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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' How ''could'' you when you never ''existed''?

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' How ''could'' you when you never ~~''existed''?~~''existed?''

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Here, let me spell it out for you! (''Pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Here, let me spell it out for you! (''Pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To ~~You".~~ You", Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into ~~place.)''\\~~place)''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Bub-bub-bub-bub...! But, you haven't heard the best part! Since you were never born...''(A witch places a huge hourglass on the table.)''...once this day comes to an end, so...will...''you''!\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Bub-bub-bub-bub...! But, you haven't heard the best part! Since you were never born...''(A witch places a huge hourglass on the ~~table.)''...~~table)''...once this day comes to an end, so...~~will...''you''!\\~~ will... ''you!''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' [[MoralEventHorizon How's that for a metaphysical paradox?!]] ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED!]] ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''[[RisingEmpire HAPPY OGRE DAY!!!!]]'''''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never ~~born''!~~ born!'' You never met Fiona. Your kids ~~''don't'' '''''exist'''''!~~ ''don't '''exist'''!'' ''(Shrek ~~glares.~~ glares, Rumpel and the witches begin to ~~laugh.)''~~ laugh)'' [[MoralEventHorizon How's that for a metaphysical paradox?!]] ''(Shrek grits his ~~teeth.~~ teeth, Rumpel and the witches laugh even ~~harder.)''~~ harder)'' [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED!]] ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock ~~him.)''~~ him)'' '''''[[RisingEmpire HAPPY OGRE DAY!!!!]]'''''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' No, Shrek. You ''gave it'' to me.\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' No, Shrek. You ~~''gave it''~~ ''[[VillainHasAPoint gave it]]'' to me.\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED!]] ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!!!!'''''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' [[MoralEventHorizon How's that for a metaphysical ~~paradox?!~~ paradox?!]] ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED!]] ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' ~~'''''HAPPY~~ '''''[[RisingEmpire HAPPY OGRE ~~DAY!!!!'''''\\~~DAY!!!!]]'''''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU ~~WANTED!~~ WANTED!]] ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!!!!'''''\\

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'''Shrek:''' [[TearJerker You took the day I was born.]]\\

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'''Shrek:''' ~~[[TearJerker~~ [[DespairEventHorizon You took the day I was born.]]\\

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'''Shrek:''' Where's Fiona? '''WHERE'S MY FAMILY?!'''\\

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'''Shrek:''' Where's Fiona? ~~'''WHERE'S~~ '''[[SuddenlyShouting WHERE'S MY ~~FAMILY?!'''\\~~FAMILY?!]]'''\\

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed contract, if Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed ~~contract, if~~ contract. If Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed contract. To make things worse, is that if Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed ~~contract. To make things worse, is that~~ contract, if Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE ~~DAY!'''''\\~~DAY!!!!'''''\\

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed ~~contract,~~ contract. To make things worse, is that if Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE ~~DAY!!!!'''''\\~~DAY!'''''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!'''''\\
'''Shrek:''' '''''[[UnstoppableRage RUMPEL!]]''''' ''(Lunges at Rumpel, who quickly hides behind the hourglass)''\\
'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, WITCHES!'''''

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE ~~DAY!'''''\\~~
DAY!!!!'''''\\
'''Shrek:''' '''''[[UnstoppableRage ~~RUMPEL!]]'''''~~ RUMPEL!!!]]''''' ''(Lunges at Rumpel, who quickly hides behind the hourglass)''\\
'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, ~~WITCHES!'''''~~WITCHES!!'''''

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* [[BigBad Rumpelstiltskin]] is probably the most psychopathic villain of the ''Shrek'' franchise yet. A conniving and manipulative fiend who specializes in using ExactWords in order to manipulate his victims into signing his cursed ~~contract.~~contract, if Rumpel [[TheBadGuyWins had won]], his villainy would have been even more dangerous.

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Here, let me spell it out for you. (''pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Here, let me spell it out for ~~you. (''pulls~~ you! (''Pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Bub-bub-bub-bub...! But, you haven't heard the best part! Since you were never born...''(A witch places a huge hourglass on the table.)''...Once this day comes to an end, so...will...''you''!\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Bub-bub-bub-bub...! But, you haven't heard the best part! Since you were never born...''(A witch places a huge hourglass on the table.)''...~~Once~~ once this day comes to an end, so...will...''you''!\\

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, WITCHES!''''''''''exist'''''!

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, ~~WITCHES!''''''''''exist'''''!~~WITCHES!'''''

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''!

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' ~~'''''exist'''''!~~'''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!'''''\\
'''Shrek:''' '''''[[UnstoppableRage RUMPEL!]]''''' ''(Lunges at Rumpel, who quickly hides behind the hourglass)''\\
'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, WITCHES!''''''''''exist'''''!

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Then let's add that first bit to it.

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' ''(After pullling out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' ~~''(After pullling~~ Here, let me spell it out for you. (''pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' ''(pulls out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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--->'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' ~~''(pulls~~ ''(After pullling out the "Ogre for a Day" contract from Shrek's vest)'' You gave me a day from your past. A day you couldn’t even remember. A day when you were an innocent, mindless little baby. ''(Hands the contract back to Shrek and strolls off humming "Happy Birthday To You". Shrek stares shocked as the pieces fall into place.)''\\

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Rumpel saying "Get 'im, witches!" at the end is just going nowhere.

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!'''''\\
'''Shrek:''' '''''[[UnstoppableRage RUMPEL!]]''''' ''(Lunges at Rumpel, who quickly hides behind the hourglass)''\\
'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, WITCHES!'''''

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'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' Ha! Silly little ogre. You don't get it, do you? See, you were ''never born''! You never met Fiona. Your kids ''don't'' '''''exist'''''! ''(Shrek glares. Rumpel and the witches begin to laugh.)'' How's that for a metaphysical paradox?! ''(Shrek grits his teeth. Rumpel and the witches laugh even harder.)'' LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANTED! ''(Shrek snarls with intense fury as Rumpel and the witches continue to laugh and mock him.)'' '''''HAPPY OGRE DAY!'''''\\
'''Shrek:''' '''''[[UnstoppableRage RUMPEL!]]''''' ''(Lunges at Rumpel, who quickly hides behind the hourglass)''\\
'''Rumpelstiltskin:''' '''''GET HIM, WITCHES!''''''''''exist'''''!

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