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* DeconstructedCharacterArchetype: Of the VillainProtagonist. Kenneth Muntz has a sympathetic motive, just trying to make enough money to pay the rent, but his willingness to cross any moral line, his sick pleasure in carrying out his twisted crimes, and his sheer pettiness make him wholly unsympathetic. He also lacks any genuine charisma or charm, leaving nothing but an utterly contemptible HateSink for readers to despise.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Ken knows exactly what buttons to press and lies to tell, be it while dealing with his landlord, destroying his neighbors' relationship, guilt-tripping his ex, or [[spoiler: luring girls off the internet to ruthlessly butcher]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Ken knows exactly what buttons to press and lies to tell, be it while dealing with his landlord, destroying his neighbors' relationship, guilt-tripping his ex, or [[spoiler: luring girls off the internet to ruthlessly butcher]].butcher]].
* PreMortemOneLiner: [[spoiler: "Your pain is my profit"]]
* PreMortemOneLiner: [[spoiler: "Your pain is my profit"]]
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* AdultFear: Part of Ken's motivation is that he wants to avoid the tribulations of his rough childhood on the streets. He is truly terrified of his landlord's threats of eviction, as he'll have to live without a home again. In seeking to avoid this outcome, he abandons every semblance of humanity he has.
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* AdultFear: [[FreudianExcuse Part of Ken's motivation motivation]] is that he wants to avoid the tribulations of his rough childhood on the streets. He is truly terrified of his landlord's threats of eviction, as he'll have to live without a home again. In seeking to avoid this outcome, he abandons every semblance of humanity he has.
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* AdultFear: Part of Ken's motivation is that he wants to avoid the tribulations of his rough childhood on the streets. He is truly terrified of his landlord's threats of eviction, as he'll have to live without a home again. In seeking to avoid this outcome, he abandons every semblance of humanity he has.
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
[[LampshadeHanging Ken even lampshades how annoying this trope must be to the audience]]]].
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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Ken's MO is to use a poison to paralyze his victims, before bashing their heads in with a hammer, butchering their bodies and selling their meat on the black market.]]
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: A dark example. Ken routinely plays a game with gas station attendant Roy where Roy attempts to make Ken laugh, to no avail. The only time Ken genuinely laughs in the whole story is after deliberately destroying his neighbors' relationship, laughing his ass off as Fred and Kacey have an altercation outside his door.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: A dark example. Ken routinely plays a game with gas station attendant Roy where Roy attempts to make Ken laugh, laugh with dark jokes, to no avail. The only time Ken genuinely laughs in the whole story is after deliberately destroying his neighbors' relationship, laughing his ass off as Fred and Kacey have an altercation outside his door.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: A dark example. Ken routinely plays a game with gas station attendant Roy where Roy attempts to make Ken laugh, to no avail. The only time Ken genuinely laughs in the whole story is after deliberately destroying his neighbors' relationship, laughing his ass off as Fred and Kacey have an altercation outside his door.
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* BerserkButton: Ken is an emotionless individual throughout most of the script, but when Sanchez threatens to render him homeless, he completely loses his cool. He similarly flips his lid when he sees his ex-girlfriend at the flower shop, [[spoiler: and his killing spree is partly the result of his other major berserk button: [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain women]].
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* BerserkButton: Ken is an emotionless individual throughout most of the script, but when Sanchez threatens to render him homeless, he completely loses his cool. He similarly flips his lid when he sees his ex-girlfriend at the flower shop, [[spoiler: and his killing spree is partly the result of his other major berserk button: [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain women]].
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* BerserkButton: Ken is an emotionless individual throughout most of the script, but when Sanchez threatens to render him homeless, he completely loses his cool. He similarly flips his lid when he sees his ex-girlfriend at the flower shop, [[spoiler: and his killing spree is partly the result of his other major berserk button: [[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain women]].
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Ken's threat to Sanchez, after the landlord manages to genuinely scare Ken with the prospect of being on the streets again. [[SubvertedTrope Sanchez finds it hilarious]], and admires Ken's "balls".
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*ItAmusedMe: Ken derails his neighbors' relationship for, in his own words, "stress relief".
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* KarmaHoudini: [[Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: [[Muntz [[spoiler: Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
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* {{Jerkass}}: Besides Kenneth, there's Sanchez, his abrasive, perpetually smug landlord.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Besides Kenneth, there's Sanchez, his abrasive, perpetually smug landlord.landlord.
* KarmaHoudini: [[Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: Ken knows exactly what buttons to press and lies to tell, be it while dealing with his landlord, destroying his neighbors' relationship, guilt-tripping his ex, or [[spoiler: luring girls off the internet to ruthlessly butcher]].
* KarmaHoudini: [[Muntz gets away with ''everything'', and makes it clear that he's no where near finished.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: Ken knows exactly what buttons to press and lies to tell, be it while dealing with his landlord, destroying his neighbors' relationship, guilt-tripping his ex, or [[spoiler: luring girls off the internet to ruthlessly butcher]].
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* TheGunmanWithThreeNames: In his closing monologue, Ken refers to himself by his full name of "Kenneth Jason Muntz".
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* ImAHumanitarian: Subverted. [[spoiler: Ken is not a cannibal himself, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: Subverted. [[spoiler: Ken is not a cannibal himself, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].web]].
* {{Jerkass}}: Besides Kenneth, there's Sanchez, his abrasive, perpetually smug landlord.
* {{Jerkass}}: Besides Kenneth, there's Sanchez, his abrasive, perpetually smug landlord.
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: Ken is not a cannibal, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: Subverted. [[spoiler: Ken is not a cannibal, cannibal himself, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[Ken is not a cannibal, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* ImAHumanitarian: [[Ken [[spoiler: Ken is not a cannibal, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Ken is shown to have gone from being an meek kid raised on hard streets to a [[spoiler: vicious, vindictive serial killer of young women]].
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: Ken is shown to have gone from being an meek kid raised on hard streets to a [[spoiler: vicious, vindictive serial killer of young women]].women]].
* ImAHumanitarian: [[Ken is not a cannibal, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
* ImAHumanitarian: [[Ken is not a cannibal, he's a self-proclaimed "businessman" who sells freshly-butchered human meat to cannibals on the dark web]].
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In his second scene, Ken gives the first (of very few) genuine smiles, right after pickpocketing Fred's credit card and phone, showing right away he's not a very nice person. As the story progresses, this is revealed to be a ''massive'' understatement.
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Kenneth Jason Muntz is a seemingly typical American young adult, keeping to himself and trying his hardest just to keep the lights on. A [[DarkAndTroubledPast tough upbringing]] has molded him into an [[TheStoic emotionally cold]] person, and while he projects an outwardly affable persona to his [[TheStoner unwitting neighbors]], he is hiding a dark, dark secret. And with the onslaught of winter approaching and his CrankyLandlord threatening eviction, Ken finds his MaskOfSanity slowly start to slip...
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Kenneth Jason Muntz is a seemingly typical American young adult, keeping to himself fending off constant stress headaches and trying his hardest just to keep the lights on.on at his run-down apartment. A [[DarkAndTroubledPast tough upbringing]] has molded him into an [[TheStoic emotionally cold]] person, and while he projects an outwardly affable persona to his [[TheStoner unwitting neighbors]], he is hiding a dark, dark secret. And with the onslaught of winter approaching and his CrankyLandlord threatening eviction, Ken finds his MaskOfSanity slowly start to slip...
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Ken's apartment is described as littered with air fresheners. Gives you a slight clue what exactly he's up to...
** After seeing the homeless man at the gas station, Ken recalls his own childhood without a roof over his head. Upon coming back to his senses, he immediately drives off, not paying the impoverished man any mind, his indifference seeming weird considering he was once in the same situation. [[spoiler: Then his status as a heartless egotist is revealed, and it all makes sense.]]
** Ken's apartment is described as littered with air fresheners. Gives you a slight clue what exactly he's up to...
** After seeing the homeless man at the gas station, Ken recalls his own childhood without a roof over his head. Upon coming back to his senses, he immediately drives off, not paying the impoverished man any mind, his indifference seeming weird considering he was once in the same situation. [[spoiler: Then his status as a heartless egotist is revealed, and it all makes sense.]]
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* FourEyesZeroSoul: Kenneth Muntz.
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* FourEyesZeroSoul: Kenneth Muntz.Muntz.
*FromNobodyToNightmare: Ken is shown to have gone from being an meek kid raised on hard streets to a [[spoiler: vicious, vindictive serial killer of young women]].
*FromNobodyToNightmare: Ken is shown to have gone from being an meek kid raised on hard streets to a [[spoiler: vicious, vindictive serial killer of young women]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: His interactions with nearly every character in the story shows that Ken has at least a surface-level understanding of human interaction, but he can turn the charm of like a faucet. [[spoiler: This is a crucial instrument in his ability to lure victims to their doom]].
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* DrivenToVillainy: Played with with Ken. It's left up to interpretation if his psychopathy is his nature, or how he learned to cope with the cruel environment of his upbringing.
* FauxAffablyEvil: His interactions with nearly every character in the story shows that Ken has at least a surface-level understanding of human interaction, but he can turn the charmof on and off like a faucet. [[spoiler: This is a crucial instrument in his ability to lure victims to their doom]].doom]].
* FourEyesZeroSoul: Kenneth Muntz.
* FauxAffablyEvil: His interactions with nearly every character in the story shows that Ken has at least a surface-level understanding of human interaction, but he can turn the charm
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ken's raison d'etre. He destroys Fred and Kacey's relationship for simply ''annoying him''; throwing salt-in-the-wound is the fact that the two are shown to be one of the only people in the story to be genuinely nice to him. [[spoiler: Turns out this is, at least in part, the motive behind his killing spree; his girlfriend dumped him, so he's taken it upon himself to wage war on womankind, blaming them for his failings in love]].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ken's raison d'etre. He destroys Fred and Kacey's relationship for simply ''annoying him''; throwing salt-in-the-wound is the fact that the two are shown to be one of the only people in the story to be genuinely nice to him. [[spoiler: Turns out this is, at least in part, the motive behind his killing spree; his girlfriend dumped him, so he's taken it upon himself to wage war on womankind, blaming them for his failings in love]].love]].
* FauxAffablyEvil: His interactions with nearly every character in the story shows that Ken has at least a surface-level understanding of human interaction, but he can turn the charm of like a faucet. [[spoiler: This is a crucial instrument in his ability to lure victims to their doom]].
* FauxAffablyEvil: His interactions with nearly every character in the story shows that Ken has at least a surface-level understanding of human interaction, but he can turn the charm of like a faucet. [[spoiler: This is a crucial instrument in his ability to lure victims to their doom]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Ken has a brief flashback that shows that he spent an indeterminate amount of time in his childhood homeless. His monologue to his [[spoiler: victim]] implies that his parents were the kind of people he's describes as "slaving away at dead end jobs" for nothing but ruin. [[FreudianExcuse This, at least partially, explains]] his self-centered, cutthroat ideology, as he believes if he is to "win" at life, he has to be "willing to cheat".
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*BlackComedy:
** Ken threatens to cut open his landlord's throat and pull his spine and skull out through the gash. Then, for extra detail, he says he'll hang them on his Christmas tree. Sanchez [[ActuallyPrettyFunny finds this hilarious]].
** Fred, in the midst of a weed binge following his fall-out with Kacey, attempts to confide with Ken. Unbeknownst to him, [[spoiler: Ken is attempting to clean up the scene of his latest murder. When Fred notices two glasses on Ken's table, indicating Ken has a guest, Ken simply replies "what glasses", successfully gaslighting the stoned Fred]].
** Roy's attempt to make the infamously stoic Ken laugh involves a joke about a little boy being [[spoiler: circumcised during an earthquake]]. Considering Ken's own... activities, it's incredible this doesn't even provoke a response from him.
** Ken threatens to cut open his landlord's throat and pull his spine and skull out through the gash. Then, for extra detail, he says he'll hang them on his Christmas tree. Sanchez [[ActuallyPrettyFunny finds this hilarious]].
** Fred, in the midst of a weed binge following his fall-out with Kacey, attempts to confide with Ken. Unbeknownst to him, [[spoiler: Ken is attempting to clean up the scene of his latest murder. When Fred notices two glasses on Ken's table, indicating Ken has a guest, Ken simply replies "what glasses", successfully gaslighting the stoned Fred]].
** Roy's attempt to make the infamously stoic Ken laugh involves a joke about a little boy being [[spoiler: circumcised during an earthquake]]. Considering Ken's own... activities, it's incredible this doesn't even provoke a response from him.
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** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] with Ken's neighbors. Ken finds Fred and Kacey deeply annoying, but they're really nothing but nice and cordial to him. Makes it all seem insanely petty on Ken's part when he deliberately sabotages their relationship by playing on growing tensions for [[ItAmusedMe shits and giggles]].
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** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] with Ken's neighbors. Ken finds Fred and Kacey deeply annoying, but they're really nothing but nice and cordial to him. Makes it all seem insanely petty on Ken's part when he deliberately sabotages their relationship by playing on growing tensions for [[ItAmusedMe shits and giggles]].giggles]].
* AxCrazy: Ken's brutal threat to Sanchez halfway through is just the tip of the iceberg of just how unstable he really is.
*TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler: Ken Muntz, revealed to be a malicious, misogynistic SerialKiller, gets enough income from his illicit dealings to move to a better apartment, and promises to continue his murderous ways until he's caught or killed]].
*DisproportionateRetribution: Ken's raison d'etre. He destroys Fred and Kacey's relationship for simply ''annoying him''; throwing salt-in-the-wound is the fact that the two are shown to be one of the only people in the story to be genuinely nice to him. [[spoiler: Turns out this is, at least in part, the motive behind his killing spree; his girlfriend dumped him, so he's taken it upon himself to wage war on womankind, blaming them for his failings in love]].
* AxCrazy: Ken's brutal threat to Sanchez halfway through is just the tip of the iceberg of just how unstable he really is.
*TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler: Ken Muntz, revealed to be a malicious, misogynistic SerialKiller, gets enough income from his illicit dealings to move to a better apartment, and promises to continue his murderous ways until he's caught or killed]].
*DisproportionateRetribution: Ken's raison d'etre. He destroys Fred and Kacey's relationship for simply ''annoying him''; throwing salt-in-the-wound is the fact that the two are shown to be one of the only people in the story to be genuinely nice to him. [[spoiler: Turns out this is, at least in part, the motive behind his killing spree; his girlfriend dumped him, so he's taken it upon himself to wage war on womankind, blaming them for his failings in love]].
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* AssholeVictim:
** [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Sanchez. While threatening to throw Ken out into the streets in the dead of winter and relishing the thought of his frozen corpse is harsh, his anger is a bit justified as Ken has been dodging his payments for weeks. Still, it's a little satisfying when Ken gives him a vicious threat on his life, but this "comeuppance" is [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] when Sanchez simply laughs it off.
** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] with Ken's neighbors. Ken finds Fred and Kacey deeply annoying, but they're really nothing but nice and cordial to him. Makes it all seem insanely petty on Ken's part when he deliberately sabotages their relationship by playing on growing tensions for [[ItAmusedMe shits and giggles]].
* AssholeVictim:
** [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Sanchez. While threatening to throw Ken out into the streets in the dead of winter and relishing the thought of his frozen corpse is harsh, his anger is a bit justified as Ken has been dodging his payments for weeks. Still, it's a little satisfying when Ken gives him a vicious threat on his life, but this "comeuppance" is [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] when Sanchez simply laughs it off.
** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] with Ken's neighbors. Ken finds Fred and Kacey deeply annoying, but they're really nothing but nice and cordial to him. Makes it all seem insanely petty on Ken's part when he deliberately sabotages their relationship by playing on growing tensions for [[ItAmusedMe shits and giggles]].
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->''Life is a game that no one ever wins...''
->''Unless they're willing to cheat...''\\
''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KwWt1NrFV-AsholqfTIJbUXu-FznRLTj/view Migraine]]'' is a black comedy/horror screenplay written by Tropers/JoeBlitz.
Kenneth Jason Muntz is a seemingly typical American young adult, keeping to himself and trying his hardest just to keep the lights on. A [[DarkAndTroubledPast tough upbringing]] has molded him into an [[TheStoic emotionally cold]] person, and while he projects an outwardly affable persona to his [[TheStoner unwitting neighbors]], he is hiding a dark, dark secret. And with the onslaught of winter approaching and his CrankyLandlord threatening eviction, Ken finds his MaskOfSanity slowly start to slip...
Conceived as a simple writing exercise, ''Migraine'' is the writer's attempt to show a day in the life of a cold-blooded sociopath, while providing only enough information for the [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation reader to draw their own conclusions]]. It is also an examination of the lengths that the average person will go to to make money, and to show that no matter how sympathetic and understandable a FreudianExcuse may seem, once you [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope leap down the rabbit hole]], there's no turning back.
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!! ''Migraine'' provides examples of...
->''Unless they're willing to cheat...''\\
''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KwWt1NrFV-AsholqfTIJbUXu-FznRLTj/view Migraine]]'' is a black comedy/horror screenplay written by Tropers/JoeBlitz.
Kenneth Jason Muntz is a seemingly typical American young adult, keeping to himself and trying his hardest just to keep the lights on. A [[DarkAndTroubledPast tough upbringing]] has molded him into an [[TheStoic emotionally cold]] person, and while he projects an outwardly affable persona to his [[TheStoner unwitting neighbors]], he is hiding a dark, dark secret. And with the onslaught of winter approaching and his CrankyLandlord threatening eviction, Ken finds his MaskOfSanity slowly start to slip...
Conceived as a simple writing exercise, ''Migraine'' is the writer's attempt to show a day in the life of a cold-blooded sociopath, while providing only enough information for the [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation reader to draw their own conclusions]]. It is also an examination of the lengths that the average person will go to to make money, and to show that no matter how sympathetic and understandable a FreudianExcuse may seem, once you [[JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope leap down the rabbit hole]], there's no turning back.
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!! ''Migraine'' provides examples of...