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Toji dismisses his suspicions over Shinji and Asuka's odd behavior with the claim that "they would have to be totally drunk before they would start to like each other", most likely a nod from Jimmy Wolk to his other fic, ''Fanfic/TheIkaris''.
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* In chapter 3, Toji dismisses his suspicions over Shinji and Asuka's odd behavior with the claim that "they would have to be totally drunk before they would start to like each other", most likely a nod from Jimmy Wolk to his other fic, ''Fanfic/TheIkaris''.''Fanfic/TheIkaris''.
* In chapter 5, Hikari asks Kensuke to find some information from NERV due to his reputation for "hacking and spying stuff" (a common {{Flanderization}} in other fanfics). Kensuke protests that his interest is ''military'' stuff (as seen in the actual series[[note]]"Hedgehog's Dilemma" and "Asuka Strikes!"[[/note]]).
-->'''Kensuke''': Who started this "Kensuke is a geek, so he's good with computers"-rumor anyway...?
* In chapter 5, Hikari asks Kensuke to find some information from NERV due to his reputation for "hacking and spying stuff" (a common {{Flanderization}} in other fanfics). Kensuke protests that his interest is ''military'' stuff (as seen in the actual series[[note]]"Hedgehog's Dilemma" and "Asuka Strikes!"[[/note]]).
-->'''Kensuke''': Who started this "Kensuke is a geek, so he's good with computers"-rumor anyway...?
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Toji dismisses his suspicions over Shinji and Asuka's odd behavior with the claim that "they would have to be totally drunk before they would start to like each other", most likely a nod from Jimmy Wolk to his other fic, ''Fanfic/TheIkaris''.
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Toji dismisses his suspicions over Shinji and Asuka's odd behavior with the claim that "they would have to be totally drunk before they would start to like each other", most likely a nod from Jimmy Wolk to his other fic, ''Fanfic/TheIkaris''.
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