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* Chapter 14, ''Pure Imagination''. The emotions directed Riley to Imagination Land because they knew it was a place for her to perk up. Well, they were right. Because a multitude of fuzzies happen while Riley's in that land.
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* Chapter 14, ''Pure Imagination''. Imagination''
** The emotions directed Riley to Imagination Land because they knew it was a place for her to perk up. Well, they were right. Because a multitude of fuzzies happen while Riley's in that land.
** The emotions directed Riley to Imagination Land because they knew it was a place for her to perk up. Well, they were right. Because a multitude of fuzzies happen while Riley's in that land.
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*** Well to be fair, many people (including Riley, even before this fanfic) have had dreams that they could fly. And technically this experience was also a dream--just a very vivid one where she knows what's going on.
*** By the way, a lot of reviewers mentioned that they wished they could have an experience like that, which isn't really a surprise. What they don't seem to realize is that lucid dreaming is something people can actually learn to do, and while you won't actually meet your emotions or anything like that (well anything is possible in a dream, so I guess you sort of can, but they wouldn't ''actually'' be your emotions) you can in fact have very vivid experiences where literally anything you can imagine is possible. The catch is it takes a lot of practice, but it should go without saying that for many people the results are certainly worth the effort.
*** By the way, a lot of reviewers mentioned that they wished they could have an experience like that, which isn't really a surprise. What they don't seem to realize is that lucid dreaming is something people can actually learn to do, and while you won't actually meet your emotions or anything like that (well anything is possible in a dream, so I guess you sort of can, but they wouldn't ''actually'' be your emotions) you can in fact have very vivid experiences where literally anything you can imagine is possible. The catch is it takes a lot of practice, but it should go without saying that for many people the results are certainly worth the effort.
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** A Trophy Land, Riley scores, and wins awards for all the emotions...even Sadness who got 1st place for once.
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** A At Trophy Land, Riley scores, and wins awards for all the emotions...even Sadness who got 1st place for once.
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*** Riley's utter..well...Joy when she finds out that in imagination land (possibly due to consciousness tampering), she can make herself fly. It's like every child's dream come true. Only for Riley, she actually got to make it a reality.
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* Chapter 14, ''Pure Imagination''. The emotions directed Riley to Imagination Land because they knew it was a place for her to perk up. Well, they were right. Because a multitude of fuzzies happen while Riley's in that land.
** Riley first tries her imaginary french fries. She calls it the perfect fry.
** A Trophy Land, Riley scores, and wins awards for all the emotions...even Sadness who got 1st place for once.
*** Then we see Riley got a custom trophy from the mind workers, telling her to never stop imagining.
*** Riley's utter..well...Joy when she finds out that in imagination land (possibly due to consciousness tampering), she can make herself fly. It's like every child's dream come true. Only for Riley, she actually got to make it a reality.
** Riley first tries her imaginary french fries. She calls it the perfect fry.
** A Trophy Land, Riley scores, and wins awards for all the emotions...even Sadness who got 1st place for once.
*** Then we see Riley got a custom trophy from the mind workers, telling her to never stop imagining.
*** Riley's utter..well...Joy when she finds out that in imagination land (possibly due to consciousness tampering), she can make herself fly. It's like every child's dream come true. Only for Riley, she actually got to make it a reality.
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** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet. And they don't even have to exchange a word for that.
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** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet. And [[FacialDialogue they don't even have to exchange a word word]] for that.
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** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet.
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** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet. And they don't even have to exchange a word for that.
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* Chapter 12, ''Wavering Focus''
** When Riley gets confronted by Tracy at Pizza Planet, Jordan doesn't know what's going on because he doesn't have Intro to Psych with them, but he still stands up for Riley anyway.
*** In the same chapter, we get more details about Jordan's inclusion in Riley's friend circle. He's apparently shy and unsure of himself, but Riley and Ann make him feel welcome.
** When Riley gets confronted by Tracy at Pizza Planet, Jordan doesn't know what's going on because he doesn't have Intro to Psych with them, but he still stands up for Riley anyway.
*** In the same chapter, we get more details about Jordan's inclusion in Riley's friend circle. He's apparently shy and unsure of himself, but Riley and Ann make him feel welcome.
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* Chapter 13, ''Hidden Depths''
** When Riley lands back in the mind world, she tries to smile, but it's forced. But when she and Sadness lock gazes, Sadness knows exactly what Riley really needs now. And so she and the emotions give riley a hug of comfort after her...rough day before. One is reminded of when Sadness was there for Bing Bong, as Riley just let it out with Sadness, and then when she broke away, she was already doing better just like Bing Bong was.
** When Riley lands back in the mind world, she tries to smile, but it's forced. But when she and Sadness lock gazes, Sadness knows exactly what Riley really needs now. And so she and the emotions give riley a hug of comfort after her...rough day before. One is reminded of when Sadness was there for Bing Bong, as Riley just let it out with Sadness, and then when she broke away, she was already doing better just like Bing Bong was.
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* In general, the interactions between Joy and Sadness in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, is clearly trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.
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* In general, the interactions between Joy and Sadness in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, is clearly trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.emotions.
** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet.
** The communication issues they had in the film seem to be solved as well: nowadays, Sadness notifies Joy when she feels the need to touch a memory to influence it and Joy is quick to acknowledge it and let Sadness operate, as evidenced with the memory of the trip to Pizza Planet.
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** In a flashback, we discover how Riley and Ann became friends. It turns out that Ann's supposed coolness got exposed when one of her former posse discovered she read comic books, and decided that wasn't cool. Riley stood up for Ann, and they became friends from then. (It also turns out this is what generated a more advanced Friendship Island, making the event doubly important).
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** In a flashback, we discover how Riley and Ann became friends. It turns out that Ann's supposed coolness got exposed when one of her former posse discovered she read comic books, and drew comics, and decided that wasn't cool. Riley stood up for Ann, and they became friends from then. (It also turns out this is what generated a more advanced Friendship Island, making the event doubly important).
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* Chapter 11, ''Dangers of an Open Mind''
** In a flashback, we discover how Riley and Ann became friends. It turns out that Ann's supposed coolness got exposed when one of her former posse discovered she read comic books, and decided that wasn't cool. Riley stood up for Ann, and they became friends from then. (It also turns out this is what generated a more advanced Friendship Island, making the event doubly important).
*** This extends to the present, where despite Ann's emotions being uneasy about Riley's supposed knowledge about the mind world, Ann herself is still very much Riley's friend despite the reactions made in class.
** In a flashback, we discover how Riley and Ann became friends. It turns out that Ann's supposed coolness got exposed when one of her former posse discovered she read comic books, and decided that wasn't cool. Riley stood up for Ann, and they became friends from then. (It also turns out this is what generated a more advanced Friendship Island, making the event doubly important).
*** This extends to the present, where despite Ann's emotions being uneasy about Riley's supposed knowledge about the mind world, Ann herself is still very much Riley's friend despite the reactions made in class.
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* Chapter 8, ''Scatterbrained'':
** A particularly sweet moment in a chapter otherwise filled with {{Funny}}, while the mind workers may be annoying, it's touching that the Forgetters Bobby and Paula would send congratulations to Riley through a letter in Joy's mind mail on the new [[spoiler: Island of Personality]].
** A particularly sweet moment in a chapter otherwise filled with {{Funny}}, while the mind workers may be annoying, it's touching that the Forgetters Bobby and Paula would send congratulations to Riley through a letter in Joy's mind mail on the new [[spoiler: Island of Personality]].
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* Chapter 7: ''Riley: Recognized'' is just ''ful''l of HeartwarmingMoments:
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* Joy's soothing Riley's more... edgy emotions (Anger and Fear) as she goes to talk with Riley. Even though they're still scared for their girl, Joy's sound reasoning on how best to tackle the problem when there's already danger was surprisingly sweet.
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and Fear tries to make Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. However, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of ''losing those voices'', because...
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and Fear tries to make Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. However, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of ''losing those voices'', because...
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* Chapter 2, ''Meeting the Little Voices'':
** Joy's soothing Riley's more... edgy emotions (Anger and Fear) as she goes to talk with Riley. Even though they're still scared for their girl, Joy's sound reasoning on how best to tackle the problem when there's already danger was surprisinglysweet.
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* Chapter 4, ''You Mean I Look Like Broccoli?''
** When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and Fear tries to make Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. However, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of ''losing those voices'', because...
* Chapter 2, ''Meeting the Little Voices'':
** Joy's soothing Riley's more... edgy emotions (Anger and Fear) as she goes to talk with Riley. Even though they're still scared for their girl, Joy's sound reasoning on how best to tackle the problem when there's already danger was surprisingly
* Chapter 4, ''You Mean I Look Like Broccoli?''
** When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and Fear tries to make Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. However, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of ''losing those voices'', because...
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* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly getting brain surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, ''Riley'' is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
* The moment Fear learns just how dangerous consciousness tampering is, he volunteers to go to Dream Productions to keep Riley safe. It also doubles as a [[{{Awesome/Intercom}} moment of awesome]].
* When the other emotions decide to strike out to meet Riley in the greater mind world, Joy instructs them to go without her. She admits she wants to see Riley "more than anything", but doesn't want to risk Riley waking up unable to feel anything. That Joy would willingly sacrifice her first chance to see Riley face to face is somehow really sweet, particularly since talking with Riley was her idea to begin with.
* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the third thing she does (after stopping herself from falling and easing Fear's doubts)? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
* The moment Fear learns just how dangerous consciousness tampering is, he volunteers to go to Dream Productions to keep Riley safe. It also doubles as a [[{{Awesome/Intercom}} moment of awesome]].
* When the other emotions decide to strike out to meet Riley in the greater mind world, Joy instructs them to go without her. She admits she wants to see Riley "more than anything", but doesn't want to risk Riley waking up unable to feel anything. That Joy would willingly sacrifice her first chance to see Riley face to face is somehow really sweet, particularly since talking with Riley was her idea to begin with.
* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the third thing she does (after stopping herself from falling and easing Fear's doubts)? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
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* Chapter 5, ''Lucid Dreaming'':
** The moment Fear learns just how dangerous consciousness tampering is, he volunteers to go to Dream Productions to keep Riley safe. It also doubles as a [[{{Awesome/Intercom}} moment of awesome]].
* Chapter 6, ''Welcome to the Mind World!'':
** Riley arrives in her mind
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** When Riley enters HQ, she gets a quick look around... and then gets [[TheGlomp glomped]] by Joy. While surprised at first, Riley quickly turns herself around and hugs back.reciprocates the hug. Also doubles as a [[{{Funny/Intercom}} funny moment]].
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-->'''Riley''': Are "Are you guys ready?
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** When Riley enters HQ, she gets a quick look around... and then gets [[TheGlomp glomped]] by Joy. While surprised at first, Riley quickly turns herself around and hugs back. Also doubles as a [[{{Intercom/Funny}} [[{{Funny/Intercom}} funny moment]].
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* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the third thing she does (after stopping herself from falling and easing fear's doubts)? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
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* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the third thing she does (after stopping herself from falling and easing fear's Fear's doubts)? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
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* Chapter 7: Riley Recognized
''Riley: Recognized''
** This little exchange between Riley and Sadness, beforeshe steps they step into Headquarters:
** This little exchange between Riley and Sadness, before
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** This little exchange between Riley and Sadness, before she steps into Headquarters:
-->'''Riley''': Are you guys ready?
-->'''Sadness''': ''(taking her hand)'' Are you?
** When Riley enters HQ, she gets a quick look around... and then gets [[TheGlomp glomped]] by Joy. While surprised at first, Riley quickly turns herself around and hugs back. Also doubles as a [[{{Intercom/Funny}} funnymoment.moment]].
-->'''Riley''': Are you guys ready?
-->'''Sadness''': ''(taking her hand)'' Are you?
** When Riley enters HQ, she gets a quick look around... and then gets [[TheGlomp glomped]] by Joy. While surprised at first, Riley quickly turns herself around and hugs back. Also doubles as a [[{{Intercom/Funny}} funny
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* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and Fear tries to make Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, However, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing ''losing those voices, voices'', because...
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* In general, the way Joy and Sadness react to each other in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, clearly is trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.
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* In general, the way interactions between Joy and Sadness react to each other in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, is clearly is trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.
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* Joy's soothing Riley's more..edgy emotions (anger and fear) as she goes to talk with Riley. Even though they're still scared for their girl, Joy's sound reasoning on how best to tackle the problem when there's already danger was surprisingly sweet.
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and fear tries to make riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing those voices, because...
-->''Riley'': I want to learn more about you guys. I mean, what's it like in there?
* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly getting Brain Surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, RILEY is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and fear tries to make riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing those voices, because...
-->''Riley'': I want to learn more about you guys. I mean, what's it like in there?
* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly getting Brain Surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, RILEY is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
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* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, andfear Fear tries to make riley Riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing those voices, because...
-->''Riley'': -->'''Riley''': I want to learn more about you guys. I mean, what's it like in there?
* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly gettingBrain Surgery. brain surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, RILEY ''Riley'' is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
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* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the first thing she does? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
* In chapter 7, the little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequent GroupHug.
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* When the other emotions decide to strike out to meet Riley in the greater mind world, Joy instructs them to go without her. She admits she wants to see Riley "more than anything", but doesn't want to risk Riley waking up unable to feel anything. That Joy would willingly sacrifice her first chance to see Riley face to face is somehow really sweet, particularly since talking with Riley was her idea to begin with.
* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's thefirst third thing she does? does (after stopping herself from falling and easing fear's doubts)? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
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** When Riley enters HQ, she gets a quick look around...and then gets [[TheGlomp glomped]] by Joy. While surprised at first, Riley quickly turns herself around and hugs back. Also doubles as a funny moment.
** The emotions insisting that they guard and guide instead of control Riley, saying that no matter what they do, she still has free will to act on her own according to the emotions felt.
** The little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequentGroupHug.GroupHug.
*** Riley herself said she felt like she'd just won a hockey championship after all that had happened that night, and that unlike the odd self awareness in her first group hug, this one with her emotions felt warm and comforting.
** Before turning in for the night, both Disgust and Fear admit that Riley visiting was cool to have happened.
** Joy and Sadness both wish Riley goodnight while she's in REM, and both say that they like the [[spoiler: new island of personality]] already.
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** The emotions insisting that they guard and guide instead of control Riley, saying that no matter what they do, she still has free will to act on her own according to the emotions felt.
** The little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequent
*** Riley herself said she felt like she'd just won a hockey championship after all that had happened that night, and that unlike the odd self awareness in her first group hug, this one with her emotions felt warm and comforting.
** Before turning in for the night, both Disgust and Fear admit that Riley visiting was cool to have happened.
** Joy and Sadness both wish Riley goodnight while she's in REM, and both say that they like the [[spoiler: new island of personality]] already.
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* Joy's soothing Riley's more..edgy emotions (anger and fear) as she goes to talk with Riley. Even though they're still scared for their girl, Joy's sound reasoning on how best to tackle the problem when there's already danger was surprisingly sweet.
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and fear tries to make riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing those voices, because...
-->''Riley'': I want to learn more about you guys. I mean, what's it like in there?
* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly getting Brain Surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, RILEY is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
* When Riley gets home after spending the day around San Francisco, she's more than a little frustrated at having to focus on what's going on around her, and hearing her emotions talk all day long. After she finds out about the intercom, she asks whether she'll be stuck hearing them for the rest of her life, and fear tries to make riley a bit scared of that prospect so she'll concur with fixing it. HOWEVER, the fear Riley feels instead is a fear of losing those voices, because...
-->''Riley'': I want to learn more about you guys. I mean, what's it like in there?
* The way Riley and Fear converse over her possibly getting Brain Surgery. Riley doesn't want to hurt her emotions in the process, and Fear replies that no matter the danger they might get into, RILEY is always their top priority. Considering this was the first time Fear tried to promote something dangerous for the sake of greater health is kinda sweet, and helped endear him even more to Riley.
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* In chapter 7, the little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequent GroupHug.GroupHug.
* In general, the way Joy and Sadness react to each other in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, clearly is trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.
* In general, the way Joy and Sadness react to each other in this story. Remember a year ago, Joy could hardly stand Sadness and always tried to keep her from working. And now? Joy lets Sadness go first in describing what they look like, gives her big hugs for great ideas, calls her an "expert" in the mind manuals, and when discussing what to do about their DarkSecret, clearly is trying to be considerate about how to handle it with Sadness's help. It's pretty clear that Sadness and Joy are now the closest among the emotions.
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* Riley arrives in her mind world in chapter 6, in the middle of Dream Productions, and Fear, Disgust and Sadness are there to greet her. What's the first thing she does? Sweep the three of them into a GroupHug.
* In chapter 7, the little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequent GroupHug.
* In chapter 7, the little speech Riley gives [[spoiler:when she names Possibility Island]], during which some TearsOfJoy are shed, and the subsequent GroupHug.
