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* {{Telepathy}}: Sunset’s [[TheEmpath empath]] powers escalate to this as a result of PowerIncontinence, and she’s not handling it well, trying to block out thoughts with earmuffs (unsuccessfully) and getting to see all of her friends’ experiences without attempting to.
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* {{Synchronization}}: It's established here that the girls' geodes are linked and that one of them using their powers excessively boosts theirs as well as the others'.
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* DisapprovingLook: The girls give a collective one to Rainbow Dash after Twilight explains se is the one responsible for their geodes being overcharged.
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* DisapprovingLook: The girls give a collective one to Rainbow Dash after Twilight explains se she is the one responsible for their geodes being overcharged.
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* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it can even affect fructose and not just refined sugar.
* JuggleFu: After taking a bite of her sandwich, Rainbow Dash doesn't bother taking it with her when seeking mustard: she's fast enough that it doesn't even had time to fall before she's back.
* JuggleFu: After taking a bite of her sandwich, Rainbow Dash doesn't bother taking it with her when seeking mustard: she's fast enough that it doesn't even had time to fall before she's back.
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* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, explode, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it power can even affect fructose and not fructose, instead of just refined sugar.
* JuggleFu: After taking a bite of her sandwich, Rainbow Dash doesn't bother taking it with her when seeking mustard: she's fast enough that it doesn't evenhad have time to fall before she's back.
* JuggleFu: After taking a bite of her sandwich, Rainbow Dash doesn't bother taking it with her when seeking mustard: she's fast enough that it doesn't even
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* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed; Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
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* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed; Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.Moderation is the word of the day.
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* DisapprovingLook: The girls give a collective one to Rainbow Dash after Twilight explains se is the one responsible for their geodes being overcharged.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''He he''... oopsies.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''He he''... oopsies.
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* JuggleFu: After taking a bite of her sandwich, Rainbow Dash doesn't bother taking it with her when seeking mustard: she's fast enough that it doesn't even had time to fall before she's back.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility: The come away is that the geodes have to be used responsibly.
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* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it does contain enough sugar to be affected.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks extermely fast with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed: Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks extermely fast with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed: Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
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* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it does contain enough sugar to be affected.
can even affect fructose and not just refined sugar.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talksextermely extremely fast with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* MundaneUtility:Deconstructed: Deconstructed; Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks
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** The PowerIncontinence Sunset experiences would not look too out of place in a ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga adaptation
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** The PowerIncontinence Sunset experiences would not look too out of place out-of-place in a ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga adaptation''ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga'' adaptation.
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* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her ride her bike up in front of the sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial'' (including the music).
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** With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her ride her bike up in front of the sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial'' (including themusic).music).
** The PowerIncontinence Sunset experiences would not look too out of place in a ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga adaptation
** With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her ride her bike up in front of the sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial'' (including the
** The PowerIncontinence Sunset experiences would not look too out of place in a ComicBook/TheDarkPhoenixSaga adaptation
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Zephyr Breeze enters and asks Rainbow to the mall. She makes to speed away but the other girls give her a glare, and Rainbow shrinks away from Zephyr at normal speed.
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Zephyr Breeze enters and asks Rainbow to the mall. She makes to speed away but the other girls give her a glare, and Rainbow shrinks away from Zephyr at normal speed.
speed. Later, Sunset finds that her empathy has subsided, much to her relief.
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* AlternateSelf: Zephyr Breeze's human form makes it debut.
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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: The result of Applejack's power getting boosted; she rips off the door of her locker without meaning to.
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* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: The result of Applejack's power getting boosted; she rips off accidentally tears the door of off her locker without meaning to.locker, then crumples it while trying to shove it back in place.
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* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her ride her bike up in front of the sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial''.
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* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her ride her bike up in front of the sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial''.''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial'' (including the music).
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Like with their pony versions, Zephyr Breeze tries flirting with Rainbow Dash, who doesn't want anything to do with him.
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* TheBeastmaster: With her powers acting up, Fluttershy finds herself causally followed around by dozens of animals.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks like this with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
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* TheBeastmaster: With her powers acting up, Fluttershy finds herself causally casually followed around by dozens of animals.
* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: The result of Applejack's power getting boosted; she rips off the door of her locker without meaning to.
* {{Facepalm}}: Fluttershy's reaction to her brother's usual antics is to double-facepalm.
* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it does contain enough sugar to be affected.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talkslike this extermely fast with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* DoesNotKnowHerOwnStrength: The result of Applejack's power getting boosted; she rips off the door of her locker without meaning to.
* {{Facepalm}}: Fluttershy's reaction to her brother's usual antics is to double-facepalm.
* HavingABlast: Pinkie Pie makes an apple explodes, to her confusion. Apparently, with her power amplified it does contain enough sugar to be affected.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks
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* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her [[Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial ride her bike up in front of the sun]].
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* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her [[Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial ride her bike up in front of the sun]].sun in a reference to ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial''.
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* AlternateSelf: Zephyr Breeze's human form makes it debut.
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* TheCameo: Zephyr Breeze's human form makes it debut.
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->Written by: Gillian M. Berrow
Walking through the halls of CHS, Sunset finds her empathy powers are letting her hear everyone's thoughts. The rest of the group has been having their powers act up too, and they wonder why. Rainbow Dash rushes in bragging about how great her super speed is to get around, and the geodes begin glowing. Twilight deduces that since the seven of them are connected, overuse of them can create a magical feedback effect in all of them, amplifying their powers. The key is to use their powers in moderation.
Zephyr Breeze enters and asks Rainbow to the mall. She makes to speed away but the other girls give her a glare, and Rainbow shrinks away from Zephyr at normal speed.
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* TheBeastmaster: With her powers acting up, Fluttershy finds herself causally followed around by dozens of animals.
* TheCameo: Zephyr Breeze's human form makes it debut.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks like this with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed: Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
* PowerIncontinence: The central plot point is that the girls aren't sure how to keep their powers in check now that they're getting stronger.
* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her [[Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial ride her bike up in front of the sun]].
Walking through the halls of CHS, Sunset finds her empathy powers are letting her hear everyone's thoughts. The rest of the group has been having their powers act up too, and they wonder why. Rainbow Dash rushes in bragging about how great her super speed is to get around, and the geodes begin glowing. Twilight deduces that since the seven of them are connected, overuse of them can create a magical feedback effect in all of them, amplifying their powers. The key is to use their powers in moderation.
Zephyr Breeze enters and asks Rainbow to the mall. She makes to speed away but the other girls give her a glare, and Rainbow shrinks away from Zephyr at normal speed.
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!!Tropes:
* TheBeastmaster: With her powers acting up, Fluttershy finds herself causally followed around by dozens of animals.
* TheCameo: Zephyr Breeze's human form makes it debut.
* MotorMouth: Rainbow talks like this with her SuperSpeed powers amplified.
* MundaneUtility: Deconstructed: Rainbow's casual use of her super-speed is what's causing the other girls to lose control of their own powers, and is obviously affecting her, too. They have to use them less often.
* PowerIncontinence: The central plot point is that the girls aren't sure how to keep their powers in check now that they're getting stronger.
* ShoutOut: With Spike in her basket, Twilight's telekinesis makes her [[Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial ride her bike up in front of the sun]].
