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When the serious-minded, no-fun Laconic/StraightMan has maintained dignity with a straight face suddenly relaxes and joins in the fun.
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When the serious-minded, no-fun Laconic/StraightMan who has maintained dignity with a straight face suddenly relaxes and joins in the fun.
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When the Laconic/StraightMan takes a fall in his standards, loosening up and joining in the fun.
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When the serious-minded, no-fun Laconic/StraightMan takes has maintained dignity with a fall in his standards, loosening up straight face suddenly relaxes and joining joins in the fun.
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When the Laconic/StraightMan takes a fall in his standards.
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When the Laconic/StraightMan takes a fall in his standards.standards, loosening up and joining in the fun.
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When the StraightMan takes a fall in his standards.
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When the StraightMan Laconic/StraightMan takes a fall in his standards.
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