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* HeartwarmingInHindsight makes itself known in two shining moments during the back half of this chapter following revelations regarding Henry's past in Mission 97;
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* Though somewhat bittersweet because Henry never realized Martha's feelings and Martha never acted on them, this Mission nonetheless featured a cavalcade of heartwarming moments relating to their past in Eden together;
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* HeartwarmingInHindsight in two shining moments during the back half of this chapter following revelations regarding Henry's past in Mission 97;
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* Though somewhat bittersweet because Henry never realized Martha's feelings and Martha never acted on them, this Mission nonetheless featured a cavalcade of heartwarming moments relating to their past in Eden together;
** Martha went out of her way to befriend Henry after the latter was stunned into professing her ballet performance for the school 'elegant,' as she was possibly enamored someone thought so highly of her craft. Though he chided her continuously for not acting in a noble manner, the two came to be friends.
** Henry, a staunch pacifist even from his youth, resorted to violence in the defense of Martha, who not seconds earlier risked ''herself'' to stop several bullies from harming Henry, after the third bully surprised her.
** The reader learns it was ultimately ''Martha'' who inspired Henry to be a teacher in the first place, as her disbelief over Henry finding a way to stop the bullies from bullying him ''without'' using violence compelled him to take the 'proper breeding' approach and become an educator who stressed harmony and cooperation. So certain was Henry in his beliefs, he was convinced he could maybe even stymie ''war.''
** It's clear that Henry's influence on Martha pervaded much of her life; she continued his tea-time legacy after Henry graduated, became an Imperial Scholar with his blessing, and would grow to be an even-mannered, proper lady, much in Henry's vein.
* Silly as it is, Martha's ballet performance in Eden Academy would start Henry's lifelong habit of peppering his speech with 'elegant' and 'elegance.' Her performance ''set a life standard.''
* Though somewhat bittersweet because Henry never realized Martha's feelings and Martha never acted on them, this Mission nonetheless featured a cavalcade of heartwarming moments relating to their past in Eden together;
** Martha went out of her way to befriend Henry after the latter was stunned into professing her ballet performance for the school 'elegant,' as she was possibly enamored someone thought so highly of her craft. Though he chided her continuously for not acting in a noble manner, the two came to be friends.
** Henry, a staunch pacifist even from his youth, resorted to violence in the defense of Martha, who not seconds earlier risked ''herself'' to stop several bullies from harming Henry, after the third bully surprised her.
** The reader learns it was ultimately ''Martha'' who inspired Henry to be a teacher in the first place, as her disbelief over Henry finding a way to stop the bullies from bullying him ''without'' using violence compelled him to take the 'proper breeding' approach and become an educator who stressed harmony and cooperation. So certain was Henry in his beliefs, he was convinced he could maybe even stymie ''war.''
** It's clear that Henry's influence on Martha pervaded much of her life; she continued his tea-time legacy after Henry graduated, became an Imperial Scholar with his blessing, and would grow to be an even-mannered, proper lady, much in Henry's vein.
* Silly as it is, Martha's ballet performance in Eden Academy would start Henry's lifelong habit of peppering his speech with 'elegant' and 'elegance.' Her performance ''set a life standard.''
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* HeartwarmingInHindsight in two shining moments during the back half of this chapter following revelations regarding Henry's past in Mission 97;
** In Mission 97, it's revealed Henry discovered a passion for teaching when he became convinced he could use education to end war and stop conflict. Despite that passion dulling over the years, being put back into a teaching position reminded him of everything he stood for. It's no wonder he put forth a good word for the Forgers to get Anya into Eden Academy after Loid's actions led Henry back to his true calling.
** Though a staunch opponent of violence and a pacifist ''tres elegant,'' Henry ultimately decides to use his backing to get Anya's punishment for attacking Damian down to one tonitrus instead of three. As revealed in Mission 97, Henry himself was in a similar situation (though his tonitrus were brushed aside for the sake of silencing a scandal) once when Martha attacked bullies menacing him and he defended Marta in turn after she was grabbed from behind by the last bully. Given Anya's ploy, Henry was ''convinced'' Anya was protecting Becky when Anya punched Damian, and probably remembered his own circumstances - violence may be inelegant, but exceptions could be made for the sake of defending others.
* HeartwarmingInHindsight in two shining moments during the back half of this chapter following revelations regarding Henry's past in Mission 97;
** In Mission 97, it's revealed Henry discovered a passion for teaching when he became convinced he could use education to end war and stop conflict. Despite that passion dulling over the years, being put back into a teaching position reminded him of everything he stood for. It's no wonder he put forth a good word for the Forgers to get Anya into Eden Academy after Loid's actions led Henry back to his true calling.
** Though a staunch opponent of violence and a pacifist ''tres elegant,'' Henry ultimately decides to use his backing to get Anya's punishment for attacking Damian down to one tonitrus instead of three. As revealed in Mission 97, Henry himself was in a similar situation (though his tonitrus were brushed aside for the sake of silencing a scandal) once when Martha attacked bullies menacing him and he defended Marta in turn after she was grabbed from behind by the last bully. Given Anya's ploy, Henry was ''convinced'' Anya was protecting Becky when Anya punched Damian, and probably remembered his own circumstances - violence may be inelegant, but exceptions could be made for the sake of defending others.
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* The last panels of it is the VIP thanking Yor for everything and letting her hug her baby. She also reassures Yor is doing the right thing as her literally blood stained hands allowed her child to grow up.
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* The last panels of it is the VIP are Olka thanking Yor for everything and letting her hug her baby. She also reassures Yor is doing the right thing as her literally blood stained hands allowed her child to grow up.
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** It become more heartwarming when you realize that the first person that Anya tells her secret is not his father, neither his mother, neither her best friend, is Damian, showing that at first she only saw him as his goal, she is having a genuine affection for him.
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** It become more heartwarming when you realize that the first person that Anya tells her secret is not his father, neither his her father nor her mother, neither or even her best friend, is friend; it's Damian, showing that demonstrating that, while at first she only saw getting close to him as his a goal, she is having a now holds genuine affection for him.
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* Right at the end of the chapter, while they're dancing together, Damien asks Anya how she knew a secret story about his childhood, rhetorically asking her whether she can read minds. And then, in a sudden spontaneous act of ''absolute'' trust, ''Anya tells him '''[[WhamLine "Yes. I can read people's minds."]]''''' [[IgnoredConfession Damien doesn't believe it, of course]], and [[{{Tsundere}} they start squabbling again]], but the chapter ends with one of Anya's score updates: '''"Anya & Damien friendship: +100"'''.
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* Right at the end of the chapter, while they're dancing together, Damien Damian asks Anya how she knew a secret story about his childhood, rhetorically asking her whether she can read minds. And then, in a sudden spontaneous act of ''absolute'' trust, ''Anya tells him '''[[WhamLine "Yes. I can read people's minds."]]''''' [[IgnoredConfession Damien Damian doesn't believe it, of course]], and [[{{Tsundere}} they start squabbling again]], but the chapter ends with one of Anya's score updates: '''"Anya & Damien Damian friendship: +100"'''.
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* After Anya wins the contest to dance with Damian, Ewen and Emil angrily insist that Anya should not be the one to dance with Damian, but Damian says that since she won the contest fair and square he asks her for a dance. Although their interaction is awkward at first they do get into a rhythm and start dancing, with Damian complimenting Loid for teaching her to dance.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they too also step onto the dance floor.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they too also step onto the dance floor.
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* After Anya wins the contest to dance with Damian, Ewen and Emil angrily insist that Anya should not be the one to dance with Damian, but Damian says that since she won the contest fair and square he asks her for a dance. Although their interaction is awkward at first they do get into a rhythm and start dancing, with Damian complimenting Loid for teaching her to dance.
dance. He also says with a warm smile that her family sounds nice.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they tooalso step onto the dance floor. floor.
* Right at the end of the chapter, while they're dancing together, Damien asks Anya how she knew a secret story about his childhood, rhetorically asking her whether she can read minds. And then, in a sudden spontaneous act of ''absolute'' trust, ''Anya tells him '''[[WhamLine "Yes. I can read people's minds."]]''''' [[IgnoredConfession Damien doesn't believe it, of course]], and [[{{Tsundere}} they start squabbling again]], but the chapter ends with one of Anya's score updates: '''"Anya & Damien friendship: +100"'''.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they too
* Right at the end of the chapter, while they're dancing together, Damien asks Anya how she knew a secret story about his childhood, rhetorically asking her whether she can read minds. And then, in a sudden spontaneous act of ''absolute'' trust, ''Anya tells him '''[[WhamLine "Yes. I can read people's minds."]]''''' [[IgnoredConfession Damien doesn't believe it, of course]], and [[{{Tsundere}} they start squabbling again]], but the chapter ends with one of Anya's score updates: '''"Anya & Damien friendship: +100"'''.
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* Ewen and Emile hold a contest to see which girl has the right to dance with their Lord Damian, which consists of an obstacle course and a trivia contest. Anya barely manages to pass the physical part with some help from Loid, and through brute force, though that latter part was as much a liability as an asset. During the trivia part Anya uses her mind reading to get ahead of the other girls, but when the question "who does Damian love most" Anya answers "his papa," without a though bubble, meaning that she answered the question legitimately because she listened to him.
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* Ewen and Emile hold a contest to see which girl has the right to dance with their Lord Damian, which consists of an obstacle course and a trivia contest. Anya barely manages to pass the physical part with some help from Loid, and through brute force, though that latter part was as much a liability as an asset. During the trivia part Anya uses her mind reading to get ahead of the other girls, but when the question "who does Damian love most" comes up, Anya answers "his papa," without a though bubble, meaning that reading any thought bubbles; she answered the question legitimately because she she's listened to him.him for as long as they've known each other, even despite their discord.
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* Ewen and Emile hold a contest to see which girl has the right to dance with their Lord Damian, which consists of an obstacle course and a trivia contest. Anya barely manages to pass the physical part with some help from Loid, and through brute force, though that latter part was as much a liability as an asset. During the trivia part Anya uses her mind reading to get ahead of the other girls, but when the question "who does Damian love most" Anya answers "his papa," without a though bubble, meaning that she answered the question legitimately because she listened to him.
* After Anya wins the contest to dance with Damian, Ewen and Emil angrily insist that Anya should not be the one to dance with Damian, but Damian says that since she won the contest fair and square he asks her for a dance. Although their interaction is awkward at first they do get into a rhythm and start dancing, with Damian complimenting Loid for teaching her to dance.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they too also step onto the dance floor.
* Ewen and Emile hold a contest to see which girl has the right to dance with their Lord Damian, which consists of an obstacle course and a trivia contest. Anya barely manages to pass the physical part with some help from Loid, and through brute force, though that latter part was as much a liability as an asset. During the trivia part Anya uses her mind reading to get ahead of the other girls, but when the question "who does Damian love most" Anya answers "his papa," without a though bubble, meaning that she answered the question legitimately because she listened to him.
* After Anya wins the contest to dance with Damian, Ewen and Emil angrily insist that Anya should not be the one to dance with Damian, but Damian says that since she won the contest fair and square he asks her for a dance. Although their interaction is awkward at first they do get into a rhythm and start dancing, with Damian complimenting Loid for teaching her to dance.
* As the children dance together Martha reminisces about old times, so Professor Henderson asks her to dance, and they too also step onto the dance floor.
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---> [[IOweYouMyLife "To this day, I can still taste that bread. That's all the reason I need to be here with you."]]
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* Anya gets a glow-up courtesy of Becky (new hair, new dress) and suddenly she has admirers fighting over her and the partygoers whispering about her. However, it's not just because SheCleansUpNicely: the boys who approach her brought up her bravery in the bus hijacking incident and her prowess at Classical Language. What with Damian's constant put-downs, it's nice to see someone else appreciate Anya's good qualities for once.
* As the students struggle to guess Mr. Green's birthday, the FaceOfAThug custos smiles sweetly and has a shy hand on the back of his head.
* As the students struggle to guess Mr. Green's birthday, the FaceOfAThug custos smiles sweetly and has a shy hand on the back of his head.
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* Anya gets a glow-up courtesy of Becky (new hair, new dress) and suddenly she has admirers fighting over her and the partygoers whispering about her. However, it's not just because SheCleansUpNicely: the boys who approach her brought bring up her bravery in the bus hijacking incident and her prowess at Classical Language. What with Damian's constant put-downs, it's nice to see someone else other people appreciate Anya's good qualities for once.
* As the students struggle to guess Mr. Green's birthday, the FaceOfAThugcustos custodian smiles sweetly and has a shy hand on the back of his head.
* As the students struggle to guess Mr. Green's birthday, the FaceOfAThug
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