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[[https://www.alternatehistory.com/forum/threads/the-consequences-of-an-errant-shell-story-only-thread.387945/ The Consequences of an Errant Shell]] is a story in Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom , written by [=johnboy=], with an interesting premise, that hasn't been explored that much by the alternate history community: what if the Russian Empire won the Battle of the Yellow Sea due to a lucky shell hit?
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[[https://www.alternatehistory.com/forum/threads/the-consequences-of-an-errant-shell-story-only-thread.387945/ The Consequences of an Errant Shell]] is a story in Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom , Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom, written by [=johnboy=], with an interesting premise, that hasn't been explored that much by the alternate history community: what if the Russian Empire won the Battle of the Yellow Sea due to a lucky shell hit?
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** [[spoiler: A lucky shell from one of the Russian battleships, causing the destruction of the Mikasa, and the Japanese into dissary, which led to a Russian victory.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the victory in the Yellow Sea, a drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the victory in the Yellow Sea, a drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
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** [[spoiler: A [[spoiler:A lucky shell from one of the Russian battleships, causing the destruction of the Mikasa, and sending the Japanese into dissary, disarray, which led to a Russian victory.]]
**[[spoiler: Due [[spoiler:Due to the victory in the Yellow Sea, a drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo to get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
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** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
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** [[spoiler:Roman von Stenburg. Gets imprisoned for killing an ex-Bolsheivk. Latter, in Second World War, he's released and takes command of a penal division. Kills Shiro Ishii in a brutal manner.]]
** [[spoiler:Creator/VladimirPutin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
** [[spoiler:Creator/VladimirPutin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
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** [[spoiler:Roman von Stenburg. Gets imprisoned for killing an ex-Bolsheivk. Latter, in the Second World War, he's released and takes command of a penal division. Kills Shiro Ishii in a brutal manner.]]
** [[spoiler:Creator/VladimirPutin still becomes a spy. But due tomaternal internal affairs, he was reduced to a simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]East.]]
** [[spoiler:Creator/VladimirPutin still becomes a spy. But due to
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[[https://www.alternatehistory.com/forum/threads/the-consequences-of-an-errant-shell-story-only-thread.387945/ The Consequences of an Errant Shell]] is a story in Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom , written by [=johnboy=], with an interesting premise, that hasn't been explored that much by the alternate history community: what if the Russian Empire, Empire won the Battle of the Yellow Sea, Sea due to a lucky shell hit?
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* DeathByAdaptation: Some famous people die much earlier than they did OTL.
** [[spoiler: UsefulNotes/JosefStalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, UsefulNotes/VladimirLenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
** [[spoiler: UsefulNotes/JosefStalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, UsefulNotes/VladimirLenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
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** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
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** [[spoiler:Vladimir Putin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
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** [[spoiler:Vladimir Putin [[spoiler:Creator/VladimirPutin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]East]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
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** [[spoiler: A drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
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** [[spoiler: A drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt lucky shell from slipping on one of the Russian battleships, causing the destruction of the Mikasa, and the Japanese into dissary, which led to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.Russian victory.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the victory in the Yellow Sea, a drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the victory in the Yellow Sea, a drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
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* For Want of a Nail: The story hinges on this story element.
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* For Want of a Nail: AlternateHistory: Of course.
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** [[spoiler:Vladimir Putin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]East]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
* Laser-GuidedKarma:
** [[spoiler:Oskar Direwalnger and his band of raping murderers, were destroyed by some Cossaks]]
* AnotherOneBitesTheDust: Some famous people have very different fates in this timeline.
** [[spoiler: Joseph Stalin was hanged in 1907 due to 1907 Tiflis Robbery, Vladimir Lenin was shot in 1919 for high treason.]]
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Answer: Russian Empire becomes a constitutional monarchy, with a British-styled parliament, and Russia (and the world), being much better compared to our timeline.
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Answer: Russian Empire becomes a constitutional monarchy, with a British-styled parliament, and Russia (and the world), being is much better compared to our timeline.timeline.
* For Want of a Nail: The story hinges on this story element.
** [[spoiler: A drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
* RichardNixonTheUsedCarSalesman: A few interesting (some humorous) examples of this come about such as:
** [[spoiler:Roman von Stenburg. Gets imprisoned for killing an ex-Bolsheivk. Latter, in Second World War, he's released and takes command of a penal division. Kills Shiro Ishii in a brutal manner.]]
** [[spoiler:Vladimir Putin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
* For Want of a Nail: The story hinges on this story element.
** [[spoiler: A drunk Tsar caused Alexandra to awake, only yo get hurt from slipping on to a laid out toy and Alexi to be stillborn, and forcing the Tsar to enact political reforms.]]
* RichardNixonTheUsedCarSalesman: A few interesting (some humorous) examples of this come about such as:
** [[spoiler:Roman von Stenburg. Gets imprisoned for killing an ex-Bolsheivk. Latter, in Second World War, he's released and takes command of a penal division. Kills Shiro Ishii in a brutal manner.]]
** [[spoiler:Vladimir Putin still becomes a spy. But due to maternal affairs, he was reduced to simple border guard in Russia's Far East]]
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[[https://www.alternatehistory.com/forum/threads/the-consequences-of-an-errant-shell-story-only-thread.387945/ The Consequences of an Errant Shell]] is a story in Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom , written by [=johnboy=], with an interesting premise, that hasn't been explored that much by the alternate history community: what if the Russian Empire, won the Battle of the Yellow Sea, due to a lucky shell hit?
Answer: Russian Empire becomes a constitutional monarchy, with a British-styled parliament, and Russia (and the world), being much better compared to our timeline.
Answer: Russian Empire becomes a constitutional monarchy, with a British-styled parliament, and Russia (and the world), being much better compared to our timeline.
