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When a dragon that causes man-eating whirlpools threatens Berk's trade ships, the Dragon Riders must remove it without getting caught in its vortex.
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When a dragon that causes man-eating whirlpools threatens Berk's trade ships, the Dragon Riders dragon riders must remove it without getting caught in its vortex.
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* AndroclesLion: The Submaripper is hostile to Hiccup because humans chained it to its current spot, but saves Hiccup's life when he breaks the chains.
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* AndroclesLion: The Submaripper is hostile to Hiccup because humans chained it to its current spot, spot but saves Hiccup's life when he breaks the chains.
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* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled boat after the Submaripper is freed.
* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help them retreat.
* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help them retreat.
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* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled a Seashocker-pulled boat after the Submaripper is freed.
* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help themretreat.retreat.
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* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help them
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* ContinuitySnarl: The riders dragons are shown shooting fire.....underwater. This contradicts what the first movie said regarding wet dragon heads being unable to shoot fire.
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* ContinuitySnarl: The riders riders’ dragons are shown shooting fire.....underwater. This contradicts what the first movie said regarding wet dragon heads being unable to shoot fire.
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* ContinuitySnarl: The riders dragons are shown shooting fire.....underwater. This contradicts what the first movie said regarding wet dragon heads being unable to shoot fire.
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** Berk is low on both funds and resources thanks to the loss of all its gold, and the loss of various trade ships.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber, and later a diving bell too.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Zigzagged. Toothless resuscitates a lifeless Hiccup simply by licking him, but afterwards, he’s shown to be weak and breathless, unable to properly mount Toothless or even stand on his own.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber, and later a diving bell too.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Zigzagged. Toothless resuscitates a lifeless Hiccup simply by licking him, but afterwards, he’s shown to be weak and breathless, unable to properly mount Toothless or even stand on his own.
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** Berk is low on both funds and resources thanks to the loss of all its gold, gold and the loss of various trade ships.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out ofDeathsong Death Song amber, and later a diving bell too.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Zigzagged. Toothless resuscitates a lifeless Hiccup simply by licking him, butafterwards, afterward, he’s shown to be weak and breathless, unable to properly mount Toothless or even stand on his own.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Zigzagged. Toothless resuscitates a lifeless Hiccup simply by licking him, but
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* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled boats after the Submaripper is freed.
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* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled boats boat after the Submaripper is freed.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Zigzagged. Toothless resuscitates a lifeless Hiccup simply by licking him, but afterwards, he’s shown to be weak and breathless, unable to properly mount Toothless or even stand on his own.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Both literally and figuratively; the Submaripper is introduced to the audience by eating three trading ships, and to the riders while trying to eat a Scauldron.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Both literally and figuratively; the Submaripper is introduced to the audience by eating three trading ships, and to the riders while trying to eat a Scauldron. Albeit the attacks are indicated to be more about it being territorial and defensive rather than hungry.
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* AndroclesLion: The Submaripper is hostile to Hiccup because humans chains it to its current spot, but saves Hiccup's life when he breaks the chains.
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* AndroclesLion: The Submaripper is hostile to Hiccup because humans chains chained it to its current spot, but saves Hiccup's life when he breaks the chains.
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* AndroclesLion: The Submaripper is hostile to Hiccup because humans chains it to its current spot, but saves Hiccup's life when he breaks the chains.
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* TogetherInDeath: Toothless plans to pull this when it looks like he woill be unable to save Hiccup from drowning in the diving bell, choosing to stay with him and drown as well rather than leave Hiccup on his own. Luckily, they are saved by the Submaripper.
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* TogetherInDeath: Toothless plans to pull this when it looks like he woill will be unable to save Hiccup from drowning in the diving bell, choosing to stay with him and drown as well rather than leave Hiccup on his own. Luckily, they are saved by the Submaripper.
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* TogetherInDeath: Toothless planned to pull this when it looked like he would be unable to save Hiccup from drowning in the diving bell, choosing to stay with him and drown as well rather than leave Hiccup on his own. Luckily, they were saved by the Submaripper.
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* TogetherInDeath: Toothless planned plans to pull this when it looked looks like he would woill be unable to save Hiccup from drowning in the diving bell, choosing to stay with him and drown as well rather than leave Hiccup on his own. Luckily, they were are saved by the Submaripper.
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* DrowningPit: The diving bell ultimately becomes this for Hiccup when its chain breaks and it sinks to the bottom with Hiccup trapped inside. Toothless is unable to get him out, though ultimately the Submaripper saves him.
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* TogetherInDeath: Toothless planned to pull this when it looked like he would be unable to save Hiccup from drowning in the diving bell, choosing to stay with him and drown as well rather than leave Hiccup on his own. Luckily, they were saved by the Submaripper.
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* HostageSituation: Ryker has a boated towed by Seashockers, knowing the riders are too noble to harm the dragons to get him and his brother.
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* HostageSituation: Ryker has a boated boat towed by Seashockers, knowing the riders are too noble to harm the dragons to get him and his brother.
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* HostageSituation: Ryker has a boated towed by Seashockers, knowing the riders are too noble to harm the dragons to get him and his brother.
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* IOweYouMyLife: After Hiccup frees the Submaripper, it returns the favor by pulling him and his diving bell out of the water and onto the boat.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: While Viggo has always been an enemy, his willingness to target innocent civilians in retribution for Hiccup's raids on his outposts is treated as beyond the pale.
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* KnowWhenToFoldThem: Ryker, unlike Viggo, calls for a retreat when the Submaripper is loose and the riders are bearing down on them.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: While Viggo has always been an enemy, his willingness to target innocent civilians in retribution for Hiccup's raids on his outposts is treated as beyond thepale.pale.
* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled boats after the Submaripper is freed.
* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help them retreat.
* ThisIsUnforgivable: While Viggo has always been an enemy, his willingness to target innocent civilians in retribution for Hiccup's raids on his outposts is treated as beyond the
* VillainExitStageLeft: Ryker and Viggo escape on Seashocker pulled boats after the Submaripper is freed.
* VillainousBreakdown: When defeated, Viggo loses his cool for once and demands the hunters stay and fight, requiring Ryker to be the voice of reason and help them retreat.
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** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber.
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** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber.amber, and later a diving bell too.
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* CallBack:
** Berk is low on both funds and resources thanks to the loss of all its gold, and the loss of various trade ships.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber.
* ImAHumanitarian: Both literally and figuratively; the Submaripper is introduced to the audience by eating three trading ships, and to the riders while trying to eat a Scauldron.
** Berk is low on both funds and resources thanks to the loss of all its gold, and the loss of various trade ships.
** Hiccup makes a diving mask out of Deathsong amber.
* ImAHumanitarian: Both literally and figuratively; the Submaripper is introduced to the audience by eating three trading ships, and to the riders while trying to eat a Scauldron.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: While Viggo has always been an enemy, his willingness to target innocent civilians in retribution for Hiccup's raids on his outposts is treated as beyond the pale.
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When a dragon that causes man-eating whirlpools threatens Berk's trade ships, the Dragon Riders must remove it without getting caught in its vortex.
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