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* IfIWantedYouDead: Chakotay tells Cullah that Seska will kill him one day. Afterward Seska tells him that it was a clever ploy, "[[BlatantLies But you know, I'm not a killer]]. If I were, you'd have been dead a long time ago."
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* IfIWantedYouDead: Chakotay tells Cullah that Seska will kill him one day. Afterward Seska tells him Chakotay that it was a clever ploy, "[[BlatantLies But you know, I'm not a killer]]. If I were, you'd have been dead a long time ago."
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* FemmeFataleSpy
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* MataHari
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** That the command codes of a Starfleet vessel can be used to lower their shields was shown in ''Film/StarTrekTheWrathOfKhan''.
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** That the command codes of a Starfleet vessel can be used to lower their shields was shown in ''Film/StarTrekTheWrathOfKhan''.''Film/StarTrekIITheWrathOfKhan''.
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** ''Voyager'' detects a Federation signal with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine, originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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** ''Voyager'' detects a Federation signal with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine, ''Deep Space Nine'', originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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** Janeway gets the same emotion vs. logic viewpoints from Tuvok and B'Elanna that [[StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Captain Kirk]] did from [[TheSpock Spock]] and [[TheMcCoy McCoy]].
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** Janeway gets the same emotion vs. logic viewpoints from Tuvok and B'Elanna that [[StarTrekTheOriginalSeries [[Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Captain Kirk]] did from [[TheSpock Spock]] and [[TheMcCoy McCoy]].
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* SilentRunningMode: Chakotay uses some old Maquis tricks to sneak up on the Kazon cruiser in a shuttle and scan it for the stolen transporter tech. Seska uses "photonic charges" [[SpaceIsAnOcean in the usual submarine vs. depth charge metaphor]] to detect him.
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* SilentRunningMode: Chakotay uses some old Maquis tricks to sneak up on the Kazon cruiser in a shuttle and scan it for the stolen transporter tech. Seska uses "photonic charges" [[SpaceIsAnOcean in the usual [[SubStory submarine vs. depth charge charge]] [[SpaceIsAnOcean metaphor]] to detect him.
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* StrawVulcan
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* StrawVulcanStrawVulcan: Tuvok is uncharacteristically callous in this episode. There are in fact logical reasons for going after Chakotay, as B'Elanna points out.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When things start going pear shaped, Seska leaves the room, ostensibly to go to the Bridge. Cullah goes to follow her, but is stopped at gunpoint by the other Majes who realise he's been lying through his teeth about having ''Voyager'''s command codes.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When things start going pear shaped, leola root-shaped Seska leaves the room, ostensibly to go to the Bridge. Cullah goes to follow her, but is stopped at gunpoint by the other Majes who realise he's been lying through his teeth about having ''Voyager'''s command codes.
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* ResetButton: So ''Voyager'' pulled into a space dock to repair that hole smashed in her side when?
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* ResetButton: So when exactly did ''Voyager'' pulled pull into a space dock to repair that hole smashed in her side when?side?
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* GuileHeroine: Unable to beam out Chakotay, Janeway beams all the Majes to her ship so she can make a hostage exchange.
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* IndyPloy: Unable to beam out Chakotay, Janeway beams all the Majes to her ship so she can make a hostage exchange.
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** ''Voyager'' detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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** ''Voyager'' detects a Federation signal (with with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) DeepSpaceNine, originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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Voyager detects a Federation signal, but it turns out to be a trap by the Kazon-Nistrim working in alliance with Seska, who steal the components of a working transporter. Then the crew discover that Chakotay has taken off after Seska on a solo mission.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: With Voyager's technology, Maje Cullah plans to unite the Kazon factions under his command.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: With Voyager's ''Voyager'''s technology, Maje Cullah plans to unite the Kazon factions under his command.
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** Voyager detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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** Voyager ''Voyager'' detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
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* ObviousTrap: Seska leaves an obvious warp trail for Voyager to follow.
* ResetButton: So Voyager pulled into a space dock to repair that hole smashed in her side when?
* ResetButton: So Voyager pulled into a space dock to repair that hole smashed in her side when?
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* ObviousTrap: Seska leaves an obvious warp trail for Voyager ''Voyager'' to follow.
* ResetButton: SoVoyager ''Voyager'' pulled into a space dock to repair that hole smashed in her side when?
* ResetButton: So
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When things start going pear shaped, Seska leaves the room, ostensibly to go to the Bridge. Cullah goes to follow her, but is stopped at gunpoint by the other Majes who realise he's been lying through his teeth about having Voyager's command codes.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: When things start going pear shaped, Seska leaves the room, ostensibly to go to the Bridge. Cullah goes to follow her, but is stopped at gunpoint by the other Majes who realise he's been lying through his teeth about having Voyager's ''Voyager'''s command codes.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to Seska's knowledge of Voyager's systems, the Kazon become a much more serious threat.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to Seska's knowledge of Voyager's ''Voyager'''s systems, the Kazon become a much more serious threat.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Seska gets the DNA to impregnate herself by jabbing a needle into Chakotay's neck. One would think she'd [[GroinAttack jab it somewhere else]], but that [[ShareTheMalePain might have been a bit much for the audience]].
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Seska gets the [[StalkerWithATestTube DNA to impregnate herself herself]] by jabbing a needle into Chakotay's neck. One would think she'd [[GroinAttack jab it somewhere else]], but that [[ShareTheMalePain might have been a bit much for the audience]].
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* BlatantLies: Cullah tells the other Kazon Maje's that he has ''Voyager'''s command codes, and his men drag in a barely-conscious Chakotay as "proof".
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* BlatantLies: Cullah tells the other Kazon Maje's Majes that he has ''Voyager'''s command codes, and his men drag in a barely-conscious Chakotay as "proof".
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* CallBack: Janeway gets the same emotion vs. logic viewpoints from Tuvok and B'Elanna that [[StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Captain Kirk]] did from [[TheSpock Spock]] and [[TheMcCoy McCoy]].
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* CallBack: CallBack
** Janeway gets the same emotion vs. logic viewpoints from Tuvok and B'Elanna that [[StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Captain Kirk]] did from [[TheSpock Spock]] and [[TheMcCoy McCoy]].
** Janeway gets the same emotion vs. logic viewpoints from Tuvok and B'Elanna that [[StarTrekTheOriginalSeries Captain Kirk]] did from [[TheSpock Spock]] and [[TheMcCoy McCoy]].
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* DistressBall: Chakotay takes off on his one-man mission so no-one else will risk their lives to correct his mistake, but of course [[LeaveNoManBehind the crew come after him anyway]].
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* ConflictBall: Tuvok's public comment to Chakotay about manipulating Seska is incredibly rude and out of character.
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* ConflictBall: Tuvok's public comment Tuvok suggests to Chakotay about manipulating (in front of several other crewmembers) that he use his intimate knowledge of Seska to manipulate her the same way she has manipulated him. For Tuvok (and indeed the majority of Vulcan's before ''Series/StarTrekEnterprise'') this is incredibly rude and out of character.
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* BlatantLies: Cullah tells the other Kazon Maje's that he has ''Voyager'''s command codes, and his men drag in a barely-conscious Chakotay as "proof".
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** That the command codes of a Starfleet vessel can be used to lower their shields was shown in ''Film/StarTrekTheWrathOfKhan''.
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* SwordOverHead: In a WhatTheHellHero moment for fans, Chakotay beams onto the Kazon ship, destroys the stolen transporter, points his phaser at Seska who tenses in anticipation of her death...then Chakotay hands her the phaser. Is this guy a Cardassian-hating, ex-Maquis terrorist or what? Only the idea that Chakotay still has unrequited feelings for Seska explains it.
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* SwordOverHead: In a WhatTheHellHero moment for fans, Chakotay beams onto the Kazon ship, destroys the stolen transporter, points his phaser at Seska who tenses in anticipation of her death...then Chakotay hands her the phaser. Is Isn't this guy a Cardassian-hating, ex-Maquis terrorist or what? terrorist? Only the idea that Chakotay still has unrequited feelings for Seska explains it.
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* ThisIsSomethingHesGottoDoHimself
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* ThisIsSomethingHesGottoDoHimselfThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself
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* SilentRunningMode: Chakotay uses some old Maquis tricks to sneak up on the Kazon cruiser in a shuttle and scan it for the stolen transporter tech.
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* SilentRunningMode: Chakotay uses some old Maquis tricks to sneak up on the Kazon cruiser in a shuttle and scan it for the stolen transporter tech. Seska uses "photonic charges" [[SpaceIsAnOcean in the usual submarine vs. depth charge metaphor]] to detect him.
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Voyager detects a Federation signal, but it turns out to be a trap by the Kazon-Nistrim working in alliance with Seska.
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Voyager detects a Federation signal, but it turns out to be a trap by the Kazon-Nistrim working in alliance with Seska.Seska, who steal the components of a working transporter. Then the crew discover that Chakotay has taken off after Seska on a solo mission.
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* DeathGlare: Chakotay to Tuvok, when he suggests Chakotay use his intimate knowledge of Seska to manipulate her the way he's been manipulated.
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* DeathGlare: Chakotay to Tuvok, when he suggests Chakotay use his intimate knowledge of Seska to manipulate her makes the way he's been manipulated.above comment.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Averted
* DragonInChief: Seska is the real brains behind the Kazon-Nistrim, even ordering about Cullah's men.
* DragonInChief: Seska is the real brains behind the Kazon-Nistrim, even ordering about Cullah's men.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Averted
Averted; everyone's horrified that Seska impregnated herself using Chakotay's DNA, and the act is specifically compared to rape in "Basics".
* DragonInChief: Seska is the real brains behind the Kazon-Nistrim, even ordering about Cullah'smen.men, despite the innately patriarchal Kazon culture.
* DragonInChief: Seska is the real brains behind the Kazon-Nistrim, even ordering about Cullah's
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* HumiliationConga: Played for drama
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* GetItOverWith
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GetItOverWith: Chakotay tells Seska to just go ahead and kill him after he surrenders to her.
* HumiliationConga: Played fordrama
drama with Chakotay, who blames himself for trusting Seska and everything that came from that. And it happens right up to the end of the episode, when the entire Bridge crew hears her mocking message that she essentially raped him.
*IfIWantedYouDead
IfIWantedYouDead: Chakotay tells Cullah that Seska will kill him one day. Afterward Seska tells him that it was a clever ploy, "[[BlatantLies But you know, I'm not a killer]]. If I were, you'd have been dead a long time ago."
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* HeroesPreferRedheads
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* InLoveWithTheMarkInLoveWithTheMark: Despite her denials, it's obvious that Seska has feelings for Chakotay and that is why she won't kill him.
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* SilentRunningModeSilentRunningMode: Chakotay uses some old Maquis tricks to sneak up on the Kazon cruiser in a shuttle and scan it for the stolen transporter tech.
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* SuicideMissionSuicideMission: Chakotay knows he won't survive his one-man mission, and leaves a recorded message for Captain Janeway telling her to give him up for dead.
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SwordOverHead: In a WhatTheHellHero moment for fans, Chakotay beams onto the Kazon ship, destroys the stolen transporter, points his phaser at Seska who tenses in anticipation of her death...then Chakotay hands her the phaser. Is this guy a Cardassian-hating, ex-Maquis terrorist or what? Only the idea that Chakotay still has unrequited feelings for Seska explains it.
*TeleFragTeleFrag: Cullah asks a powerful Kazon faction leader to help him take down ''Voyager''. The Maje isn't interested and implies he might take the transporter technology for himself. So Cullah says he'll beam the Maje and his NumberOne back to his ship...only ''Voyager'' finds their bodies drifting in space.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Janeway can't afford to abandon or demote Chakotay, as the effect on morale will be too great, especially with the Maquis.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Janeway can't afford to abandon or demote Chakotay, as the effect on morale will be too great, especially with the Maquis.
ex-Maquis crewmembers.
*WeWillMeetAgainWeWillMeetAgain: Seska leaves a final taunting message for Chakotay. He's won this round, but she'll be back.
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** The Kazon tractor Chakotay's shuttle on board, only to find it's empty and he's already beamed on board.
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** The Kazon tractor Chakotay's shuttle on board, onto their vessel, only to find it's empty and he's already beamed on board.board elsewhere.
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* BreachingPodBreachingPod: The Kazon (under Seska's guidance) have built a vessel that they use to smash through ''Voyager'''s hull, enabling a boarding party to steal the transporter component.
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* KickTheDog: Seska leaves an automated message beacon for Chakotay. He's a father!
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* KickTheDog: Seska leaves an automated message beacon for Chakotay. [[TheBabyTrap He's a father!father!]]
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* TheBait: Voyager detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearby SpaceClouds.
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* TheBait: TheBait
** Voyager detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearbySpaceClouds.SpaceClouds where the Kazon vessels are hiding.
** The Kazon tractor Chakotay's shuttle on board, only to find it's empty and he's already beamed on board.
** Voyager detects a Federation signal (with an encryption code dated after they left DeepSpaceNine) originating from inside nearby
** The Kazon tractor Chakotay's shuttle on board, only to find it's empty and he's already beamed on board.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Janeway can't afford to abandon or demote Chakotay, as the effect on morale will be too great while the two crew are still bonding.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Janeway can't afford to abandon or demote Chakotay, as the effect on morale will be too great while great, especially with the two crew are still bonding.Maquis.
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* KickTheDog: Seska leaves an automated beacon for Chakotay. He's a father!
* MagicPlasticSurgery: Inverted. The only one of her kind in the Delta Quadant... and yet she still finds a way to restore her old Cardassian features.
* MagicPlasticSurgery: Inverted. The only one of her kind in the Delta Quadant... and yet she still finds a way to restore her old Cardassian features.
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* KickTheDog: Seska leaves an automated message beacon for Chakotay. He's a father!
* MagicPlasticSurgery:Inverted. The only one of her kind in the Delta Quadant... and yet she Seska still finds a way to restore her old Cardassian features.
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-->'''JANEWAY:''' What I want to know, Mister Tuvok, is how he was able to get a shuttlecraft off this ship without either of us knowing about it.
-->'''TUVOK:''' Apparently he was able to override the lockout command.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' I guess Seska's not the only one who knows how to compromise our security systems.
-->'''TUVOK:''' Apparently he was able to override the lockout command.
-->'''JANEWAY:''' I guess Seska's not the only one who knows how to compromise our security systems.
