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* When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel already]].
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* When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel it already]].
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* Oliver’s first time putting on a clean shirt being an “unusual gymnastic performance”.
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* Flogging people to death and blowing people's brains out with iron bars being "pastimes" and "very favorite and common recreations" of seafarers.
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** Flogging people to death and blowing people's brains out with iron bars being "pastimes" and "very favorite and common recreations" of seafarers.
* When Oliver thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmazement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
* When Oliver thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmazement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
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* Then ''immediately'' after that when he thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmazement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
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* Then ''immediately'' after that when he When Oliver thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmazement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
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** Flogging people to death and blowing people's brains out with iron bars being "pastimes" and "very favorite and common recreations" of seafarers.
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* When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel already]].
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* When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel already]].already]].
* "Oliver stared at the sound, -he might be excused for doing so, for the words were kindly said, and strange sounds frighten one."
** "''Strange sounds frighten one.''"
* "Oliver stared at the sound, -he might be excused for doing so, for the words were kindly said, and strange sounds frighten one."
** "''Strange sounds frighten one.''"
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* Then ''immediately'' after that when he thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmusement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
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* Then ''immediately'' after that when he thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmusement [[MundaneObjectAmazement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
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*When a child died in the orphanage, they wouldn’t be brought to justice, partly because the surgeon would testify that he found nothing inside when he opened up the body. The narrator then snarks in brackets that this was ''very likely indeed''.
*”What a noble illustration of the tender laws of this favored country! They let the paupers go to sleep!”
*Oliver’s first time putting on a clean shirt being an “unusual gymnastic performance”.
*Then ''immediately'' after that when he thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmusement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
*When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel already]].
*”What a noble illustration of the tender laws of this favored country! They let the paupers go to sleep!”
*Oliver’s first time putting on a clean shirt being an “unusual gymnastic performance”.
*Then ''immediately'' after that when he thinks the board is fattening him up to kill him, when they give him [[MundaneObjectAmusement a basin of gruel and a quarter of bread]].
*When Mr. Bumble tells Oliver that crying into his gruel is a foolish action, the narrator remarks that it was; [[StealthInsult there was quite enough water in the gruel already]].
