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* [[ThatThingIsNotMyChild That Thing Is Not My Brother!]]: This is how [[spoiler:Bad Batter]] feels about [[spoiler:Ghost Batter. Though the feeling isn't mutual.]]
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* ArcWords: "I fly"/"Fly Away"/"I'm a bird" and "Was it worth it?"/"It was worth it."
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** A random rant that Ghost Batter goes on at one point is a reference to a similar rant from ''WebComic/JerkCity'', which he even lampshades as he does it.
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** A random rant that Ghost Batter goes on at one point is [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/105822142486/this-thing-actually-partially-inspired-ghost a reference to a similar rant rant]] from ''WebComic/JerkCity'', which he even lampshades as he does it.
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There's also a lesser known prequel of sorts that is a fusion crossover with ''VideoGame/YumeNikki'', [=InterExtraIntraAdd=] that is also worth checking out. The download is on M-256's blog, [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/97561079311/interextraintraaddrar here.]]
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There's also a lesser known prequel of sorts that is a fusion crossover with ''VideoGame/YumeNikki'', [=InterExtraIntraAdd=] called ''[=InterExtraIntraAdd=]'' that is also worth checking out. The download is on M-256's blog, [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/97561079311/interextraintraaddrar here.]]
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There's also a lesser known prequel of sorts that is a fusion crossover with ''VideoGame/YumeNikki'' [=InterExtraIntraAdd=] that is also worth checking out. The download is on M-256's blog, [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/97561079311/interextraintraaddrar here.]]
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And there is also a sequel in the worlds for RPGMaker [=VX=] Ace, called Bx: Execute, the first demo of which can also be found on M-256's blog.
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And there is also a sequel in the worlds works for RPGMaker [=VX=] Ace, called Bx: Execute, the first demo of which can also be found on M-256's blog.
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''VideoGame/ContinueStopRise'', is yet another FanSequel to Mortis Ghost's Indie RPGMaker game ''Videogame/{{OFF}}'' made by [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/ M256]] on Tumblr. It can be downloaded [[http://rpgmaker.net/games/6764/ here.]]
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''VideoGame/ContinueStopRise'', is yet another FanSequel to Mortis Ghost's Indie RPGMaker game ''Videogame/{{OFF}}'' made by [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/ M256]] M-256]] on Tumblr. It can be downloaded [[http://rpgmaker.net/games/6764/ here.]]
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There's also a lesser known prequel of sorts that is a fusion crossover with ''VideoGame/YumeNikki'' [=InterExtraIntraAdd=] that is also worth checking out. The download is on M-256's blog, [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/97561079311/interextraintraaddrar here.]]
And there is also a sequel in the worlds for RPGMaker [=VX=] Ace, called Bx: Execute, the first demo of which can also be found on M-256's blog.
There's also a lesser known prequel of sorts that is a fusion crossover with ''VideoGame/YumeNikki'' [=InterExtraIntraAdd=] that is also worth checking out. The download is on M-256's blog, [[http://isasapiensworks.tumblr.com/post/97561079311/interextraintraaddrar here.]]
And there is also a sequel in the worlds for RPGMaker [=VX=] Ace, called Bx: Execute, the first demo of which can also be found on M-256's blog.
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* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, the most obvious being Photographerelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures of the party. He even tells the party to "Say Fuzzy Pickles!" These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can be viewed.
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* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, ''Videogame/{{Earthbound}}'', the most obvious being Photographerelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures of the party. He even tells the party to "Say Fuzzy Pickles!" These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can be viewed.
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** A random rant that Ghost Batter goes on at one point is a reference to a similar rant from JerkCity, which he even lampshades as he does it.
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** A random rant that Ghost Batter goes on at one point is a reference to a similar rant from JerkCity, ''WebComic/JerkCity'', which he even lampshades as he does it.
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* AShowWithinAShow: Panic In Ballville makes a return with another issue that Ghost Batter can find in the library in his section of Workforce 1. [[spoiler:It's protagonist, Boxxer later shows up to give Batter a pep talk during his NearDeathExperience at the Science Factory.]]
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* ShowWithInAShow: Panic In Ballville makes a return with another issue that Ghost Batter can find in the library in his section of Workforce 1. [[spoiler:It's protagonist, Boxxer later shows up to give Batter a pep talk during his NearDeathExperience at the Science Factory.]]
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* AShowWithinAShow: Panic In Ballville makes a return with another issue that Ghost Batter can find in the library in his section of Workforce 1. [[spoiler:It's protagonist, Boxxer later shows up to give Batter a pep talk during his NearDeathExperience at the Science Factory.]]
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* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, the most obvious being Photograpelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures of the party. These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can be viewed.
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** A random rant that Ghost Batter goes on at one point is a reference to a similar rant from JerkCity, which he even lampshades as he does it.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Ghost Batter and Bad Batter are actually the Batter's prototypes, created by mysterious unknown beings with Hugo's help and were originally known as Black Batter and White Batter respectively. They were also raised as brothers. On top of that, part of the process needed to create the Batter apparently required that one of them die while the other was turned into a monster. Black Batter chose to commit suicide so his brother wouldn't have to be the one to be killed.]] Also we eventually find out the real objective of the Batter's mission in the original game. [[spoiler:Hugo wanted Batter to [[ICannotSelfTerminate help him commit suicide.]]]]
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler:Ghost Batter and Bad Batter are actually the Batter's prototypes, created by mysterious unknown beings with Hugo's help help, and were originally known as Black Batter and White Batter respectively. They were also raised as brothers. On top of that, part of the process needed to create the Batter apparently required that one of them die while the other was turned into a monster. Black Batter chose to commit suicide so his brother wouldn't have to be the one to be killed.]] Also we eventually find out the real objective of the Batter's mission in the original game. [[spoiler:Hugo wanted ''wanted'' Batter to destroy the fake world he'd created with his powers and to [[ICannotSelfTerminate help him commit suicide.]]]]
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* AntiHero: The Batter Trio are all different degrees of anti-hero. The Batter himself is a NominalHero who basically just fights specters because it's his job as a purifier. Ghost Batter seems to be a BloodKnight who enjoys fighting specters for the hell of it, while Bad Batter is a SociopathicHero at best.
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* AntiHero: The Batter Trio are all different degrees of anti-hero. The Batter himself is a NominalHero who basically just fights specters because it's his job as a purifier.purifier, at least until his CharacterDevelopment kicks in. Ghost Batter seems to be a BloodKnight who enjoys fighting specters for the hell of it, while Bad Batter is a SociopathicHero at best.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Happens several times throughout the game. [[spoiler:It's how Black Batter became Ghost Batter for one thing.]] [[spoiler:There's also an unnamed elsen the Batter meets when he gets separated from the rest of the party in the Science Factory. He somehow notices that the Batter is also depressed and tries to talk him into a SuicidePact. At very least Batter gives in to his request to put [[SuicideByCop him out of his misery]], but it's unclear whether he actually intended to fulfill his side of the bargain. Though considering he just stands there and lets KNO3 shoot him when she betrays the party not too long after that...]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Happens several times throughout the game. [[spoiler:It's how Black Batter became Ghost Batter for one thing.]] [[spoiler:There's also an unnamed elsen the Batter meets when he gets separated from the rest of the party in the Science Factory. He somehow notices that the Batter is also depressed and tries to talk him into a SuicidePact. At very least Batter gives in to his request to put [[SuicideByCop him out of his misery]], but it's unclear whether he actually intended to fulfill his side of the bargain. Though considering he just stands there and lets KNO3 [=KNO3=] shoot him when she betrays the party not too long after that...]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: PlayedForLaughs when Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly that as a ghost he's already dead. [[spoiler:Of course this is a whole lot less funny when we find out the truth about Ghost Batter's origins.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: PlayedForLaughs when Happens several times throughout the game. [[spoiler:It's how Black Batter became Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling for one thing.]] [[spoiler:There's also an unnamed elsen the Batter meets when he gets separated from the rest of the party in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly Science Factory. He somehow notices that as a ghost he's already dead. [[spoiler:Of course this the Batter is also depressed and tries to talk him into a whole lot less funny SuicidePact. At very least Batter gives in to his request to put [[SuicideByCop him out of his misery]], but it's unclear whether he actually intended to fulfill his side of the bargain. Though considering he just stands there and lets KNO3 shoot him when we find out she betrays the truth about Ghost Batter's origins.]]party not too long after that...]]
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* RoomFullOfCrazy: Several areas throughout the game are like this, such as the hallways in Squirure's house, for some reason.
* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, the most obvious being Photograpelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures of the party. These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can beviewed. viewed.
* SuicideAsComedy: At one point Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly that as a ghost he's already dead. [[spoiler:Of course this is a whole lot less funny when we find out the truth about Ghost Batter's origins.]]
* RoomFullOfCrazy: Several areas throughout the game are like this, such as the hallways in Squirure's house, for some reason.
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* SuicideAsComedy: At one point Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly that as a ghost he's already dead. [[spoiler:Of course this is a whole lot less funny when we find out the truth about Ghost Batter's origins.]]
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* AWorldHalfFull: The world definitely has it's problems, but as [[TravelingSalesman Celeste]] says, if the world didn't have problems, then what would be the point? [[spoiler:Earth being one of these is one of the BigBad's motivations.]]
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: The world definitely has it's problems, but as [[TravelingSalesman Celeste]] says, if the world didn't have problems, then what would be the point? [[spoiler:Earth being one of these is one of the BigBad's motivations.]]
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* CrapsackWorld: [[spoiler:Workforce 3. More obviously the prison, but the rest of the area isn't that much better. It's for similar reasons to Zone 3, though the FantasticDrug used here is actually [[BodyHorror way]] [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul worse]] than sugar.]]
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* ImAHumanitarian: Bad Batter has a very bad habit of going around eating the Elsens when left to his own devices.
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* TooKinkyToTorture: The Elsen in the Prison, who seem to be under the effect of an unnamed FantasticDrug. They actually seem to enjoy being eaten by Bad Batter, to the point that he is clearly disturbed by it (though that doesn't stop him from eating them anyway).
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The Batter, having just finished his mission, wakes up in an empty field, the switch being the only remaining evidence of the fake world he just destroyed. However, there's a problem. His Add-Ons are missing. So, with nothing else to do, he decides to go looking for them.
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The Batter, having just finished his mission, wakes up in an empty field, the switch being the only remaining evidence of the fake world he just destroyed. However, there's a problem. His and immediately discovers that his Add-Ons are missing. So, with nothing else to do, he decides to go looking for them.
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* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, the most obvious being Photograpelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures in the party. These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can be viewed.
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** Also don't [[spoiler:talk about flying or falling in relation to Ghost Batter.]]
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* DownerEnding: The Fake ending, [[spoiler:Which you get if Batter doesn't spare Espilon after the final battle. [[NightmareFuel And what an ending it is too.]]]]
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* BookEnds: In the True Ending [spoiler:when Batter chooses to spare Espilon after defeating him, he walks around him to set the switch keeping heaven afloat to ON.]]
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* BookEnds: In the True Ending [spoiler:when [[spoiler:when Batter chooses to spare Espilon after defeating him, he walks around him to set the switch keeping heaven afloat to ON.]]
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* BookEnds: In the True Ending [spoiler:when Batter chooses to spare Espilon after defeating him, he walks around him to set the switch keeping heaven afloat to ON.]]
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* AGodIAm: [[spoiler:Espilon declares himself ''The'' God just before the final battle.]]
* AscendedExtra: The Add-Ons go from being extra party members with no dialogue in OFF [[spoiler:to being the bosses of each Workforce, with Espilon in particular being the BigBad.]]
* AscendedExtra: The Add-Ons go from being extra party members with no dialogue in OFF [[spoiler:to being the bosses of each Workforce, with Espilon in particular being the BigBad.]]
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* SurrealHorror: Well it's an OFF fangame. [[spoiler:It doesn't really kick off until the NightmareSequence in [[WhamEpisode Workforce 2.]]]]
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* SurrealHorror: Well it's an OFF fangame. [[spoiler:It There were elements of this from the start, but [[spoiler:it doesn't [[UpToEleven really kick off off]] until the NightmareSequence in [[WhamEpisode Workforce 2.]]]]
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* ShoutOut: This game features several to {{Earthbound}}, the most obvious being Photograpelsen, who appears in each Workforce and will take pictures in the party. These pictures actually appear in your inventory and can be viewed.
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: The world definitely has it's problems, but as Celeste says, if the world didn't have problems, then what would be the point? [[spoiler:Earth being one of these is one of the BigBad's motivations.]]
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: The world definitely has it's problems, but as Celeste [[TravelingSalesman Celeste]] says, if the world didn't have problems, then what would be the point? [[spoiler:Earth being one of these is one of the BigBad's motivations.]]
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: [[spoiler:This is what happened to the Add-ons. They all ascended to heaven and became gods, taking on new forms and becoming the bosses of heaven's Workforces.]]
* CrapsaccharineWorld: The world definitely has it's problems, but as Celeste says, if the world didn't have problems, then what would be the point? [[spoiler:Earth being one of these is one of the BigBad's motivations.]]
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* FluffyCloudHeaven: The entrance looks like this anyway. Beyond there, the Workforces look like fairly normal towns, though the Elsens living there all seem pretty happy and content with their lives. Specters still attack here sometimes, but the Elsens claim that the infestations are so small that they can usually handle them without a purifier's help. [[spoiler:Of course, this is an OFF fan game, so you know all isn't as it seems.]]
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* FluffyCloudHeaven: The entrance looks like this anyway. Beyond there, the Workforces look like fairly normal towns, though the Elsens living there all seem pretty happy and content with their lives. Specters still attack here sometimes, but the Elsens claim that the infestations are so small that they can usually handle them without a purifier's help. [[spoiler:Of course, this is an OFF fan game, so you know all isn't as it seems. Though most of the bad stuff is the fault of the villains mucking around with things.]]
* [[spoiler:MergedReality: This is what Espilon wants to do to the planes of Heaven and Earth, out of the belief that doing so would create an Ultimate Paradise everyone could share.]]
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* WhamEpisode: The NightmareSequence at the hotel in Workforce 2. [[spoiler:Not only do the SurrealHorror elements start to really kick in, but we find out the truth about Ghost Batter and Bad Batter's origins, as well as a bit more about our own Batter's own origins. Let's just say that Ghosty and Baddy being other versions of Batter is over-simplifying things.]]
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* WhamEpisode: The NightmareSequence at the hotel in Workforce 2. [[spoiler:Not only do the SurrealHorror elements start to really kick in, but we find out the truth about Ghost Batter and Bad Batter's origins, as well as a bit more about our own Batter's own origins. Let's just say that Ghosty and Baddy being other versions of Batter is over-simplifying things.]] Though Workforce 2 as a whole counts [[spoiler:since this is also where Omega tells the Batter Trio what's really going on with the Add-ons and why heaven has been sinking.]]
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* SurrealHorror: Well it's an OFF fangame. [[spoiler:It doesn't really kick off until the DreamSequence in [[WhamEpisode Workforce 2.]]]]
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* WhamEpisode: The DreamSequence NightmareSequence at the hotel in Workforce 2. [[spoiler:Not only do the SurrealHorror elements start to really kick in, but we find out the truth about Ghost Batter and Bad Batter's origins, as well as a bit more about our own Batter's own origins. Let's just say that Ghosty and Baddy being other versions of Batter is over-simplifying things.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: PlayedForLaughs when Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly that as a ghost he's already dead.
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* DrivenToSuicide: PlayedForLaughs when Ghost Batter jumps out a window as [[DisproportionateRetribution self inflicted punishment]] after being caught yelling in the library in his solo section of Workforce 1, only to remember belatedly that as a ghost he's already dead. [[spoiler:Of course this is a whole lot less funny when we find out the truth about Ghost Batter's origins.]]
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He searches all day, but no matter how long he walks, he can't find the Add-Ons anywhere, so he finally decides to just go to sleep for the night. The next morning he finds himself confronted by two other versions of himself: The hot-tempered, foul mouthed Ghost Batter, and the sweet and polite but AxeCrazy Bad Batter. This being [[TheStoic The Batter]] of course, he's not that bothered by this new mystery, and chooses to drag them along as he continues his search.
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He searches all day, but no matter how long he walks, he can't find the Add-Ons anywhere, so he finally decides to just go to sleep for the night. The next morning he finds himself confronted by two other versions of himself: The hot-tempered, foul mouthed Ghost Batter, and the seemingly sweet and polite but AxeCrazy Bad Batter. This being [[TheStoic The Batter]] of course, he's not that bothered by this new mystery, and chooses to drag them along as he continues his search.