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-->'''The Horned King''': You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet]]. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating.
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-->'''The Horned King''': You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet]]. Even...something Even…something like me. And child, that is...The is…The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed I…believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here But…here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You And…You are anything but weak. Or nauseating.
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* Avalina [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege begs]] the Horned King to spare Creeper even though the goblin [[KickTheDog hit her face]] during her time in the dungeon.
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* Avalina [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiegebegs]] begs the Horned King King]] to spare Creeper even though the goblin [[KickTheDog hit her face]] during her time in the dungeon.
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves Avalina]] from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] of [[SoulJar the Black Cauldron]].
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves Avalina]] from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] of from [[SoulJar the Black Cauldron]].
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** Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide a library for Avalina. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says it to be for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Two weeks after the event, incident, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide a library for Avalina. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says it to be it's his thanks for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] of Avalina.
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* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] treatment of Avalina.Avalina]].
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* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina about her interfering in his revenge leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
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* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina about her interfering interference in his revenge leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
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* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. She's then saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death. She forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
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* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. She's then saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death. She forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards toward her final.
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* When Avalina breaks down due to her physical weakness after being allowed to leave her sickbed and calls herself weak, the Horned King comforts her with a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech about her [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower unique kind of strength]].
--> "You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet]]. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from the lich's lands to make Avalina feel safer there.
--> "You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet]]. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from the lich's lands to make Avalina feel safer there.
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* When Avalina breaks down due to her physical weakness after being she's allowed to leave her sickbed and calls herself weak, the Horned King comforts her with a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech about her [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower unique kind of strength]].
--> "You -->'''The Horned King''': You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet]]. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
nauseating.
* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from the lich's lands in order to make Avalina feel safer there.
* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from the lich's lands in order to make Avalina feel safer there.
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]]. The day ends with them [[spoiler:having [[SleepCute fallen asleep against each other]]]].
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]]. The day ends with them [[spoiler:having [[SleepCute fallen asleep against each other]]]].other]]]].
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] of [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves]] Avalina saves Avalina]] from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] of [[ArtifactOfDoom [[SoulJar the Black Cauldron]].
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** Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide a library for Avalina a library. Avalina. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's it to show gratitude be for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] towards Avalina.
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* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] towards of Avalina.
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* When Avalina and the Horned King ride to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. Addie is against it and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
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* When Avalina and the Horned King ride to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. Addie is against it it, and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
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* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death. She forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
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* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's She's then saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death. She forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saves]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from of [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
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** Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** The gwythaint (Addie) and Mitternacht quickly become friends through their races.
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** The gwythaint (Addie) and Mitternacht quickly become friends [[InterspeciesFriendship friends]] through their races.
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** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions cause Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
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** In a similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions cause Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
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* When Avalina breaks down due to her physical weakness after being allowed to leave her sickbed and calls herself weak, the Horned King comforts her with a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech about her unique kind of strength.
--> "You have the strength to show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of young maidens so pure even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
--> "You have the strength to show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of young maidens so pure even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
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* When Avalina breaks down due to her physical weakness after being allowed to leave her sickbed and calls herself weak, the Horned King comforts her with a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech about her [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower unique kind of strength.
strength]].
--> "You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone youmeet.meet]]. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of [[PurityPersonified young maidens so pure pure]] [[FriendToAllLivingThings even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets pets]] and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
--> "You have the strength to [[AllLovingHeroine show compassion and kindness to anyone you
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]]. The days ends with them [[spoiler:having [[SleepCute fallen asleep against each other]]]].
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]]. The days day ends with them [[spoiler:having [[SleepCute fallen asleep against each other]]]].
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]].
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* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]]. The days ends with them [[spoiler:having [[SleepCute fallen asleep against each other]]]].
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* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}} lands]]]].
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* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}} lands]]]].lands]]]].
* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]].
* The Horned King and Avalina's day out in [[spoiler:her garden]] after [[spoiler:his WalkingWasteland trait seems to have vanished]].
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* When Avalina breaks down due to her physical weakness after being allowed to leave her sickbed and calls herself weak, the Horned King comforts her with a YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre speech about her unique kind of strength.
--> "You have the strength to show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of young maidens so pure even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
--> "You have the strength to show compassion and kindness to anyone you meet. Even...something like me. And child, that is...The greatest kind of strength. One I am sure many see as nothing more than a myth. I...believed it to be nothing but complete nonsense myself, all those pathetic stories of young maidens so pure even the most savage of beasts would eat from their hands like pets and I believed them so kind it was nearly sickening. I never even pondered the possibility of such a creature existing, so fanciful was the notion. But...here you are, right in front of me, something I believed to be nothing more than a foolish tale spun by feebleminded tramps. And...You are anything but weak. Or nauseating."
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** Weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Weeks Two weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Weeks after the event, the Horned King has the Invisibles to provide for Avalina a library. She's so happy for the gift, and the Horned King says that it's to show gratitude for her saving his life. He all but forces the sentence out, but Avalina can tell it's sincere.
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** Avalina decides to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
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** Avalina [[WhatYouAreInTheDark decides to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.home]].
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* After the Horned King explains Avalina how [[EvilMakesYouMonstrous his evil deeds started reflecting his appearance]] and that [[IAmAMonster he can never regain his lost heart]], Avalina watches him and senses his loneliness, desperation, weariness and the beginnings of remorse. For the first time she comes next to him willingly and [[HoldingHands takes his hand]], saying that she sees hope in him. After the initial shock, he responds to the gesture and they watch out of the window together.
* When Avalina and the Horned King ride on Mitternacht to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. But Addie is against it and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
* When Avalina and the Horned King ride on Mitternacht to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. But Addie is against it and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
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* After the Horned King explains Avalina how [[EvilMakesYouMonstrous his evil deeds started reflecting his appearance]] and that [[IAmAMonster he can never regain his lost heart]], Avalina watches him and senses his loneliness, desperation, weariness and the beginnings of remorse. For the first time she comes next to him willingly and [[HoldingHands takes his hand]], saying that she sees hope in him. After the initial shock, he responds to the gesture and together they watch out of the window together.
window.
* When Avalina and the Horned King rideon Mitternacht to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. But Addie is against it and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
* When Avalina and the Horned King ride
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* When Avalina is about to fall into a chasm created by a sudden earthquake, Taran pulls her up despite getting seriously injured by the Horned King's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
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* When Avalina is about to fall into a chasm created by a sudden earthquake, Taran pulls her up despite getting having got seriously injured by the Horned King's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
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* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from his lands to make Avalina feel more comfortable there.
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* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from his the lich's lands to make Avalina feel more comfortable safer there.
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saving]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
** Avalina deciding to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
** Avalina deciding to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
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* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saving]] saves]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
** Avalinadeciding decides to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
** Avalina
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* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions causes Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death, she forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions causes Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's death, she forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
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* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina about her interfering in his revenge leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actionscauses cause Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran'sdeath, she death. She forgives him. As she contently falls asleep against his chest, [[DeclarationOfProtection he internally vows to protect her]], making his PapaWolf status towards her final.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions
* Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake. Then she's saved from drowning by the Horned King. After she uses [[EmpathicHealer the pain-transference prayer]] to relieve his pain and recovers from the ordeal, the lich apologizes for his lately treatment of her and tells that he values her life over Taran's
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* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}} lands]].
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* The Horned King and Creeper remove the remainders of the former [[AnimateDead Cauldron]]-[[DemBones Born]] from his lands to make Avalina feel more comfortable there.
* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}}lands]].lands]]]].
* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}}
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** Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake.
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** Creeper apologizes to Avalina for nearly getting her to drown. He's also forgiven.
* Avalina's happiness for [[spoiler:the forest that has grown in the Horned King's [[{{Mordor}} lands]].
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** When Avalina is allowed to visit her family to say farewells, the Invisibles set in her belongings bronze and brass coins to support her family.
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** The gwythaint (Addie) and Mitternacht quickly become friends through their races.
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* After the Horned King tells Avalina that [[spoiler:his heart has come back to life]], she's overjoyed for him. His [[spoiler:heartbeat]] becomes one of her favorite sounds in the world.
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* When Avalina and the Horned King ride on Mitternacht to her secret place, Creeper decides to take his chance and leave his master's servitude. But Addie is against it and he ends up striking her jaw. He doesn't know how to apologize and attempts to leave again. When he's at the drawbridge, he hears her sorrowful cry that reminds him of the one she made after realizing her mate was dead. He goes back and manages to apologize. [[EasilyForgiven She accepts it]].
* After the Horned King tells Avalina that [[spoiler:his heart has come back to life]], she's overjoyed for him. His [[spoiler:heartbeat]] becomes one of her favorite sounds in theworld.world.
* When Avalina is about to fall into a chasm created by a sudden earthquake, Taran pulls her up despite getting seriously injured by the Horned King's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
** The Horned King saves Princess Eilonwy from the same fate, even if only because he realizes how important she is to Avalina.
** Avalina's GoThroughMe moment gets the Horned King to grudgingly realize that he owes Taran for saving Avalina and he leaves with her.
* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions causes Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
** Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake.
* After the Horned King tells Avalina that [[spoiler:his heart has come back to life]], she's overjoyed for him. His [[spoiler:heartbeat]] becomes one of her favorite sounds in the
* When Avalina is about to fall into a chasm created by a sudden earthquake, Taran pulls her up despite getting seriously injured by the Horned King's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
** The Horned King saves Princess Eilonwy from the same fate, even if only because he realizes how important she is to Avalina.
** Avalina's GoThroughMe moment gets the Horned King to grudgingly realize that he owes Taran for saving Avalina and he leaves with her.
* After the Horned King's argument with Avalina leaves her sad, Creeper tries to make her feel better.
** In similar way, after [[ManipulativeBastard Arawn's]] actions causes Avalina's [[HeroicBSOD spirit to go down]] again, she ends up in a snowball fight with Creeper and Mitternacht. They all enjoy it.
** Avalina saves Creeper from the cracking surface of the frozen lake.
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* Avalina [[PleaseSpareHimMyLiege begs]] the Horned King to spare Creeper even though the goblin [[KickTheDog hit her face]] during her time in the dungeon.
* The Invisibles are right from the beginning supporting Avalina however they can in their limitations.
* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saving]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
** Avalina deciding to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
* After the initial scare, the Horned King instructs Avalina to approach the gwythaint safely. It quickly takes a liking to the girl.
* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] towards Avalina.
* After the Horned King explains Avalina how [[EvilMakesYouMonstrous his evil deeds started reflecting his appearance]] and that [[IAmAMonster he can never regain his lost heart]], Avalina watches him and senses his loneliness, desperation, weariness and the beginnings of remorse. For the first time she comes next to him willingly and [[HoldingHands takes his hand]], saying that she sees hope in him. After the initial shock, he responds to the gesture and they watch out of the window together.
* After the Horned King tells Avalina that [[spoiler:his heart has come back to life]], she's overjoyed for him. His [[spoiler:heartbeat]] becomes one of her favorite sounds in the world.
* The Invisibles are right from the beginning supporting Avalina however they can in their limitations.
* The Horned King [[VillainousRescue saving]] Avalina from being killed by the [[AxCrazy Mad]] [[SavageWolves Pack]], even if [[PragmaticVillainy he does that only because she's his only chance to remain free]] from [[ArtifactOfDoom the Black Cauldron]].
** Avalina deciding to take the injured and unconscious Horned King back to the castle even though she wants to return home.
* After the initial scare, the Horned King instructs Avalina to approach the gwythaint safely. It quickly takes a liking to the girl.
* The slow and subtle changes of the Horned King's [[LimaSyndrome treatment]] towards Avalina.
* After the Horned King explains Avalina how [[EvilMakesYouMonstrous his evil deeds started reflecting his appearance]] and that [[IAmAMonster he can never regain his lost heart]], Avalina watches him and senses his loneliness, desperation, weariness and the beginnings of remorse. For the first time she comes next to him willingly and [[HoldingHands takes his hand]], saying that she sees hope in him. After the initial shock, he responds to the gesture and they watch out of the window together.
* After the Horned King tells Avalina that [[spoiler:his heart has come back to life]], she's overjoyed for him. His [[spoiler:heartbeat]] becomes one of her favorite sounds in the world.