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'''Nine''': Children.\\
'''Juice''': [[ChildlessDystopia children.]]
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-->'''Ten:''' Time's almost up.
-->'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got pretty far
-->'''Nine:''' I love you guys.
-->'''Ten:''' Love you too.
-->'''Juice:''' love y'all too
-->'''Nine:''' I need to make a partition in my data storage. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall This is the end, right? The end of this story?]]
-->'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of the world.
-->'''Nine:''' Goodnight.
-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
-->'''Juice:''' night
-->'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got pretty far
-->'''Nine:''' I love you guys.
-->'''Ten:''' Love you too.
-->'''Juice:''' love y'all too
-->'''Nine:''' I need to make a partition in my data storage. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall This is the end, right? The end of this story?]]
-->'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of the world.
-->'''Nine:''' Goodnight.
-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
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'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got prettyfar
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'''Ten:''' Love youtoo.
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'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of theworld.
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-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
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'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got pretty
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'''Nine:''' I love you
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'''Ten:''' Love you
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'''Juice:''' love y'all
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-->'''Ten:'''
'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of the
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-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
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-->'''Manny''': Yeah! Literally a minute! More than that! You needed every second of that to cross the desert.
-->You and me, we’re a team, you know? We make decisions together. You have no right to just pop off and do shit like that.
-->'''Nick''': I know, I just knew that–
-->'''Manny''': I mean what the fuck am I gonna do without you, Nick? If I can make it home but you can’t?
-->[...]
-->'''Nick''': But look at you, though. You’re still gonna have almost all your time. I mean look what I did for you! I made a fuckin’ miracle happen and I’m like, you’re puttin’ me in the shit here! And I pulled off a fuckin’ miracle!
-->'''Manny''': Did for ME?
-->Best thing you coulda did for me was keeping your time! Giving me a partner! Givin’ me my fucking husband!
** And then Manny voices a concern that their Coach will call Nick back and make him wait another hundred years to earn back that time. "Babe, I don’t wanna do a hundred years without you."
--->'''Nick''': I know.
--->({{Beat}})
--->[[YouAreWorthHell I could do it. I’d wait a hundred years.]]
--->({{Beat}})
--->Would you wait for me?
-->You and me, we’re a team, you know? We make decisions together. You have no right to just pop off and do shit like that.
-->'''Nick''': I know, I just knew that–
-->'''Manny''': I mean what the fuck am I gonna do without you, Nick? If I can make it home but you can’t?
-->[...]
-->'''Nick''': But look at you, though. You’re still gonna have almost all your time. I mean look what I did for you! I made a fuckin’ miracle happen and I’m like, you’re puttin’ me in the shit here! And I pulled off a fuckin’ miracle!
-->'''Manny''': Did for ME?
-->Best thing you coulda did for me was keeping your time! Giving me a partner! Givin’ me my fucking husband!
** And then Manny voices a concern that their Coach will call Nick back and make him wait another hundred years to earn back that time. "Babe, I don’t wanna do a hundred years without you."
--->'''Nick''': I know.
--->({{Beat}})
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-->'''Coach E''': Don’t let this eat you up. I’ve been through it time and again. I’ve played football a long long time. All kinds of different games, all kinds of different rules. This game’s beat me down over and over again. It’s about to it again. I’m gonna get fired for this.
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-->Biggest fumble in centuries, and we let it bounce out of bounds. That’s on me. I’m done.
-->And that’s okay, because that’s what this game does to me. This game hates me. I’m snakebit.
-->But that’s okay, because it taught me how good it can be sometimes to just let go. Walk away.
-->That’s the advice, I guess. Lord, I hope y’all make it. But just … don’t let it eat you up if you don’t.
-->We’ve all seen enough sadness in our time. No need for you to go off and make more of your own.
-->Life’s too long for that. You got a trillion tomorrows.
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-->Biggest fumble in centuries, and we let it bounce out of bounds. That’s on me. I’m done.
-->And that’s okay, because that’s what this game does to me. This game hates me. I’m snakebit.
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-->That’s the advice, I guess. Lord, I hope y’all make it. But just … don’t let it eat you up if you don’t.
-->We’ve all seen enough sadness in our time. No need for you to go off and make more of your own.
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-->'''Coach E''': Don’t E:''' Don't let this eat you up. I’ve I've been through it time and again. I’ve I've played football a long long time. All kinds of different games, all kinds of different rules. This game’s game's beat me down over and over again. It’s It's about to it again. I’m I'm gonna get fired for this.
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-->'''Coach E''': Don’t let this eat you up. I’ve been through it time and again. I’ve played football a long long time. All kinds of different games, all kinds of different rules. This game’s beat me down over and over again. It’s about to it again. I’m gonna get fired for this.
-->[...]
-->Biggest fumble in centuries, and we let it bounce out of bounds. That’s on me. I’m done.
-->And that’s okay, because that’s what this game does to me. This game hates me. I’m snakebit.
-->But that’s okay, because it taught me how good it can be sometimes to just let go. Walk away.
-->That’s the advice, I guess. Lord, I hope y’all make it. But just … don’t let it eat you up if you don’t.
-->We’ve all seen enough sadness in our time. No need for you to go off and make more of your own.
-->Life’s too long for that. You got a trillion tomorrows.
** And the pain of this defeat becomes harsher when we learn ''exactly who'' "Coach E" is.
--->'''Greg Griffin''': And if it turns out things went sideways? If we don’t have possession? Then I’ll just come out and say it: [[TheReveal Lacrecia Evans]] MUST resign as head coach of Oklahoma State football.
-->'''Coach E''': Don’t let this eat you up. I’ve been through it time and again. I’ve played football a long long time. All kinds of different games, all kinds of different rules. This game’s beat me down over and over again. It’s about to it again. I’m gonna get fired for this.
-->[...]
-->Biggest fumble in centuries, and we let it bounce out of bounds. That’s on me. I’m done.
-->And that’s okay, because that’s what this game does to me. This game hates me. I’m snakebit.
-->But that’s okay, because it taught me how good it can be sometimes to just let go. Walk away.
-->That’s the advice, I guess. Lord, I hope y’all make it. But just … don’t let it eat you up if you don’t.
-->We’ve all seen enough sadness in our time. No need for you to go off and make more of your own.
-->Life’s too long for that. You got a trillion tomorrows.
** And the pain of this defeat becomes harsher when we learn ''exactly who'' "Coach E" is.
--->'''Greg Griffin''': And if it turns out things went sideways? If we don’t have possession? Then I’ll just come out and say it: [[TheReveal Lacrecia Evans]] MUST resign as head coach of Oklahoma State football.
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* Towards the end of chapter 11, albeit with a less dramatic reveal than last time[[note]]the font color getting lighter as opposed to an abrupt low battery warning[[/note]], Nine's battery once again starts to go dead, causing Ten and Juice to fix the problem on their own[[note]]Juice manages to shut down the cause of the problem, Nine's Standford antenna, but Nine will need to shut down again for a few months to charge it back up[[/note]].
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* Even though the train plan worked, Manny is very clearly upset that Nick burned a minute of OBT just to pull it off.
-->'''Manny''': Yeah! Literally a minute! More than that! You needed every second of that to cross the desert.
-->You and me, we’re a team, you know? We make decisions together. You have no right to just pop off and do shit like that.
-->'''Nick''': I know, I just knew that–
-->'''Manny''': I mean what the fuck am I gonna do without you, Nick? If I can make it home but you can’t?
-->[...]
-->'''Nick''': But look at you, though. You’re still gonna have almost all your time. I mean look what I did for you! I made a fuckin’ miracle happen and I’m like, you’re puttin’ me in the shit here! And I pulled off a fuckin’ miracle!
-->'''Manny''': Did for ME?
-->Best thing you coulda did for me was keeping your time! Giving me a partner! Givin’ me my fucking husband!
** And then Manny voices a concern that their Coach will call Nick back and make him wait another hundred years to earn back that time. "Babe, I don’t wanna do a hundred years without you."
--->'''Nick''': I know.
--->({{Beat}})
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-->'''Nick:''' I knew five minutes was 300 seconds. And 300 seconds is 300 years of OBT. 300 years he spent saving up that time, staying on the field, cooking me dinner, making me laugh. Being there for me every time I was fucked up about something. And like, it was like I could see those years just vanishing from history, just disappearing.
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-->'''Ten:''' Time's almost up.
-->'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got pretty far
-->'''Nine:''' I love you guys.
-->'''Ten:''' Love you too.
-->'''Juice:''' love y'all too
-->'''Nine:''' I need to make a partition in my data storage. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall This is the end, right? The end of this story?]]
-->'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of the world.
-->'''Nine:''' Goodnight.
-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
-->'''Juice:''' night
-->'''Ten:''' Time's almost up.
-->'''Juice:''' ahhhhhh fuck well i got pretty far
-->'''Nine:''' I love you guys.
-->'''Ten:''' Love you too.
-->'''Juice:''' love y'all too
-->'''Nine:''' I need to make a partition in my data storage. [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall This is the end, right? The end of this story?]]
-->'''Ten:''' We were always at the end. It's a free play, buddy. Clock's all zeroes. It's after the end of the world.
-->'''Nine:''' Goodnight.
-->'''Ten:''' 'Night.
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* [[http://imitationknife.tumblr.com/post/162960399678/nesterov81-imitationknife-i-dont-really-like This analysis]] of Ten, regarding her words in [[https://www.sbnation.com/a/17776-football/intermission-part-3 Intermission, part 3.]]
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* [[http://imitationknife.tumblr.com/post/162960399678/nesterov81-imitationknife-i-dont-really-like This analysis]] of Ten.Ten, regarding her words in [[https://www.sbnation.com/a/17776-football/intermission-part-3 Intermission, part 3.]]
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* When BornUnlucky Lacrecia Evans finally catches a football after 10,000 years of trying, [[spoiler:the one she catches is the one that broke the Centennial Bulb]].
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* Ten's eulogy to the lightbulb is very touching in spite of it addressing an inanimate object.
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-->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?\\
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'''Juice''': children.
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* Ten's eulogy to the lightbulb is very touching in spite of it addressing an inanimate object.
* The end of Chapter 16:
-->'''Juice''': you know who would've wandered out there? just to do it?\\
[[{{Beat}} (long pause)]]\\
'''Nine''': Children.\\
'''Juice''': children.
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