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** --> ''[[PrecisionFStrike FUCK]] WE LOST THEM" exclaimed Draco, "We have to get that basterd fired from Hogywarts"''
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Hogywarts"''
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** Draco's reaction makes it even funnier
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** --> ''[[PercisionFStrike FUCK]] WE LOST THEM" exclaimed Draco, "We have to get that basterd fired from Hogywarts"
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* The fact that Dumbledore apparently [[StuffBlowingUp explodes]] when Dally headbutts him into his phoenix. [[UnexplainedRecovery He's fine later, though.]]
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUser with garlic clovers.]] [[Metaphorgotten It burned like a thousand jellies on rye.]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUser with garlic clovers.]] [[Metaphorgotten ]] It burned like a thousand jellies on rye.]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUser with garlic clovers.]] [[Main/Metaphorgotten It burned like a thousand jellies on rye.]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUser with garlic clovers.]]
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUserwith [[ImprobableWeaponUser with garlic clovers.]] [[Metaphorgotten [[Main/Metaphorgotten It burned like a thousand jellies on rye.]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUserwith garlic clovers.]] [[Metaphorgotten It burned like a thousand jellies on rye. ]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the nuts with [[GroinAttack nuts]] [[ImprobableWeaponUserwith garlic clovers. clovers.]] [[Metaphorgotten It burned like a thousand jellies on rye. ]] That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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* Just every insane metaphor they use. For example...
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* Just every insane metaphor metaphor, and simile they use. For example...
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* Dally apparently smacking Bill from TrueBlood repeatedly in the gnads with a bulb of garlic.
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''That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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** ''It Diddy Kong work though because vampz don’t get hurt about that, so she went, and started slapping him in the nuts with garlic clovers. It burned like a thousand jellies on rye.''
''That's That's when she mounted him, in unicorns.''
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* In a stunning example of MundaneUtility, Harry and Shadow (the baby, not the hedgehog) ride Thestrals through a [=McDonald's=] drive-through in chapter 15. As the DramaticReading by LRMReading points out, it becomes even funnier when one remembers that Thestrals can only be seen by those who have witnessed someone else dying, so unless that's the case for the [=McDonald's=] staff, they would only see Harry and Shadow apparently floating in midair next to the pickup window.
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* In a stunning example of MundaneUtility, Harry and Shadow (the baby, not the hedgehog) ride Thestrals through a [=McDonald's=] drive-through in chapter 15. As the DramaticReading by LRMReading points out, it becomes even funnier when one remembers that Thestrals can only be seen by those who have witnessed someone else dying, so unless that's the case for the [=McDonald's=] staff, they would only see Harry and Shadow apparently floating in midair next to the pickup window. window.
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**...popping out babies like the West Nile Virus.
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** Ron slapped Hermione like a puppy when he pees on the floor.
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* In a stunning example of MundaneUtility, Harry and Shadow (the baby, not the hedgehog) ride Thestrals through a [=McDonald's=] drive-through in chapter 15. As the DramaticReading by LRMReading points out, it becomes even funnier when one remembers that Thestrals can only be seen by those who have witnessed someone else dying, so unless that's the case for the [=McDonald's=] staff, they would only see Harry and Shadow apparently floating in midair next to the pickup window.
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* ''“HAHAHA” laughed [[{{X-Men}} mystique]] “YOU WILL NEVER FUCKIN GET TE POWEERS”''.
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