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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop off the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Then just as they are discussing the seeming easyness of the assignment half the house explodes. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop off the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans woman's offer of a drink. Then just as they are discussing the seeming easyness easiness of the assignment half the house explodes. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Then just as they are discussing the seeming easyness of the assignment half the house explodes. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of off the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Then just as they are discussing the seeming easyness of the assignment half the house explodes. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Then just as they are discussing the seeming easyness of the assignment half the house explodes. Had they decided to stay a few seconds or even a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Had they d3cided to stay a few seconds or even minutes more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Had they d3cided decided to stay a few seconds or even minutes a minute more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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[[folder: First Date]]
* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Had they d3cided to stay a few seconds or even minutes more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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[[folder: First Date]]
* The cake explosion. There's a certain amount of eeriness to the scene as John and Jane drop of the package. John seems to sense something is off and proceeds to rush them out of the house. Even turning down the womans offer of a drink. Had they d3cided to stay a few seconds or even minutes more they would have been among the dead. hihi ''wasn't kidding'' when he said that the missions were high risk.
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