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* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The stabbed security guard pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
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* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The stabbed security guard pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he his wound. He might have survived if he had left the knife in.
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* WheelchairAntics: Discussed. Adam tells Danny he needs some spoilers, bigger wheels and a lift kit... while providing sound effects.
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* RoomFullOfCrazy: Downplayed by Mac because he's not crazy, but he does have a habit of writing things out on the glass walls of his office in order to organize his thoughts as he analyses clues. In this particular case, he's written so much more than usual and has so many open boxes of case files sitting around, that Stella asks him what's going on with him.
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* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They are just shooting at random businesses.
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* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They are They're just shooting at random businesses.businesses for attention.
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* TerroristsWithoutACause: The guys who shot up the bar in the previous episode are at first believed to have been targeting law enforcement, bur reveal their true motive here: they didn't intend to hurt anyone, just demanded a ransom to stop as a way of making a quick buck.
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* TerroristsWithoutACause: The guys who shot up the bar in the previous episode are at first believed to have been targeting law enforcement, bur but reveal their true motive here: they didn't intend to hurt anyone, just demanded a ransom to stop as a way of making a quick buck.
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* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters have no idea there are cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They are just shooting at random businesses.
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* TerroristsWithoutACause: The guys who shot up the bar in the previous episode are at first believed to have been targeting law enforcement, bur reveal their true motive here: they didn't intend to hurt anyone, just demanded a ransom to stop as a way of making a quick buck.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shootershave had no idea there are were cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They are just shooting at random businesses.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters
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* SexForSolace: Adam & Stella's one-night-stand is in reaction to the tragedy.
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* SexForSolace: Adam & Stella's one-night-stand is in reaction to the tragedy.tragedy of the shooting, Angell's death and Danny being paralyzed.
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* SexForSolace: The one-night-stand above was in reaction to the tragedy.
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* SexForSolace: The Adam & Stella's one-night-stand above was is in reaction to the tragedy.
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* SexForSolace: The one-nigh-stand above was in reaction to the tragedy.
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* SexForSolace: The one-nigh-stand one-night-stand above was in reaction to the tragedy.
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* TimeSkip: Per Mac & Stella's conversation in his office toward the beginning of the episode, only one month has passed over the summer hiatus instead of the traditional four.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They were just shooting at random businesses.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They were just shooting at random businesses.
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* TimeSkip: Downplayed. Per Mac & Stella's conversation in his office toward the beginning of the episode, only one month has passed over the summer hiatus instead of the traditional four.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shootershad have no idea there were are cops in the bar, much less that they've paralyzed one of them. They were are just shooting at random businesses.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: Stella and Adam]] have a one-night-stand. Seeing each other at work later, things are awkward so they hastily agree that it can never, ever happen again.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: Stella and Adam]] Adam have a one-night-stand. Seeing each other at work later, things are awkward so they hastily agree that it can never, ever happen again.
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* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that [[spoiler: they've paralyzed one of them]]. They were just shooting at random businesses.
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* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that [[spoiler: they've paralyzed one of them]].them. They were just shooting at random businesses.
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* TimeSkip: Per Mac & Stella's conversation in his office toward the beginning of the episode, only one month has passed over the summer hiatus instead of the traditional four.
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!Trivia for the episode:
* Only one month has passed over the summer hiatus.
* Only one month has passed over the summer hiatus.
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* Only one month has passed over the summer hiatus.
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* SexForSolace: The one-nigh-stand above was in reaction to the tragedy.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: [[spoiler: Stella and Adam]] have a one-night-stand. Seeing each other at work later, things are awkward so they hastily agree that it can never, ever happen again.
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* FromDressToDressing: A variation. A perp shoots a security guard, hitting his femoral artery, then tears off one of the man's sleeves to use as a tourniquet on ''his own arm'' which the guard had hit first.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The security guard is also stabbed and pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The security guard is also stabbed and pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
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* FromDressToDressing: A variation. A perp shoots stabs a security guard, hitting his femoral artery, then tears off one of the man's sleeves to use as a tourniquet on ''his own arm'' which where the guard had hit shot him first.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The stabbed security guardis also stabbed and pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The stabbed security guard
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"'''Epilogue'''" is the Season 6 premiere and the 118th episode overall. It originally aired September 23, 2009.
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"'''Epilogue'''" is the Season 6 premiere and the 118th episode overall. It originally aired September 23, 2009.
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Directed by Creator/DavidVonAncken
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/Pamveasey
As the team rise from the rubble after the drive-by shooting at the bar, they realize that one of their lives has been altered.
!Tropes for the episode:
* FromDressToDressing: A variation. A perp shoots a security guard, hitting his femoral artery, then tears off one of the man's sleeves to use as a tourniquet on ''his own arm'' which the guard had hit first.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The security guard is also stabbed and pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that [[spoiler: they've paralyzed one of them]]. They were just shooting at random businesses.
!Trivia for the episode:
* Only one month has passed over the summer hiatus.
Written by Creator/AnthonyEZuiker, Creator/AnnDonahue, Creator/CarolMendelsohn & Creator/Pamveasey
As the team rise from the rubble after the drive-by shooting at the bar, they realize that one of their lives has been altered.
!Tropes for the episode:
* FromDressToDressing: A variation. A perp shoots a security guard, hitting his femoral artery, then tears off one of the man's sleeves to use as a tourniquet on ''his own arm'' which the guard had hit first.
* LodgedBladeRecycling: Played realistically. The security guard is also stabbed and pulls the knife out and uses it to stab his attacker. He then bleeds to death from the wound he had suffered which he might have survived if he had left the knife in.
* UnintentionallyNotoriousCrime: The drive-by shooters had no idea there were cops in the bar, much less that [[spoiler: they've paralyzed one of them]]. They were just shooting at random businesses.
!Trivia for the episode:
* Only one month has passed over the summer hiatus.
