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* Laura realises that she'll never see her mother again, or hear her mother say her name, or smell her mother's cooking. Just as things start to approach TearJerker territory, she concludes, 'And thank fucking Christ for that.'
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit.""
* When Wednesday is ranting at Ostara about how Jesus stole her holiday from her, a Jesus is standing right next to Ostara, and genuinely looks sorry for having stolen the holiday.
* When Wednesday is ranting at Ostara about how Jesus stole her holiday from her, a Jesus is standing right next to Ostara, and genuinely looks sorry for having stolen the holiday.
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* "Kissing is disgusting... but in a good way."
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Sorry for the multiple edits, I'm kind of crap at formatting.
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--> '''Anubis''' :[solemnly] They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
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--> '''Anubis''' :[solemnly] ''(solemnly)'': They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
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'''Anubis''':[trying to suppress a smile] A bullshit middle name.
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--> '''Anubis''' [solemnly]: They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
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--> '''Anubis''' [solemnly]: :[solemnly] They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
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'''Anubis'''[trying to suppress a smile] A bullshit middle name.
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* When Anubis casually reaches over and tears Mrs. Fadil's heart out, she only gives him a look of mild indignation, saying "I was using that!"
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* When Anubis tells Mrs. Fadil about what will happen when her family finds her body.
--> '''Anubis''' [solemnly]: They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
'''Mrs. Fadil''': A bullshit middle name?\\
'''Anubis'''[trying to suppress a smile] A bullshit middle name.
--> '''Anubis''' [solemnly]: They will be sad for a time, then they will find happiness again. Your Assaf will marry in a year and name his first daughter for you.\\
'''Mrs. Fadil''': A bullshit middle name?\\
'''Anubis'''[trying to suppress a smile] A bullshit middle name.
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Quote was misquoted, and the jellybean stigmata thing was mentioned twice.
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-->'''Audrey:''' I tried to fuck Shadow on your grave.\\
'''Laura:''' That's fair.
'''Laura:''' That's fair.
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'''Audrey:''' Yeah, he knows. I tried to fuck
'''Laura:'''
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'''Audrey:''' Oh, Jesus Christ...
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'''Audrey:''' [sliding to the floor] Oh, Jesus Christ...Christ... I mean, he was...
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face.
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face.
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face."
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face.
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That's untrue...
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**Even better is that it come from under the table rather than the ceiling it was flipped towards.
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[[AC: Episode 7 - A Prayer For Mad Sweeney]]
* After Laura releases Salim from his service to her and Sweeney, Salim thanks her then proceeds to insult Sweeney repeatedly for being a {{Jerkass}} while he hurriedly runs back to his cab to drive off.
** After this scene, when Sweeney asks Laura how they'll get to their destination now without a ride, Laura points to an ice cream truck. The ice cream truck driver tries to stop them from stealing it but Laura just puts a bunch of dollar bills in his hands in order to get him to agree. The truck driver then says his boss won't believe him because he hasn't been beaten up. Sweeney attempts to oblige him leading to this exchange:
-->'''Truck Driver:''' (nervously) Oh, uh, I'd rather she hit me.\\
'''Sweeney:''' Oh, trust me, you ''don't'' want her hitting you. (punches driver unconscious)
* After Sweeney [[spoiler:returning his lucky coin to Laura in order to revive her]], she responds by punching the wind out of him.
* After Laura releases Salim from his service to her and Sweeney, Salim thanks her then proceeds to insult Sweeney repeatedly for being a {{Jerkass}} while he hurriedly runs back to his cab to drive off.
** After this scene, when Sweeney asks Laura how they'll get to their destination now without a ride, Laura points to an ice cream truck. The ice cream truck driver tries to stop them from stealing it but Laura just puts a bunch of dollar bills in his hands in order to get him to agree. The truck driver then says his boss won't believe him because he hasn't been beaten up. Sweeney attempts to oblige him leading to this exchange:
-->'''Truck Driver:''' (nervously) Oh, uh, I'd rather she hit me.\\
'''Sweeney:''' Oh, trust me, you ''don't'' want her hitting you. (punches driver unconscious)
* After Sweeney [[spoiler:returning his lucky coin to Laura in order to revive her]], she responds by punching the wind out of him.
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit.""
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face.
* For a bit of BlackHumor, one of the Jesuses trying to eat jelly beans but they fall through the holes in his hands, resulting in him looking up with a sad expression on his face.
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When he glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
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* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When he the glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
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* There's a hell of a lot of surreal humor at Easter's party, a sunny affair with rabbits that crap jelly beans, multiple incarnations of Jesus (one with jelly beans spilling from his stigmata), and some BlackComedy as Wednesday [[KickTheDog runs over a bunch of Easter bunnies in his car with a smirk on his face.]]
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* There's a hell of a lot of surreal humor at Easter's party, a sunny affair with rabbits that crap jelly beans, multiple incarnations of Jesus (one with jelly beans spilling from his stigmata), and some BlackComedy as Wednesday [[KickTheDog runs over a bunch of Easter bunnies in his car with a smirk on his face.]]]]
* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When he glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
* One of the Jesuses is sitting on Easter's pool and tries to set his drink down, apparently forgetting that he's on water. When he glass sinks, he mutters, "Goddamnit."
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* The episode opens with Nancy working on clothes and preparing to address the camera with a story...and then it turns out he's talking to Wednesday and Shadow with Wednesday complaining "we haven't got time!"
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* The episode opens with Nancy working on clothes and preparing to address the camera with a story...and then it turns out he's talking to Wednesday and Shadow with Wednesday complaining "we haven't got time!"time!"
* There's a hell of a lot of surreal humor at Easter's party, a sunny affair with rabbits that crap jelly beans, multiple incarnations of Jesus (one with jelly beans spilling from his stigmata), and some BlackComedy as Wednesday [[KickTheDog runs over a bunch of Easter bunnies in his car with a smirk on his face.]]
* There's a hell of a lot of surreal humor at Easter's party, a sunny affair with rabbits that crap jelly beans, multiple incarnations of Jesus (one with jelly beans spilling from his stigmata), and some BlackComedy as Wednesday [[KickTheDog runs over a bunch of Easter bunnies in his car with a smirk on his face.]]
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* Salim shows up asking about finding a djin. Sweeney just nods as Laura just wants to hit the road.
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* Salim shows up asking about finding a djin. Sweeney just nods as Laura just wants to hit the road.road.
[[AC: Episode 8 - Come to Jesus]]
* The episode opens with Nancy working on clothes and preparing to address the camera with a story...and then it turns out he's talking to Wednesday and Shadow with Wednesday complaining "we haven't got time!"
[[AC: Episode 8 - Come to Jesus]]
* The episode opens with Nancy working on clothes and preparing to address the camera with a story...and then it turns out he's talking to Wednesday and Shadow with Wednesday complaining "we haven't got time!"
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* When Shadow meets Media in the big box store, his immediate decision [[CuttingTheKnot is to unplug the plasma screen display she's on]]. [[SubvertedTrope He never factored in the possibility that she could just turn them back on.]]
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** When he casually mentions {{Jesus}}:UsefulNotes/{{Jesus}}:
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* In the opening segment with the Vikings, the amount of arrows that are shot upon landing is... [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill excessive.]]
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* In the opening segment with the Vikings, [[https://twitter.com/AmericanGodsSTZ/status/858849911047106560 the amount of arrows that are shot upon landing is... landing]] [[HumanPincushion is...]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill excessive.]]
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** When he casually mentions {{Jesus}}:
-->'''Laura:''' Did you just casually name drop Jesus Christ like you know a guy who knows a guy?\\
'''Sweeney:''' I ''do'' know a guy who knows a guy.
-->'''Laura:''' Did you just casually name drop Jesus Christ like you know a guy who knows a guy?\\
'''Sweeney:''' I ''do'' know a guy who knows a guy.
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* Shadow trying to deal with last episode's event, screaming about "I got stabbed by Charlie Brown's Christmas tree!"
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* Shadow trying to deal with last episode's event, screaming about "I got stabbed by Charlie Brown's Christmas tree!"tree!"
* EVERYTHING with Laura and Sweeney hitting the road.
* Salim shows up asking about finding a djin. Sweeney just nods as Laura just wants to hit the road.
* EVERYTHING with Laura and Sweeney hitting the road.
* Salim shows up asking about finding a djin. Sweeney just nods as Laura just wants to hit the road.
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* Wednesday giving a SarcasticConfession, knowing that the police officer interrogating him won't believe in a war between the gods. At one point it cuts away to Shadow's own interrogation, then cuts back to Wednesday explaining how Mad Sweeney's too much of an idiot to get involved, but how Mr Nancy might be more inclined, all while the detective is staring at him deadpan.
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* Wednesday giving a SarcasticConfession, knowing that the police officer interrogating him won't believe in a war between the gods. At one point it cuts away to Shadow's own interrogation, then cuts back to Wednesday explaining how Mad Sweeney's too much of an idiot to get involved, but how Mr Nancy might be more inclined, all while the detective is staring at him deadpan.deadpan.
[[AC: Episode 6 - A Murder of Gods]]
* Shadow trying to deal with last episode's event, screaming about "I got stabbed by Charlie Brown's Christmas tree!"
[[AC: Episode 6 - A Murder of Gods]]
* Shadow trying to deal with last episode's event, screaming about "I got stabbed by Charlie Brown's Christmas tree!"
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** Technical Boy's reaction to seeing Media as DavidBowie? A very [[FlatWhat flat "What?"]].
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** The sheer fact that he calls her 'dead wife' because he can't remember, or didn't even bother to learn, her name.
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** When the New Gods' sales pitch to Wednesday fails, Marilyn!Media takes on an annoyed look and immediately steps off her floating platform, then trudges out of the room.
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** Once the police officers who've arrested him go to find out what's happening at the police station (and get KilledOffscreen) Sweeney makes his escape. Alas, he can't even do ''that'' without bad luck getting in the way, crushing his nuts as he clambers out of the smashed car window and landing cheek first on the tarmac and potentially some broken glass.
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** Once the police officers who've arrested him go to find out what's happening at the police station (and get KilledOffscreen) Sweeney makes his escape. Alas, he can't even do ''that'' without bad luck getting in the way, crushing his nuts as he clambers out of the smashed car window and landing cheek first on the tarmac and potentially some broken glass.glass.
* Wednesday giving a SarcasticConfession, knowing that the police officer interrogating him won't believe in a war between the gods. At one point it cuts away to Shadow's own interrogation, then cuts back to Wednesday explaining how Mad Sweeney's too much of an idiot to get involved, but how Mr Nancy might be more inclined, all while the detective is staring at him deadpan.
* Wednesday giving a SarcasticConfession, knowing that the police officer interrogating him won't believe in a war between the gods. At one point it cuts away to Shadow's own interrogation, then cuts back to Wednesday explaining how Mad Sweeney's too much of an idiot to get involved, but how Mr Nancy might be more inclined, all while the detective is staring at him deadpan.
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, the latter while floating several inches off the ground, all for no apparent reason.
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, the latter while floating several inches off the ground, ground ''and'' with the famous MarilynManeuver blowing her skirt up, all for no apparent reason.
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-->'''Sweeney:''' Oh, you're an asshole. You're a fuckin' asshole, dead wife. You're a fuckin' asshole, dead wife! ''You're an asshole, dead wife''!
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-->'''Sweeney:''' Oh, you're an asshole. You're a fuckin' asshole, dead wife. You're a fuckin' asshole, dead wife! ''You're an asshole, dead wife''!wife''!
** Once the police officers who've arrested him go to find out what's happening at the police station (and get KilledOffscreen) Sweeney makes his escape. Alas, he can't even do ''that'' without bad luck getting in the way, crushing his nuts as he clambers out of the smashed car window and landing cheek first on the tarmac and potentially some broken glass.
** Once the police officers who've arrested him go to find out what's happening at the police station (and get KilledOffscreen) Sweeney makes his escape. Alas, he can't even do ''that'' without bad luck getting in the way, crushing his nuts as he clambers out of the smashed car window and landing cheek first on the tarmac and potentially some broken glass.
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-->'''Sweeney:''' You're an asshole, dead wife! You're an ''asshole'', dead wife!
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-->'''Sweeney:''' Oh, you're an asshole. You're an a fuckin' asshole, dead wife. You're a fuckin' asshole, dead wife! You're ''You're an ''asshole'', asshole, dead wife!wife''!
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, the latter while floating several inches off the ground, all for no apparent reason.
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, the latter while floating several inches off the ground, all for no apparent reason.reason.
* Sweeney's meeting with Laura at the motel. The entire thing. The best part is at the end of the scene when [[spoiler:Sweeney pushes Laura into the tub and attempts to drown her out of frustration. The police then arrives [[NotWhatItLooksLike while Sweeney is in the middle of drowning Laura]]. Sweeney attempts to tell them that Laura isn't dead yet but considering that Laura is literally just a walking corpse now without the need of bodily functions, she convincingly plays dead]]. Sweeney's response to this is hilarious:
-->'''Sweeney:''' You're an asshole, dead wife! You're an ''asshole'', dead wife!
* Sweeney's meeting with Laura at the motel. The entire thing. The best part is at the end of the scene when [[spoiler:Sweeney pushes Laura into the tub and attempts to drown her out of frustration. The police then arrives [[NotWhatItLooksLike while Sweeney is in the middle of drowning Laura]]. Sweeney attempts to tell them that Laura isn't dead yet but considering that Laura is literally just a walking corpse now without the need of bodily functions, she convincingly plays dead]]. Sweeney's response to this is hilarious:
-->'''Sweeney:''' You're an asshole, dead wife! You're an ''asshole'', dead wife!
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, neither for any apparent reason.
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of MarilynMonroe, neither the latter while floating several inches off the ground, all for any no apparent reason.
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* Media showing up at the police station in the form of Marilyn Monroe.
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* Media speaking to the Technical Boy as DavidBowie and showing up at the police station in the form of Marilyn Monroe.MarilynMonroe, neither for any apparent reason.
