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* When Griselda is hypnotizing Hawkins to make him a suave romancer, she starts listing off all the traits he will need to exhibit and with each one Hawkins immediately shifts into an appropriate pose. Until the very end, where she says that he needs to show passion, and he just stands there looking clueless. She repeats louder "PASSION!" and he immediately swoops her in his arm for a kiss.
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* When Griselda is hypnotizing Hawkins to make him a suave romancer, she starts listing off all the traits he will need to exhibit and with each one Hawkins immediately shifts into an appropriate pose. Until the very end, where she says that he needs to show passion, and he just stands there looking clueless. She repeats louder "PASSION!" and he immediately swoops her in his arm arms for a kiss.
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* When a guard is puzzled at how "Giacomo"(or rather Hawkins) can speak English so well, Hawkins persuades him using fake "French," "Italian" and "German."
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* When a guard is puzzled at how "Giacomo"(or "Giacomo" (or rather Hawkins) can speak English so well, Hawkins persuades him using fake "French," "Italian" and "German." "German" that sound plausible to someone who doesn't speak them.
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*** The fact that both Griswold and Hawkins fail to remember the rhyme until the chalices are presented -- [[spoiler: and then Hawkins remembers it, holding the flagon with the dragon aloft triumphantly -- despite IT'S being the poisoned one. Griswold, at that point, just takes the vessel with the pestle, smugly reminding us that IT has "the brew that is true!"]].
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*** The fact that both Griswold and Hawkins fail to remember the rhyme until the chalices are presented -- [[spoiler: and then Hawkins remembers it, holding the flagon with the dragon aloft triumphantly -- despite IT'S ITS being the poisoned one. Griswold, at that point, just takes the vessel with the pestle, smugly reminding us that IT has "the brew that is true!"]].
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-->'''Hawkins:''' After months of waiting for this kind of action, what makes you think that anybody, '''anybody''' would get force me to reveal the identity of my confederate?
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-->'''Hawkins:''' After months of waiting for this kind of action, what makes you think that anybody, '''anybody''' would get could force me to reveal the identity of my confederate?
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-->Giacomo, Giacomo, [[OhCrap Giacom-OH]]?!
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-->'''Hawkins:''' After months of waiting for this kind of action, what makes you think that anything, '''anything''' would get me to betray my confederates?
-->'''Jean:''' ''(without missing a beat)'' Because they'd put you on the rack, break your every bone, scald you with hot oil, and remove the nails from your fingers with flaming hot pincers.
-->'''Jean:''' ''(without missing a beat)'' Because they'd put you on the rack, break your every bone, scald you with hot oil, and remove the nails from your fingers with flaming hot pincers.
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-->'''Hawkins:''' After months of waiting for this kind of action, what makes you think that anything, '''anything''' anybody, '''anybody''' would get force me to betray reveal the identity of my confederates?
confederate?
-->'''Jean:''' ''(without missing a beat)'' Because they'd put you on the rack,break crack your every bone, scald you with hot oil, and remove the nails from off your fingers with flaming hot pincers.
-->'''Jean:''' ''(without missing a beat)'' Because they'd put you on the rack,
