'''Instead:''' They fall for it. Every single one of his appearances after his second one.it every time.
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Made entry less opinionated. Removed the Hockey game part since that was just meant to be a quick gag and ate up about only 10 seconds.
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'''Instead:''' They bitch about it like conceited princesses, and they ''almost refuse to save him from a hostage situation where he is about to be dropped from a helicopter in one hour'' because of this. Even when they do figure out on their own that they aren't perfect, they decide to waste the precious hour at a ''hockey game''. This is probably the worst level of brattiness you could attain.
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'''Instead:''' They bitch about take it like conceited princesses, extremely personally, and they ''almost ''[[DisproportionateRetribution almost refuse to save him from a hostage situation where he is about to be dropped from a helicopter in one hour'' because of this. Even when they do figure out on their own that they aren't perfect, they decide to waste the precious hour at a ''hockey game''. This is probably the worst level of brattiness you could attain.situation]]''.
