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At the lakeside, the Poet [[MilkingTheGiantCow milks a gigantic invisible bovine]] as he recites his PurpleProse-laden poetry. He is interrupted by a spinning high kick, courtesy of an annoyed Sickle. She coldly reminds him that they are under orders from Huey to keep a low profile until the operation begins. They banter for a while, and are eventually interrupted by Rail and Frank, the former reminding Sickle that a young woman landing a spinning high kick is itself pretty attention-grabbing as well.
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At the lakeside, the Poet [[MilkingTheGiantCow milks a gigantic invisible bovine]] as he recites his PurpleProse-laden poetry.{{poetry}}. He is interrupted by a spinning high kick, courtesy of an annoyed Sickle. She coldly reminds him that they are under orders from Huey to keep a low profile until the operation begins. They banter for a while, and are eventually interrupted by Rail and Frank, the former reminding Sickle that a young woman landing a spinning high kick is itself pretty attention-grabbing as well.
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Leeza orders everyone to disperse for the time being, promising to have the twins contact them when the time comes. Everyone leaves, leaving only the Poet standing at the lakeside. He wonders if their world could be comparable to Neverland from PeterPan, but decides that Literature/AliceInWonderland fits much better.
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Leeza orders everyone to disperse for the time being, promising to have the twins contact them when the time comes. Everyone leaves, leaving only the Poet standing at the lakeside. He wonders if their world could be comparable to Neverland from PeterPan, ''Literature/PeterPan'', but decides that Literature/AliceInWonderland ''Literature/AlicesAdventuresInWonderland'' fits much better.
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Leeza orders everyone to disperse for the time being, promising to have the twins contact them when the time comes. Everyone leaves, leaving only the Poet standing at the lakeside. He wonders if their world could be comparable to Neverland from PeterPan, but decides that AliceInWonderland fits much better.
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Leeza orders everyone to disperse for the time being, promising to have the twins contact them when the time comes. Everyone leaves, leaving only the Poet standing at the lakeside. He wonders if their world could be comparable to Neverland from PeterPan, but decides that AliceInWonderland Literature/AliceInWonderland fits much better.
