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The Forsaken Children is an online, episodic series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus world (home to humans) and the mundane world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genre. The main story is about the adventures of the titular group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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The Forsaken Children is an online, episodic series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus mundane world (home to humans) and the mundane magus world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genre. The main story is about the adventures of the titular group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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The Forsaken Children is an online, episodic series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus world (home to humans) and the mundane world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genrea. The main story is about the adventures of the titiluar group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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The Forsaken Children is an online, episodic series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus world (home to humans) and the mundane world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genrea. genre. The main story is about the adventures of the titiluar titular group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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* AllTrollsAreDifferent: Male trolls resemble those from Norse mythology, while females are considerably more attractive, resembling curvaceous women with troll features.
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* AllTrollsAreDifferent: Male trolls resemble those from Norse mythology, while females are [[CuteMonsterGirl considerably more attractive, attractive]], resembling curvaceous women with troll features.
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** Some of the elementals have this too, examples including treefolk (with males reminiscent of Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy, and females looking pretty normal except for multiple root like legs and tree stump like arms) and banshees (with females that look like what you would expect and males that look like Nosferatu).
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** Some of the elementals have this too, examples including treefolk (with males reminiscent of Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy, and females looking pretty normal humanlike except for multiple root like legs and tree stump like arms) and banshees (with females that look like what you would expect and males that look like Nosferatu).
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* BlobMonster: Slimes, obviously
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* BlobMonster: Slimes, obviously obviously.
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* DealWithTheDevil: Whenever a person makes a deal with a demon, they are usually given whatever they want in exchange for a small piece of their existence (usually their middle name, or a bad memory). Eventually, when the deal is over, the demon will rip my out the person's soul, send it to its own personal hell, and inhabit the remaining shell, altering reality to compensate for the loss.
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The Forsaken Children is an online series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus world (home to humans) and the mundane world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genrea. The main story is about the adventures of the titiluar group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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The Forsaken Children is an online online, episodic series written by Conner Hancock. The series is about the interactions between two worlds: the magus world (home to humans) and the mundane world (home to various creatures of mythology and folklore). Overall, the series is about deconstructing and reinventing several tropes from the fantasy genrea. The main story is about the adventures of the titiluar group, consisting of various creatures from both worlds, fighting against the forces of evil. The current members include:
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** HornyDevils: This only applies to female demons and certain male demons of lust.
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* OurOgresAreHungrier: Males resemble orks from World of Warcraft, while females resemble buff amazons.
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* AllTrollsAreDifferent:
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* AllTrollsAreDifferent: Male trolls resemble those from Norse mythology, while females are considerably more attractive, resembling curvaceous women with troll features.
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*** Subverted with the the sylphs, as they are described as being androgynous in appearance.
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** First off, while elves and dwarves are pretty normal, trolls, goblins, and ogres are bizarre; with the males looking like something from a fairytale, and the females looking pretty by human standards.
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** First off, while elves and dwarves are pretty normal, trolls, goblins, and ogres are bizarre; with the males looking like something from a fairytale, and the females looking pretty attractive by human standards.standards.
** Some of the elementals have this too, examples including treefolk (with males reminiscent of Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy, and females looking pretty normal except for multiple root like legs and tree stump like arms) and banshees (with females that look like what you would expect and males that look like Nosferatu).
*** The undines are probably the weirdest, with females looking like curvaceous women with webbed hands and tentacles for hair, while there are dozens of weird males that resemble humanoid sea life (like crabs, urchins, and anemones).
** Even creatures in the east aren't immune to this, one example being the konakijiji, with males looking like ugly, egg shaped old men, and females looking like attractive women dressed in toddler clothes (no seriously).
** Some of the elementals have this too, examples including treefolk (with males reminiscent of Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy, and females looking pretty normal except for multiple root like legs and tree stump like arms) and banshees (with females that look like what you would expect and males that look like Nosferatu).
*** The undines are probably the weirdest, with females looking like curvaceous women with webbed hands and tentacles for hair, while there are dozens of weird males that resemble humanoid sea life (like crabs, urchins, and anemones).
** Even creatures in the east aren't immune to this, one example being the konakijiji, with males looking like ugly, egg shaped old men, and females looking like attractive women dressed in toddler clothes (no seriously).
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* BizarreSexualDimorphism: Good God, where do we even begin.
** First off, while elves and dwarves are pretty normal, trolls, goblins, and ogres are bizarre; with the males looking like something from a fairytale, and the females looking pretty by human standards.
** First off, while elves and dwarves are pretty normal, trolls, goblins, and ogres are bizarre; with the males looking like something from a fairytale, and the females looking pretty by human standards.
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** Played straight with the house spirits.
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** Played straight with the house spirits. They live in people's houses, do their chores and accept food as payment.
**Also played straight with golems, being made solely for the purpose of servitude.
**Also played straight with golems, being made solely for the purpose of servitude.
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* {{Familiar}}: Brutally
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* {{Familiar}}: Brutally deconstructed, as most familiars are actually monsters formed from animals transformed by magic. They are also fond of torturing, killing, and eating people.
** Played straight with the house spirits.
** Played straight with the house spirits.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: They come in a variety of different forms based on the seven deadly sins, as morally ambiguous as humans, and are essentially living souls rather than flesh and blood beings. They are also able to remove the souls from people in order to possess their bodies as a sort of meat puppet.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent:
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent:OurAngelsAreDifferent: They come in a variety of forms based on the seven heavenly virtues, and are as morally ambiguous as humans are. Also, like demons, they are actually living souls rather than flesh and blood beings.
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* GeniusLoci: Any place that is frequented by people enough can become one after being exposed to enough emotional energy and latent magic.
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* TarotMotif: Strigoi vampires have their entire society themed after the major arcana (I.e. Recently sired vampires are called fools, scientists are referred to as magicians, etc.).
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* TarotMotif: TarotMotifs: Strigoi vampires have their entire society themed after the major arcana (I.e. Recently sired vampires are called fools, scientists are referred to as magicians, etc.).
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* TarotMotif: Strigoi vampires have their entire society themed after the major arcana (I.e. Recently sired vampires are called fools, scientists are referred to as magicians, etc.).
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* ObliviouslyEvil: While evil per se, but elementals do believe that their doing the children they take a service, spiriting them away from abusive parents and awful lives. However, considering that a large majority of elementals have no understanding of human behavior, they usually end up taking children from good families just as often as they take them from bad families.
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* ObliviouslyEvil: While not evil per se, but elementals do believe that their doing the children they take a service, spiriting them away from abusive parents and awful lives. However, considering that a large majority of elementals have no understanding of human behavior, they usually end up taking children from good families just as often as they take them from bad families.
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* ObliviouslyEvil: While evil per se, but elementals do believe that their doing the children they take a service, spiriting them away from abusive parents and awful lives. However, considering that a large majority of elementals have no understanding of human behavior, they usually end up taking children from good families just as often as they take them from bad families.
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: The magus world is separated into four parts: the West is based on a mix of American and Western European cultures, the East is a mix of Chinese and Japanese culture, the north is a mix of Greek and Nordic culture, and the South is a mix of several Southern cultures (Mexico, Brazil, Southern Africa, India, etc.).
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: FantasyCounterpartCulture: The magus world is separated into four parts: the West is based on a mix of American and Western European cultures, the East is a mix of Chinese and Japanese culture, the north is a mix of Greek and Nordic culture, and the South is a mix of several Southern cultures (Mexico, Brazil, Southern Africa, India, etc.).
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* FantasyCultureCounterpart: The magus world is separated into four parts: the West is based on a mix of American and Western European cultures, the East is a mix of Chinese and Japanese culture, the north is a mix of Greek and Nordic culture, and the South is a mix of several Southern cultures (Mexico, Brazil, Southern Africa, India, etc.).
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Leon's friendship with changelings seems to be like this.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Leon's friendship with the changelings seems to be like this.
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* PetHumans: Humanimals were humans who brought into the magus world centuries ago by elementals as an early attempt to create changeling's from adults. However, that failed, and the humans devolved into animalistic creatures. Eventually, they were domesticated by the fae and made into pets.
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* PetHumans: HumanPet: Humanimals were humans who brought into the magus world centuries ago by elementals as an early attempt to create changeling's from adults. However, that failed, and the humans devolved into animalistic creatures. Eventually, they were domesticated by the fae and made into pets.
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* PetHuman: Humanimals were humans who brought into the magus world centuries ago by elementals as an early attempt to create changeling's from adults. However, that failed, and the humans devolved into animalistic creatures. Eventually, they were domesticated by the fae and made into pets.
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* PetHuman: PetHumans: Humanimals were humans who brought into the magus world centuries ago by elementals as an early attempt to create changeling's from adults. However, that failed, and the humans devolved into animalistic creatures. Eventually, they were domesticated by the fae and made into pets.
