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* The inspector went to find Captain Algren but ran into Vivian in her DRAGON form. Rio appeared and saved Emma who called him, her "prince."
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* The inspector Inspector went to find Captain Algren but ran into Vivian in her DRAGON form. Rio appeared and saved Emma who called him, her "prince."
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* Rhino's response to Lt. Muruta calling him a traitor to his own kind ("Yeah what else is new?") manages to be both amusing and badass.
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* Rhino's response to Lt. Muruta Murata calling him a traitor to his own kind ("Yeah what else is new?") manages to be both amusing and badass.
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* Rio and Hillda watch as Ange attempt to make up with Tusk following their argument and when Tusk voices his disbelief that she's actually apologizing, they both facepalm in disbelief.
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* Rio and Hillda watch as Ange attempt to make up with Tusk following their argument and when Tusk voices his disbelief shock that she's actually apologizing, they both facepalm in disbelief.
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* The inspector went to find Captain Algren but ran to Vivian as she found out she was a dragon. Rio appeared and saved Emma as she fell in love with him.
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* The inspector went to find Captain Algren but ran to into Vivian as she found out she was a dragon. in her DRAGON form. Rio appeared and saved Emma as she fell in love with him.
who called him, her "prince."
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* Rio and Hillda watch as Ange attempt to make up with Tusk following their argument and when Tusk voices his disbelief that she's actually apologizing, they both facepalm in disbelief.
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* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face in Ange's crotch]].
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* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face in Ange's crotch]].crotch]].
!Chapter 19
* Since ThereIsOnlyOneBed in their room, Tusk decides to be chivalrous to Ange and take the couch. Which immediately collapses as soon as he sits on it, much to Ange's amusement. It was apparently so loud that even Rio and Hilda could hear it from their own room when it happened.
!Chapter 19
* Since ThereIsOnlyOneBed in their room, Tusk decides to be chivalrous to Ange and take the couch. Which immediately collapses as soon as he sits on it, much to Ange's amusement. It was apparently so loud that even Rio and Hilda could hear it from their own room when it happened.
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* When Tanya and Irma visit Chris and Rosalie, they show a couple of photos of Rio (Captain Joseph Algren) as it becomes more popular than Perolina. Rosalie was thinking of getting a camera and taking some pictures to earn money. As they were having a conversation about seeing more of Rio appear, Chis got jealous of Rosalie as she thought she was interested in him.
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* When Tanya and Irma visit Chris and Rosalie, they show a couple of photos of Rio (Captain Joseph Algren) as it becomes more popular than Perolina. Rosalie was thinking of getting a camera and taking some pictures to earn money. As they were having a conversation about seeing more of Rio appear, Chis got jealous of Rosalie as she thought she Rosalie was interested in him.
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* Emma realizes that she has fallen in love with Rio, who is disguised as Captain Joseph Algren, and [[CovertPervert begins to have wild fantasies about him]].
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* Emma realizes that she has fallen in love with Rio, who is disguised as Rio's Captain Joseph Algren, Algren persona and [[CovertPervert begins to have wild fantasies about him]].
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* When Maggie suggests cheering up Captain Algren by cooking steaks, Emma [[ImagineSpot imagines herself cooking steaks while wearing nothing but an apron as he's making out]].
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* When Maggie suggests cheering up Captain Algren by cooking steaks, Emma [[ImagineSpot imagines herself cooking steaks while wearing nothing but an apron as he's making out]].
out with her]].
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* Hilda believes Ange had ditched them to hide in the closet, but Ange explains that someone tripped her.
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* Hilda believes Ange had ditched them to hide in the closet, but Ange explains that someone tripped blindsided her.
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* Vivian was commenting about how Rio is a super badass guy who singlehandedly took on an enemy para-mail.
* Rio told Hilda that he was ok, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale she hit his head with a bedpan]] and argued with each other while everyone was watching, as Maggie and Jasmine commented:
* Rio told Hilda that he was ok, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale she hit his head with a bedpan]] and argued with each other while everyone was watching, as Maggie and Jasmine commented:
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* Vivian was commenting about how calls Rio is a "the most super badass guy who guy" on Arzenal for singlehandedly took taking on an enemy para-mail.para-mail, to which Rosalie comments Rio is the ONLY guy on Arzenal.
*Rio told Once Hilda knows that he was he's ok, [[DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale she hit his head clobbers Rio with a bedpan]] bedpan]]. Then then bicker back and argued forth with each other, much to the bemusement of the other while everyone was watching, as Maggie and Jasmine commented: Norma:
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* Chris and Rosalie are completely shocked and surprised when Vivian realizes Hilda has feelings for Rio. Hilda denies her relationship, claiming that she owes him a favor.
* Maggie teased Rio while removing his bandages from his chest.
* When Pamela, Hikaru, and Olivier ask Rio to feel his arm while other Normas feel his muscle, it gets out of hand as Hilda arrives, gets jealous, and leaves.
* Vivian whispers to Hilda that no one is guarding the way to the beach and suggests they could spend some quality time. In response, Hilda yells for her to leave.
* Maggie teased Rio while removing his bandages from his chest.
* When Pamela, Hikaru, and Olivier ask Rio to feel his arm while other Normas feel his muscle, it gets out of hand as Hilda arrives, gets jealous, and leaves.
* Vivian whispers to Hilda that no one is guarding the way to the beach and suggests they could spend some quality time. In response, Hilda yells for her to leave.
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* Chris and Rosalie are completely shocked and surprised when Vivian realizes Hilda has feelings for Rio. Hilda denies her relationship, claiming that she just owes him a favor.
* Maggieteased flirts with Rio and gets him flustered while removing checking his bandages wounds.
* Having gained their admiration for saving them fromhis chest.
a DRAGON attack, the school kids refer to Rio as "Mistress Rio", much to Rio's chagrin and Ersha's amusement.
* When Pamela, Hikaru, and Olivier ask Rio to feel hisarm while arm, other Normas Norma show up and start to feel his muscle, it gets out of hand him up as well just as Hilda arrives, gets jealous, and leaves.
* Vivian whispers to Hilda that no one is guarding the way to the beach and suggeststhey she and Rio could spend some quality time. In response, Hilda yells for her to leave.
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* When Pamela, Hikaru, and Olivier ask Rio to feel his
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* When Salia's taking Ange to the Aurora at gunpoint, Momoka chucks a cloud of something to her face, making her sneeze and giving Ange the chance to fight back and allowing them to escape. When Ange asks Momoka what she did, Momoka explains [[CrazyPrepared she always carries some salt and pepper on her in case she needs to cook at a moment's notice]], all while both of them are still sneezing as they talk.
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* When Salia's Salia is taking Ange to the Aurora at gunpoint, Momoka chucks a cloud of something to her face, making her sneeze and giving Ange the chance to fight back disarm her and allowing them to escape. When Ange asks Momoka what she did, Momoka explains [[CrazyPrepared she always carries some salt and pepper on her in case she needs to cook at a moment's notice]], all while both of them are still sneezing as they talk.
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* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face on Ange's crotch]].
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* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face on in Ange's crotch]].
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* Rhino's response to Lt. Muruta calling him a traitor to his own kind ("Yeah what else is new?") manages to be both amusing and badass.
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* Rhino's response to Lt. Muruta calling him a traitor to his own kind ("Yeah what else is new?") manages to be both amusing and badass.badass.
!Chapter 18
* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face on Ange's crotch]].
!Chapter 18
* After some talk with each other, Rio proposes that Tusk helps him learn to fight without Mana, and in turn Rio will give him advice to deal with women. Rio concludes by saying he'll teach Tusk [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten how not to plant his face on Ange's crotch]].
