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* WriteWhoYouKnow: Gunning is named after a bully who picked on the author in her elementary school years.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: WriteWhoYouHate: Gunning is named after a bully who picked on the author in her elementary school years.
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* InMemoriam: The character Tommy Flouros is this for Creator/JasonDavidFrank, who passed away in November 2022.
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* InMemoriam: The character characters Tommy Flouros is and his father are this for Creator/JasonDavidFrank, who passed away in November 2022.
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** The end of Chapter 13 would've had a Virus infect the Rocket Prize Machine, but this was scrapped because it would've dragged the chapter on and would've ended up making it harder for Chloe to keep up the masquerade.
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** The end of Chapter 13 would've had a Virus infect the Rocket Prize Machine, but this was scrapped because it would've dragged the chapter on and would've ended up making it harder for Chloe to keep up the masquerade.masquerade.
** The Pokémon Hop met at his camp in Chapter 14 was originally a Drifbloom, then a Growlithe. It would eventually be made a Cufant due to its Steel-typing good against Bede and because it was an opposite of Chairman Rose and his signature Pokémon being a Copperajah.
** The Pokémon Hop met at his camp in Chapter 14 was originally a Drifbloom, then a Growlithe. It would eventually be made a Cufant due to its Steel-typing good against Bede and because it was an opposite of Chairman Rose and his signature Pokémon being a Copperajah.
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** Achi's beartrap was either going to become Ziggy or Zagreus, before the author just named them [=ZigZag=].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before the author went with the mythological theme.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before the author went with the mythologicaltheme.theme.
** The end of Chapter 13 would've had a Virus infect the Rocket Prize Machine, but this was scrapped because it would've dragged the chapter on and would've ended up making it harder for Chloe to keep up the masquerade.
** Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before the author went with the mythological
** The end of Chapter 13 would've had a Virus infect the Rocket Prize Machine, but this was scrapped because it would've dragged the chapter on and would've ended up making it harder for Chloe to keep up the masquerade.
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* RealLifeWritesThePlot: The brief ''WesternAnimation/LoliRock'' crossover in Chapter 8 came about due to the author having binge-watched the first season while writing.
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* InMemoriam: The character Tommy Flouros is this for Creator/JasonDavidFrank, who passed away in November 2022.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before she went with the mythological theme.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before she the author went with the mythological theme.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Daga's original name was going to be based on Creator/OscarIsaac -- the only remnant being the name he gives the one-finned fish being "Gus" that stemmed from Oscar Isaac's role in ''Series/MoonKnight2022'' -- before she went with the mythological theme.
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