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Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''Michael's first line.'''
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-->-- '''Michael's '''[[ThePollyanna Michael]]'s first line.'''
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Changed line(s) 2,3 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''Matt's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first line]].'''
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-->-- '''Matt's '''Matthew's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first line]].'''
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''Mike's first line.'''
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-->-- '''Mike's '''Michael's first line.'''
Changed line(s) 11,12 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''[[BullyHunter Jordi]] standing up for Evelyn against [[TheBully Nate, Dexter and Rose]].'''
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-->-- '''[[BullyHunter Jordi]] Jordan]] standing up for Evelyn against [[TheBully [[GangOfBullies Nate, Dexter and Rose]].'''
Changed line(s) 14,15 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''[[CrazyJealousGuy Asher]] letting Matt know how lucky he is to be with Evelyn, and the consequences that'll follow if he makes a mistake.'''
to:
-->-- '''[[CrazyJealousGuy Asher]] letting Matt Matthew know how lucky he is to be with Evelyn, and the consequences that'll follow if he makes a mistake.'''
Changed line(s) 17 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi about [[LoveConfessor her crush on Matt]].'''
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-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi Jordan about [[LoveConfessor her crush on Matt]].'''
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Changed line(s) 17 (click to see context) from:
-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi about her crush on Matt.'''
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-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi about [[LoveConfessor her crush on Matt.Matt]].'''
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Added DiffLines:
->''"[[SarcasmMode This should be fun...]]"''
-->-- '''Matt's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first line]].'''
->''"Time for Mikey to get to school."''
-->-- '''Mike's first line.'''
->''"[[IJustWantToBeLoved What would it be like to be like that? Talked to. Acknowledged. Actually cared for]]."''
-->-- '''[[LonersAreFreaks Mara]], observing the rest of her classmates hanging out and talking.'''
->''"[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You guys are nothing but worthless bullies]]. Leave her alone!"''
-->-- '''[[BullyHunter Jordi]] standing up for Evelyn against [[TheBully Nate, Dexter and Rose]].'''
->''"[[IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer Listen, if you lay a finger on her with wrong intentions, I will make sure you don't see the light of day]] [[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim cause we both know she can do so much better than you]]. Don't mess it up."''
-->-- '''[[CrazyJealousGuy Asher]] letting Matt know how lucky he is to be with Evelyn, and the consequences that'll follow if he makes a mistake.'''
->''"Yes. I know, it's weird. We never talked before, and we have a few classes together but there's something about him that just...captures my attention."''
-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi about her crush on Matt.'''
-->-- '''Matt's [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first line]].'''
->''"Time for Mikey to get to school."''
-->-- '''Mike's first line.'''
->''"[[IJustWantToBeLoved What would it be like to be like that? Talked to. Acknowledged. Actually cared for]]."''
-->-- '''[[LonersAreFreaks Mara]], observing the rest of her classmates hanging out and talking.'''
->''"[[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech You guys are nothing but worthless bullies]]. Leave her alone!"''
-->-- '''[[BullyHunter Jordi]] standing up for Evelyn against [[TheBully Nate, Dexter and Rose]].'''
->''"[[IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer Listen, if you lay a finger on her with wrong intentions, I will make sure you don't see the light of day]] [[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim cause we both know she can do so much better than you]]. Don't mess it up."''
-->-- '''[[CrazyJealousGuy Asher]] letting Matt know how lucky he is to be with Evelyn, and the consequences that'll follow if he makes a mistake.'''
->''"Yes. I know, it's weird. We never talked before, and we have a few classes together but there's something about him that just...captures my attention."''
-->-- '''Evelyn to Jordi about her crush on Matt.'''
