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->''They were all becoming desperate, but Naofumi even more so. He had a soft spot for kids. It was this soft spot that lead to his early treatment of Raphtalia, it was that softness that lead to him accepting [[TokenHeroicOrc Monti]] and [[AngelicBeauty Filo]] as his kids initially. No matter [[CrapsaccharineWorld how corrupt or evil this world]], the children are born into it as good. [[spoiler:And right now he was loosing one of those innocents.]]''
-->--''Fanfic/FamilyOfTheShield'', '''Chapter 20'''
-->--''Fanfic/FamilyOfTheShield'', '''Chapter 20'''
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->''“Prince of Pleasure?”'' Sweetie asked
->''“Yes, She Who—”''
->''“No, no, I get it. But why is She called the Prince of Pleasure if she’s so bad?”''
->''“Yes, She Who—”''
->''“No, no, I get it. But why is She called the Prince of Pleasure if she’s so bad?”''
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->''“No,
->"No, no, I get it. But why is She called the Prince of Pleasure if she’s so
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->''“Well?”''
->''“H-how old are you, Sweetie Belle?”''
->''“I’m ten.”''
->The ranger nodded. ''“And how old do you need to be in order to be considered an adult?”''
->''“Well, Rarity said it was 18. She had a really big birthday that year.”''
->Oraban nodded. ''“I’ll explain then.”''
->Sweetie Belle blinked. ''“What? But—”''
->''“No more. It is time to eat. After that, we move,”'' he said.
->Sweetie Belle grumbled as Oraban lit a small stove and began to cook the meat. ''“It’s always ‘when you’re older.’ Even in a completely new galaxy…”''
->''“H-how old are you, Sweetie Belle?”''
->''“I’m ten.”''
->The ranger nodded. ''“And how old do you need to be in order to be considered an adult?”''
->''“Well, Rarity said it was 18. She had a really big birthday that year.”''
->Oraban nodded. ''“I’ll explain then.”''
->Sweetie Belle blinked. ''“What? But—”''
->''“No more. It is time to eat. After that, we move,”'' he said.
->Sweetie Belle grumbled as Oraban lit a small stove and began to cook the meat. ''“It’s always ‘when you’re older.’ Even in a completely new galaxy…”''
to:
->''“H-how
->"H-how old are you, Sweetie
->''“I’m
->"I’m ten.
->The ranger nodded.
->''“Well,
->"Well, Rarity said it was 18. She had a really big birthday that year.
->Oraban nodded.
->Sweetie Belle blinked.
->''“No
->"No more. It is time to eat. After that, we
->Sweetie Belle grumbled as Oraban lit a small stove and began to cook the meat.
