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* [[https://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2969 Bernadette's father promises to quit drinking and will visit her in Eschelon.]] Once she's left:
-->Well, when I said I'd quit, I really did mean it... I'm definitely going to quit! And what better day than tomorrow to quit! Today I'll celebrate! ''[downs the bottle]''
-->Well, when I said I'd quit, I really did mean it... I'm definitely going to quit! And what better day than tomorrow to quit! Today I'll celebrate! ''[downs the bottle]''
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--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with us anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top put it would be '''"Rape."'''
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--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with us anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top to put it would be '''"Rape."'''
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--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with use anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top put it would be '''"Rape."'''
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--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with use us anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top put it would be '''"Rape."'''
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* The Chistmas 2022 is an ItsAWonderfulPlot after Maytag gets bored and wonders what would happen if she killed herself. Her guardian angel explains that if she was never born, Crest would be a chain smoker because she never stopped him from smoking his first cigarette, which she doesn't remember doing. And Bernadette would be an alcoholic, to which Maytag points out Bern already drinks heavily. And Polly would be a {{goth}}, which isn't a bad thing and is exactly what she looks like anyway. And Echelon would be an industrial slum, something that could not possibly have anything to do with Maytag.
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* [[https://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2065 The new head of the Colosseum awkwardly explains they've had a change in management]], in true BlackComedy fashion.
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. I now it doesn't seem like there's a "good time" to come here and be forced to fight in a colosseum. And that's true. That's not a good time. That's '''''never''''' a good time. '''BUT'''... Relatively speaking, this actually '''is''' a good time to be here.
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. I now it doesn't seem like there's a "good time" to come here and be forced to fight in a colosseum. And that's true. That's not a good time. That's '''''never''''' a good time. '''BUT'''... Relatively speaking, this actually '''is''' a good time to be here.
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* [[https://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2065 The new head of the Colosseum awkwardly explains they've had a change in management]], in true BlackComedy fashion.
fashion (reminiscent of Phone Guy from ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'').
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. Inow know it doesn't seem like there's a "good time" to come here and be forced to fight in a colosseum. And that's true. That's not a good time. That's '''''never''''' a good time. '''BUT'''... Relatively speaking, this actually '''is''' a good time to be here.
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. I
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* [[http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=3157 Maytag prepares to leave the Dark Cell]], and notices everything looks normal now.
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* [[http://flipside.keenspot.[[https://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2065 The new head of the Colosseum awkwardly explains they've had a change in management]], in true BlackComedy fashion.
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. I now it doesn't seem like there's a "good time" to come here and be forced to fight in a colosseum. And that's true. That's not a good time. That's '''''never''''' a good time. '''BUT'''... Relatively speaking, this actually '''is''' a good time to be here.
--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with use anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top put it would be '''"Rape."'''
--> Well, I want you to rest easy. I do '''not''' condone rape. I do not support rape '''at all'''. I've never raped my friends... or ''anyone'' that I know... And I don't plan to rape anyone in the immediate future. I'm a feminist! Women, I think, deserve... are '''entitled''' to be treated with the same respect and dignity that a man who is a prisoner with no rights deserves. And there's just no call for rape. It's ''just'' not needed. I don't ''personally'' see the point of it. Now Harker... he was '''big''' into rape. He was weird about it. And if you were here two months ago... you'd probably be getting raped right now.
--> But, may I point out... you are '''not''' being raped right now. There's no one bending you over a table while your friend watches. That's not happening. Could it be happening? Yeah... but it's not.
--> All in all... you're not doing too bad. You're at a colosseum... you're not being raped... As I said, you've come at a good time.
** [[http://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2069 Bern and Polly's faces at the end sell it.]]
* [[http://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=3157 Maytag prepares to leave the Dark Cell]], and notices everything looks normal now.
--> Now I know you're thinking "This isn't going to be easy..." And you're right. It's not. But you know, it could be worse. It '''really''' could be. You actually came at a good time. I now it doesn't seem like there's a "good time" to come here and be forced to fight in a colosseum. And that's true. That's not a good time. That's '''''never''''' a good time. '''BUT'''... Relatively speaking, this actually '''is''' a good time to be here.
--> We have... ''undergone'' some big changes. You may have heard, actually... '''Harker'''... Yeah, he's not with use anymore. He had kind of a penchant for... uh, well... I guess the best way top put it would be '''"Rape."'''
--> Well, I want you to rest easy. I do '''not''' condone rape. I do not support rape '''at all'''. I've never raped my friends... or ''anyone'' that I know... And I don't plan to rape anyone in the immediate future. I'm a feminist! Women, I think, deserve... are '''entitled''' to be treated with the same respect and dignity that a man who is a prisoner with no rights deserves. And there's just no call for rape. It's ''just'' not needed. I don't ''personally'' see the point of it. Now Harker... he was '''big''' into rape. He was weird about it. And if you were here two months ago... you'd probably be getting raped right now.
--> But, may I point out... you are '''not''' being raped right now. There's no one bending you over a table while your friend watches. That's not happening. Could it be happening? Yeah... but it's not.
--> All in all... you're not doing too bad. You're at a colosseum... you're not being raped... As I said, you've come at a good time.
** [[http://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=2069 Bern and Polly's faces at the end sell it.]]
* [[http://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=3157 Maytag prepares to leave the Dark Cell]], and notices everything looks normal now.
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** [[http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=3159 Cut to Corono]], outside the entrance to the Dark Cell.
--->''W-what's going on? Why do I suddenly feel as if I'm inside...?! I'm clearly on the outside... Why does it feel like the Dark Cell is ''overflowing''...?!
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** [[http://flipside.keenspot.[[http://flipsidecomics.com/comic.php?i=3159 Cut to Corono]], outside the entrance to the Dark Cell.
--->''W-what's going on? Why do I suddenly feel as if I'm inside...?! I'm clearly on the outside... Why does it feel like the Dark Cell is ''overflowing''...?!?!
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--->''W-what's going on? Why do I suddenly feel as if I'm inside...?! I'm clearly on the outside... Why does it feel like the Dark Cell is ''overflowing''...
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* [[http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=3157 Maytag prepares to leave the Dark Cell]], and notices everything looks normal now.
-->'''Black Hole Cat:''' The Darkstorm warps your perception. It's only when standing next to Eye can you perceive this hallway normally.
-->'''Maytag:''' ... But since Eye is '''moving''' now... What is it like for people on the '''outside'''?
-->'''Black Hole Cat:''' ...
** [[http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=3159 Cut to Corono]], outside the entrance to the Dark Cell.
--->''W-what's going on? Why do I suddenly feel as if I'm inside...?! I'm clearly on the outside... Why does it feel like the Dark Cell is ''overflowing''...?!
-->'''Black Hole Cat:''' The Darkstorm warps your perception. It's only when standing next to Eye can you perceive this hallway normally.
-->'''Maytag:''' ... But since Eye is '''moving''' now... What is it like for people on the '''outside'''?
-->'''Black Hole Cat:''' ...
** [[http://flipside.keenspot.com/comic.php?i=3159 Cut to Corono]], outside the entrance to the Dark Cell.
--->''W-what's going on? Why do I suddenly feel as if I'm inside...?! I'm clearly on the outside... Why does it feel like the Dark Cell is ''overflowing''...?!
