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-->'''Jill:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' ''(safely outside)'' "Uh, sorry but, I gotta get myself some antivenom serum, Richard. [[IronButtMonkey You've survived it twice before]], right...?"
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-->'''Jill:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Uh, sorry but, I gotta get myself some antivenom serum, Richard. You've survived it twice before, right...?"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keep happening?!"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keep happening?!"
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-->'''Jill:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Uh, sorry but, I gotta get myself some antivenom serum, Richard. [[IronButtMonkey You've survived it twice before, before]], right...?"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keephappening?!"happening??"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keep
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-->'''Yawn:''' ''(at Richard)'' "You ready for thisssss 1,200 inch python?!" ''(bites him again)''
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-->'''Yawn:''' ''(at Richard)'' "You ready for thisssss 1,200 inch python?!" ''(bites him again)''python?!"
-->''(audible crunch as he gets bitten AGAIN)''
-->''(audible crunch as he gets bitten AGAIN)''
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-->'''Jill:''' ''(walks away)'' "Eh, I'm sure he'll be fine."
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*As if his first assignment going to shit weren't bad enough, he spends his final hours [[DesignatedVictim repeatedly being bitten]] by Yawn, then vaccinated by his teammates, [[RunningGag who keep abandoning him afterwards.]] Made worse, since none of them really seem to care; including Jill.
-->'''Richard:''' ''(trapped inside room)'' "Argh! Jill, he's got me! Jill??"
-->'''Jill:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Uh, sorry but, I gotta get myself some antivenom serum, Richard. You've survived it twice before, right...?"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keep happening?!"
-->'''Yawn:''' ''(at Richard)'' "You ready for thisssss 1,200 inch python?!" ''(bites him again)''
-->''''Richard:''' ''(in agony)'' "Oh, Dear God!!"
-->'''Jill:''' ''(walks away)'' "Eh, I'm sure he'll be fine."
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*As if his first assignment going to shit weren't bad enough, he spends his final hours [[DesignatedVictim repeatedly being bitten]] by Yawn, then vaccinated by his teammates, [[RunningGag who keep abandoning him afterwards.]] Made worse, since none of them really seem to care; including Jill.
-->'''Richard:''' ''(trapped inside room)'' "Argh! Jill, he's got me! Jill??"
-->'''Jill:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Uh, sorry but, I gotta get myself some antivenom serum, Richard. You've survived it twice before, right...?"
-->'''Richard:''' ''(incredulous)'' "WHAT?? Why does this keep happening?!"
-->'''Yawn:''' ''(at Richard)'' "You ready for thisssss 1,200 inch python?!" ''(bites him again)''
-->''''Richard:''' ''(in agony)'' "Oh, Dear God!!"
-->'''Jill:''' ''(walks away)'' "Eh, I'm sure he'll be fine."
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** Which ends with Jill effortlessly disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint - with his own gun!
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** Which ends with Jill [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain effortlessly disarming him in all of 1sec., ]], then holding ''him'' at gunpoint - with his own gun!
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a SurvivalHorror game...?"
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having [[TheMedic a medic medic]] with you at all times in a SurvivalHorror game...?"
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* The scene where they introduce themselves reveals they're both snarky and equally genre savvy:
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* The scene where they introduce themselves reveals shows they're both snarky and equally genre savvy:savvy about [[DwindlingParty the sort of situation]] they're in:
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "Can't say I have, all I've heard is normal commotion coming from the residence area."
-->'''Chris:''' "By "normal" you mean....?"
-->'''Chris:''' "By "normal" you mean....?"
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "Can't say I have, all "Afraid not. All I've heard is normal commotion are [[NothingIsScarier strange noises]] coming from the residence area."
-->'''Chris:''' "By"normal" "strange" you mean....?"
-->'''Chris:''' "By
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-->'''Chris:''' "Gotcha. Well, I'm gonna head over there now. Wanna come with?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a survival horror game...?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a survival horror game...?"
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-->'''Chris:''' "Gotcha. Well, I'm gonna head over there now. Wanna come with?"
come?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in asurvival horror SurvivalHorror game...?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "Relatively speaking."
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-->'''Rebecca:''' [[YouAnsweredYourOwnQuestion "Relatively speaking.""]]
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-->'''Chris:''' ''(sees her point)'' "Yeah, that would kill the tension faster than [[{{Redhirt}} a redshirt.]] Well, stay safe."
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-->'''Chris:''' ''(sees her point)'' "Yeah, that would kill the tension faster than [[{{Redhirt}} [[RedShirt a redshirt.]] Well, stay safe."
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-->'''Rebecca:''' "I forgot to introduce myself earlier: Rebecca Chambers, S.T.A.R.S. Bravo."
-->'''Chris:''' "Chris Redfield. S.T.A.R.S. Alpha. I've been trying to find my teammates: a nice guy who's kinda slow, a hot [[DeadpanSnarker straight talking woman]], and a jackal who's [[SunglassesAtNight married to his sunglasses.]] Have you seen any of them around?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Can't say I have, all I've heard is normal commotion coming from the residence area."
-->'''Chris:''' "By "normal" you mean....?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Relatively speaking."
-->'''Chris:''' "Gotcha. Well, I'm gonna head over there now. Wanna come with?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a survival horror game...?"
-->'''Chris:''' ''(sees her point)'' "Yeah, that would kill the tension faster than [[{{Redhirt}} a redshirt.]] Well, stay safe."
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Likewise."
-->'''Rebecca:''' "I forgot to introduce myself earlier: Rebecca Chambers, S.T.A.R.S. Bravo."
-->'''Chris:''' "Chris Redfield. S.T.A.R.S. Alpha. I've been trying to find my teammates: a nice guy who's kinda slow, a hot [[DeadpanSnarker straight talking woman]], and a jackal who's [[SunglassesAtNight married to his sunglasses.]] Have you seen any of them around?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Can't say I have, all I've heard is normal commotion coming from the residence area."
-->'''Chris:''' "By "normal" you mean....?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Relatively speaking."
-->'''Chris:''' "Gotcha. Well, I'm gonna head over there now. Wanna come with?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Normally, yes. But having a medic with you at all times in a survival horror game...?"
-->'''Chris:''' ''(sees her point)'' "Yeah, that would kill the tension faster than [[{{Redhirt}} a redshirt.]] Well, stay safe."
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Likewise."
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly)'' "...searching for the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly)'' "...searching for [[ElaborateUndergroundBase the ultra secret Umbrella lab.""]]
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly again)'' "To the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly again)'' [[CaptainObvious "To the ultra secret Umbrella lab.""]]
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** Which ends with Jill disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint - with his own gun!
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** Which ends with Jill effortlessly disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint - with his own gun!
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* Near the end of the short, they meet up again and take the elevator down to the Umbrella lab to confront Wesker. Chris offhandedly mentions [[spoiler: Richard]]'s death, as if making light conversation to kill time. Rebecca's response?
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-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Oh." ''({{beat}})'' "That sucks."
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(halfheartedly)'' "Oh." ''({{beat}})'' "That sucks."
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-->'''Jill:''' "Good boy.""
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** As in the game, Barry's being blackmailed by Wesker to eliminate Jill, but [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain fails miserably miserably]] at it due to being a BadLiar
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** Which ends with Jill disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint.
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, [[BlatantLies I have a good explanation for that too."]]
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, [[BlatantLies I have a good explanation for that too."]]
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** Which ends with Jill disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint.
gunpoint - with his own gun!
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, [[BlatantLies I have a good explanation for that too."]]"]]
**She resumes questioning him once they've disposed of the dungeon crawler, leading to this tidbit:
-->'''Jill:''' "Now... what were you doing down here?"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly)'' "...searching for the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
-->'''Jill:''' "So where should you be taking me...?"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly again)'' "To the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
-->'''Jill:''' "Good boy."
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, [[BlatantLies I have a good explanation for that too.
**She resumes questioning him once they've disposed of the dungeon crawler, leading to this tidbit:
-->'''Jill:''' "Now... what were you doing down here?"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly)'' "...searching for the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
-->'''Jill:''' "So where should you be taking me...?"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(dejectedly again)'' "To the ultra secret Umbrella lab."
-->'''Jill:''' "Good boy."
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, I have a good explanation for that too."
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-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, [[BlatantLies I have a good explanation for that too.""]]
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** Which ends with Jill promptly disarming him in all of 1sec., then holding ''him'' at gunpoint.gunpoint.
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, I have a good explanation for that too."
-->'''Barry:''' ''(raising hands in surrender)'' "Believe it or not, I have a good explanation for that too."
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-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(relieved)'' "Oh, than God. I thought I was gonna have to suggest it. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Come on, let's book it."]]
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-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(relieved)'' "Oh, than God. I thought I was gonna have to suggest it. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Come on, let's book it."]]"]]
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*The exchange between them when Jill confronts Barry in the catacombs, for abandoning her at the lift minutes prior.
-->'''Jill:''' ''(angrily)'' "Ba~RYY!!"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(nervously)'' "Oh, uh... hi Jill. I'll bet you're wondering why I left you behind earlier."
-->'''Jill:''' "You guess correctly. So [[TranquilFury start. TALKING."]]
-->'''Barry:''' "Well, I guess I'll turn things over to my lawyer" ''(draws Magnum on Jill)'' "Smith & Wesson!"
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*The exchange between them when Jill confronts Barry in the catacombs, for abandoning her at the lift minutes prior.
-->'''Jill:''' ''(angrily)'' "Ba~RYY!!"
-->'''Barry:''' ''(nervously)'' "Oh, uh... hi Jill. I'll bet you're wondering why I left you behind earlier."
-->'''Jill:''' "You guess correctly. So [[TranquilFury start. TALKING."]]
-->'''Barry:''' "Well, I guess I'll turn things over to my lawyer" ''(draws Magnum on Jill)'' "Smith & Wesson!"
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-->'''Chris:''' "IIII... hate to be ''[[PragmaticHero "that guy"]]'' but... this place is absolutely crawling with zombies, and carrying him is only gonna hamper our own chances at survival, soo...."
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-->'''Chris:''' "IIII... "I hate to be ''[[PragmaticHero "that guy"]]'' but... this place is absolutely crawling with zombies, and carrying him is only gonna hamper our own chances at survival, soo...."
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** And Rebecca is a nice girl and the team's field medic, but she's sarcastic to the point of {{breaking the fourth wall}}. She also has no qualms about [[spoiler: abandoning one of her patients]] in a house full of zombies.zombies.
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*One of the first signs of Chris' apathy and Rebecca's sarcasm is during the scene where Rebecca inoculates Richard to treat his snake bite.
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(to Chris)'' "He's not dead, just out cold for awhile."
-->'''Chris:''' "How long is "awhile"?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Anywhere from 15 minutes, to 2 hours."
-->'''Chris: "IIII... hate to be ''[[PragmaticHero "that guy"]]'' but... this place is absolutely crawling with zombies, and carrying him is only gonna hamper our own chances at survival, soo...."
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(shocked)'' "Are you suggesting we just [[WhatTheHellHero LEAVE HIM HERE??"]]
-->'''Chris:''' "I don't know if I'd use exactly ''those'' words, but--"
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(relieved)'' "Oh, than God. I thought I was gonna have to suggest it. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Come on, let's book it."]]
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*One of the first signs of Chris' apathy and Rebecca's sarcasm is during the scene where Rebecca inoculates Richard to treat his snake bite.
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(to Chris)'' "He's not dead, just out cold for awhile."
-->'''Chris:''' "How long is "awhile"?"
-->'''Rebecca:''' "Anywhere from 15 minutes, to 2 hours."
-->'''Chris: "IIII... hate to be ''[[PragmaticHero "that guy"]]'' but... this place is absolutely crawling with zombies, and carrying him is only gonna hamper our own chances at survival, soo...."
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(shocked)'' "Are you suggesting we just [[WhatTheHellHero LEAVE HIM HERE??"]]
-->'''Chris:''' "I don't know if I'd use exactly ''those'' words, but--"
-->'''Rebecca:''' ''(relieved)'' "Oh, than God. I thought I was gonna have to suggest it. [[IDidWhatIHadToDo Come on, let's book it."]]
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** Wesker is [[ObviousJudas the obvious traitor]] on the team, with loads of barely contained UST [[FoeRomanceSubtext UST]] ''[[HoYay towards Chris Chris]]'' (not that Chris cares).
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*Each of the main casts character portrayals in the abridged:
**Chris is seemingly indifferent towards everyone, except Jill and Rebecca, and basically treats everything that happens as if he doesn't care; including [[spoiler: Richard's death]].
**Jill is [[DeadpanSnarker a deadpan snarker]] throughout the entire ordeal, particularly in regard to Barry repeatedly backstabbing her. And she's GenreSavvy enough to recognize when she's stumbled across [[spoiler: a boss room]].
**Wesker is [[ObviousMole the obvious traitor]] on the team, with loads of barely contained UST towards Chris (not that Chris cares).
**As in the game, Barry's being blackmailed by Wesker to eliminate Jill, but fails miserably at it due to being a BadLiar
**And Rebecca is a nice girl and the team's field medic, but she's sarcastic to the point of {{breaking the fourth wall}}. She also has no qualms about [[spoiler: abandoning one of her patients]] in a house full of zombies.
*Each of the main casts character portrayals in the abridged:
**Chris is seemingly indifferent towards everyone, except Jill and Rebecca, and basically treats everything that happens as if he doesn't care; including [[spoiler: Richard's death]].
**Jill is [[DeadpanSnarker a deadpan snarker]] throughout the entire ordeal, particularly in regard to Barry repeatedly backstabbing her. And she's GenreSavvy enough to recognize when she's stumbled across [[spoiler: a boss room]].
**Wesker is [[ObviousMole the obvious traitor]] on the team, with loads of barely contained UST towards Chris (not that Chris cares).
**As in the game, Barry's being blackmailed by Wesker to eliminate Jill, but fails miserably at it due to being a BadLiar
**And Rebecca is a nice girl and the team's field medic, but she's sarcastic to the point of {{breaking the fourth wall}}. She also has no qualms about [[spoiler: abandoning one of her patients]] in a house full of zombies.
