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'''Bartender:''' Questions. How about a Ruby Bliels?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
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'''Bartender:''' Questions. How about a Ruby Bliels?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
Questions.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
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'''Bartender:''' Questions.
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'''Bartender:''' Questions.
Questions. How about a Ruby Bliels?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Corellian ale... in a ''clean'' glass.
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''(Kyle throws his lightsaber at the ship's shield generator)''\\
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->'''Galak Fyyar:''' Within hours, Desann will have eradicated those annoying Jedi. Clearing the way for my ascent as the leader of the New Empire. I, Galak Fyyar the First, the genius who conceived of the Shadow Armor, will rule the galaxy with a cortosis fist! Worlds will tremble, stars will shudder--\\
''(Kyle throws his lightsaber at the ship's shield generator)''\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Your shields will fall.
''(Kyle throws his lightsaber at the ship's shield generator)''\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Your shields will fall.
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->'''Desann:''' I was wrong about you, Katarn. Your failure as a Jedi hasn't weakened you; it's made you stronger. Come, join me. You know in your heart that you'll never truly be one of them.\\
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->'''Desann:''' I was wrong about you, Katarn. Your failure as a Jedi hasn't weakened you; it's made you stronger. [[WeCanRuleTogether Come, join me. me.]] You know in your heart that you'll never truly be one of them.\\
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->''(Kyle and Jan walks up to Luke while he meditates with his back to them)''
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->''(Kyle and Jan walks up to Luke while he meditates with his back to them)''them)''\\
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->'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(meditating with his back to Kyle)'' Kyle. I've been expecting you.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(nonchalant)'' Skywalker.\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' You've come for your lightsaber?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Yeah.\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' After all these years?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(reluctant)'' My... Jan's been killed... By a Jedi. Goes by the name of--\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' Desann.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(surprised)'' ...You know?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(rises from his seat)'' I sensed a disturbance in the Force. I'll tell you about Desann while your trial is being prepared.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' "Trial"?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(turns around to face Kyle)'' [[JustifiedTutorial A minor test to determine your fitness to wield a lightsaber again.]] Even in your relatively unpracticed state, you shouldn't find it too difficult.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Why can't you Jedi ever do things the simple way?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' If the ways of the Jedi were easy, there'd be millions of us, instead of dozens.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(nonchalant)'' Skywalker.\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' You've come for your lightsaber?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Yeah.\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' After all these years?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(reluctant)'' My... Jan's been killed... By a Jedi. Goes by the name of--\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' Desann.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(surprised)'' ...You know?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(rises from his seat)'' I sensed a disturbance in the Force. I'll tell you about Desann while your trial is being prepared.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' "Trial"?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(turns around to face Kyle)'' [[JustifiedTutorial A minor test to determine your fitness to wield a lightsaber again.]] Even in your relatively unpracticed state, you shouldn't find it too difficult.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Why can't you Jedi ever do things the simple way?\\
'''Luke Skywalker:''' If the ways of the Jedi were easy, there'd be millions of us, instead of dozens.
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->''(Kyle and Jan walks up to Luke while he meditates with his back to them)''
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(without turning around)'' Kyle, Jan.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Someday you're going to have to teach me how to do that.
'''Luke Skywalker:''' ''(without turning around)'' Kyle, Jan.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Someday you're going to have to teach me how to do that.
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''(the hologram receiver turns on, reveal none other than Mon Mothma)''\\
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''(the hologram receiver turns on, reveal revealing none other than Mon Mothma)''\\
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->'''Kyle Katarn:''' Mon Mothma must be getting paranoid. She never used to send pros like us out on blue milk runs like this.\\
''(the hologram receiver turns on, reveal none other than Mon Mothma)''\\
'''Mon Mothma:''' Kyle, Jan. Greetings.\\
'''Jan Ors:''' Mon Mothma. Kyle was just talking about you.
''(the hologram receiver turns on, reveal none other than Mon Mothma)''\\
'''Mon Mothma:''' Kyle, Jan. Greetings.\\
'''Jan Ors:''' Mon Mothma. Kyle was just talking about you.
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'''Imperial Officer:''' ...Damn rookies, no wonder we're losing our entire Empire.
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'''Imperial Officer:''' ...Officer:''' ''(under his breath)'' ...Damn rookies, no wonder we're losing our entire Empire.
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->'''Imperial Officer:''' You ever fired a blaster at a living target?\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' ''(laughs)'' All the time, I was the top womp rat hunter in my unit!\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' No, I mean a sentient being, something that could shoot back.\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' No, I guess I never have.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' You must be joking! How long has it been since you graduated?\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Over a year.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' What have you been doing all this time, looking the other way?!\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Never had a frontline assignment.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' The whole galaxy's the frontline now. We aren't waging a full scale war here, we're hitting the Republic anywhere we can. So be prepared.\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Yes sir!\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' ...Damn rookies, no wonder we're losing our entire Empire.
'''Stormtrooper:''' ''(laughs)'' All the time, I was the top womp rat hunter in my unit!\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' No, I mean a sentient being, something that could shoot back.\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' No, I guess I never have.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' You must be joking! How long has it been since you graduated?\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Over a year.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' What have you been doing all this time, looking the other way?!\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Never had a frontline assignment.\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' The whole galaxy's the frontline now. We aren't waging a full scale war here, we're hitting the Republic anywhere we can. So be prepared.\\
'''Stormtrooper:''' Yes sir!\\
'''Imperial Officer:''' ...Damn rookies, no wonder we're losing our entire Empire.
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-->-- '''Random Stormtrooper'''
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-->-- '''Random Stormtrooper'''
'''Stormtrooper'''
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->Uh, no-n-no sir, I-I'm sorry sir, I'll continue to look around. Alpha 956 out... Stupid know-it-all officer! How about you get into this armor
and try to see out of this damn helmet, then I'll sit around in my comfy office and tell you how dumb and incompetent you are!
and try to see out of this damn helmet, then I'll sit around in my comfy office and tell you how dumb and incompetent you are!
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->I'd like to see you come down here and try to hit something while you're wearing this damn helmet so I can sit in an air conditioned office and tell you how stupid you are!
-->-- '''Imperial Stormtrooper'''
-->-- '''Imperial Stormtrooper'''
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'''Stormtrooper #2:''' Mine works fine!\\
'''Stormtrooper #1:''' Once you fight a blaster carbine you won't want to go back.\\
'''Stormtrooper #2:''' What's the difference?\\
'''Stormtrooper #1:''' It's all in the feel and the kickback. You can't stay on target with these things, you miss your first shot and you are lying on the ground with a hole blasted through your armor.\\
'''Stormtrooper #2:''' Well, we don't have to worry about that. This place is so far removed from the core planets there's no way we're going to run into any resistance.\\
'''Stormtrooper #1:''' Keep talking like
->Uh, no-n-no sir, I-I'm sorry sir, I'll continue to look around. Alpha 956 out... Stupid know-it-all officer! How about you get into this armor
and try to see out of this damn
-->--
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->'''Desann:''' Kyle? Kyle Katarn? ''You''[='=]re the legendary hero who killed Jerec at the Valley Of The Jedi? You look like nothing more than a bantha herder.\\
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->'''Desann:''' Kyle? Kyle Katarn? ''You''[='=]re the legendary hero who killed Jerec at the Valley Of The of the Jedi? You look like nothing more than a bantha herder.\\
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->'''Desann:''' ''You?'' You're the legendary hero who killed Jerec at the Valley Of The Jedi? You look like nothing more than a bantha herder.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' And ''you'' look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' And ''you'' look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
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->'''Desann:''' ''You?'' You're Kyle? Kyle Katarn? ''You''[='=]re the legendary hero who killed Jerec at the Valley Of The Jedi? You look like nothing more than a bantha herder.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:'''And Well, ''you'' look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
'''Kyle Katarn:'''
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'''Kyle Katarn:''' And you look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
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'''Kyle Katarn:''' And you ''you'' look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
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->'''Bartender:''' Now, you seek informations?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' What do you know about Reelo Baruk?\\
'''Bartender:''' A respected waste disposal managers. This very establishment contracts with him to remove our garbages.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Where does he take your "''garbages''"?\\
'''Bartender:''' Who cares? Out of sight, out of minds, says us.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' And it's strictly legit, right?\\
'''Bartender:''' As legitimate as anything on Nar Shaddaa, Mr. "Just-A-Guy".
'''Kyle Katarn:''' What do you know about Reelo Baruk?\\
'''Bartender:''' A respected waste disposal managers. This very establishment contracts with him to remove our garbages.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Where does he take your "''garbages''"?\\
'''Bartender:''' Who cares? Out of sight, out of minds, says us.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' And it's strictly legit, right?\\
'''Bartender:''' As legitimate as anything on Nar Shaddaa, Mr. "Just-A-Guy".
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'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?\\
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'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! ''Jedis!'' I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?\\
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->'''Desann:''' I was wrong about you, Katarn. Your failure as a Jedi hasn't weakened you; it's made you stronger. Come, join me. You know in your heart that you'll never truly be one of them.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Maybe, maybe not, but I know I won't be alone. How 'bout you, Desann? Even now, after all this pain, there's still hope. [[LastSecondChance Come, join]] ''[[LastSecondChance us]]''.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Maybe, maybe not, but I know I won't be alone. How 'bout you, Desann? Even now, after all this pain, there's still hope. [[LastSecondChance Come, join]] ''[[LastSecondChance us]]''.
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against the IMPERIAL
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against the IMPERIALIMPERIAL\\
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Imperial outpost...]]
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Imperial outpost...]]]]]]
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''(Kyle resolutely places his lightsaber on the bar desk; the Bartender promptly throws away the dirty glass)''
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.
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''(Kyle resolutely places his lightsaber on the bar desk; the Bartender promptly throws away the dirty glass)''
glass)''\\
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honoredJedis?
Jedis?\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.\\
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.\\
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'''Kyle Katarn:''' Bartender? ''(the Bartender ignores him as he inspects a dirty glass)'' BARTENDER!? ''(the Bartender continues to ignore him)''\\
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Never trust a bartender with bad grammar.
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'''Luke Skywalker:''' I'd be happy to keep your lightsaber here for safekeeping.\\
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->'''Desann:''' ''You?'' You're the legendary hero who killed Jerec at the Valley Of The Jedi? You look like nothing more than a bantha herder.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' And you look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Bartender? ''(the Bartender ignores him as he inspects a dirty glass)'' BARTENDER!? ''(the Bartender continues to ignore him)''\\
''(Kyle resolutely places his lightsaber on the bar desk; the Bartender promptly throws away the dirty glass)''
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.
'''Bartender:''' Of course, many peoples have them.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Lightsabers?\\
'''Bartender:''' Questions.
Never trust a bartender with bad grammar.
-->-- '''Kyle Katarn'''
->I'd like to see you come down here and try to hit something while you're wearing this damn helmet so I can sit in an air conditioned office and tell you how stupid you are!
-->-- '''Imperial Stormtrooper'''
'''Luke Skywalker:''' I'd be happy to keep your lightsaber here for safekeeping.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' No. I think I'll keep it.\\
'''Jan Ors:''' ''Ha!'' I ''knew'' it! Lando owes me five credits!
[[folder:Opening Crawl]]
[[center:[[AC:It is a time of relative peace\\
in the galaxy. Eight years\\
have passed since the\\
Empire's defeat at the\\
BATTLE OF ENDOR, but the\\
NEW REPUBLIC still struggles\\
to restore order and\\
vanquish its enemies.\\\
After defending the VALLEY\\
OF THE JEDI from the evil\\
JEREC and nearly falling to\\
the Dark Side himself, former\\
Jedi Knight KYLE KATARN\\
has severed his connection\\
with the Force and returned\\
to his mercenary ways. With\\
his longtime partner, JAN\\
ORS, Kyle continues to aid\\
the Republic in the fight\\
against the IMPERIAL
REMNANT.\\\
As the Remnant launches its\\
latest gambit to regain\\
control of the galaxy, Kyle\\
and Jan have been sent by\\
the New Republic to\\
investigate the planet KEJIM,\\
home to a long-dead\\
Imperial outpost...]]
[[/folder]]
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'''Kyle Katarn:''' And you look like an overgrown Kowakian monkey-lizard, so I guess looks don't count for much.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Bartender? ''(the Bartender ignores him as he inspects a dirty glass)'' BARTENDER!? ''(the Bartender continues to ignore him)''\\
''(Kyle resolutely places his lightsaber on the bar desk; the Bartender promptly throws away the dirty glass)''
'''Bartender:''' Ah, Jedis! I had no ideas! What can I do for you, honored Jedis?
'''Kyle Katarn:''' I'm no Jedi, I'm just a guy with a lightsaber and a few questions.
'''Bartender:''' Of course, many peoples have them.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' Lightsabers?\\
'''Bartender:''' Questions.
Never trust a bartender with bad grammar.
-->-- '''Kyle Katarn'''
->I'd like to see you come down here and try to hit something while you're wearing this damn helmet so I can sit in an air conditioned office and tell you how stupid you are!
-->-- '''Imperial Stormtrooper'''
'''Luke Skywalker:''' I'd be happy to keep your lightsaber here for safekeeping.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' No. I think I'll keep it.\\
'''Jan Ors:''' ''Ha!'' I ''knew'' it! Lando owes me five credits!
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[[center:[[AC:It is a time of relative peace\\
in the galaxy. Eight years\\
have passed since the\\
Empire's defeat at the\\
BATTLE OF ENDOR, but the\\
NEW REPUBLIC still struggles\\
to restore order and\\
vanquish its enemies.\\\
After defending the VALLEY\\
OF THE JEDI from the evil\\
JEREC and nearly falling to\\
the Dark Side himself, former\\
Jedi Knight KYLE KATARN\\
has severed his connection\\
with the Force and returned\\
to his mercenary ways. With\\
his longtime partner, JAN\\
ORS, Kyle continues to aid\\
the Republic in the fight\\
against the IMPERIAL
REMNANT.\\\
As the Remnant launches its\\
latest gambit to regain\\
control of the galaxy, Kyle\\
and Jan have been sent by\\
the New Republic to\\
investigate the planet KEJIM,\\
home to a long-dead\\
Imperial outpost...]]
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