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* Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down Mai does care for Tom-Tom.
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* Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down down, Mai truly does care for Tom-Tom.
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* Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down Mai cares for Tom-Tom, enough to take him away from her [[ArchnemesisDad father's influences.]]
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* Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down Mai cares does care for Tom-Tom, enough to take him away from her [[ArchnemesisDad father's influences.]]Tom-Tom.
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* Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillianWithGoodPublicity [[VillainWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down Mai cares for Tom-Tom, enough to take him away from her [[ArchnemesisDad father's influences.]]
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*Mai [[BigBrotherInstinct taking her brother Tom-Tom]] away from the [[YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters New]] [[VillianWithGoodPublicity Ozai]] [[CultofPersonality Society]]. After her debut episode shows Mai being an AloofBigSister who turns down a hostage deal for her own brother and later episodes depict her as TheUnfavorite compared to him, this comic shows that deep down Mai cares for Tom-Tom, enough to take him away from her [[ArchnemesisDad father's influences.]]
