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** During their stint in the woods, Rarity mentions she's been practicing the extremely difficult parlor trick of changing the color of her magical aura. In chapter 46, she uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter and thus letting Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.

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** During After their stint talk in Chapter 6, Twilight decides to train Rarity in low-power, high-control workings: the first such spell changes a unicorn's signature, altering their field's hue in the woods, Rarity mentions she's been practicing the extremely difficult parlor trick of changing the color of her magical aura. process. In chapter 46, she Rarity uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter and thus letting Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.
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* InnocentInnuendo: From Chapter 30, after Rarity discovers Gentle reading to Twilight:

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--> "So when a friend reads to you," Rarity quietly continued, "your natural listening position is to lie down so that your head is resting on his forelegs?"
--> Twilight hesitated, searched for a response, then wondered how visible that hunt had been.
--> "I don't know," she replied, and also wondered if the words sounded just as defensive to Rarity's rotated ears. "None of you ever read to me. So I guess any position I use during my first time would be my natural one."

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--> "So when a friend reads to you," Rarity quietly continued, "your natural listening position is to lie down so that [[LapPillow your head is resting on his forelegs?"
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"I don't know," she replied, and also wondered if the words sounded just as defensive to Rarity's rotated ears. "None of you ever read to me. So I guess any position I use during my first time would be my natural one."


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* LapPillow: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/30/triptych/bentonite chapter 30]]: It's how Gentle and Twilight are positioned, when he reads to her, as described by Rarity:
--> "So when a friend reads to you," Rarity quietly continued, "your natural listening position is to lie down so that [[LapPillow your head is resting on his forelegs]]?"

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* IronicEcho: before TheReveal of [[TheMasquerade The Secret]], Twilight dismissed ''her'' potential powers in earth pony state by mockingly suggesting that ''she'' would just "grow plants at us". Chapter 50 shows Doctor Gentle trying to scare ''her'' while she's in earth pony form, believing they're about to be capturing, ''knowing'' nothing will happen -- and cue instant vegetation wall.
--> "...oh," Twilight said, and barely heard her own words from the twin depths of storm and stun. "She grew plants at us..."



** A more amusing example; before TheReveal of [[TheMasquerade The Secret]], Twilight dismissed ''her'' potential powers in earth pony state by mockingly suggesting that ''she'' would just "grow plants at us". Chapter 50 shows Doctor Gentle trying to scare ''her'' while she's in earth pony form, believing they're about to be capturing, ''knowing'' nothing will happen -- and cue instant vegetation wall.
--> "...oh," Twilight said, and barely heard her own words from the twin depths of storm and stun. "She grew plants at us..."

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** Played for laughs in chapter 55, when ''she'' innocently responds to Discord's lecture that she must learn when to ignore "stupid" rules by asking how she is supposed to tell which ones are stupid. Discord is visibly caught off-guard, and basically admits he doesn't actually know how to tell that himself.



* CassandraTruth: Invoked by Discord in chapter 55, when Twilight asks him about the Original Bearers and the process of becoming an alicorn, when he brings up that since Twilight is so prepared to believe what he tells her is lies, she has no way of knowing if he actually ''is'' lying.



* FusionDance: It's ultimately explained over chapters 53 to 55 that this is how alicornization works; a pony is infused with ''essence'' from ponies of the other tribes, permanently leaving a small "shadow" of the donor-pony's soul meshed into the alicorn's soul. These slivers leave an imprint of that donor-pony's personality as well, so when an alicorn taps into the deeper parts of the magic left by that transformation, their personality actually shifts to resemble the donor they are tapping. When this imprinting is done with the aid of the Elements, it's harmless, but it ''is'' possible for the donors to be killed; Cadance's own ''ascension'' involved the death of her friends. The most important aspect is that the donation ''has'' to be done voluntarily; the mingling of souls only happens if the donor-ponies love the host-pony and are willing to make that sacrifice of some of their ''essence''.



** In chapter 55, Celestia becomes so desperate to make Twilight talk to her after unintentionally revealing her origins as Star Swirl's reincarnation to her that she bluntly ''forces'' a literal torrent of message scrolls through Spike, almost choking him with their relentless volume to the point Twilight desperately sends her a message back verbally screaming at Celestia to stop because she's hurting Spike -- and at the same point, is so desperate to stop Spike hurting that she's actually considering just teleporting to Celestia and '''attacking her'''.
** Likewise in chapter 55, during her first dream-time communique with Twilight, Luna stops speaking in her usual flowery methods and bluntly addresses Twilight, even using vulgar language by telling Twilight to pull her head out of her ass.



* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Invoked in chapter 55, when Discord explain to ''her'' that what he hopes to teach her is, amongst other things, the importance of understanding when ''not'' to follow the rules, instead of being LawfulStupid.



* TownWithADarkSecret: Trotter's Falls is beginning to display elements of this, as an increasing number of ponies appear to have some awareness of the attempt to find a way of changing a normal pony into an alicorn, a process known as The Great Work.

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* ToughLove: In chapter 55, when Luna first contacts Twilight after her and Celestia have their falling out, she tries to shock Twilight out of her funk by first telling her that there are ways that even alicorns can die, explaining the suffering Celestia is undergoing, and then concludes their visit by telling Twilight to "take a breath, try seeing things from Celestia's point of view, and get (her) head out of (her) ass".
* TownWithADarkSecret: Trotter's Falls is beginning revealed to display elements of this, as an increasing number of ponies appear to have some awareness of be the attempt center of a conspiracy its adherents call "The Great Work", which turns out to be a tribal supremacist cult that has, having failed in its original directive to find a way of changing a normal pony to forcibly change ponies from one tribe to the other, settled for trying to transform all ponies into an alicorn, a process known as The Great Work.alicorns.


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** It's revealed in chapter 55 that doing this is actually not as easy as it sounds, even for Discord; apparently, extreme heat interferes with teleportation to some degree.


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** Ad a third in-universe one is when Cadance's letter is read in chapter 55:
-->'''Cadance's letter on Ascension:''' they died\\
they all died\\
they chose me to live and they all died.
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* ProtagonistTitle: Triptych is [[spoiler:the name that Gentle Arrival's daughter picks herself]], as said in Chapter 55.

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* ProtagonistTitle: Triptych is [[spoiler:the the name that Gentle Arrival's daughter picks herself]], herself, as said in Chapter 55.
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--->'''Gentle Arrival:''' "Then why don't you '''act''' like it? Talk to them! Make them ''believe'''! You owe me your '''life''', Fluttershy! ''She'' owes me her life, she owes me a debt for Primatura's '''death''' and she has spent her lifetime trying to pay it! Why can't you give me five minutes, just ''five minutes of reason --''"

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--->'''Gentle -->'''Gentle Arrival:''' "Then why don't you '''act''' like it? Talk to them! Make them ''believe'''! You owe me your '''life''', Fluttershy! ''She'' owes me her life, she owes me a debt for Primatura's '''death''' and she has spent her lifetime trying to pay it! Why can't you give me five minutes, just ''five minutes of reason --''"
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** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet's rationale for helping the Great Work sound like it made ''sense'' to him.

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** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't sound like it made ''sense'' to him.
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* TransformationHorror: In chapter 53, an enraged Discord drops the MixAndMatchCritters body he normally wears amongst ponies and reverts to what might be his "true form", an ElementalEmbodiment of chaos itself, terrifying everyone in

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* TransformationHorror: In chapter 53, an enraged Discord drops the MixAndMatchCritters body he normally wears amongst ponies and reverts to what might be his "true form", an ElementalEmbodiment of chaos itself, terrifying everyone inin the Hall Of Legends -- Celestia and Luna included.



* WifeHusbandry: After reading some of ''her'' memories in chapter 51, Twilight theorizes that Gentle Arrival may have been hoping to use ''her'' Ascension to somehow bring ''her'' mother's soul back from the Shadowlands, displacing ''her'' soul in the process. The implications of that are enough that Rarity wishes she could vomit.

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* WifeHusbandry: After reading some of ''her'' memories in chapter 51, Twilight theorizes that Gentle Arrival may have been hoping to use ''her'' Ascension to somehow bring ''her'' mother's soul back from the Shadowlands, potentially displacing ''her'' soul in the process. The implications of that are enough that Rarity wishes she could vomit. (However, given how alicorns seem to work, the more likely hope would have been that ''she'' could feel and perhaps even communicate with Primatura's essence.)
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** Princess Celestia used an experimental ''working'' of Star Swirl's creation to try and ''force'' him into reincarnating. She also believes that Twilight is Star Swirl's reincarnation, or at least his latest one.

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** Princess Celestia used an experimental ''working'' of Star Swirl's her own creation to try and ''force'' him Star Swirl into reincarnating. She also believes that Twilight is Star Swirl's reincarnation, or at least his latest one.

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** Chapter 40 makes this argument for Gentle Arrival. Loudly.

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** Chapter 40 makes this argument for Gentle Arrival. Loudly. In chapter 52, when ''she'' fails to aid him at the moment he demands it, Gentle Arrival snaps, calls his daughter a "useless clod", and begins physically pummeling her. In chapter 53, Princess Celestia proclaims that Gentle Arrival has somehow found a way to '''subvert''' his Cutie Mark, which would normally be, literally, "being a PapaWolf".



* AdaptationalVillainy: It's eventually revealed that in this continuity, Star Swirl the Bearded became so jealous of Celestia and Luna's powers after they transformed into alicorns that he turned to {{necromancy}} to try and upgrade himself. He harvested ''essence'' from the dead and dying and shaped it into a magical amulet -- the Alicorn Amulet -- to try and boost his powers, something that forced the sisters to fight him and either kill him or imprison him somewhere until he died of old age: Trixie was unable to research events far enough to determine his ''exact'' fate, but knows he (or rather, the Amulet) took no notes concerning the final battle -- which pretty much identifies the loser.[[note]]In chapter 29, Gentle Arrival reveals that Starswirl was defeated and taken alive, whereupon the sisters imprisoned him on some forgotten island off of Equestria's west coast, where he ultimately died of old age. (The finally-inert Amulet was eventually removed from his corpse.)[[/note]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: It's eventually revealed that in this continuity, Star Swirl the Bearded became so jealous of Celestia and Luna's powers after they transformed into alicorns that he turned to {{necromancy}} to try and upgrade himself. He harvested ''essence'' from the dead and dying and shaped it into a magical amulet -- the Alicorn Amulet -- to try and boost his powers, something that forced the sisters to fight him and either kill him or imprison him somewhere until he died of old age: Trixie was unable to research events far enough to determine his ''exact'' fate, but knows he (or rather, the Amulet) took no notes concerning the final battle -- which pretty much identifies the loser.[[note]]In chapter 29, Gentle Arrival reveals that Starswirl Star Swirl was defeated and taken alive, whereupon the sisters imprisoned him on some forgotten island off of Equestria's west coast, where he ultimately died of old age. (The finally-inert Amulet was eventually removed from his corpse.)[[/note]]



* AwfulWeddedLife: Quiet Presence ''hates'' his wife, who is described in quite unflattering terms as, functionally, a tribalist, self-absorbed bitch. When she is revealed as having an affair in chapter 53, no reader is surprised.



** Events in chapters 53 and 54 pretty much knock Princess Celestia from her pedestal in Twilight's eyes, if not shatter it irreparably.



* BrutalHonesty: Zephyra Hurricane is described in this way by Princess Celestia in chapter 53.



* TheCavalry: After the Mane 6 brings down Gentle Arrival at the end of chapter 52, Discord arrives to teleport everypony -- Bearers, Spike, ''her'' and Gentle Arrival -- back to the palace.



** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. (This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all.) It has yet to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish.

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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. (This This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all.) all. It has yet takes ages to be fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish.vanish. Finally, in chapter 52, Fluttershy uses it to remove ''her'' pain, ending her PainfulTransformation and allowing ''her'' to be cleansed of some of the emotional abuse ''she'' grew up with.



* CombinedEnergyAttack: In chapter 52, the Mane 6 and Spike are able to defeat the shield that is protecting Gentle Arrival by combining all of their magics into a single assault.



* ControlFreak: Twilight comes to the realization that this is what Gentle Arrival is during chapter 52. The point is hammered home when they finally confront Gentle Arrival and he says this to Fluttershy after she admits that she is "one of his":
--->'''Gentle Arrival:''' "Then why don't you '''act''' like it? Talk to them! Make them ''believe'''! You owe me your '''life''', Fluttershy! ''She'' owes me her life, she owes me a debt for Primatura's '''death''' and she has spent her lifetime trying to pay it! Why can't you give me five minutes, just ''five minutes of reason --''"



* DeadlyEuphemism: "Sending On" is used in two ways. The first is non-euphemistically; unwanted foals, specifically ponies born to parents of a different tribe, are fostered out to ponies of the correct tribe. This is the "normal" use of the term in pony society. Amongst the more vehemently tribalist crowd, it's used as a euphemism for filicide. Whilst it's left ambiguous if that form of "sending on" has actually been ''used'', in chapter 52, Twilight directly calls this trope out, by referring to Quiet's parents killing Quiet's earth pony sister, and then sarcastically "correcting herself" by using the term "sending on".
* DeadPersonConversation: Briefly, in chapter 52, when Fluttershy erases ''her'' pain, ''she'' briefly glimpses into the Shadowlands, where ''she'' is able to receive a brief moment of comfort from the ghost of ''her'' mother, Primatura.



* EmotionBomb: The idea of using ''resonance'', the emotional underlay of unicorn magic, as an offensive weapon is discussed by Twilight fairly early on.



* ExplosiveLeash: To deal with Gentle Arrival after taking him into custody in chapter 53, the Princesses put him in a special form of restraining cone which contains multiple layers, the innermost being a layer of platinum, which will deliver a very gruesome death if the wearer manages to touch it with their aura. In fact, they used this same cone to restrain Star Swirl during his imprisonment.



** In chapter 54, Princess Celestia talks about how ''long'' ponies have been hating and distrusting ponies for being born "the wrong tribe", ever since the Discordian Era. It's one of the reasons why she and Luna ultimately worked to redefine "sending on" from a DeadlyEuphemism for "murdering the Chaos Children" (which such cross-tribal births were called) to "fostering them out".



* FridgeHorror: InUniverse: during Chapter 40, Doctor Gentle explains ''why'' all pegasi try to give birth on the ground: it's from the terror that the foal will be an earth pony or unicorn -- for whom a single second of resting upon a cloud's surface might kill. Rainbow, upon overhearing this within the spy perch, is immediately shaken, openly admitting that she had never before considered the possibility: it's also enough to disturb some of the unicorns in the floor-level audience.

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InUniverse: during Chapter 40, Doctor Gentle explains ''why'' all pegasi try to give birth on the ground: it's from the terror that the foal will be an earth pony or unicorn -- for whom a single second of resting upon a cloud's surface might kill. Rainbow, upon overhearing this within the spy perch, is immediately shaken, openly admitting that she had never before considered the possibility: it's also enough to disturb some of the unicorns in the floor-level audience.audience.
** InUniverse, in chapter 54, Celestia is shown worrying about what the hybrids will do to Equestria's social order. In particular, she brings up the problem of what happens if hybridization "breeds true", and ultimately they completely disrupt or replace the traditional tribal powers entirely. It could, as she points out, mean the end of Equestrian civilization, as it would result in things like ponies no longer being able to manipulate the weather or artificially generate crops.
--->'''Princess Celestia:''' "And now... now, there can be a horn, and there can be a corona, and then there's something in the ''blood''. What will their children be? Does this stop here, with normal foals born from their unions? Or will it lurk in the blood, surfacing every so often? A race created from the combination of races, appearing at random. Either of those results, and Equestria goes on much like before, even if it takes centuries to stop the ''attacks'', and fearful, hateful ponies ''sending on'' if their infant seems the least bit different. But if hybrids only produce hybrids... and their children have children, across the centuries... what are we, in a thousand years? Is there a true pegasus left? A single pony on the continent who can perform the techniques of weather control? A few clouds broken, ''one'' storm moderated. And what is everypony else? What would our magic be? A thousand years, and who ''are'' we?"



* InAnotherMansShoes: Overlapping with EmotionBomb; during chapters 51 and 52, Twilight stumbles into what can only be described as "memory bubbles", allowing her to live out certain key moments from ''her'' childhood through ''her'' own eyes.



* LackOfEmpathy: Discussed and subverted in chapter 53; Discord admits to being as surprised as anypony when he figured out he actually cares about the hybrid ponies that were created with the chaos pearls that Gentle Arrival made from Discord's energy, and especially cares for ''her'':
-->'''Discord:''' "''Everything you did to her, across her lifetime. You thought I couldn't '''understand''' that?''" And a bitter laugh, the kind of mirth which came when the joke had been on him. "'''Neither did I!''' But here we are, Doctor! I'm as surprised as you! I would ''never'' hurt her! But '''you'''... here we are, here you are, after everything you did to me, to '''''her''''', here we ''are'' and --"



* PainfulTransformation: Experienced by ''her'', '''''[[UpToEleven constantly]]'''''. Whatever went wrong in the ascension attempt resulted in perpetual cyclical shifting between the three main pony races, moving from pegasus to unicorn to earth pony to pegasus again, and so on through the cycle. Rarity believes the wing bones are ''breaking'' rather than simply being reabsorbed. Whether this is true is unknown -- but ''she'' is in endless, unrelenting agony.

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* PainfulTransformation: Experienced by ''her'', '''''[[UpToEleven constantly]]'''''. Whatever went wrong in the ascension attempt resulted in perpetual cyclical shifting between the three main pony races, moving from pegasus to unicorn to earth pony to pegasus again, and so on through the cycle. Rarity believes the wing bones are ''breaking'' rather than simply being reabsorbed. Whether this is true is unknown -- but ''she'' is in endless, unrelenting agony.agony... until Fluttershy uses her gift from Discord to erase that aspect of ''her'' being.
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** Invoked and Zigzagged. In chapter 53, Princess Celestia reveals that Gentle Arrival's Cutie Mark is functionally to be the ultimate loving parent... but, somehow, his despair over his wife's death and his racism has allowed him to '''subvert''' his Mark. Strangely, he still seems to genuinely care for the foals that he midwives -- [[TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes he just is able to obliviously abuse his own daughter]].
** Played straight with, of all beings, Discord, who gets legitimately angry about Gentle Arrival's treatment of ''her'' and reveals he feels a paternal fondness for all of the hybrids. He even goes so far as to effectively "adopt" her by taking ''her'' as his student.



* PetTheDog: Zigzagged in chapter 29; the opening of the chapter shows Gentle Arrival has been doing everything he can to solve ''her'' pain, but it's still not enough to make him renounce his plans to repeat the experiment.

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** In chapter 53, Discord does nothing but help and care for ''her'', and even takes her on as his student.
* PottyFailure: Gentle Arrival implicitly loses control of his bladder after being stared down by an ''incredibly'' angry Discord in chapter 53.



** Starswirl the Bearded created the Alicorn Amulet as a failed attempt at ascending, using {{necromancy}} to do so.

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** Starswirl Star Swirl the Bearded created the Alicorn Amulet as a failed attempt at ascending, using {{necromancy}} to do so.



** Princess Celestia used an experimental ''working'' of Star Swirl's creation to try and ''force'' him into reincarnating. She also believes that Twilight is Star Swirl's reincarnation, or at least his latest one.



* SmugSnake: Clear Coordinator, overlapping with SmallNameBigEgo, as made amply clear in his viewpoint swamp dive during Chapter 30.

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** In chapter 53, Gentle Arrival stands defiant and proud, arrogantly demanding to be allowed to continue his midwifery, despite being a helpless captive in the presence of ''both'' Princesses ''and'' Discord, all of whom are '''furious''' with him.
* SortingAlgorithmOfEvil: In chapter 51, the Mane 6 has to let a pair of Murdochs reporters go on their way after overhearing their plans to slander Twilight by writing fictious accusations of Twilight being pregnant into the tabloids because they have a much more important task to complete in the form of stopping Gentle Arrival.


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* WifeHusbandry: After reading some of ''her'' memories in chapter 51, Twilight theorizes that Gentle Arrival may have been hoping to use ''her'' Ascension to somehow bring ''her'' mother's soul back from the Shadowlands, displacing ''her'' soul in the process. The implications of that are enough that Rarity wishes she could vomit.


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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: When Twilight brings up Gentle Arrival's ControlFreak status in chapter 52, Rarity ''immediately'' tells Twilight that she is '''nothing''' like him, as she can see the shame and self-doubt rising in the alicorn as she considers it.
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** In chapter 50, Quiet Presence tells Twilight Sparkle that his little sister was born an earth pony -- which led his parents to "send her on": either leaving her as a foundling in another settled zone or OffingTheOffspring. (He's never been able to learn her actual fate. When looked at in view of his earlier flashback, this explains why he developed a mark talent for his version of {{Invisibility}}: he was hiding from his parents in fear of having the same thing happen to him -- to the point where the need to be overlooked defined part of his core.

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** In chapter 50, Quiet Presence tells Twilight Sparkle that he had an earth pony little sister, but his parents "sent her on", and despite all of years of searching once he came into his majority, he never found her, so the odds are very good, as he tells her, that they ''killed her'' for being an earth pony. In passing, he also confirms that they tormented him so much for his physical fragility so much that he developed a Talent for the Continuum's equivalent of {{Invisibility}}.

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** In chapter 50, Quiet Presence tells Twilight Sparkle that he had his little sister was born an earth pony little sister, but -- which led his parents "sent to "send her on", and despite all of years of searching once he came into his majority, he on": either leaving her as a foundling in another settled zone or OffingTheOffspring. (He's never found her, so the odds are very good, as he tells her, that they ''killed her'' for being an earth pony. In passing, he also confirms that they tormented him so much for been able to learn her actual fate. When looked at in view of his physical fragility so much that earlier flashback, this explains why he developed a Talent mark talent for his version of {{Invisibility}}: he was hiding from his parents in fear of having the Continuum's equivalent same thing happen to him -- to the point where the need to be overlooked defined part of {{Invisibility}}.his core.



** As part of her lecture on pegasus magic, Rainbow Dash explains that pegasi can see temperature differences. In chapter 49, she is able to detect a secret passageway because, due to the passageway having to descend into the ground, which is cold and damp due to it being Autumn, night, and with a heavy storm outside, the doorway is markedly cooler than the rest of the wall it's imitating.

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** As part of her lecture on pegasus magic, Rainbow Dash explains that pegasi can see temperature differences. In chapter Chapter 49, she is able the Bearers have to detect search for the entrance to a secret passageway because, due to the passageway having to descend into the ground, passage -- one which is cold and damp due to it being Autumn, goes underground, with the search taking place during a major storm, at night, and with a heavy storm outside, autumn approaching. It makes the doorway is markedly cooler entrance noticeably more chill than the rest of the wall it's imitating.around it.



* DirtyBusiness: Chapter 50 reveals that this is how Quiet Presence feels about the Great Work all along. Unlike Gentle Arrival, he's not a bigot; he doesn't personally care what tribe his foals belong to. But, the fact his parents discarded (or ''murdered'') his little sister for being an earth pony, and the fact his arranged wife is made of the same stuff, has him convinced that the Great Work has merit. As he puts it, it means no birth would ever be dreaded, no foal ever hated for what it is; it would mean an end to ''both'' forms of "sending on".

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* DirtyBusiness: Chapter 50 reveals that this is Part of how Quiet Presence feels about may regard the Great Work all along. Work. Unlike Gentle Arrival, others in the conspiracy, he's not a bigot; bigot: he doesn't personally care what tribe just believes it's impossible to get rid of them. In his view, the only way to keep foals belong to. But, the fact his parents discarded (or ''murdered'') his little sister for from being an earth pony, and the fact sent on (as happened to his arranged wife baby sister) is made to find a way of the same stuff, has him convinced that the Great Work has merit. guaranteeing a newborn's race. As he puts it, it means no birth would ever be dreaded, no foal ever hated for what it is; it would mean an end to ''both'' forms of "sending on".on". So even if some foals in the current generation wind up being hurt or worse by the experiments, TheEndsJustifyTheMeans -- unless, of course, you propose using his lost sibling.



** Chapter 50 reveals that the fate of his earth pony sister, discarded or murdered by their own parents, is why Quiet Presence is allied to Gentle Arrival.

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** Chapter 50 reveals that the fate of his earth pony sister, discarded or murdered by their own parents, is shows why Quiet Presence is allied part of the Great Work: to Gentle Arrival.prevent his sister's fate from happening to anypony else.



*** Come chapter 36, it all blows up explosively in Coordinator's face as Twilight shrugs off his threats, feeling that the resultant fallout couldn't be any worse than what she already lives with -- and when he threatens the ''other'' Bearers, she comes within a hair's length of crushing him to death in her ''field''.

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*** Come chapter 36, it all blows up explosively in Coordinator's face as Twilight shrugs off his threats, feeling that the resultant fallout couldn't be any worse than what she already lives with -- and when he threatens the ''other'' Bearers, she comes within a hair's length width of crushing him to death in her ''field''.field. (And as it turns out, his death was only postponed.)



* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In chapter 48, a panic-stricken and desperate Coordinator drinks a ''[[FantasticDrug booster]]''. Unfortunately, this particular variety works by [[CastFromHitPoints converting the drinker's life energy into mana]], and Coordinator wasn't very strong to begin with. The result is that he ''burns himself up'', completely consuming his LifeForce for an ultimately useless surge of magical power.

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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In chapter 48, a panic-stricken and desperate Coordinator drinks a ''[[FantasticDrug booster]]''. Unfortunately, this particular variety works by [[CastFromHitPoints converting the drinker's life energy personal strength into mana]], thaums]], and Coordinator wasn't very strong to begin with. The result is that he ''burns himself up'', out'', completely consuming his LifeForce for an ultimately useless surge of magical power.



** For a darker twist, it's revealed in chapter 50 that Quiet Presence's fraility isn't the reason why he's never had kids: he's refused to have foals because his wife is of the ''exact'' same mentality as his parents. The same ponies whom he believes ''murdered'' his little sister for being an earth pony. Quiet Presence himself doesn't care what his children are, but he refuses to have foals so long as he has to be scared of the chance they might turn out to be earth ponies.
** A more amusing example; before TheReveal of "The Secret", Twilight dismissed ''her'' powers in earth pony state by mockingly suggesting that ''she'' would just "grow plants at them". In chapter 50, ''she'' does just that, using her powers to make an instant barrier out of super-accelerated-growth vegetation.

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** For a darker twist, it's revealed in chapter Chapter 50 that Quiet Presence's fraility isn't the reason why he's never had kids: he's refused to have foals because his wife is of the ''exact'' same mentality as his parents. parents (and he feels there will be those in future generations who continue to feel that way). The same ponies whom he believes may have ''murdered'' his little sister for being born as an earth pony. Quiet Presence himself doesn't care what his children are, but he refuses to have foals so long as he has to be scared of the chance they might turn out to be earth ponies.
** A more amusing example; before TheReveal of "The Secret", [[TheMasquerade The Secret]], Twilight dismissed ''her'' potential powers in earth pony state by mockingly suggesting that ''she'' would just "grow plants at them". In chapter 50, ''she'' does just that, using her powers us". Chapter 50 shows Doctor Gentle trying to make an scare ''her'' while she's in earth pony form, believing they're about to be capturing, ''knowing'' nothing will happen -- and cue instant barrier out vegetation wall.
--> "...oh," Twilight said, and barely heard her own words from the twin depths
of super-accelerated-growth vegetation.storm and stun. "She grew plants at us..."



** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring. Chapter 44 has Twilight and Rarity figure out that it is indeed a talent. Twilight describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal so that others will not notice him and even forget he's in the room with them.

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** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring. Chapter 44 has Rarity and Twilight and Rarity mutually figure out that it is indeed a talent. talent: Twilight ultimately describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal so that others will the emotional resonance of ''dismissal'': he's not notice him and even invisible, you just overlook or forget that he's in the room with them.room.



** In Chapter 42, Twilight swears by ''Discord's antler'' that the Elements will not help ''her''. Gentle actually pauses to note that he's ''never'' heard of someone swearing by Discord before.

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** In Chapter 42, Twilight swears by ''Discord's antler'' that the Elements will not help ''her''. ''her'' -- making the entire conference spontaneously pull away from her. Gentle actually pauses to note that he's ''never'' heard of someone swearing by Discord before.



* OvenLogic: Invoked in passing; thanks to her general impatience, Rainbow Dash just doesn't understand why "turn up the heat" does ''not'' equate to "it gets cooked faster", which is mentioned in chapter 46.

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* OvenLogic: Invoked in passing; passing during Chapter 46: thanks to her general impatience, Rainbow Dash just doesn't understand why "turn up the heat" does ''not'' equate to "it gets cooked faster", which is mentioned in chapter 46.faster."



* SmugSnake: Clear Coordinator, overlapping with SmallNameBigEgo, as made amply clear in his viewpoint during chapter 30.

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* SmugSnake: Clear Coordinator, overlapping with SmallNameBigEgo, as made amply clear in his viewpoint swamp dive during chapter Chapter 30.



** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet Presence's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't make so much ''sense''.

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** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet Presence's Quiet's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't make so much ''sense''.sound like it made ''sense'' to him.



** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. It isn't until chapter 50 that Spike gets her reply, but the details are a case of TheUnreveal.

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** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. It isn't until chapter 50 that Spike gets her reply, reply during Chapter 45, but the details are a case of TheUnreveal.contents have yet to be revealed. All we currently know is that the answer was fourteen words long, and Spike teleported the scroll to safety rather than risk having Doctor Gentle ever read it.

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* AbusiveParents: Chapter 8 strongly suggests this for Pinkie. Chapter 17 confirms it as both mental and physical: her parents hated her and treated her with scorn because she has absolutely no affinity for natural earth pony magic, which was especially enraging since they are, as a family, very skilled at earth manipulation -- in fact, her father in particular was a hardcore earth pony supremacist. Chapter 26 features Applejack revealing this truth to Twilight Sparkle.

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* AbusiveParents: AbusiveParents:
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Chapter 8 strongly suggests this for Pinkie. Chapter 17 confirms it as both mental and physical: her parents hated her and treated her with scorn because she has absolutely no affinity for natural earth pony magic, which was especially enraging since they are, as a family, very skilled at earth manipulation -- in fact, her father in particular was a hardcore earth pony supremacist. Chapter 26 features Applejack revealing this truth to Twilight Sparkle.



** In chapter 50, Quiet Presence tells Twilight Sparkle that he had an earth pony little sister, but his parents "sent her on", and despite all of years of searching once he came into his majority, he never found her, so the odds are very good, as he tells her, that they ''killed her'' for being an earth pony. In passing, he also confirms that they tormented him so much for his physical fragility so much that he developed a Talent for the Continuum's equivalent of {{Invisibility}}.



* DirtyBusiness: Chapter 50 reveals that this is how Quiet Presence feels about the Great Work all along. Unlike Gentle Arrival, he's not a bigot; he doesn't personally care what tribe his foals belong to. But, the fact his parents discarded (or ''murdered'') his little sister for being an earth pony, and the fact his arranged wife is made of the same stuff, has him convinced that the Great Work has merit. As he puts it, it means no birth would ever be dreaded, no foal ever hated for what it is; it would mean an end to ''both'' forms of "sending on".



* FreudianExcuse: Chapter 40 reveals that the whole mess began after Doctor Gentle's wife died giving birth to their daughter -- who turned out to be an earth pony. Maddened by grief, Gentle couldn't bear the idea that their daughter would never know the magic her mother had, and so began to seek out ''any'' way of restoring what he saw as her stolen heritage.

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Chapter 40 reveals that the whole mess began after Doctor Gentle's wife died giving birth to their daughter -- who turned out to be an earth pony. Maddened by grief, Gentle couldn't bear the idea that their daughter would never know the magic her mother had, and so began to seek out ''any'' way of restoring what he saw as her stolen heritage.heritage.
** Chapter 50 reveals that the fate of his earth pony sister, discarded or murdered by their own parents, is why Quiet Presence is allied to Gentle Arrival.



** Also a problem for ''her'': she's studied various theories of magic, but has never gotten to put them into practice. Add in fear-triggered PowerIncontinence and her lack of control can become a deadly issue.

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** Also a problem for ''her'': she's ''she's'' studied various theories of magic, but has never gotten to put them into practice. Add in fear-triggered PowerIncontinence and her ''her'' lack of control can become a deadly issue.



** For a darker twist, it's revealed in chapter 50 that Quiet Presence's fraility isn't the reason why he's never had kids: he's refused to have foals because his wife is of the ''exact'' same mentality as his parents. The same ponies whom he believes ''murdered'' his little sister for being an earth pony. Quiet Presence himself doesn't care what his children are, but he refuses to have foals so long as he has to be scared of the chance they might turn out to be earth ponies.
** A more amusing example; before TheReveal of "The Secret", Twilight dismissed ''her'' powers in earth pony state by mockingly suggesting that ''she'' would just "grow plants at them". In chapter 50, ''she'' does just that, using her powers to make an instant barrier out of super-accelerated-growth vegetation.



* MundaneUtility: Being a pegasus/earth pony hybrid cures a pony of the instinctual claustrophobia that all pegasi suffer. Fluttershy brings up that she has a basement in her cottage and she uses it casually.



* TheUnreveal: In chapter 50, Spike reveals that he received Cadance's reply to their question about how she Ascended to alicorn status whilst they were pursuing Gentle Arrival. We don't know what she said, only that it scared Spike so badly that he immediately sent it back to a "safe place" after reading it; as he puts it, Gentle Arrival must '''never''' be allowed to learn how Cadance transformed, as not only would it not help ''her'', it would only make things ''worse''.



* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Doctor Gentle Arrival is the much-beloved father of modern obstetrics in Equestria, a unicorn whose unique magical talent has allowed him to save hundreds of ponies who might have otherwise died in childbirth. Who would ever believe a stallion like that is involved in a conspiracy to forcibly transform other ponies into alicorns? Or that he might well be ''experimenting'' on the foals he helps deliver?
** And now 'might' is out the window: he's been doing it for a generation.

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** Invoked in chapter 50, when Twilight wishes desperately to herself that Quiet Presence's rationale for helping the Great Work didn't make so much ''sense''.
* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Doctor Gentle Arrival is the much-beloved father of modern obstetrics in Equestria, a unicorn whose unique magical talent has allowed him to save hundreds of ponies who might have otherwise died in childbirth. Who would ever believe a stallion like that is involved in a conspiracy to forcibly transform other ponies into alicorns? Or that he might well be he's been ''experimenting'' on the foals he helps deliver?
** And now 'might' is out the window: he's been doing it for a generation.
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** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. At the current point in the story, no reply has come.

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** Celestia and Luna are confirmed in this story to have originally been ordinary ponies[[note]]for what may be added irony, a blog post has revealed they were actually ''earth ponies''[[/note]] who were turned into what may have been the very first alicorns by the Elements of Harmony. Cadance also appears to have been initially normal [[note]]and as in canon, she started as a pegasus[[/note]], but all anypony knows about her route to ascension is that it ''didn't'' use the Elements. Twilight eventually winds up sending Cadance a scroll, directly asking what happened, just in case it has any relation to what went wrong with ''her'': Discord's rules forbid the Bearers from contacting Canterlot, but not the North. At It isn't until chapter 50 that Spike gets her reply, but the current point in the story, no reply has come.details are a case of TheUnreveal.



** Snowflake: a capless, critical pegasus birth who was infused with earth pony essence to help him survive: this grants him the raw strength to fly despite having had so much of his wings amputated. He's also completely impervious to the claustrophobia that bedevils pegasi as a whole, and there's a hint that he's capable of sending reverberations through the earth.
** An unnamed earth pony mare infused with pegasus feels a craving for heights, which has led to her becoming a master balloon pilot, aided by the fact she subconsciously controls the winds around her vessel. (The Comments section suspects this may indicate Cherry Berry.)

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** Snowflake: a capless, critical pegasus birth who was infused with earth pony essence to help him survive: this grants him the raw strength to fly despite having had so much of his wings amputated. He's also completely impervious to the claustrophobia that bedevils pegasi as a whole, a trait he turns out to share with Fluttershy, and there's a hint that he's capable of sending reverberations through the earth.
** An unnamed earth pony mare infused with pegasus pegasus, who feels a craving for heights, which has led to her becoming a master balloon pilot, aided by the fact she subconsciously controls the winds around her vessel. (The Comments section suspects this may indicate Cherry Berry.)



** Fluttershy: a pegasus infused with earth pony essence, producing her affinity for animals and a subconscious, short-range version of the Cornucopia Effect: the cottage is actually just outside Ponyville's true radius. The Stare occurs when the shard of chaos within her is unknowingly recognized by those she focuses upon, forcing them to submit just to make the experience ''stop''.

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** Fluttershy: a pegasus infused with earth pony essence, producing her affinity for animals and a subconscious, short-range version of the Cornucopia Effect: the cottage is actually just outside Ponyville's true radius. She's immune to claustrophobia. The Stare occurs when the shard of chaos within her is unknowingly recognized by those she focuses upon, forcing them to submit just to make the experience ''stop''.
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** As part of her lecture on pegasus magic, Rainbow Dash explains that pegasi can see temperature differences. In chapter 49, she is able to detect a secret passageway because, due to the passageway having to descend into the ground, which is cold and damp due to it being Autumn, night, and with a heavy storm outside, the doorway is markedly cooler than the rest of the wall it's imitating.


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* MythologyGag: When Rainbow Dash locates the hidden door with her thermal vision, she describes the segment of the wall hiding it as being "20 percent cooler", one of her earliest and most famously memetic lines.
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* HonoraryUncle: Both Pinkie and Fluttershy seem to regard Doctor Gentle with degrees of this, with many of the others whom the obstetrician has delivered feeling the same way.

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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In chapter 48, a panic-stricken and desperate Coordinator drinks a ''[[FantasticDrug booster]]''. Unfortunately, this particular variety works by [[CastFromHitPoints converting the drinker's life energy into mana]], and Coordinator wasn't very strong to begin with. The result is that he ''burns himself up'', completely consuming his LifeForce for an ultimately useless surge of magical power.
* HonoraryUncle: Both Pinkie and Fluttershy seem to regard Doctor Gentle with degrees of this, with many of the others whom the obstetrician has delivered feeling the same way. Unfortunately for them, he turns out to be an Honorary ''EvilUncle''.



* KarmicDeath: Coordinator, the biggest outright {{jerkass}} amongst the Great Conspiracy, the stallion who was single-hoofedly responsible for Twilight's social aversion, ultimately dies when he unwittingly kills himself with a toxic dose of ''booster'', being given a short TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Gentle Arrival and then abandoned as meaningless rubbish in a chamber below Quiet Presence's estate.



** Officially subverted, disrupted, and just about blown to Tartarus in Chapter 40.
* MineralMacGuffin: Deathstone, which Rarity renames to the more appealing "shiftstone" and which is given the alternative name of "chaos pearl" in chapter 24. Its precise use remains a mystery, but it is somehow very important to the Great Work and to Gentle Arrival's assisted deliveries.
** Ultimately, they turn out to be the containers of chaos energy and pony essence, essential for the attempt to artificially reproduce the alicorn creation process. And without them, there would be no hybrids.

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* MeaningfulName: Every chapter of the story not only shares the core "artistic" theme-naming, but directly relates to the events of the chapter proper. The author even [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/819917/triptych-the-chapter-titles-to-date-explained-or-behold-your-writer-is-too-committed-to-this-theme put together a blog]] explaining in the most spoiler-free fashion they could exactly how each chapter is meaningfully named.
* MineralMacGuffin: Deathstone, which Rarity renames to the more appealing "shiftstone" and which is given the alternative name of "chaos pearl" in chapter 24. Its precise use remains a mystery, but it is somehow very important to the Great Work and to Gentle Arrival's assisted deliveries.
** Ultimately, they turn out
They are ultimately revealed to be the containers of chaos energy and pony essence, essential for the attempt to artificially reproduce the alicorn creation process. And without them, there would be no hybrids.



* OvenLogic: Invoked in passing; thanks to her general impatience, Rainbow Dash just doesn't understand why "turn up the heat" does ''not'' equate to "it gets cooked faster", which is mentioned in chapter 46..

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* OvenLogic: Invoked in passing; thanks to her general impatience, Rainbow Dash just doesn't understand why "turn up the heat" does ''not'' equate to "it gets cooked faster", which is mentioned in chapter 46..46.



** Celestia and Luna are former Bearers who ascended to alicorndom, just like Twilight Sparkle.

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** Celestia and Luna are former Bearers who ascended to alicorndom, just like Twilight Sparkle. In fact, they had their own party of seven when they faced off against Discord, but their allies have been forgotten by history, and for some reason the sisters allowed this to happen.
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* WhamLine: Chapter 42 features an in-universe example of this trope.
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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. (This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all.) It has yet to be fired.

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** Discord granted Fluttershy the ability to remove ''any'' one thing of her choosing (potentially including a ''pony'') as part of their mission -- or rather, he'll know when she wants it done and make that thing ''go away'' accordingly. (This was the only thing the Bearers received for the mission at all.) It has yet to be fired.fired, and that lack of firing is Lampshaded in chapter 46, where Fluttershy patiently explains to Rainbow Dash that A: they have to be certain they're using it for the ''right'' thing to vanish, and B: they need to be certain they understand just ''what'' they're making vanish.


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** During their stint in the woods, Rarity mentions she's been practicing the extremely difficult parlor trick of changing the color of her magical aura. In chapter 46, she uses this to make it look like Twilight is manifesting a double corona through her PowerLimiter, tricking a guard into removing that limiter and thus letting Twilight use her magic for real, which is instrumental to freeing them.


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* {{Irony}}: For lack of a better term, Quiet Presence; his family were fanatical unicorn racial purists, and then they had Quiet, who has some unnamed, unspecified genetic flaw that leads to him being very weak and sickly. To a more adult reader, it's obvious that he's suffering the health issues induced by overly-specified breeding, a common phenomena in "pedigree" animals. Thus, the practice of "purity" only introduced weakness and corruption into Quiet's family lineage - if they had been willing to mate outside of their tribe, their children would have been healthier.
** Quiet's condition also calls to mind, for more mature readers, the real-world phenomena of RoyalInbreeding and the disastrous effects it had on noble families like the Hapsburgs. Note that his family is never explicitly ''said'' to be inbred, but the inferral is obvious to anyone familiar with the topic.


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* TheNondescript: Quiet Presence. There are times when even the narrator struggles to make adjectives stick to him, and a large number of ponies seem to have trouble noticing when he's around or remembering what he looked like after he leaves the room. In reality, he's a small young adult unicorn stallion (somewhat shorter and thinner than Twilight, who's described as being slightly built for a mare), whose coat, mane, and eyes are slightly-differing shades of grey. According to the text, ponies can tell that his mark exists in the proper location, but it's just as grey as the rest of him and so far, nopony has been able to determine exactly what that mark ''is''. Chapter 44 has Twilight and Rarity realize that it goes beyond this. Being easily ignored and forgotten is his ''talent''. Twilight describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal.
** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring.

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* TheNondescript: Quiet Presence. There are times when even the narrator struggles to make adjectives stick to him, and a large number of ponies seem to have trouble noticing when he's around or remembering what he looked like after he leaves the room. In reality, he's a small young adult unicorn stallion (somewhat shorter and thinner than Twilight, who's described as being slightly built for a mare), whose coat, mane, and eyes are slightly-differing shades of grey. According to the text, ponies can tell that his mark exists in the proper location, but it's just as grey as the rest of him and so far, nopony has been able to determine exactly what that mark ''is''. Chapter 44 has Twilight and Rarity realize that it goes beyond this. Being easily ignored and forgotten is his ''talent''. Twilight describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal.
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** There have been an increasing number of hints that this represents an aspect of his ''talent''. In particular, Chapter 38 has the party about two body lengths away from where he's speaking to Doctor Gentle, with ''nopony'' noticing the conversation. Doctor Gentle immediately asks him just how much he's exerting himself and as soon as they reach an enclosed room, conducts basic medical monitoring. Chapter 44 has Twilight and Rarity figure out that it is indeed a talent. Twilight describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal so that others will not notice him and even forget he's in the room with them.

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* TheNondescript: Quiet Presence. There are times when even the narrator struggles to make adjectives stick to him, and a large number of ponies seem to have trouble noticing when he's around or remembering what he looked like after he leaves the room. In reality, he's a small young adult unicorn stallion (somewhat shorter and thinner than Twilight, who's described as being slightly built for a mare), whose coat, mane, and eyes are slightly-differing shades of grey. According to the text, ponies can tell that his mark exists in the proper location, but it's just as grey as the rest of him and so far, nopony has been able to determine exactly what that mark ''is''.

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* TheNondescript: Quiet Presence. There are times when even the narrator struggles to make adjectives stick to him, and a large number of ponies seem to have trouble noticing when he's around or remembering what he looked like after he leaves the room. In reality, he's a small young adult unicorn stallion (somewhat shorter and thinner than Twilight, who's described as being slightly built for a mare), whose coat, mane, and eyes are slightly-differing shades of grey. According to the text, ponies can tell that his mark exists in the proper location, but it's just as grey as the rest of him and so far, nopony has been able to determine exactly what that mark ''is''. Chapter 44 has Twilight and Rarity realize that it goes beyond this. Being easily ignored and forgotten is his ''talent''. Twilight describes it as Quiet projecting dismissal.
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** Chapter 44 reveals that the question got through to Applejack after all.
-->"Y'know what tonight was, Pinkie? I think tonight was the Secret. The price of having it, letting unicorns and pegasi believe lies for hundreds of years. Telling them that lies are all that's out there, all there ever could be. And they believed us, didn't they? They decided we were telling the truth. We made ourselves look weak, and that meant we were weak. 'cause at least half of being a racist is deciding you're better than somepony else -- and guess what? We'd told them they were. Must have made it all the easier, don't you think? Not that some ponies ain't gonna lie themselves into thinking they're better than everypony else no matter what the evidence is, but here we all went and gave them an excuse."
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* OhMyGods: There are periodic references to ponies swearing on or by the various Princesses, and Twilight learning that ponies have ''already'' started to swear by her contributes meaningfully to the stress she's under.
** In Chapter 42, Twilight swears by ''Discord's antler'' that the Elements will not help ''her''. Gentle actually pauses to note that he's ''never'' heard of someone swearing by Discord before.
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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Doctor Gentle takes this approach on a ''national'' scale after Coordinator proposes killing the Bearers, noting that Equestria has been through more major incidents in the three years since the Elements were rediscovered than in the decades prior: it's possible that there's more coming, and he's not going to leave his nation defenseless by murdering its heroes. (There's also the not-so-minor consideration of how the palace would react after discovering that sextet of deaths.) He'll keep them imprisoned until Trixie arrives -- something which gives him a decent head start -- but he refuses to see them physically hurt.
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* VillainHasAPoint: [[spoiler:Our villain, Gentle Arrival]], would be possibly saving lives by ensuring pegasi purity, because birthing on a cloud is possibly deadly for their children, "Because some of their foals will ''not'' be pegasi.", and so would fall to their deaths, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/40/triptych/presentation Chapter 40 - Presentation]].

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* VillainHasAPoint: [[spoiler:Our villain, VillainHasAPoint: The example Gentle Arrival]], would be possibly saving lives by ensuring Arrival gives during the conference of pegasi purity, because birthing giving birth to an earth pony or unicorn on a cloud is possibly deadly for their children, "Because some of their foals will ''not'' be pegasi.", surface and so losing the foal to the plummet horrifies the audience and Bearers alike. At least to that extent, there's an argument to be made that absolute racial purity would fall have saved a few lives over the centuries -- along with explaining why all pregnant pegasi will do everything they can to their deaths, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/40/triptych/presentation Chapter 40 - Presentation]].deliver on the ground.
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* VillainHasAPoint: [[spoiler:Our villain, Gentle Arrival]], would be possibly saving lives by ensuring pegasi purity, because birthing on a cloud is possibly deadly for their children, "Because some of their foals will ''not'' be pegasi.", and so would fall to their deaths, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/40/triptych/presentation Chapter 40 - Presentation]].
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** Snowflake: a capless, critical pegasus birth who infused with earth pony essence to help him survive: this grants him the raw strength to fly despite having had so much of his wings amputated. He's also completely impervious to the claustrophobia that bedevils pegasi as a whole, and there's a hint that he's capable of sending reverberations through the earth.

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** Snowflake: a capless, critical pegasus birth who was infused with earth pony essence to help him survive: this grants him the raw strength to fly despite having had so much of his wings amputated. He's also completely impervious to the claustrophobia that bedevils pegasi as a whole, and there's a hint that he's capable of sending reverberations through the earth.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall:
** In Chapter 39:
--> The Lord of the castle is leading the Bearers down a secret passage filled with ''traps''. There's every chance that if I saw this in a story, I might start shouting at the page in a completely futile effort to keep the heroines and hero from going in there."
** In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101769/40/triptych/presentation Chapter 40]], through Gentle Arrival, nodding at the length of the story, and the chapter, which was the second longest, when it was posted:
--> "'Cutie mark',"\\
"There's a story in that,\\
...\\
about how 'cutie' came to be part of the term.\\
...\\
Perhaps this might be the night for it, or it could simply frustrate those who feel that tale is lengthening the delay."

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