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* In the follow-up Haiba's Wish, follow-up, ''Haiba's Wish'', the first chapter consists of Haiba hiding in a dark cave while a vicious rainstorm pours, constantly reminding himself of [[spoiler: what he did to Tama at the end of the last story.]]
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* [[spoiler: Tojo's death has got to be one, as the last thing he says is his love for Tama.]]
* [[spoiler: This might not even compare to Haiba's death:]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine '''(Looks at scars he gave Haiba.)''' I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It's okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
'''Simba (also crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba. You're my friend, too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you.\\
'''(Haiba dies.)''']]
* [[http://m.fanfiction.net/topic/129016/86057897/83/Scripts The Alternate Ending]]
* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
* [[spoiler: Muerto's death]] in the opening flashback in The Blood Line. [[spoiler: He doesn't even get to finish his last sentence, which would have been, "I always loved you."]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
* [[spoiler: This might not even compare to Haiba's death:]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine '''(Looks at scars he gave Haiba.)''' I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It's okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
'''Simba (also crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba. You're my friend, too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you.\\
'''(Haiba dies.)''']]
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* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
* [[spoiler: Muerto's death]] in the opening flashback in The Blood Line. [[spoiler: He doesn't even get to finish his last sentence, which would have been, "I always loved you."]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
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* [[spoiler: This might not even compare to Haiba's death:]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine '''(Looks at scars he gave Haiba.)''' I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It's okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
'''Simba (also crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba. You're my friend, too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you.\\
'''(Haiba dies.)''']]
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* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
* [[spoiler: Muerto's death]] in the opening flashback in The Blood Line. [[spoiler: He doesn't even get to finish his last sentence, which would have been, "I always loved you."]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
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** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
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** Sarafina learning her daughter has mysteriously left and breaking down in tears.
** Simba missing Nala throughout the story. One can truly feel his pain...
* * [[spoiler: Binamu's death in ''Survival''.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
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* [[spoiler: Tojo's death in ''Tojo's Tyranny'' has got to be one, as the last thing he says is his love for Tama.]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
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** Sarafina learning her daughter has mysteriously left and breaking down in tears.
** Simba missing Nala throughout the story. One can truly feel his pain...
* * [[spoiler: Binamu's death in ''Survival''.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
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** Haiba [[spoiler: learning that everyone in the Grand Lands save Amri has died. It's even worse when you consider Amri herself. She's been living alone for ages, believing her son to be dead.]]]]
* [[spoiler: None of these even compare to Haiba's death in ''The End'':]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine '''(Looks at scars he gave Haiba.)''' I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It's okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
'''Simba (also crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba. You're my friend, too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you.\\
'''(Haiba dies.)''']]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine '''(Looks at scars he gave Haiba.)''' I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It's okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
'''Simba (also crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba. You're my friend, too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you.\\
'''(Haiba dies.)''']]
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** And most infamously, [[spoiler: Haiba killing Tama at the very end.]]
* In the follow-up Haiba's Wish, the first chapter consists of Haiba hiding in a dark cave while a vicious rainstorm pours, constantly reminding himself of [[spoiler: what he did to Tama at the end of the last story.]]
** Haiba [[spoiler: learning that everyone in the Grand Lands save Amri has died. It's even worse when you consider Amri herself. She's been living alone for ages, believing her son to be dead.]]
* In the follow-up Haiba's Wish, the first chapter consists of Haiba hiding in a dark cave while a vicious rainstorm pours, constantly reminding himself of [[spoiler: what he did to Tama at the end of the last story.]]
** Haiba [[spoiler: learning that everyone in the Grand Lands save Amri has died. It's even worse when you consider Amri herself. She's been living alone for ages, believing her son to be dead.]]
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* In The Lost World, [[spoiler: Haiba actually begins to cry when he realizes he's being blackmailed by Tama. Hearing her chuckle evilly doesn't help.]]
** Nala's reaction to Simba's behavior: "What's the point of loving someone who doesn't love me back?"
** Seeing [[spoiler: the dinosaurs chained up by The Hunters.]]
** And most infamously, [[spoiler: Haiba killing Tama at the very end.]]
* In The Lost World, [[spoiler: Haiba actually begins to cry when he realizes he's being blackmailed by Tama. Hearing her chuckle evilly doesn't help.]]
** Nala's reaction to Simba's behavior: "What's the point of loving someone who doesn't love me back?"
** Seeing [[spoiler: the dinosaurs chained up by The Hunters.]]
** And most infamously, [[spoiler: Haiba killing Tama at the very end.]]
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** Simba, a spunky, happy lion cub, spends most of the story being yelled at and intimidated by a harsh lion named Maana. [[spoiler: Imagine if he really had spend 18 months in that camp as planned...]]
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** Simba, a spunky, happy lion cub, spends most of the story being yelled at and intimidated by a harsh lion named Maana. [[spoiler: Imagine if he really had spend 18 months in that camp as planned...]]]]
* [[spoiler: Zazu getting fired]] at the very beginning of Drought, as well as [[spoiler: "That's… what I'm here for."]]
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* In Dig It, Simba's [[spoiler: possessed]] parents exile him to a camp for misguided cubs. Mufasa even drags him there by the scruff after knocking him unconscious.
** Seeing Zazu in his self-pitying manner before Pori arrives. The revelation that [[spoiler: he never actually enjoyed his job]] is quite saddening too.
** Simba, a spunky, happy lion cub, spends most of the story being yelled at and intimidated by a harsh lion named Maana. [[spoiler: Imagine if he really had spend 18 months in that camp as planned...]]
* In Dig It, Simba's [[spoiler: possessed]] parents exile him to a camp for misguided cubs. Mufasa even drags him there by the scruff after knocking him unconscious.
** Seeing Zazu in his self-pitying manner before Pori arrives. The revelation that [[spoiler: he never actually enjoyed his job]] is quite saddening too.
** Simba, a spunky, happy lion cub, spends most of the story being yelled at and intimidated by a harsh lion named Maana. [[spoiler: Imagine if he really had spend 18 months in that camp as planned...]]
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** [[spoiler: The end starts as a sad Tearjerker, as the audience is initially led to believe that Nala is still dead, but it turns into a happy Tearjerker when she comes back to life and shares a romantic moment with Simba.]]]]
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** Sarafina learning her daughter has mysteriously left and breaking down in tears.
** Simba missing Nala throughout the story. One can truly feel his pain...
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** [[spoiler: The death of Zazu's father. He would have been killed by Ahadi, but Zazu wished for that not to happen. Death killed him instead, so Zazu bears his father's death on his conscience.]] [[Disney/TheLionKing Not unlike someone else in the series...]]
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** [[spoiler: The death of Zazu's father. He would have been killed by Ahadi, but Zazu wished for that not to happen. Death killed him instead, so Zazu bears his father's death on his conscience.]] [[Disney/TheLionKing Not unlike someone else in the series...]]
** [[spoiler: Nala's death. The text itself sums it up best: "Simba continued to sob and cry. He had lost his girlfriend. His best friend. His future queen. She was gone for ever. All her hope, all her potential, and everything she could have been was snatched away in an instant. Simba had lost the single most important person in his life."]]
** Simba's [[spoiler: encounter with You-Know-Who is also a Tearjerker, but in a happy way. You-Know-Who confirms that Simba is indeed what he has always sought to be: a good, honest, true soul. He even allows Simba and the other Pride Landers to be brought back to life.]]
** [[spoiler: The end starts as a sad Tearjerker, as the audience is initially led to believe that Nala is still dead, but it turns into a happy Tearjerker when she comes back to life and shares a romantic moment with Simba.]]
** [[spoiler: Nala's death. The text itself sums it up best: "Simba continued to sob and cry. He had lost his girlfriend. His best friend. His future queen. She was gone for ever. All her hope, all her potential, and everything she could have been was snatched away in an instant. Simba had lost the single most important person in his life."]]
** Simba's [[spoiler: encounter with You-Know-Who is also a Tearjerker, but in a happy way. You-Know-Who confirms that Simba is indeed what he has always sought to be: a good, honest, true soul. He even allows Simba and the other Pride Landers to be brought back to life.]]
** [[spoiler: The end starts as a sad Tearjerker, as the audience is initially led to believe that Nala is still dead, but it turns into a happy Tearjerker when she comes back to life and shares a romantic moment with Simba.]]
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** [[The [[spoiler: The death of Zazu's father. He would have been killed by Ahadi, but Zazu wished for that not to happen. Death killed him instead, so Zazu bears his father's death on his conscience.]] [[Disney/TheLionKing Not unlike someone else in the series...]]
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* A few moments in Darkness Falls would count:
** [[The death of Zazu's father. He would have been killed by Ahadi, but Zazu wished for that not to happen. Death killed him instead, so Zazu bears his father's death on his conscience.]] [[Disney/TheLionKing Not unlike someone else in the series...]]
* A few moments in Darkness Falls would count:
** [[The death of Zazu's father. He would have been killed by Ahadi, but Zazu wished for that not to happen. Death killed him instead, so Zazu bears his father's death on his conscience.]] [[Disney/TheLionKing Not unlike someone else in the series...]]
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* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
* [[spoiler: Muerto's death]] in the opening flashback in The Blood Line. [[spoiler: He doesn't even get to finish his last sentence, which would have been, "I always loved you."]]
** [[spoiler: The end of the story would also count, as Simba angrily quits being a hero.]]
* [[spoiler: Muerto's death]] in the opening flashback in The Blood Line. [[spoiler: He doesn't even get to finish his last sentence, which would have been, "I always loved you."]]
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* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/Jerkass [[Main/JerkAss jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
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* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/Jerkass jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
* [[spoiler: Binamu's death.]] Even though she was a [[Main/Jerkass jerk to the extreme]], [[spoiler: being impaled by a tree branch is not a pleasant way to go. Besides, she was just beginning to rebuild her connection with Haiba before dying.]]
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'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine (Looks at scars he gave Haiba.) I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
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'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine (Looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
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'''Simba:''' No. It's not your fault. It's mine (Looks at scars he gave Haiba). Haiba.) I shouldn't have hurt you like that.\\
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Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that\\
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too\\
Haiba: Thank you\\
(Haiba dies)]]
Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that\\
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too\\
Haiba: Thank you\\
(Haiba dies)]]
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--> [[spoiler:Haiba: Simba, [[spoiler:'''Haiba:''' Simba... I'm so sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up\\
Simba: No, it'sup.\\
'''Simba:''' No. It's not yourfault it's fault. It's mine (looks (Looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that\\
Haiba:(crying)that.\\
'''Haiba (crying):''' It'sokay,you're okay. You're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.\\
Simba: '''Simba (also crying) crying):''' I don't hate you, Haiba,you're Haiba. You're my friend, too\\
Haiba:too.\\
'''Haiba:''' Thank you\\
(Haibadies)]]dies.)]]
Simba: No, it's
'''Simba:''' No. It's not your
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Haiba:
'''Haiba:''' Thank you\\
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-->Haiba: [[spoiler:Haiba: Simba, I'm so sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up\\
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-->Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that
-->Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.
-->Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too
-->Haiba: Thank you
-->(Haiba dies) ]]
-->Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that
-->Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.
-->Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too
-->Haiba: Thank you
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-->Simba:up\\
Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you likethat
-->Haiba:(crying)that\\
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgiveyou.
-->Simba:you.\\
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend,too
-->Haiba:too\\
Haiba: Thankyou
-->(Haiba dies) ]]you\\
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-->Simba:
Simba: No, it's not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like
-->Haiba:(crying)
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive
-->Simba:
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend,
-->Haiba:
Haiba: Thank
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Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too
Haiba: Thank you
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Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.
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Simba: No, it'shis fault, and then be forgiven by Haiba.The two both tell each other how they're each others best friends, until after Says so:not your fault it's mine (looks at scars he gave Haiba). I shouldn't have hurt you like that
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too
Haiba: Thank you
(Haiba dies)]]
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--> Haiba: Simba, I'm so sorry. About Tama. About everything... I messed it up
Simba: No, it's
Haiba:(crying) It's okay,you're my friend, Simba. I forgive you.
Simba: (also crying) I don't hate you, Haiba,you're my friend, too
Haiba: Thank you
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*[[spoiler: This might not even compare to Haiba's death. What basically happens is that before he dies is that he apologizes for what he's done to Tama, for Simba to point out it's his fault, and then be forgiven by Haiba.The two both tell each other how they're each others best friends, until after Says so: